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Malazan Reread of the Fallen: Dust of Dreams, Chapter Twenty-Two

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Welcome to the Malazan Reread of the Fallen! Every post will start off with a summary of events, followed by reaction and commentary by your hosts Bill and Amanda (with Amanda, new to the series, going first), and finally comments from Tor.com readers. In this article, we’ll cover chapter twenty-two of Dust of Dreams.

A fair warning before we get started: We’ll be discussing both novel and whole-series themes, narrative arcs that run across the entire series, and foreshadowing. Note: The summary of events will be free of major spoilers and we’re going to try keeping the reader comments the same. A spoiler thread has been set up for outright Malazan spoiler discussion.

Amanda is still recovering from having just arrived back from her conference in Texas and will catch up in the comments. Also, we’ve just been informed that Steven will once again graciously donate his time to a Q and A after our final post, so start brainstorming questions!

 

CHAPTER SUMMARY

SCENE ONE

Badalle recalls a long time ago watching an old woman dying, something that comes to mind as she watches one of the Snake expire outside the Crystal City. At night she dreams of flying, of children marching “in their tens of thousands. They had cattle, mules, and oxen. Many rode horses. They glittered blindingly in the hard sunlight as if they bore the treasures of the world on their backs. Children, but not her children.” Then she swooped down, “fixed upon the two burning spots she sought… to steal fire.” In the city, the Snake has found water and food (though they still eat the dead). Badalle has taken to carrying a makeshift knife and looking for Brayderal, who entered the city with them and remains a threat.

SCENE TWO

Saddic, exploring the city, discovers most of it lies underground. He discovers as well the “true secret… the buildings, the domes and spire and tilted towers … each marked the perfect placement of a single, enormous machine… This city had defeated mortality and… time itself. Far above, the sun’s light fed the city’s memories—all the life it had once held… the walls around him flowed with scenes, murky and ghostly—not of Rutt and the children now dwelling above, but of the inhabitant of long, long ago.” Those inhabitants were green-skinned, tall and tusked. Seeing no weapons or armor, it appears to Saddic to be a “city of peace.” A peace that apparently held even when other creatures, large bipedal reptiles, entered the scenes in “peaceful coexistence.” Eventually, he realizes that all the statues in the city are of the same person, and he learns the city’s name and its history: They were called Jaghut. Returned to this way of living, in the cities they had abandoned long before. They were drawn to a humble man, a half-blood… to his great machine of memories… What he did not possess within him, he built around him. To trap all that he was. The city is called Icarias. Walking further into the heart of the city, he sees “Darkness. Destruction. The roots were dead, unfed by light from above. Broken. His heart is broken.”

SCENE THREE

Brayderal bemoans not killing Badalle when she’d first suspected she had power. She feels the city itself warring on her—“inimical to the Forkrul Assail.” She sees Badalle, carrying her crystal sword, walk by her hiding spot and is frightened.

SCENE FOUR

Badalle sees Brayderal in the window and decides against compelling her via her Voice, wanting “this death to be a silent one.” Thinking about it though, she decides killing Brayderal wouldn’t help the Snake so instead she uses her power to banish her, thinking it poetic justice. Heading back to Rutt and Saddic, she noticed her sword flaring bright and realizes there was “something else there. Something of power, a terrible power… She would name [it] Fire.”

SCENE FIVE

Fiddler examines Stormy and Gesler’s tent: torn to pieces and the two men missing. As he waits for Bottle to examine the tent, Fiddler thinks of his slow recovery after the impact of Draconus’ arrival, and thinks as well on the repercussions of Dragnipur shattered, Rake’s death, Draconus’ arrival. He wonders what could have taken the two men, “annealed in the Forge of Thyrllan. Ascendants both.” Bottle tells him he found non-human blood, something akin to rhizan. Fiddler realizes something snatched the two from the sky, though neither he nor Bottle can figure out how it happened silently. Fiddler sends for more people, then Bottle finds oil all over everything that “smells like a lizard’s armpit.” Fiddler and Bottle eliminate enkar’al (too small), Wyval (too small, but also too loud as they travel in “clouds”), and dragon) too big). Fiddler says he’d guess K’Chain Che’Malle save for the winged part. Quick Ben arrives, and figures out it was a winged K’Chain Che’Malle using its oil to knock everyone out. He tries to lie about knowing more, Fiddler calls him on it, and he admits he knows they’re alive, are far away, and were taken by a Shi’gal Assassin sent by a Matron because “someone needed them.” Tired of it all, Fiddler knocks Quick out, thinking the Adjunct can question him. Looking at the mage, Fiddler thinks, “Never liked him. Need him, count on him, pray for him, love him, aye. But like him? Not a chance… Probably Soletaken or D’ivers if I’m any judge of things.”

SCENE SIX

Keneb rides out to look over the Wastelands from a rise. He worries about Fist Blistig, who had “done his best to evade the responsibilities of command.” He worries as well he himself is over his head. He is called back in by the Adjunct.

SCENE SEVEN

Bottle returns to Stormy’s tent and panics when he sees the unconscious Quick Ben, worried he tried magic in this place. He tells Fiddler the Wastelands “might as well be dusted in otataral,” though there are also “Ascendants, stinking with power… out there, just walking around,” naming the T’lan Imass as one example. When Fiddler jokingly wonders where the Jaghut are, Quick Ben and Bottle both say they’re still days away, and that they number fourteen. Fiddler asks if Tavore has been told and Quick says he’s given up trying to tell her things; “It’s as if she already knows.” Bottle adds he’s also sensed dragons, and Quick admits one at least is Ruin. The Adjunct approaches, and Fiddler tells Bottle he should have stayed away when he’d been ordered to, now it’s too late.

SCENE EIGHT

Blistig joins Keneb as he rides through camp and tells him Stormy and Gesler deserted, a rumor Keneb deems “ridiculous.” Blistig says Tavore has lost the army and will have to disband it, adding he thinks he might retire to Letheras. Keneb tells Blistig to get back to his people, the two argue, and Blistig says he’s going on; he needs to talk to Tavore about “my business.” Blistig tries to harangue Tavore about the rum ration, but she cuts him off and sends him back to his legion. When he speaks of Stormy and Gesler deserting, Tavore humiliates him by delaying her return salute. Keneb is the first to wonder if the Assassin might come back for more, and they make plans to deal with the possibility. Tavore sends Lostara to report to Brys and Aranict. Keneb tells Tavore he’s concerned about Blistig’s impact, and she agrees, saying she’ll deal with it soon. She asks Quick Ben to do what he can to protect the army and to also find Stormy and Gesler. Fiddler tells Keneb he thinks the Assassin took the two due to their connection with fire, and that they’ll not see it or them again.

SCENE NINE

Henar Vygulf, from Bluerose, is the tallest soldier in the Letherii escort. He is brought to Brys’ tent by Corporal Odenid. Brys has been spending time interviewing soldiers about any sort of rumor or legend about the Wastelands and recording the results of those interviews.

SCENE TEN

Henar joins Brys, Aranict, and Lostara Yil, the last of which he falls hard for immediately upon seeing her. Brys asks Henar, who had been attached to the Drene Garrison, about the K’Chain Che’Malle that had traveled with Redmask. Henar reports, exits, and Brys apologizes to Lostara for how his man had behaved. Lostara says it was fine, and that Henar’s story seems to confirm Quick Ben’s theory about what had taken Stormy and Gesler. Brys recalls a god who had lived and died in the Wastelands, “Its life stolen from it by a force, a power coming from the K’Chain Che’Malle… Its name was Ahkrast Korvalain. What it did was steal the life force of the land itself. In fact, it may have created the Wastelands, and in so doing killed the spirits and gods dwelling there, and with them, their worshipers.” Brys decides to ride out to Tavore later and share information. She exits, and Brys attaches Henar to his staff, promotes him, and orders that he go with him to meet Tavore later. When Corporal Ginast quotes the regulations about Bluerose-born soldiers being limited to how high they could rise in rank, Brys informs him from now on all advancement will be based on merit and accomplishment. He leaves, and Aranict mentions she’s surprised Brys is playing matchmaker. He explains it had been the first “hint of life I’ve seen in Captain Yil’s face since I first met her.” Awkward sexual silence reigns for a moment or two.

SCENE ELEVEN

Tarr, Koryk, Cuttle, Smiles, Corabb spar and snarl, kvetch and complain in general and also in particular about Pores as middleman/hoarder of supplies.

SCENE TWELVE

Corabb annoys Throatslitter and vice versa. Corabb thinks how Tavore is a better leader than Leoman because she cares, “maybe even too much,” and so Leoman’s followers would all die while Tavore’s might not. He worries about the dissatisfaction spreading in the army. He considers Cuttle especially sour, though he likes him: “He’s bitter iron. Me too.”

SCENE THIRTEEN

Skanarom tells Kindly she thinks Ruathan isn’t who he says he is, that he’s hiding something; he’s getting nervous, talking in his sleep in odd languages. She asks if Kindly has ever heard of Ahkrast Korvalain, and he says it sounds like a Tiste or Warren name, and she should check with Quick Ben.

SCENE FOURTEEN

Pores come to consciousness (he’d been knocked out) to find that his wagon had been ransacked. Hedge and four of his Bridgeburners show up. Hedge remarks how all the writs for supplies have to somehow go through Pores before the Quartermaster accepts them. He tells Pores he’ll let him know who ransacked his wagon for an all-purpose writ. Pores gives him one, and Hedge says it was Neffarias Bredd.

SCENE FIFTEEN

Skulldeath, Ruffle, Primly, Nep Furrow, Sinter, etc. pass time. Helian collapsed in the midst of their group and was taken care of tenderly by Skulldeath. Sinter wonders where her sister is and recalls the meeting with Tavore, who hadn’t objected at all to the idea, but had registered hurt at the idea of betrayal, making Sinter wonder what childhood trauma had scarred Tavore, what “rejection, betrayal that stabbed to the deepest core of you, of the innocent child you once were.” She bemoans a civilization “that could thrive only by systematically destroying” the parent-child relationship. She thinks how “We kills their world before they [children] even inherit it. We kill it before they grow old enough to know what it is.” She wishes Tavore would know she is not as alone as she thinks.

SCENE SIXTEEN

Gesler wakes far off to see Stormy still asleep by a fire, Kalyth next to him. Kalyth introduces herself as Destriant to the K’Chain Che’Malle. She claims Stormy is Shield Anvil and Gesler Mortal Sword. Gesler is about to object, but then recalls someone calling Stormy Shield Anvil, or possibly Mortal Sword. Kalyth tells him there will be war and the two of them will lead the K’Chain Che’Malle. They are fire and so were taken by Gu’rull. Gesler wakes Stormy and fill him in. Kalyth interrupts their talk to say, “They come… K’Chain Che’Malle. Army. Soon… War.” Then, “Gesler and Stormy feel the ground shake and they turn to the north. Fener’s holy crotch.

 

Bill’s Reaction

Not really a lot to say about this chapter, as it’s one of the most straightforward chapters we’ve seen in this series. A lot of clear events, a lot of reminders of things we know, a lot of moving characters into place.

Badalle’s opening thoughts echo earlier musings/conversations about what one sees in the eyes of death, though she takes a somewhat different take on it, wondering if the witness sees in the eyes whatever they need to feel better, to ease their own torment. Badalle indeed has long ago lost any thoughts of childhood, and it should be clear that no matter what happens with the Snake, nothing can be called a “happy” ending.

Her dreams are clearly the capture of Stormy and Gesler. If that isn’t clear at first reading, it should become clear with the linkage of two “burning spots” and the later multiple references to their association with fire.

So many layers, so many stories in this series. I would love to read the short story/novella about Icarium creating this city, creating his “memory machine”, the way the Jaghut flocked to it, and then lived peacefully with the K’Chain Che’Malle. I just want to know more!

A bit ironic, Badalle delivering justice to a Forkrul Assail. I’m glad, though, she doesn’t stab Brayderal to death. And yet another reference to fire here, with her crystal sword.

Not a lot to say about the whole investigation of Stormy and Gesler’s disappearance, as it’s all pretty straightforward and even if we didn’t know what happened in it, we are told by the end of the chapter. What I do like is the interaction of the soldiers—Fid’s hysterical frustration with Quick Ben, Quick Ben’s maddening knowledge (speaking of wanting to know more!), Bottle’s knowing more than he lets on—it’s a nice bit of comic relief all set against a tense backdrop within the larger army.

We’ve had several references now to Blistig being an issue (and he really does seem a cancer with his insistence on declaring Stormy and Gesler deserters and his focus on rum rations), and with Tavore’s “I’ll deal with it,” we’re apparently being set up for something with him. More worrisome perhaps is Keneb’s feeling that he is out of his element, over his head.

It’s also clear we’re nearing at least somewhat of a convergence as all those powers are becoming more aware of each other, which would seem to imply something big on the horizon.

I find Quick Ben’s description of Stormy and Gesler as “As close to ascendants as anyone in this army” an interesting phrasing as to what it implies.

A few points about the scene with Brys. One, it’s a good reminder of is god knowledge. That just might come in handy down the road. Two, that part about killing a god in the wastelands, might be important, as that seems a pretty big deal. Three, I love the idea of Brys playing matchmaker in the midst of all this tension and horror and impending doom. And love even more that awkward silence at the end between him and Aranict.

Speaking of all that tension, we’re really seeing things start to boil over a bit—the sniping and arguing, all the rumors about desertion, Pores getting knocked out. You’d like to think they need something to focus on, until you realize what that itself would probably mean.

Skanarow’s concern about Ruthan is an example of simply reminding us of something we already know—he is not what/who he seems—so no new information here, though it is interesting he recognizes Ahkrast Korvalain, the power Brys says the K’Chain Che’Malle used to kill the god of the wastelands. It’s also earlier called the warren of the Forkrul Assail.

Bridgeburners. Old ones. New ones. Gotta love ‘em.

Full circle (as is often our direction) in this chapter with the Snake opening it and Sinter’s thoughts on childhood coming toward the end. But while The Snake’s story is, at least on the surface, far removed from us with its monsters and crystal city and eating of the dead, is perhaps more metaphorical (though sadly there are literal or near-literal representations of the same happening in this world), Sinter’s thoughts speak directly to our world. The “careless acts and indifferent, impatient gestures she’s seen among parents in civilized places, as if they had no time for their own children” (I’m thinking of you, folks I used to watch push their kids on the swing while reading or talking on their phones. The civilizations that “thrive on destroying the parent-child relationship”—yeah, cause they never happens nowadays. Adults/cultures that “kill” the world before the children inherit it. Well, outside of pollution, global warming, accelerated extinction rate, deforestation, over-development, choking of the oceans, debt, profligate use of antibiotics, etc., I can’t think of any real world analogue to this.

As with a lot of the scenes in this chapter, not a lot to say about Stormy and Gesler at the end save there’s nothing really new there (save for the whole mom thing). But what a great chapter ending!


Bill Capossere writes short stories and essays, plays ultimate frisbee, teaches as an adjunct English instructor at several local colleges, and writes SF/F reviews for fantasyliterature.com.

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11 years ago

And now it’s not a spoiler to say this is what I thought Hellian’s winged creature might be.

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11 years ago

The underground city is an aspect of this book that I found troubling. The characters of Mappo and Icarium from the earlier works just seem so divorced from this vision of a city built to represent Icarium’s soul and being. Unlike Bill, I don’t care about it or for it at all.

On the other hand, The Mystery of the Blasted Tent was an interesting and captivating (ahem) episode.

Was it actually Neffarias Bredd who ransacked the wagon, or is Hedge just buffaloing Pores?

In the discussions of Ahkrast Korvalain, in this chapter it is stated that the KC used it to kill the god of the wastelands. Previously, however, we had heard that the FA killed their own god, and I thought that this was using Ahkrast Korvalain. Are there two different god-killings here that I am confusing, or a single god-killing with two different explanations?

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Neffarias_Bredd
11 years ago

– My first time through the change in Icarium as the series went on upset me as well, but I think his time travelling with Mappo is definitely more the exception than the rule.

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11 years ago

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I guess the KC part is another example of misinformation again. Because I’m pretty sure it was the FA that did it. I assume that is also why the country was killing the Inquisitors following the Snake…

I read the whole ransacking part as being done by Hedge and his BB’s, giving Pores the finger by saying it was Neffarias Bredd. Hedge explained exactly how things were organized by Pores. That’s typically Hedge. :D

Icarias is the memory Icarium keeps looking for, and which Mappo believed should be kept from him. I don’t think I can go deeper into that now at this stage.

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Even in my first read, I never doubted Hellian saw the KCC assassin.

Mayhem
11 years ago

I think the KCCM link to Akhrast Korvelain is more unreliable narrator.

But out one thing to remember about Icarias … it is old, even by the standards of the books.
It seems to be what Icarium was involved with before his father goes into the Azath and he breaks himself trying to free him. He was always interested in Time and Memory, but he had to have been fairly sane to build many of the machines in the first place – when we see him travelling he is merely rediscovering his past works.

The Icarium we see now is a broken shell of the man he was, obsessed with time but not knowing why. We know from past events and from his experiences in the dragon city that he studied with the KCCM, and learned much in the manipulation of machines from them. This clearly shows us the link as to how that happened, if not the specifics. I do agree, Icarias is what he has been looking for without knowing it, it certainly has the ability to restore his memory. But at what cost to him?

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Jordanes
11 years ago

“I reckon you was struck with a thought.” Classic :D

Also, I love the overturned image of Henar Vygulf. Everyone sees him as this fierce brooding loner who hates everyone and everything, and it turns out that the poor guy just has a bad case of claustrophobia :)

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11 years ago

Looking back through the reread, it appears I’ve been waiting 23 months to ask this: How did the T’lan Imass Legana Breed know that Stormy was a Shield Anvil (back at the end of Bonehunters)?

Also, back in Chapter 8 (DoD) we had a reference to the K’Chain Che’Malle god as the “other,” which, it appeared at that time, was the negation/opposite of the Otataral Dragon. And now that other has a Destraint, a Shield Anvil, and a Mortal Sword. Our discussion in that chapter was largely dedicated to the disfunctional Barghast, but do we have any hints as to which god that might be?

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11 years ago

(Deleted, even though vague, may be unavoidably spoilerish.)

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Toster
11 years ago

This is kind of an off-kilter chapter. everything is so desperate and falling apart, but there’s so much humour in it.

The idea of Stormy and Gesler arguing in their tent one second and being knocked out the next is kind of funny, but Fiddler knocking out Quick and then asking the dead bridgeburners how he did was hilarious.

The tension between Brys and Aranict is always a little funny too. In fact, I always liked that Erikson had a lot of characters pair off as this march went on. that kind of high stress situation will always result in people doing the nasty to blow off steam, but i don’t go looking for it in books so it’s kind of pleasant surprise that he recognizes that facet of human nature and brings it to the fore. it’s also a part and parcel of the theme of compassion i suppose.

actually, thinking about it, every part of this chapter has humour and bitterness, aside from the snake. to dry even for humour out there.

also, love this quote about the jaghut, “I counted fourteen. Each one a walking armoury.”

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Toster
11 years ago

@@@@@ 7 GoS

When gesler asks kalyth which god they are mortal sword and shield anvil to she says, “God no. No god.” and names the Matron instead.

from an earlier chapter we learned via Gunth Mach that the Matron kind of is the god of the K’chain Che’malle, that she is the Mhybe of the Sacred Oil. this business with the k’chain and killing a god with akhrast korvalain is from a dead gods splintered memory. for now, it’s enough to know that although akhrast is connected to the forkrul, it also has a connection to the KCCM.

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10 years ago

Well they both certainly appear to be sound aspected

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KazyxThule
10 years ago

@7: ( Trying and possibly failing to white out because I can’t remember where this is from)

Weren’t Gessler and Stormy Shield Anvil / Mortal Sword of the cult of Fener years back, on 7C? With either Heboric or (Ipshank? from Stoneweilder) as Destriant?

(Moderator note: whited it out!)

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10 years ago

@12 {Spoilerish, but from earlier in DoD}: Wasn’t it Heboric that Kalyth recently saw in a dream? {end}

Ah, its so easy now that I’ve been through it once AND have so many other readers to help me out connecting dots.

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10 years ago

Chapter Twenty-Two

I am still finding it incredibly hard to read Badalle’s sections. They are so opaque, with uncomfortable connections and an odd rhythm, and just leave me wondering what the point is. I feel myself utterly distanced from them, especially in comparison to most of the sections that surround them. I sense Erikson is achieving what he intended, that I am finding it hard to raise interest and compassion, but it is an odd thing to insert into storytelling.

Although I am intrigued very much by Saddic’s thoughts and impressions of the city below ground. Icarius. Worshipping a half-blood. “They were drawn to his great machine of memories, this place he made by his own hand.” Is this where Icarium first lived, first came from? Or is this one of the places he stayed when he was unaware of his destructive tendencies?

Gesler and Stormy have been nicked by the K’Chain Che’Malle? Is that the winged creature, or is it something else? Can’t think why the K’Chain Che’Malle would want them. Oh wait… The K’Chain Che’Malle who still require a Mortal Sword and Shield Anvil? Two positions, two Ascendants stolen.

Oh, just making me giggle: “Fiddler stared at Bottle, wondering when the fool last jammed his nose into a lizard’s armpit, then decided that some questions just should never be asked.”

And, ha, trust Quick Ben to be the one who knows some K’Chain Che’Malle come with wings… I think Bottle shares my thoughts: “You snake-eyed shifty know-it-all bastard from the bung-hole of Seven Cities.”

Although Keneb needs him to step up, I do feel sorry for Blistig actually. Wanting to be one of the lads, but in a position that requires him to keep himself removed. “They didn’t need their Fist spreading his hams on a crate at the fire, passing a jug. Such nights should be rare events, on the eve of battle, perhaps, but even then no one should ever be permitted to forget an officer’s position.”

Fiddler here is talking overtly about the fact that the T’lan Imass, the K’Chain Che’Malle, the Forkrul Assail and the Jaghut are all gathering again – we’re being shown the convergence beginning to happen.

And another wonderful bit of Malazan humour:
“Shortnose will do. He’s hiding a brain behind all that gnarly bone and whatnot.”
“Are you sure?” Keneb asked.
“I sent him to collect four people in a specific sequence. I didn’t need to repeat myself, sir.”
“And he’s a heavy?”

I love Brys Beddict so much. Since Hood’s death, he is most certainly expanding into his power more, isn’t he? Knowing the memories of gods. Being able to retain facts and information to a massive proportion. He is definitely changing.

And the scene with Lostara Yil and Henar? I found it really rather sweet (in a horribly overtly sexual way) – even more sweet is the fact that Brys is now trying to match make the two of them.

So, yep, Gesler and Stormy have risen in the world – who else is quaking at the thought of an entire army of K’Chain Che’Malle?

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10 years ago

Well “entire army” might be a little of an overstatement. There is only Ampelas.

More concerning … who do they intend to fight?

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10 years ago

Considering the unusual number of Ve’Gath the Matron produced, “army” is entirely fitting.

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10 years ago

This — “(I’m thinking of you, folks I used to watch push their kids on
the swing while reading or talking on their phones. (…) I can’t think of any real world analogue to this {sarcasm noted}.” — resonates at a personal level. How many times was I “with” my son, without being really
with him? And to your litany of environmental ills our capitalist
society imposes on the next generation — because the powers that be are utterly incapable of thinking ahead of the bottom line — I would add our denial of childhood to our children. We infantilize them until 21, deny them basic rights and responsibilities, turn them into consumers, when not out-and-out commodities. We subject kindergarten children to high-stakes testing, and eliminate play as “unproductive time.” And these blights set the stage for other, more extreme abuses. The snake is indeed a portrait of childhood in our own society.

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10 years ago

#2: As Fiddler said. Keep in mind that we know from Icarium’s travels with Mappo, that something broke his heart. Now we see it in the city. We’re coming to the answer. What I’m not sure about is the connection (if any) between that and his dad Gothos and the Azath house.

#2: It actually says in the text that “the Fist” punched Pores out. Blistig looking for his rum?

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Rashkavar
6 years ago

Interesting, these two extreme views of the Snake – Bill getting this intense criticism of modern society out of it, while Amanda finds it so opaque that she can barely engage with things – and neither is remotely what I experienced either time I’ve read the book.  For me, I’m mostly grateful that Erikson chose to give us a poet to view the Snake from rather than someone simpler (like Rutt) – the complexity of the scenes, all the elaborate metaphor, etc, helps distract from how incredibly brutal this bit of storyline really is:

A group of kids running from cannibalistic adults, mad dogs, and Forkrul Assail, dying by the thousands, fleeing into a desert where locust creatures eat the weakest among them alive, living with that long enough to learn to exploit their feeding habits.  All of this going on long enough to instill cannibalism of the fallen among them as a virtue to their little society.  Seriously…how does this get worse?  Imagine this being described in the eloquently stark terms that Erikson has shown a talent for using instead of Badelle’s airy poetry.

 

I must admit I find Amanda’s view even weirder to me with the knowledge that she feels sorry for Blistig of all characters.  He’s massively out of his depth being with an army on the march – from his performance, I’d guess it was likely Pormqual that promoted him to Fist in the first place, since I can’t see any competent commander even promoting him to Captain – his argument about building rapport with his men might hold a bit of water as a Lieutenant.  I’d feel sorry for him if he was actually conscious of his inadequacy and either tried to resign his commission with the Adjunct or if he’d confide with his fellow Fist just how out of his depth he was…as it is, he’s just genuinely and arrogantly incompetent.  Personally I’ve always found that combination worthy of disdain or alarm (depending on just how much power the person in question has), not pity.

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Apsalar
2 years ago

@19 Rashkavar

It was actually Tavore that promoted Blistig. Prior to that he had been a commander of the Aren Guard. He didn’t even want to be made Fist and I guess dragged his feet ever since.