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The Way of Kings: Prelude, Prologue, Chapters 1-3 (Excerpt)

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The Way of Kings: Prelude, Prologue, Chapters 1-3 (Excerpt)

Roshar is a world of stone and storms. Uncanny tempests of incredible power sweep across the rocky terrain so frequently that they have shaped ecology and civilization alike. Animals hide…

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Published on June 10, 2010

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Prelude to
The Stormlight Archive

Kalak rounded a rocky stone ridge and stumbled to a stop before the body of a dying thunderclast. The enormous stone beast lay on its side, riblike protrusions from its chest broken and cracked. The monstrosity was vaguely skeletal in shape, with unnaturally long limbs that sprouted from granite shoulders. The eyes were deep red spots on the arrowhead face, as if created by a fire burning deep within the stone. They faded.

Even after all these centuries, seeing a thunderclast up close made Kalak shiver. The beast’s hand was as long as a man was tall. He’d been killed by hands like those before, and it hadn’t been pleasant.

Of course, dying rarely was.

He rounded the creature, picking his way more carefully across the battlefield. The plain was a place of misshapen rock and stone, natural pillars rising around him, bodies littering the ground. Few plants lived here. The stone ridges and mounds bore numerous scars. Some were shattered, blasted-out sections where Surgebinders had fought. Less frequently, he passed cracked, oddly shaped hollows where thunderclasts had ripped themselves free of the stone to join the fray.

Many of the bodies around him were human; many were not. Blood mixed. Red. Orange. Violet. Though none of the bodies around him stirred, an indistinct haze of sounds hung in the air. Moans of pain, cries of grief. They did not seem like the sounds of victory. Smoke curled from the occasional patches of growth or heaps of burning corpses. Even some sections of rock smoldered. The Dustbringers had done their work well.

But I survived, Kalak thought, hand to breast as he hastened to the meeting place. I actually survived this time.

That was dangerous. When he died, he was sent back, no choice. When he survived the Desolation, he was supposed to go back as well. Back to that place that he dreaded. Back to that place of pain and fire. What if he just decided . . . not to go?

Perilous thoughts, perhaps traitorous thoughts. He hastened on his way.

The place of meeting was in the shadow of a large rock formation, a spire rising into the sky. As always, the ten of them had decided upon it before the battle. The survivors would make their way here. Oddly, only one of the others was waiting for him. Jezrien. Had the other eight all died? It was possible. The battle had been so furious this time, one of the worst. The enemy was growing increasingly tenacious.

But no. Kalak frowned as he stepped up to the base of the spire. Seven magnificent swords stood proudly here, driven point-first into the stone ground. Each was a masterly work of art, flowing in design, inscribed with glyphs and patterns. He recognized each one. If their masters had died, the Blades would have vanished.

These Blades were weapons of power beyond even Shardblades. These were unique. Precious. Jezrien stood outside the ring of swords, looking eastward.

“Jezrien?”

The figure in white and blue glanced toward him. Even after all these centuries, Jezrien looked young, like a man barely into his thirtieth year. His short black beard was neatly trimmed, though his once-fine clothing was scorched and stained with blood. He folded his arms behind his back as he turned to Kalak.

“What is this, Jezrien?” Kalak asked. “Where are the others?”

“Departed.” Jezrien’s voice was calm, deep, regal. Though he hadn’t worn a crown in centuries, his royal manner lingered. He always seemed to know what to do. “You might call it a miracle. Only one of us died this time.”

“Talenel,” Kalak said. His was the only Blade unaccounted for.

“Yes. He died holding that passage by the northern waterway.”

Kalak nodded. Taln had a tendency to choose seemingly hopeless fights and win them. He also had a tendency to die in the process. He would be back now, in the place where they went between Desolations. The place of nightmares.

Kalak found himself shaking. When had he become so weak? “Jezrien, I can’t return this time.” Kalak whispered the words, stepping up and gripping the other man’s arm. “I can’t.”

Kalak felt something within him break at the admission. How long had it been? Centuries, perhaps millennia, of torture. It was so hard to keep track. Those fires, those hooks, digging into his flesh anew each day. Searing the skin off his arm, then burning the fat, then driving to the bone. He could smell it. Almighty, he could smell it!

“Leave your sword,” Jezrien said.

“What?”

Jezrien nodded to the ring of weapons. “I was chosen to wait for you. We weren’t certain if you had survived. A . . . a decision has been made. It is time for the Oathpact to end.”

Kalak felt a sharp stab of horror. “What will that do?”

“Ishar believes that so long as there is one of us still bound to the Oath-pact, it may be enough. There is a chance we might end the cycle of Desolations.”

Kalak looked into the immortal king’s eyes. Black smoke rose from a small patch to their left. Groans of the dying haunted them from behind. There, in Jezrien’s eyes, Kalak saw anguish and grief. Perhaps even cowardice. This was a man hanging from a cliff by a thread.

Almighty above, Kalak thought. You’re broken too, aren’t you? They all were.

Kalak turned and walked to the side, where a low ridge overlooked part of the battlefield.

There were so many corpses, and among them walked the living. Men in primitive wraps, carry ing spears topped by bronze heads. Juxtaposed between them were others in gleaming plate armor. One group walked past, four men in their ragged tanned skins or shoddy leather joining a powerful figure in beautiful silver plate, amazingly intricate. Such a contrast. Jezrien stepped up beside him.

“They see us as divinities,” Kalak whispered. “They rely upon us, Jezrien. We’re all that they have.”

“They have the Radiants. That will be enough.”

Kalak shook his head. “He will not remain bound by this. The enemy. He will find a way around it. You know he will.”

“Perhaps.” The king of Heralds offered no further explanation.

“And Taln?” Kalak asked. The flesh burning. The fires. The pain over and over and over . . .

“Better that one man should suffer than ten,” Jezrien whispered. He seemed so cold. Like a shadow caused by heat and light falling on someone honorable and true, casting this black imitation behind.

Jezrien walked back to the ring of swords. His own Blade formed in his hands, appearing from mist, wet with condensation. “It has been decided, Kalak. We will go our ways, and we will not seek out one another. Our Blades must be left. The Oathpact ends now.” He lifted his sword and rammed it into the stone with the other seven.

Jezrien hesitated, looking at the sword, then bowed his head and turned away. As if ashamed. “We chose this burden willingly. Well, we can choose to drop it if we wish.”

“What do we tell the people, Jezrien?” Kalak asked. “What will they say of this day?”

“It’s simple,” Jezrien said, walking away. “We tell them that they finally won. It’s an easy enough lie. Who knows? Maybe it will turn out to be true.”

Kalak watched Jezrien depart across the burned landscape. Finally, he summoned his own Blade and slammed it into the stone beside the other eight. He turned and walked in the direction opposite from Jezrien.

And yet, he could not help glancing back at the ring of swords and the single open spot. The place where the tenth sword should have gone.

The one of them who was lost. The one they had abandoned.

Forgive us, Kalak thought, then left.

 

 


 

“The love of men is a frigid thing, a mountain stream only three steps from the ice. We are his. Oh Stormfather . . . we are his. It is but a thousand days, and the Everstorm comes.”

—Collected on the first day of the week Palah of the month Shash of the year 1171, thirty-one seconds before death. Subject was a darkeyed pregnant woman of middle years. The child did not survive.

4500 YEARS LATER

Szeth-son-son-Vallano, Truthless of Shinovar, wore white on the day he was to kill a king. The white clothing was a Parshendi tradition, foreign to him. But he did as his masters required and did not ask for an explanation.

He sat in a large stone room, baked by enormous firepits that cast a garish light upon the revelers, causing beads of sweat to form on their skin as they danced, and drank, and yelled, and sang, and clapped. Some fell to the ground red-faced, the revelry too much for them, their stomachs proving to be inferior wineskins. They looked as if they were dead, at least until their friends carried them out of the feast hall to waiting beds.

Szeth did not sway to the drums, drink the sapphire wine, or stand to dance. He sat on a bench at the back, a still servant in white robes. Few at the treaty-signing celebration noticed him. He was just a servant, and Shin were easy to ignore. Most out here in the East thought Szeth’s kind were docile and harmless. They were generally right.

The drummers began a new rhythm. The beats shook Szeth like a quartet of thumping hearts, pumping waves of invisible blood through the room. Szeth’s masters—who were dismissed as savages by those in more civilized kingdoms—sat at their own tables. They were men with skin of black marbled with red. Parshendi, they were named—cousins to the more docile servant peoples known as parshmen in most of the world. An oddity. They did not call themselves Parshendi; this was the Alethi name for them. It meant, roughly, “parshmen who can think.” Neither side seemed to see that as an insult.

The Parshendi had brought the musicians. At first, the Alethi lighteyes had been hesitant. To them, drums were base instruments of the common, darkeyed people. But wine was the great assassin of both tradition and propriety, and now the Alethi elite danced with abandon.

Szeth stood and began to pick his way through the room. The revelry had lasted long; even the king had retired hours ago. But many still celebrated. As he walked, Szeth was forced to step around Dalinar Kholin—the king’s own brother—who slumped drunken at a small table. The aging but powerfully built man kept waving away those who tried to encourage him to bed. Where was Jasnah, the king’s daughter? Elhokar, the king’s son and heir, sat at the high table, ruling the feast in his father’s absence. He was in conversation with two men, a dark-skinned Azish man who had an odd patch of pale skin on his cheek and a thinner, Alethi-looking man who kept glancing over his shoulder.

The heir’s feasting companions were unimportant. Szeth stayed far from the heir, skirting the sides of the room, passing the drummers. Musicspren zipped through the air around them, the tiny spirits taking the form of spinning translucent ribbons. As Szeth passed the drummers, they noted him. They would withdraw soon, along with all of the other Parshendi.

They did not seem offended. They did not seem angry. And yet they were going to break their treaty of only a few hours. It made no sense. But Szeth did not ask questions.

At the edge of the room, he passed rows of unwavering azure lights that bulged out where wall met floor. They held sapphires infused with Stormlight. Profane. How could the men of these lands use something so sacred for mere illumination? Worse, the Alethi scholars were said to be close to creating new Shardblades. Szeth hoped that was just wishful boasting. For if it did happen, the world would be changed. Likely in a way that ended with people in all countries—from distant Thaylenah to towering Jah Keved—speaking Alethi to their children.

They were a grand people, these Alethi. Even drunk, there was a natural nobility to them. Tall and well made, the men dressed in dark silk coats that buttoned down the sides of the chest and were elaborately embroidered in silver or gold. Each one looked a general on the field.

The women were even more splendid. They wore grand silk dresses, tightly fitted, the bright colors a contrast to the dark tones favored by the men. The left sleeve of each dress was longer than the right one, covering the hand. Alethi had an odd sense of propriety.

Their pure black hair was pinned up atop their heads, either in intricate weavings of braids or in loose piles. It was often woven with gold ribbons or ornaments, along with gems that glowed with Stormlight. Beautiful. Profane, but beautiful.

Szeth left the feasting chamber behind. Just outside, he passed the doorway into the Beggars’ Feast. It was an Alethi tradition, a room where some of the poorest men and women in the city were given a feast complementing that of the king and his guests. A man with a long grey and black beard slumped in the doorway, smiling foolishly—though whether from wine or a weak mind, Szeth could not tell.

“Have you seen me?” the man asked with slurred speech. He laughed, then began to speak in gibberish, reaching for a wineskin. So it was drink after all. Szeth brushed by, continuing past a line of statues depicting the Ten Heralds from ancient Vorin theology. Jezerezeh, Ishi, Kelek, Talenelat. He counted off each one, and realized there were only nine here. One was conspicuously missing. Why had Shalash’s statue been removed? King Gavilar was said to be very devout in his Vorin worship. Too devout, by some people’s standards.

The hallway here curved to the right, running around the perimeter of the domed palace. They were on the king’s floor, two levels up, surrounded by rock walls, ceiling, and floor. That was profane. Stone was not to be trod upon. But what was he to do? He was Truthless. He did as his masters demanded.

Today, that included wearing white. Loose white trousers tied at the waist with a rope, and over them a filmy shirt with long sleeves, open at the front. White clothing for a killer was a tradition among the Parshendi. Although Szeth had not asked, his masters had explained why.

White to be bold. White to not blend into the night. White to give warning.

For if you were going to assassinate a man, he was entitled to see you coming.

Szeth turned right, taking the hallway directly toward the king’s chambers. Torches burned on the walls, their light unsatisfying to him, a meal of thin broth after a long fast. Tiny flamespren danced around them, like insects made solely of congealed light. The torches were useless to him. He reached for his pouch and the spheres it contained, but then hesitated when he saw more of the blue lights ahead: a pair of Stormlight lamps hanging on the wall, brilliant sapphires glowing at their hearts. Szeth walked up to one of these, holding out his hand to cup it around the glass-shrouded gemstone.

“You there!” a voice called in Alethi. There were two guards at the intersection. Double guard, for there were savages abroad in Kholinar this night. True, those savages were supposed to be allies now. But alliances could be shallow things indeed.

This one wouldn’t last the hour.

Szeth looked as the two guards approached. They carried spears; they weren’t lighteyes, and were therefore forbidden the sword. Their painted red breastplates were ornate, however, as were their helms. They might be darkeyed, but they were high-ranking citizens with honored positions in the royal guard.

Stopping a few feet away, the guard at the front gestured with his spear. “Go on, now. This is no place for you.” He had tan Alethi skin and a thin mustache that ran all the way around his mouth, becoming a beard at the bottom.

Szeth didn’t move.

“Well?” the guard said. “What are you waiting for?”

Szeth breathed in deeply, drawing forth the Stormlight. It streamed into him, siphoned from the twin sapphire lamps on the walls, sucked in as if by his deep inhalation. The Stormlight raged inside of him, and the hallway suddenly grew darker, falling into shade like a hilltop cut off from the sun by a transient cloud.

Szeth could feel the Light’s warmth, its fury, like a tempest that had been injected directly into his veins. The power of it was invigorating but dangerous. It pushed him to act. To move. To strike.

Holding his breath, he clung to the Stormlight. He could still feel it leaking out. Stormlight could be held for only a short time, a few minutes at most. It leaked away, the human body too porous a container. He had heard that the Voidbringers could hold it in perfectly. But, then, did they even exist? His punishment declared that they didn’t. His honor demanded that they did.

Afire with holy energy, Szeth turned to the guards. They could see that he was leaking Stormlight, wisps of it curling from his skin like luminescent smoke. The lead guard squinted, frowning. Szeth was sure the man had never seen anything like it before. As far as he knew, Szeth had killed every stonewalker who had ever seen what he could do.

“What . . . what are you?” The guard’s voice had lost its certainty. “Spirit or man?”

“What am I?” Szeth whispered, a bit of Light leaking from his lips as he looked past the man down the long hallway. “I’m . . . sorry.”

Szeth blinked, Lashing himself to that distant point down the hallway. Stormlight raged from him in a flash, chilling his skin, and the ground immediately stopped pulling him downward. Instead, he was pulled toward that distant point—it was as if, to him, that direction had suddenly become down.

This was a Basic Lashing, first of his three kinds of Lashings. It gave him the ability to manipulate what ever force, spren, or god it was that held men to the ground. With this Lashing, he could bind people or objects to different surfaces or in different directions.

From Szeth’s perspective, the hallway was now a deep shaft down which he was falling, and the two guards stood on one of the sides. They were shocked when Szeth’s feet hit them, one for each face, throwing them over. Szeth shifted his view and Lashed himself to the floor. Light leaked from him. The floor of the hallway again became down, and he landed between the two guards, clothes crackling and dropping flakes of frost. He rose, beginning the process of summoning his Shardblade.

One of the guards fumbled for his spear. Szeth reached down, touching the soldier’s shoulder while looking up. He focused on a point above him while willing the Light out of his body and into the guard, Lashing the poor man to the ceiling.

The guard yelped in shock as up became down for him. Light trailing from his form, he crashed into the ceiling and dropped his spear. It was not Lashed directly, and clattered back down to the floor near Szeth.

To kill. It was the greatest of sins. And yet here Szeth stood, Truthless, profanely walking on stones used for building. And it would not end. As Truthless, there was only one life he was forbidden to take.

And that was his own.

At the tenth beat of his heart, his Shardblade dropped into his waiting hand. It formed as if condensing from mist, water beading along the metal length. His Shardblade was long and thin, edged on both sides, smaller than most others. Szeth swept it out, carving a line in the stone floor and passing through the second guard’s neck.

As always, the Shardblade killed oddly; though it cut easily through stone, steel, or anything inanimate, the metal fuzzed when it touched living skin. It traveled through the guard’s neck without leaving a mark, but once it did, the man’s eyes smoked and burned. They blackened, shriveling up in his head, and he slumped forward, dead. A Shardblade did not cut living flesh; it severed the soul itself.

Above, the first guard gasped. He’d managed to get to his feet, even though they were planted on the ceiling of the hallway. “Shardbearer!” he shouted. “A Shardbearer assaults the king’s hall! To arms!”

Finally, Szeth thought. Szeth’s use of Stormlight was unfamiliar to the guards, but they knew a Shardblade when they saw one.

 


Szeth bent down and picked up the spear that had fallen from above. As he did so, he released the breath he’d been holding since drawing in the Stormlight. It sustained him while he held it, but those two lanterns hadn’t contained much of it, so he would need to breathe again soon. The Light began to leak away more quickly, now that he wasn’t holding his breath.

 

Szeth set the spear’s butt against the stone floor, then looked upward. The guard above stopped shouting, eyes opening wide as the tails of his shirt began to slip downward, the earth below reasserting its dominance. The Light steaming off his body dwindled.

He looked down at Szeth. Down at the spear tip pointing directly at his heart. Violet fearspren crawled out of the stone ceiling around him.

The Light ran out. The guard fell.

He screamed as he hit, the spear impaling him through the chest. Szeth let the spear fall away, carried to the ground with a muffled thump by the body twitching on its end. Shardblade in hand, he turned down a side corridor, following the map he’d memorized. He ducked around a corner and flattened himself against the wall just as a troop of guards reached the dead men. The newcomers began shouting immediately, continuing the alarm.

His instructions were clear. Kill the king, but be seen doing it. Let the Alethi know he was coming and what he was doing. Why? Why did the Parshendi agree to this treaty, only to send an assassin the very night of its signing?

More gemstones glowed on the walls of the hallway here. King Gavilar liked lavish display, and he couldn’t know that he was leaving sources of power for Szeth to use in his Lashings. The things Szeth did hadn’t been seen for millennia. Histories from those times were all but nonexistent, and the legends were horribly inaccurate.

Szeth peeked back out into the corridor. One of the guards at the intersection saw him, pointing and yelling. Szeth made sure they got a good look, then ducked away. He took a deep breath as he ran, drawing in Stormlight from the lanterns. His body came alive with it, and his speed increased, his muscles bursting with energy. Light became a storm inside of him; his blood thundered in his ears. It was terrible and wonderful at the same time.

Two corridors down, one to the side. He threw open the door of a storage room, then hesitated a moment—just long enough for a guard to round the corner and see him—before dashing into the room. Preparing for a Full Lashing, he raised his arm and commanded the Stormlight to pool there, causing the skin to burst alight with radiance. Then he flung his hand out toward the doorframe, spraying white luminescence across it like paint. He slammed the door just as the guards arrived.

The Stormlight held the door in the frame with the strength of a hundred arms. A Full Lashing bound objects together, holding them fast until the Stormlight ran out. It took longer to create—and drained Stormlight far more quickly—than a Basic Lashing. The door handle shook, and then the wood began to crack as the guards threw their weight against it, one man calling for an axe.

Szeth crossed the room in rapid strides, weaving around the shrouded furniture that had been stored here. It was of red cloth and deep expensive woods. He reached the far wall and—preparing himself for yet another blasphemy—he raised his Shardblade and slashed horizontally through the dark grey stone. The rock sliced easily; a Shardblade could cut any inanimate object. Two vertical slashes followed, then one across the bottom, cutting a large square block. He pressed his hand against it, willing Stormlight into the stone.

Behind him the room’s door began to crack. He looked over his shoulder and focused on the shaking door, Lashing the block in that direction. Frost crystallized on his clothing—Lashing something so large required a great deal of Stormlight. The tempest within him stilled, like a storm reduced to a drizzle.

He stepped aside. The large stone block shuddered, sliding into the room. Normally, moving the block would have been impossible. Its own weight would have held it against the stones below. Yet now, that same weight pulled it free; for the block, the direction of the room’s door was down. With a deep grinding sound, the block slid free of the wall and tumbled through the air, smashing furniture.

The soldiers finally broke through the door, staggering into the room just as the enormous block crashed into them.

Szeth turned his back on the terrible sound of the screams, the splintering of wood, the breaking of bones. He ducked and stepped through his new hole, entering the hallway outside.

He walked slowly, drawing Stormlight from the lamps he passed, siphoning it to him and stoking anew the tempest within. As the lamps dimmed, the corridor darkened. A thick wooden door stood at the end, and as he approached, small fearspren—shaped like globs of purple goo—began to wriggle from the masonry, pointing toward the doorway. They were drawn by the terror being felt on the other side.

Szeth pushed the door open, entering the last corridor leading to the king’s chambers. Tall, red ceramic vases lined the pathway, and they were interspersed with nervous soldiers. They flanked a long, narrow rug. It was red, like a river of blood.

The spearmen in front didn’t wait for him to get close. They broke into a trot, lifting their short throwing spears. Szeth slammed his hand to the side, pushing Stormlight into the doorframe, using the third and final type of Lashing, a Reverse Lashing. This one worked diff erently from the other two. It did not make the doorframe emit Stormlight; indeed, it seemed to pull nearby light into it, giving it a strange penumbra.

The spearmen threw, and Szeth stood still, hand on the doorframe. A Reverse Lashing required his constant touch, but took comparatively little Stormlight. During one, anything that approached him—particularly lighter objects—was instead pulled toward the Lashing itself.

The spears veered in the air, splitting around him and slamming into the wooden frame. As he felt them hit, Szeth leaped into the air and Lashed himself to the right wall, his feet hitting the stone with a slap.

He immediately re oriented his perspective. To his eyes, he wasn’t standing on the wall, the soldiers were, the blood-red carpet streaming between them like a long tapestry. Szeth bolted down the hallway, striking with his Shardblade, shearing through the necks of two men who had thrown spears at him. Their eyes burned, and they collapsed.

The other guards in the hallway began to panic. Some tried to attack him, others yelled for more help, still others cringed away from him. The attackers had trouble—they were disoriented by the oddity of striking at someone who hung on the wall. Szeth cut down a few, then flipped into the air, tucking into a roll, and Lashed himself back to the floor.

He hit the ground in the midst of the soldiers. Completely surrounded, but holding a Shardblade.

According to legend, the Shardblades were first carried by the Knights Radiant uncounted ages ago. Gifts of their god, granted to allow them to fight horrors of rock and flame, dozens of feet tall, foes whose eyes burned with hatred. The Voidbringers. When your foe had skin as hard as stone itself, steel was useless. Something supernal was required.

Szeth rose from his crouch, loose white clothes rippling, jaw clenched against his sins. He struck out, his weapon flashing with reflected torchlight. Elegant, wide swings. Three of them, one after another. He could neither close his ears to the screams that followed nor avoid seeing the men fall. They dropped round him like toys knocked over by a child’s careless kick. If the Blade touched a man’s spine, he died, eyes burning. If it cut through the core of a limb, it killed that limb. One soldier stumbled away from Szeth, arm flopping uselessly on his shoulder. He would never be able to feel it or use it again.

Szeth lowered his Shardblade, standing among the cinder-eyed corpses. Here, in Alethkar, men often spoke of the legends—of mankind’s hardwon victory over the Voidbringers. But when weapons created to fight nightmares were turned against common soldiers, the lives of men became cheap things indeed.

Szeth turned and continued on his way, slippered feet falling on the soft red rug. The Shardblade, as always, glistened silver and clean. When one killed with a Blade, there was no blood. That seemed like a sign. The Shardblade was just a tool; it could not be blamed for the murders.

 


The door at the end of the hallway burst open. Szeth froze as a small group of soldiers rushed out, ushering a man in regal robes, his head ducked as if to avoid arrows. The soldiers wore deep blue, the color of the King’s Guard, and the corpses didn’t make them stop and gawk. They were prepared for what a Shardbearer could do. They opened a side door and shoved their ward through, several leveling spears at Szeth as they backed out.

 

Another figure stepped from the king’s quarters; he wore glistening blue armor made of smoothly interlocking plates. Unlike common plate armor, however, this armor had no leather or mail visible at the joints— just smaller plates, fitting together with intricate precision. The armor was beautiful, the blue inlaid with golden bands around the edges of each piece of plate, the helm ornamented with three waves of small, hornlike wings.

Shardplate, the customary complement to a Shardblade. The newcomer carried a sword as well, an enormous Shardblade six feet long with a design along the blade like burning flames, a weapon of silvery metal that gleamed and almost seemed to glow. A weapon designed to slay dark gods, a larger counterpart to the one Szeth carried.

Szeth hesitated. He didn’t recognize the armor; he had not been warned that he would be set at this task, and hadn’t been given proper time to memorize the various suits of Plate or Blades owned by the Alethi. But a Shardbearer would have to be dealt with before he chased the king; he could not leave such a foe behind.

Besides, perhaps a Shardbearer could defeat him, kill him and end his miserable life. His Lashings wouldn’t work directly on someone in Shardplate, and the armor would enhance the man, strengthen him. Szeth’s honor would not allow him to betray his mission or seek death. But if that death occurred, he would welcome it.

The Shardbearer struck, and Szeth Lashed himself to the side of the hallway, leaping with a twist and landing on the wall. He danced backward, Blade held at the ready. The Shardbearer fell into an aggressive posture, using one of the swordplay stances favored here in the East. He moved far more nimbly than one would expect for a man in such bulky armor. Shardplate was special, as ancient and magical as the Blades it complemented.

The Shardbearer struck. Szeth skipped to the side and Lashed himself to the ceiling as the Shardbearer’s Blade sliced into the wall. Feeling a thrill at the contest, Szeth dashed forward and attacked downward with an overhand blow, trying to hit the Shardbearer’s helm. The man ducked, going down on one knee, letting Szeth’s Blade cleave empty air.

Szeth leaped backward as the Shardbearer swung upward with his Blade, slicing into the ceiling. Szeth didn’t own a set of Plate himself, and didn’t care to. His Lashings interfered with the gemstones that powered Shardplate, and he had to choose one or the other.

As the Shardbearer turned, Szeth sprinted forward across the ceiling. As expected, the Shardbearer swung again, and Szeth leaped to the side, rolling. He came up from his roll and flipped, Lashing himself to the floor again. He spun to land on the ground behind the Shardbearer. He slammed his Blade into his opponent’s open back.

Unfortunately, there was one major advantage Plate offered: It could block a Shardblade. Szeth’s weapon hit solidly, causing a web of glowing lines to spread out across the back of the armor, and Stormlight began to leak free from them. Shardplate didn’t dent or bend like common metal. Szeth would have to hit the Shardbearer in the same location at least once more to break through.

Szeth danced out of range as the Shardbearer swung in anger, trying to cut at Szeth’s knees. The tempest within Szeth gave him many advantages— including the ability to quickly recover from small wounds. But it would not restore limbs killed by a Shardblade.

He rounded the Shardbearer, then picked a moment and dashed forward. The Shardbearer swung again, but Szeth briefly Lashed himself to the ceiling for lift. He shot into the air, cresting over the swing, then immediately Lashed himself back to the floor. He struck as he landed, but the Shardbearer recovered quickly and executed a perfect follow-through stroke, coming within a finger of hitting Szeth.

The man was dangerously skilled with that Blade. Many Shardbearers depended too much on the power of their weapon and armor. This man was different.

Szeth jumped to the wall and struck at the Shardbearer with quick, terse attacks, like a snapping eel. The Shardbearer fended him off with wide, sweeping counters. His Blade’s length kept Szeth at bay.

This is taking too long! Szeth thought. If the king slipped away into hiding, Szeth would fail in his mission no matter how many people he killed. He ducked in for another strike, but the Shardbearer forced him back. Each second this fight lasted was another for the king’s escape.

It was time to be reckless. Szeth launched into the air, Lashing himself to the other end of the hallway and falling feet-first toward his adversary. The Shardbearer didn’t hesitate to swing, but Szeth Lashed himself down at an angle, dropping immediately. The Shardblade swished through the air above him.

He landed in a crouch, using his momentum to throw himself forward, and swung at the Shardbearer’s side, where the Plate had cracked. He hit with a powerful blow. That piece of the Plate shattered, bits of molten metal streaking away. The Shardbearer grunted, dropping to one knee, raising a hand to his side. Szeth raised a foot to the man’s side and shoved him backward with a Stormlight-enhanced kick.

The heavy Shardbearer crashed into the door of the king’s quarters, smashing it and falling partway into the room beyond. Szeth left him, ducking instead through the doorway to the right, following the way the king had gone. The hallway here had the same red carpet, and Stormlight lamps on the walls gave Szeth a chance to recharge the tempest within.

Energy blazed within him again, and he sped up. If he could get far enough ahead, he could deal with the king, then turn back to fight off the Shardbearer. It wouldn’t be easy. A Full Lashing on a doorway wouldn’t stop a Shardbearer, and that Plate would let the man run supernaturally fast. Szeth glanced over his shoulder.

The Shardbearer wasn’t following. The man sat up in his armor, looking dazed. Szeth could just barely see him, sitting in the doorway, surrounded by broken bits of wood. Perhaps Szeth had wounded him more than he’d thought.

Or maybe . . .

Szeth froze. He thought of the ducked head of the man who’d been rushed out, face obscured. The Shardbearer still wasn’t following. He was so skilled. It was said that few men could rival Gavilar Kholin’s swordsmanship. Could it be?

Szeth turned and dashed back, trusting his instincts. As soon as the Shardbearer saw him, he climbed to his feet with alacrity. Szeth ran faster. What was the safest place for your king? In the hands of some guards, fleeing? Or protected in a suit of Shardplate, left behind, dismissed as a bodyguard?

Clever, Szeth thought as the formerly sluggish Shardbearer fell into another battle stance. Szeth attacked with renewed vigor, swinging his Blade in a flurry of strikes. The Shardbearer—the king—aggressively struck out with broad, sweeping blows. Szeth pulled away from one of these, feeling the wind of the weapon passing just inches before him. He timed his next move, then dashed forward, ducking underneath the king’s follow-through.

The king, expecting another strike at his side, twisted with his arm held protectively to block the hole in his Plate. That gave Szeth the room to run past him and into the king’s chambers.

The king spun around to follow, but Szeth ran through the lavishly furnished chamber, flinging out his hand, touching pieces of furniture he passed. He infused them with Stormlight, Lashing them to a point behind the king. The furniture tumbled as if the room had been turned on its side, couches, chairs, and tables dropping toward the surprised king. Gavilar made the mistake of chopping at them with his Shardblade. The weapon easily sheared through a large couch, but the pieces still crashed into him, making him stumble. A footstool hit him next, throwing him to the ground.

Gavilar rolled out of the way of the furniture and charged forward, Plate leaking streams of Light from the cracked sections. Szeth gathered himself, then leaped into the air, Lashing himself backward and to the right as the king arrived. He zipped out of the way of the king’s blow, then Lashed himself forward with two Basic Lashings in a row. Stormlight flashed out of him, clothing freezing, as he was pulled toward the king at twice the speed of a normal fall.

The king’s posture indicated surprise as Szeth lurched in midair, then spun toward him, swinging. He slammed his Blade into the king’s helm, then immediately Lashed himself to the ceiling and fell upward, slamming into the stone roof above. He’d Lashed himself in too many directions too quickly, and his body had lost track, making it difficult to land gracefully. He stumbled back to his feet.

Below, the king stepped back, trying to get into position to swing up at Szeth. The man’s helm was cracked, leaking Stormlight, and he stood protectively, defending the side with the broken plate. The king used a onehanded swing, reaching for the ceiling. Szeth immediately Lashed himself downward, judging that the king’s attack would leave him unable to get his sword back in time.

Szeth underestimated his opponent. The king stepped into Szeth’s attack, trusting his helm to absorb the blow. Just as Szeth hit the helm a second time—shattering it—Gavilar punched with his off hand, slamming his gauntleted fist into Szeth’s face.

Blinding light flashed in Szeth’s eyes, a counterpoint to the sudden agony that crashed across his face. Everything blurred, his vision fading.

Pain. So much pain!

He screamed, Stormlight leaving him in a rush, and he slammed back into something hard. The balcony doors. More pain broke out across his shoulders, as if someone had stabbed him with a hundred daggers, and he hit the ground and rolled to a stop, muscles trembling. The blow would have killed an ordinary man.

No time for pain. No time for pain. No time for pain!

He blinked, shaking his head, the world blurry and dark. Was he blind? No. It was dark outside. He was on the wooden balcony; the force of the blow had thrown him through the doors. Something was thumping. Heavy footfalls. The Shardbearer!

Szeth stumbled to his feet, vision swimming. Blood streamed from the side of his face, and Stormlight rose from his skin, blinding his left eye. The Light. It would heal him, if it could. His jaw felt unhinged. Broken? He’d dropped his Shardblade.

A lumbering shadow moved in front of him; the Shardbearer’s armor had leaked enough Stormlight that the king was having trouble walking. But he was coming.

Szeth screamed, kneeling, infusing Stormlight into the wooden balcony, Lashing it downward. The air frosted around him. The tempest roared, traveling down his arms into the wood. He Lashed it downward, then did it again. He Lashed a fourth time as Gavilar stepped onto the balcony. It lurched under the extra weight. The wood cracked, straining.

The Shardbearer hesitated.

Szeth Lashed the balcony downward a fifth time. The balcony supports shattered and the entire structure broke free from the building. Szeth screamed through a broken jaw and used his final bit of Stormlight to Lash himself to the side of the building. He fell to the side, passing the shocked Shardbearer, then hit the wall and rolled.

The balcony dropped away, the king looking up with shock as he lost his footing. The fall was brief. In the moonlight, Szeth watched solemnly— vision still fuzzy, blinded in one eye—as the structure crashed to the stone ground below. The wall of the palace trembled, and the crash of broken wood echoed from the nearby buildings.

Still standing on the side of the wall, Szeth groaned, climbing to his feet. He felt weak; he’d used up his Stormlight too quickly, straining his body. He stumbled down the side of the building, approaching the wreckage, barely able to remain standing.

The king was still moving. Shardplate would protect a man from such a fall, but a large length of bloodied wood stuck up through Gavilar’s side, piercing him where Szeth had broken the Plate earlier. Szeth knelt down, inspecting the man’s pain-wracked face. Strong features, square chin, black beard flecked with white, striking pale green eyes. Gavilar Kholin.

“I . . . expected you . . . to come,” the king said between gasps.

Szeth reached underneath the front of the man’s breastplate, tapping the straps there. They unfastened, and he pulled the front of the breastplate free, exposing the gemstones on its interior. Two had been cracked and burned out. Three still glowed. Numb, Szeth breathed in sharply, absorbing the Light.

The storm began to rage again. More Light rose from the side of his face, repairing his damaged skin and bones. The pain was still great; Stormlight healing was far from instantaneous. It would be hours before he recovered.

The king coughed. “You can tell . . . Thaidakar . . . that he’s too late. . . .”

“I don’t know who that is,” Szeth said, standing, his words slurring from his broken jaw. He held his hand to the side, resummoning his Shardblade.

The king frowned. “Then who . . . ? Restares? Sadeas? I never thought . . .”

“My masters are the Parshendi,” Szeth said. Ten heartbeats passed, and his Blade dropped into his hand, wet with condensation.

“The Parshendi? That makes no sense.” Gavilar coughed, hand quivering, reaching toward his chest and fumbling at a pocket. He pulled out a small crystalline sphere tied to a chain. “You must take this. They must not get it.” He seemed dazed. “Tell . . . tell my brother . . . he must find the most important words a man can say. . . .”

Gavilar fell still.

Szeth hesitated, then knelt down and took the sphere. It was odd, unlike any he’d seen before. Though it was completely dark, it seemed to glow somehow. With a light that was black.

The Parshendi? Gavilar had said. That makes no sense. “Nothing makes sense anymore,” Szeth whispered, tucking the strange sphere away. “It’s all unraveling. I am sorry, King of the Alethi. I doubt that you care. Not anymore, at least.” He stood up. “At least you won’t have to watch the world ending with the rest of us.”

Beside the king’s body, his Shardblade materialized from mist, clattering to the stones now that its master was dead. It was worth a fortune; kingdoms had fallen as men vied to possess a single Shardblade.

Shouts of alarm came from inside the palace. Szeth needed to go. But . . .

Tell my brother . . .

To Szeth’s people, a dying request was sacred. He took the king’s hand, dipping it in the man’s own blood, then used it to scrawl on the wood, Brother. You must find the most important words a man can say.

With that, Szeth escaped into the night. He left the king’s Shardblade; he had no use for it. The Blade Szeth already carried was curse enough.

 


 

“You’ve killed me. Bastards, you’ve killed me! While the sun is still hot, I die!”

—Collected on the fifth day of the week Chach, month Betab of the year 1171, ten seconds before death. Subject was a darkeyed soldier thirty-one years of age. Sample is considered questionable.

FIVE YEARS LATER

“I’m going to die, aren’t I?” Cenn asked.

The weathered veteran beside Cenn turned and inspected him. The veteran wore a full beard, cut short. At the sides, the black hairs were starting to give way to grey.

I’m going to die, Cenn thought, clutching his spear—the shaft slick with sweat. I’m going to die. Oh, Stormfather. I’m going to die. . . .

“How old are you, son?” the veteran asked. Cenn didn’t remember the man’s name. It was hard to recall anything while watching that other army form lines across the rocky battlefield. That lining up seemed so civil. Neat, organized. Shortspears in the front ranks, longspears and javelins next, archers at the sides. The darkeyed spearmen wore equipment like Cenn’s: leather jerkin and knee-length skirt with a simple steel cap and a matching breastplate.

Many of the lighteyes had full suits of armor. They sat astride horses, their honor guards clustering around them with breastplates that gleamed burgundy and deep forest green. Were there Shardbearers among them? Brightlord Amaram wasn’t a Shardbearer. Were any of his men? What if Cenn had to fight one? Ordinary men didn’t kill Shardbearers. It had happened so infrequently that each occurrence was now legendary.

It’s really happening, he thought with mounting terror. This wasn’t a drill in the camp. This wasn’t training out in the fields, swinging sticks. This was real. Facing that fact—his heart pounding like a frightened animal in his chest, his legs unsteady—Cenn suddenly realized that he was a coward. He shouldn’t have left the herds! He should never have—

“Son?” the veteran said, voice firm. “How old are you?”

“Fifteen, sir.”

“And what’s your name?” “Cenn, sir.”

The mountainous, bearded man nodded. “I’m Dallet.”

“Dallet,” Cenn repeated, still staring out at the other army. There were so many of them! Thousands. “I’m going to die, aren’t I?”

No.” Dallet had a gruff voice, but somehow that was comforting. “You’re going to be just fine. Keep your head on straight. Stay with the squad.”

“But I’ve barely had three months’ training!” He swore he could hear faint clangs from the enemy’s armor or shields. “I can barely hold this spear! Stormfather, I’m dead. I can’t—”

“Son,” Dallet interrupted, soft but firm. He raised a hand and placed it on Cenn’s shoulder. The rim of Dallet’s large round shield reflected the light from where it hung on his back. “You are going to be fine.”

“How can you know?” It came out as a plea.

“Because, lad. You’re in Kaladin Stormblessed’s squad.” The other soldiers nearby nodded in agreement.

Behind them, waves and waves of soldiers were lining up—thousands of them. Cenn was right at the front, with Kaladin’s squad of about thirty other men. Why had Cenn been moved to a new squad at the last moment? It had something to do with camp politics.

Why was this squad at the very front, where casualties were bound to be the greatest? Small fearspren—like globs of purplish goo—began to climb up out of the ground and gather around his feet. In a moment of sheer panic, he nearly dropped his spear and scrambled away. Dallet’s hand tightened on his shoulder. Looking up into Dallet’s confident black eyes, Cenn hesitated.

“Did you piss before we formed ranks?” Dallet asked.

“I didn’t have time to—”

“Go now.”

Here?

“If you don’t, you’ll end up with it running down your leg in battle, distracting you, maybe killing you. Do it.”

Embarrassed, Cenn handed Dallet his spear and relieved himself onto the stones. When he finished, he shot glances at those next to him. None of Kaladin’s soldiers smirked. They stood steady, spears to their sides, shields on their backs.

The enemy army was almost finished. The field between the two forces was bare, flat slickrock, remarkably even and smooth, broken only by occasional rockbuds. It would have made a good pasture. The warm wind blew in Cenn’s face, thick with the watery scents of last night’s highstorm.

“Dallet!” a voice said.

A man walked up through the ranks, carrying a shortspear that had two leather knife sheaths strapped to the haft. The newcomer was a young man—perhaps four years older than Cenn’s fifteen—but he was taller by several fingers than even Dallet. He wore the common leathers of a spearman, but under them was a pair of dark trousers. That wasn’t supposed to be allowed.

His black Alethi hair was shoulder-length and wavy, his eyes a dark brown. He also had knots of white cord on the shoulders of his jerkin, marking him as a squadleader.

The thirty men around Cenn snapped to attention, raising their spears in salute. This is Kaladin Stormblessed? Cenn thought incredulously. This youth?

“Dallet, we’re soon going to have a new recruit,” Kaladin said. He had a strong voice. “I need you to . . .” He trailed off as he noticed Cenn.

“He found his way here just a few minutes ago, sir,” Dallet said with a smile. “I’ve been gettin’ him ready.”

“Well done,” Kaladin said. “I paid good money to get that boy away from Gare. That man’s so incompetent he might as well be fighting for the other side.”

What? Cenn thought. Why would anyone pay to get me?

“What do you think about the field?” Kaladin asked. Several of the other spearmen nearby raised hands to shade from the sun, scanning the rocks.

“That dip next to the two boulders on the far right?” Dallet asked.

Kaladin shook his head. “Footing’s too rough.”

“Aye. Perhaps it is. What about the short hill over there? Far enough to avoid the first fall, close enough to not get too far ahead.”

Kaladin nodded, though Cenn couldn’t see what they were looking at. “Looks good.”

“The rest of you louts hear that?” Dallet shouted.

The men raised their spears high.

“Keep an eye on the new boy, Dallet,” Kaladin said. “He won’t know the signs.”

“Of course,” Dallet said, smiling. Smiling! How could the man smile? The enemy army was blowing horns. Did that mean they were ready? Even though Cenn had just relieved himself, he felt a trickle of urine run down his leg.

“Stay firm,” Kaladin said, then trotted down the front line to talk to the next squadleader over. Behind Cenn and the others, the dozens of ranks were still growing. The archers on the sides prepared to fire.

“Don’t worry, son,” Dallet said. “We’ll be fine. Squadleader Kaladin is lucky.”

The soldier on the other side of Cenn nodded. He was a lanky, redhaired Veden, with darker tan skin than the Alethi. Why was he fighting in an Alethi army? “That’s right. Kaladin, he’s stormblessed, right sure he is. We only lost . . . what, one man last battle?”

“But someone did die,” Cenn said.

Dallet shrugged. “People always die. Our squad loses the fewest. You’ll see.”

Kaladin finished conferring with the other squadleader, then jogged back to his team. Though he carried a shortspear—meant to be wielded one-handed with a shield in the other hand—his was a hand longer than those held by the other men.

“At the ready, men!” Dallet called. Unlike the other squadleaders, Kaladin didn’t fall into rank, but stood out in front of his squad.

The men around Cenn shuffled, excited. The sounds were repeated through the vast army, the stillness giving way before eagerness. Hundreds of feet shuffling, shields slapping, clasps clanking. Kaladin remained motionless, staring down the other army. “Steady, men,” he said without turning.

Behind, a lighteyed officer passed on horse back. “Be ready to fight! I want their blood, men. Fight and kill!”

“Steady,” Kaladin said again, after the man passed.

“Be ready to run,” Dallet said to Cenn.

“Run? But we’ve been trained to march in formation! To stay in our line!”

“Sure,” Dallet said. “But most of the men don’t have much more training than you. Those who can fight well end up getting sent to the Shattered Plains to battle the Parshendi. Kaladin’s trying to get us into shape to go there, to fight for the king.” Dallet nodded down the line. “Most of these here will break and charge; the lighteyes aren’t good enough commanders to keep them in formation. So stay with us and run.”

“Should I have my shield out?” Around Kaladin’s team, the other ranks were unhooking their shields. But Kaladin’s squad left their shields on their backs.

Before Dallet could answer, a horn blew from behind.

“Go!” Dallet said.

 


Cenn didn’t have much choice. The entire army started moving in a clamor of marching boots. As Dallet had predicted, the steady march didn’t last long. Some men began yelling, the roar taken up by others. Lighteyes called for them to go, run, fight. The line disintegrated.

 

As soon as that happened, Kaladin’s squad broke into a dash, running out into the front at full speed. Cenn scrambled to keep up, panicked and terrified. The ground wasn’t as smooth as it had seemed, and he nearly tripped on a hidden rockbud, vines withdrawn into its shell.

He righted himself and kept going, holding his spear in one hand, his shield clapping against his back. The distant army was in motion as well, their soldiers charging down the field. There was no semblance of a battle formation or a careful line. This wasn’t anything like the training had claimed it would be.

Cenn didn’t even know who the enemy was. A landlord was encroaching on Brightlord Amaram’s territory—the land owned, ultimately, by Highprince Sadeas. It was a border skirmish, and Cenn thought it was with another Alethi princedom. Why were they fighting each other? Perhaps the king would have put a stop to it, but he was on the Shattered Plains, seeking vengeance for the murder of King Gavilar five years before.

The enemy had a lot of archers. Cenn’s panic climbed to a peak as the first wave of arrows flew into the air. He stumbled again, itching to take out his shield. But Dallet grabbed his arm and yanked him forward.

Hundreds of arrows split the sky, dimming the sun. They arced and fell, dropping like skyeels upon their prey. Amaram’s soldiers raised shields. But not Kaladin’s squad. No shields for them.

Cenn screamed.

And the arrows slammed into the middle ranks of Amaram’s army, behind him. Cenn glanced over his shoulder, still running. The arrows fell behind him. Soldiers screamed, arrows broke against shields; only a few straggling arrows landed anywhere near the front ranks.

“Why?” he yelled at Dallet. “How did you know?”

“They want the arrows to hit where the men are most crowded,” the large man replied. “Where they’ll have the greatest chance of finding a body.” Several other groups in the van left their shields lowered, but most ran awkwardly with their shields angled up to the sky, worried about arrows that wouldn’t hit them. That slowed them, and they risked getting trampled by the men behind who were getting hit. Cenn itched to raise his shield anyway; it felt so wrong to run without it.

The second volley hit, and men screamed in pain. Kaladin’s squad barreled toward the enemy soldiers, some of whom were dying to arrows from Amaram’s archers. Cenn could hear the enemy soldiers bellowing war cries, could make out individual faces. Suddenly, Kaladin’s squad pulled to a halt, forming a tight group. They’d reached the small incline that Kaladin and Dallet had chosen earlier.

Dallet grabbed Cenn and shoved him to the very center of the formation. Kaladin’s men lowered spears, pulling out shields as the enemy bore down on them. The charging foe used no careful formation; they didn’t keep the ranks of longspears in back and shortspears in front. They all just ran forward, yelling in a frenzy.

Cenn scrambled to get his shield unlatched from his back. Clashing spears rang in the air as squads engaged one another. A group of enemy spearmen rushed up to Kaladin’s squad, perhaps coveting the higher ground. The three dozen attackers had some cohesion, though they weren’t in as tight a formation as Kaladin’s squad was.

The enemy seemed determined to make up for it in passion; they bellowed and screamed in fury, rushing Kaladin’s line. Kaladin’s team held rank, defending Cenn as if he were some lighteyes and they were his honor guard. The two forces met with a crash of metal on wood, shields slamming together. Cenn cringed back.

It was over in a few eyeblinks. The enemy squad pulled back, leaving two dead on the stone. Kaladin’s team hadn’t lost anyone. They held their bristling V formation, though one man stepped back and pulled out a bandage to wrap a thigh wound. The rest of the men closed in to fill the spot. The wounded man was hulking and thick-armed; he cursed, but the wound didn’t look bad. He was on his feet in a moment, but didn’t return to the place where he’d been. Instead, he moved down to one end of the V formation, a more protected spot.

The battlefield was chaos. The two armies mingled indistinguishably; sounds of clanging, crunching, and screaming churned in the air. Many of the squads broke apart, members rushing from one encounter to another. They moved like hunters, groups of three or four seeking lone individuals, then brutally falling on them.

Kaladin’s team held its ground, engaging only enemy squads that got too close. Was this what a battle really was? Cenn’s practice had trained him for long ranks of men, shoulder to shoulder. Not this frenzied intermixing, this brutal pandemonium. Why didn’t more hold formation?

The real soldiers are all gone, Cenn thought. Off fighting in a real battle at the Shattered Plains. No wonder Kaladin wants to get his squad there.

Spears flashed on all sides; it was difficult to tell friend from foe, despite the emblems on breastplates and colored paint on shields. The battlefield broke down into hundreds of small groups, like a thousand different wars happening at the same time.

After the first few exchanges, Dallet took Cenn by the shoulder and placed him in the rank at the very bottom of the V pattern. Cenn, however, was worthless. When Kaladin’s team engaged enemy squads, all of his training fled him. It took everything he had to just remain there, holding his spear outward and trying to look threatening.

For the better part of an hour, Kaladin’s squad held their small hill, working as a team, shoulder to shoulder. Kaladin often left his position at the front, rushing this way and that, banging his spear on his shield in a strange rhythm.

Those are signals, Cenn realized as Kaladin’s squad moved from the V shape into a ring. With the screams of the dying and the thousands of men calling to others, it was nearly impossible to hear a single person’s voice. But the sharp clang of the spear against the metal plate on Kaladin’s shield was clear. Each time they changed formations, Dallet grabbed Cenn by the shoulder and steered him.

Kaladin’s team didn’t chase down stragglers. They remained on the defensive. And, while several of the men in Kaladin’s team took wounds, none of them fell. Their squad was too intimidating for the smaller groups, and larger enemy units retreated after a few exchanges, seeking easier foes.

Eventually something changed. Kaladin turned, watching the tides of the battle with discerning brown eyes. He raised his spear and smacked his shield in a quick rhythm he hadn’t used before. Dallet grabbed Cenn by the arm and pulled him away from the small hill. Why abandon it now?

Just then, the larger body of Amaram’s force broke, the men scattering. Cenn hadn’t realized how poorly the battle in this quarter had been going for his side. As Kaladin’s team retreated, they passed many wounded and dying, and Cenn grew nauseated. Soldiers were sliced open, their insides spilling out.

He didn’t have time for horror; the retreat quickly turned into a rout. Dallet cursed, and Kaladin beat his shield again. The squad changed direction, heading eastward. There, Cenn saw, a larger group of Amaram’s soldiers was holding.

But the enemy had seen the ranks break, and that made them bold. They rushed forward in clusters, like wild axehounds hunting stray hogs. Before Kaladin’s team was halfway across the field of dead and dying, a large group of enemy soldiers intercepted them. Kaladin reluctantly banged his shield; his squad slowed.

Cenn felt his heart begin to thump faster and faster. Nearby, a squad of Amaram’s soldiers was consumed; men stumbled and fell, screaming, trying to get away. The enemies used their spears like skewers, killing men on the ground like cremlings.

Kaladin’s men met the enemy in a crash of spears and shields. Bodies shoved on all sides, and Cenn was spun about. In the jumble of friend and foe, dying and killing, Cenn grew overwhelmed. So many men running in so many directions!

He panicked, scrambling for safety. A group of soldiers nearby wore Alethi uniforms. Kaladin’s squad. Cenn ran for them, but when some turned toward him, Cenn was terrified to realize he didn’t recognize them. This wasn’t Kaladin’s squad, but a small group of unfamiliar soldiers holding an uneven, broken line. Wounded and terrified, they scattered as soon as an enemy squad got close.

Cenn froze, holding his spear in a sweaty hand. The enemy soldiers charged right for him. His instincts urged him to flee, yet he had seen so many men picked off one at a time. He had to stand! He had to face them! He couldn’t run, he couldn’t—

He yelled, stabbing his spear at the lead soldier. The man casually knocked the weapon aside with his shield, then drove his shortspear into Cenn’s thigh. The pain was hot, so hot that the blood squirting out on his leg felt cold by comparison. Cenn gasped.

The soldier yanked the weapon free. Cenn stumbled backward, dropping his spear and shield. He fell to rocky ground, splashing in someone else’s blood. His foe raised a spear high, a looming silhouette against the stark blue sky, ready to ram it into Cenn’s heart.

And then he was there.

 


Squadleader. Stormblessed. Kaladin’s spear came as if out of nowhere, narrowly deflecting the blow that was to have killed Cenn. Kaladin set himself in front of Cenn, alone, facing down six spearmen. He didn’t flinch. He charged.

 

It happened so quickly. Kaladin swept the feet from beneath the man who had stabbed Cenn. Even as that man fell, Kaladin reached up and flipped a knife from one of the sheaths tied about his spear. His hand snapped, knife flashing and hitting the thigh of a second foe. That man fell to one knee, screaming.

A third man froze, looking at his fallen allies. Kaladin shoved past a wounded enemy and slammed his spear into the gut of the third man. A fourth man fell with a knife to the eye. When had Kaladin grabbed that knife? He spun between the last two, his spear a blur, wielding it like a quarterstaff. For a moment, Cenn thought he could see something surrounding the squadleader. A warping of the air, like the wind itself become visible.

I’ve lost a lot of blood. It’s flowing out so quickly. . . .

Kaladin spun, knocking aside attacks, and the last two spearmen fell with gurgles that Cenn thought sounded surprised. Foes all down, Kaladin turned and knelt beside Cenn. The squadleader set aside his spear and whipped a white strip of cloth from his pocket, then efficiently wrapped it tight around Cenn’s leg. Kaladin worked with the ease of one who had bound wounds dozens of times before.

“Kaladin, sir!” Cenn said, pointing at one of the soldiers Kaladin had wounded. The enemy man held his leg as he stumbled to his feet. In a second, however, mountainous Dallet was there, shoving the foe with his shield. Dallet didn’t kill the wounded man, but let him stumble away, unarmed.

The rest of the squad arrived and formed a ring around Kaladin, Dallet, and Cenn. Kaladin stood up, raising his spear to his shoulder; Dallet handed him back his knives, retrieved from the fallen foes.

“Had me worried there, sir,” Dallet said. “Running off like that.”

“I knew you’d follow,” Kaladin said. “Raise the red banner. Cyn, Korater, you’re going back with the boy. Dallet, hold here. Amaram’s line is bulging in this direction. We should be safe soon.”

“And you, sir?” Dallet asked.

Kaladin looked across the field. A pocket had opened in the enemy forces, and a man rode there on a white horse, swinging about him with a wicked mace. He wore full plate armor, polished and gleaming silver.

“A Shardbearer,” Cenn said.

Dallet snorted. “No, thank the Stormfather. Just a lighteyed officer. Shardbearers are far too valuable to waste on a minor border dispute.”

Kaladin watched the lighteyes with a seething hatred. It was the same hatred Cenn’s father had shown when he’d spoken of chull rustlers, or the hatred Cenn’s mother would display when someone mentioned Kusiri, who had run off with the cobbler’s son.

“Sir?” Dallet said hesitantly.

“Subsquads Two and Three, pincer pattern,” Kaladin said, his voice hard. “We’re taking a brightlord off his throne.”

“You sure that’s wise, sir? We’ve got wounded.”

Kaladin turned toward Dallet. “That’s one of Hallaw’s officers. He might be the one.”

“You don’t know that, sir.”

“Regardless, he’s a battalionlord. If we kill an officer that high, we’re all but guaranteed to be in the next group sent to the Shattered Plains. We’re taking him.” His eyes grew distant. “Imagine it, Dallet. Real soldiers. A warcamp with discipline and lighteyes with integrity. A place where our fighting will mean something.”

Dallet sighed, but nodded. Kaladin waved to a group of his soldiers; then they raced across the field. A smaller group of soldiers, including Dallet, waited behind with the wounded. One of those—a thin man with black Alethi hair speckled with a handful of blond hairs marking some foreign blood—pulled a long red ribbon from his pocket and attached it to his spear. He held the spear aloft, letting the ribbon flap in the wind.

“It’s a call for runners to carry our wounded off the field,” Dallet said to Cenn. “We’ll have you out of here soon. You were brave, standing against those six.”

“Fleeing seemed stupid,” Cenn said, trying to take his mind off his throbbing leg. “With so many wounded on the field, how can we think that the runners’ll come for us?”

“Squadleader Kaladin bribes them,” Dallet said. “They usually only carry off lighteyes, but there are more runners than there are wounded lighteyes. The squadleader puts most of his pay into the bribes.”

“This squad is different,” Cenn said, feeling light-headed.

“Told you.”

“Not because of luck. Because of training.”

“That’s part of it. Part of it is because we know if we get hurt, Kaladin will get us off the battlefield.” He paused, looking over his shoulder. As Kaladin had predicted, Amaram’s line was surging back, recovering.

The mounted enemy lighteyes from before was energetically laying about with his mace. A group of his honor guard moved to one side, engaging Kaladin’s subsquads. The lighteyes turned his horse. He wore an open-fronted helm that had sloping sides and a large set of plumes on the top. Cenn couldn’t make out his eye color, but he knew it would be blue or green, maybe yellow or light grey. He was a brightlord, chosen at birth by the Heralds, marked for rule.

He impassively regarded those who fought nearby. Then one of Kaladin’s knives took him in the right eye.

The brightlord screamed, falling back off the saddle as Kaladin somehow slipped through the lines and leaped upon him, spear raised.

“Aye, it’s part training,” Dallet said, shaking his head. “But it’s mostly him. He fights like a storm, that one, and thinks twice as fast as other men. The way he moves sometimes . . .”

“He bound my leg,” Cenn said, realizing he was beginning to speak nonsense due to the blood loss. Why point out the bound leg? It was a simple thing.

Dallet just nodded. “He knows a lot about wounds. He can read glyphs too. He’s a strange man, for a lowly darkeyed spearman, our squadleader is.” He turned to Cenn. “But you should save your strength, son. The squadleader won’t be pleased if we lose you, not after what he paid to get you.”

“Why?” Cenn asked. The battlefield was growing quieter, as if many of the dying men had already yelled themselves hoarse. Almost everyone around them was an ally, but Dallet still watched to make sure no enemy soldiers tried to strike at Kaladin’s wounded.

“Why, Dallet?” Cenn repeated, feeling urgent. “Why bring me into his squad? Why me?”

Dallet shook his head. “It’s just how he is. Hates the thought of young kids like you, barely trained, going to battle. Every now and again, he grabs one and brings him into his squad. A good half dozen of our men were once like you.” Dallet’s eyes got a far-off look. “I think you all remind him of someone.”

Cenn glanced at his leg. Painspren—like small orange hands with overly long fingers—were crawling around him, reacting to his agony. They began turning away, scurrying in other directions, seeking other wounded. His pain was fading, his leg—his whole body—feeling numb.

He leaned back, staring up at the sky. He could hear faint thunder. That was odd. The sky was cloudless.

Dallet cursed.

Cenn turned, shocked out of his stupor. Galloping directly toward them was a massive black horse bearing a rider in gleaming armor that seemed to radiate light. That armor was seamless—no chain underneath, just smaller plates, incredibly intricate. The figure wore an unornamented full helm, and the plate was gilded. He carried a massive sword in one hand, fully as long as a man was tall. It wasn’t a simple, straight sword—it was curved, and the side that wasn’t sharp was ridged, like flowing waves. Etchings covered its length.

It was beautiful. Like a work of art. Cenn had never seen a Shardbearer, but he knew immediately what this was. How could he ever have mistaken a simple armored lighteyes for one of these majestic creatures?

Hadn’t Dallet claimed there would be no Shardbearers on this battlefield? Dallet scrambled to his feet, calling for the subsquad to form up. Cenn just sat where he was. He couldn’t have stood, not with that leg wound.

He felt so light-headed. How much blood had he lost? He could barely think.

Either way, he couldn’t fight. You didn’t fight something like this. Sun gleamed against that plate armor. And that gorgeous, intricate, sinuous sword. It was like . . . like the Almighty himself had taken form to walk the battlefield.

And why would you want to fight the Almighty?

Cenn closed his eyes.

 


 

 

“Ten orders. We were loved, once. Why have you forsaken us, Almighty! Shard of my soul, where have you gone?”

—Collected on the second day of Kakash, year 1171, five seconds before death. Subject was a lighteyed woman in her third decade.

EIGHT MONTHS LATER

Kaladin’s stomach growled as he reached through the bars and accepted the bowl of slop. He pulled the small bowl—more a cup—between the bars, sniffed it, then grimaced as the caged wagon began to roll again. The sludgy grey slop was made from overcooked tallew grain, and this batch was flecked with crusted bits of yesterday’s meal.

Revolting though it was, it was all he would get. He began to eat, legs hanging out between the bars, watching the scenery pass. The other slaves in his cage clutched their bowls protectively, afraid that someone might steal from them. One of them tried to steal Kaladin’s food on the first day. He’d nearly broken the man’s arm. Now everyone left him alone.

Suited him just fine.

He ate with his fingers, careless of the dirt. He’d stopped noticing dirt months ago. He hated that he felt some of that same paranoia that the others showed. How could he not, after eight months of beatings, deprivation, and brutality?

He fought down the paranoia. He wouldn’t become like them. Even if he’d given up everything else—even if all had been taken from him, even if there was no longer hope of escape. This one thing he would retain. He was a slave. But he didn’t need to think like one.

He finished the slop quickly. Nearby, one of the other slaves began to cough weakly. There were ten slaves in the wagon, all men, scraggly-bearded and dirty. It was one of three wagons in their caravan through the Unclaimed Hills.

The sun blazed reddish white on the horizon, like the hottest part of a smith’s fire. It lit the framing clouds with a spray of color, paint thrown carelessly on a canvas. Covered in tall, monotonously green grass, the hills seemed endless. On a nearby mound, a small figure flitted around the plants, dancing like a fluttering insect. The figure was amorphous, vaguely translucent. Windspren were devious spirits who had a penchant for staying where they weren’t wanted. He’d hoped that this one had gotten bored and left, but as Kaladin tried to toss his wooden bowl aside, he found that it stuck to his fingers.

The windspren laughed, zipping by, nothing more than a ribbon of light without form. He cursed, tugging on the bowl. Windspren often played pranks like that. He pried at the bowl, and it eventually came free. Grumbling, he tossed it to one of the other slaves. The man quickly began to lick at the remnants of the slop.

“Hey,” a voice whispered.

Kaladin looked to the side. A slave with dark skin and matted hair was crawling up to him, timid, as if expecting Kaladin to be angry. “You’re not like the others.” The slave’s black eyes glanced upward, toward Kaladin’s forehead, which bore three brands. The first two made a glyphpair, given to him eight months ago, on his last day in Amaram’s army. The third was fresh, given to him by his most recent master. Shash, the last glyph read. Dangerous.

The slave had his hand hidden behind his rags. A knife? No, that was ridiculous. None of these slaves could have hidden a weapon; the leaves hidden in Kaladin’s belt were as close as one could get. But old instincts could not be banished easily, so Kaladin watched that hand.

“I heard the guards talking,” the slave continued, shuffling a little closer. He had a twitch that made him blink too frequently. “You’ve tried to escape before, they said. You have escaped before.” Kaladin made no reply.

“Look,” the slave said, moving his hand out from behind his rags and revealing his bowl of slop. It was half full. “Take me with you next time,” he whispered. “I’ll give you this. Half my food from now until we get away. Please.” As he spoke, he attracted a few hungerspren. They looked like brown flies that flitted around the man’s head, almost too small to see.

Kaladin turned away, looking out at the endless hills and their shifting, moving grasses. He rested one arm across the bars and placed his head against it, legs still hanging out.

“Well?” the slave asked.

“You’re an idiot. If you gave me half your food, you’d be too weak to escape if I were to flee. Which I won’t. It doesn’t work.”

“But—”

“Ten times,” Kaladin whispered. “Ten escape attempts in eight months, fleeing from five different masters. And how many of them worked?”

“Well . . . I mean . . . you’re still here. . . .”

Eight months. Eight months as a slave, eight months of slop and beatings. It might as well have been an eternity. He barely remembered the army anymore. “You can’t hide as a slave,” Kaladin said. “Not with that brand on your forehead. Oh, I got away a few times. But they always found me. And then back I went.”

Once, men had called him lucky. Stormblessed. Those had been lies—if anything, Kaladin had bad luck. Soldiers were a superstitious sort, and though he’d initially resisted that way of thinking, it was growing harder and harder. Every person he had ever tried to protect had ended up dead. Time and time again. And now, here he was, in an even worse situation than where he’d begun. It was better not to resist. This was his lot, and he was resigned to it.

There was a certain power in that, a freedom. The freedom of not having to care.

The slave eventually realized Kaladin wasn’t going to say anything further, and so he retreated, eating his slop. The wagons continued to roll, fields of green extending in all directions. The area around the rattling wagons was bare, however. When they approached, the grass pulled away, each individual stalk withdrawing into a pinprick hole in the stone. After the wagons moved on, the grass timidly poked back out and stretched its blades toward the air. And so, the cages moved along what appeared to be an open rock highway, cleared just for them.

This far into the Unclaimed Hills, the highstorms were incredibly powerful. The plants had learned to survive. That’s what you had to do, learn to survive. Brace yourself, weather the storm.

Kaladin caught a whiff of another sweaty, unwashed body and heard the sound of shuffling feet. He looked suspiciously to the side, expecting that same slave to be back.

It was a different man this time, though. He had a long black beard stuck with bits of food and snarled with dirt. Kaladin kept his own beard shorter, allowing Tvlakv’s mercenaries to hack it down periodically. Like Kaladin, the slave wore the remains of a brown sack tied with a rag, and he was darkeyed, of course—perhaps a deep dark green, though with darkeyes it was hard to tell. They all looked brown or black unless you caught them in the right light.

The newcomer cringed away, raising his hands. He had a rash on one hand, the skin just faintly discolored. He’d likely approached because he’d seen Kaladin respond to that other man. The slaves had been frightened of him since the first day, but they were also obviously curious.

Kaladin sighed and turned away. The slave hesitantly sat down. “Mind if I ask how you became a slave, friend? Can’t help wondering. We’re all wondering.”

Judging by the accent and the dark hair, the man was Alethi, like Kaladin. Most of the slaves were. Kaladin didn’t reply to the question.

“Me, I stole a herd of chull,” the man said. He had a raspy voice, like sheets of paper rubbing together. “If I’d taken one chull, they might have just beaten me. But a whole herd. Seventeen head . . .” He chuckled to himself, admiring his own audacity.

In the far corner of the wagon, someone coughed again. They were a sorry lot, even for slaves. Weak, sickly, underfed. Some, like Kaladin, were repeat runaways—though Kaladin was the only one with a shash brand. They were the most worthless of a worthless caste, purchased at a steep discount. They were probably being taken for resale in a remote place where men were desperate for labor. There were plenty of small, in dependent cities along the coast of the Unclaimed Hills, places where Vorin rules governing the use of slaves were just a distant rumor.

Coming this way was dangerous. These lands were ruled by nobody, and by cutting across open land and staying away from established trade routes, Tvlakv could easily run afoul of unemployed mercenaries. Men who had no honor and no fear of slaughtering a slavemaster and his slaves in order to steal a few chulls and wagons.

Men who had no honor. Were there men who had honor?

No, Kaladin thought. Honor died eight months ago.

“So?” asked the scraggly-bearded man. “What did you do to get made a slave?”

Kaladin raised his arm against the bars again. “How did you get caught?”

“Odd thing, that,” the man said. Kaladin hadn’t answered his question, but he had replied. That seemed enough. “It was a woman, of course. Should have known she’d sell me.”

“Shouldn’t have stolen chulls. Too slow. Horses would have been better.”

The man laughed riotously. “Horses? What do you think me, a madman? If I’d been caught stealing those, I’d have been hanged. Chulls, at least, only earned me a slave’s brand.”

Kaladin glanced to the side. This man’s forehead brand was older than Kaladin’s, the skin around the scar faded to white. What was that glyphpair? “Sas morom,” Kaladin said. It was the highlord’s district where the man had originally been branded.

The man looked up with shock. “Hey! You know glyphs?” Several of the slaves nearby stirred at this oddity. “You must have an even better story than I thought, friend.”

Kaladin stared out over those grasses blowing in the mild breeze. Whenever the wind picked up, the more sensitive of the grass stalks shrank down into their burrows, leaving the landscape patchy, like the coat of a sickly horse. That windspren was still there, moving between patches of grass. How long had it been following him? At least a couple of months now. That was downright odd. Maybe it wasn’t the same one. They were impossible to tell apart.

“Well?” the man prodded. “Why are you here?”

“There are many reasons why I’m here,” Kaladin said. “Failures. Crimes. Betrayals. Probably the same for most every one of us.”

Around him, several of the men grunted in agreement; one of those grunts then degenerated into a hacking cough. Persistent coughing, a part of Kaladin’s mind thought, accompanied by an excess of phlegm and fevered mumbling at night. Sounds like the grindings.

“Well,” the talkative man said, “perhaps I should ask a different question. Be more specific, that’s what my mother always said. Say what you mean and ask for what you want. What’s the story of you getting that first brand of yours?”

Kaladin sat, feeling the wagon thump and roll beneath him. “I killed a lighteyes.”

His unnamed companion whistled again, this time even more appreciative than before. “I’m surprised they let you live.”

“Killing the lighteyes isn’t why I was made a slave,” Kaladin said. “It’s the one I didn’t kill that’s the problem.”

“How’s that?”

Kaladin shook his head, then stopped answering the talkative man’s questions. The man eventually wandered to the front of the wagon’s cage and sat down, staring at his bare feet.

 


 

Hours later, Kaladin still sat in his place, idly fingering the glyphs on his forehead. This was his life, day in and day out, riding in these cursed wagons.

His first brands had healed long ago, but the skin around the shash brand was red, irritated, and crusted with scabs. It throbbed, almost like a second heart. It hurt even worse than the burn had when he grabbed the heated handle of a cooking pot as a child.

Lessons drilled into Kaladin by his father whispered in the back of his brain, giving the proper way to care for a burn. Apply a salve to prevent infection, wash once daily. Those memories weren’t a comfort; they were an annoyance. He didn’t have fourleaf sap or lister’s oil; he didn’t even have water for the washing.

The parts of the wound that had scabbed over pulled at his skin, making his forehead feel tight. He could barely pass a few minutes without scrunching up his brow and irritating the wound. He’d grown accustomed to reaching up and wiping away the streaks of blood that trickled from the cracks; his right forearm was smeared with it. If he’d had a mirror, he could probably have spotted tiny red rotspren gathering around the wound.

The sun set in the west, but the wagons kept rolling. Violet Salas peeked over the horizon to the east, seeming hesitant at first, as if making sure the sun had vanished. It was a clear night, and the stars shivered high above. Taln’s Scar—a swath of deep red stars that stood out vibrantly from the twinkling white ones—was high in the sky this season.

That slave who’d been coughing earlier was at it again. A ragged, wet cough. Once, Kaladin would have been quick to go help, but something within him had changed. So many people he’d tried to help were now dead. It seemed to him—irrationally—that the man would be better off without his interference. After failing Tien, then Dallet and his team, then ten successive groups of slaves, it was hard to find the will to try again.

Two hours past First Moon, Tvlakv finally called a halt. His two brutish mercenaries climbed from their places atop their wagons, then moved to build a small fire. Lanky Taran—the serving boy—tended the chulls. The large crustaceans were nearly as big as wagons themselves. They settled down, pulling into their shells for the night with clawfuls of grain. Soon they were nothing more than three lumps in the darkness, barely distinguishable from boulders. Finally, Tvlakv began checking on the slaves one at a time, giving each a ladle of water, making certain his investments were healthy. Or, at least, as healthy as could be expected for this poor lot.

Tvlakv started with the first wagon, and Kaladin—still sitting—pushed his fingers into his makeshift belt, checking on the leaves he’d hidden there. They crackled satisfactorily, the stiff, dried husks rough against his skin. He still wasn’t certain what he was going to do with them. He’d grabbed them on a whim during one of the sessions when he’d been allowed out of the wagon to stretch his legs. He doubted anyone else in the caravan knew to recognize blackbane leaves—narrow leaves on a trefoil prong—so it hadn’t been too much of a risk.

Absently, he took the leaves out and rubbed them between forefinger and palm. They had to dry before reaching their potency. Why did he carry them? Did he mean to give them to Tvlakv and get revenge? Or were they a contingency, to be retained in case things got too bad, too unbearable?

Surely I haven’t fallen that far, he thought. It was just more likely his instinct of securing a weapon when he saw one, no matter how unusual. The landscape was dark. Salas was the smallest and dimmest of the moons, and while her violet coloring had inspired countless poets, she didn’t do much to help you see your hand in front of your face.

“Oh!” a soft, feminine voice said. “What’s that?”

A translucent figure—just a handspan tall—peeked up from over the edge of the floor near Kaladin. She climbed up and into the wagon, as if scaling some high plateau. The windspren had taken the shape of a young woman—larger spren could change shapes and sizes—with an angular face and long, flowing hair that faded into mist behind her head. She—Kaladin couldn’t help but think of the windspren as a she—was formed of pale blues and whites and wore a simple, flowing white dress of a girlish cut that came down to midcalf. Like the hair, it faded to mist at the very bottom. Her feet, hands, and face were crisply distinct, and she had the hips and bust of a slender woman.

Kaladin frowned at the spirit. Spren were all around; you just ignored them most of the time. But this one was an oddity. The windspren walked upward, as if climbing an invisible staircase. She reached a height where she could stare at Kaladin’s hand, so he closed his fingers around the black leaves. She walked around his fist in a circle. Although she glowed like an afterimage from looking at the sun, her form provided no real illumination.

She bent down, looking at his hand from different angles, like a child expecting to find a hidden piece of candy. “What is it?” Her voice was like a whisper. “You can show me. I won’t tell anyone. Is it a treasure? Have you cut off a piece of the night’s cloak and tucked it away? Is it the heart of a beetle, so tiny yet powerful?”

He said nothing, causing the spren to pout. She floated up, hovering though she had no wings, and looked him in the eyes. “Kaladin, why must you ignore me?”

Kaladin started. “What did you say?”

She smiled mischievously, then sprang away, her figure blurring into a long white ribbon of blue-white light. She shot between the bars—twisting and warping in the air, like a strip of cloth caught in the wind—and darted beneath the wagon.

“Storm you!” Kaladin said, leaping to his feet. “Spirit! What did you say? Repeat that!” Spren didn’t use people’s names. Spren weren’t intelligent. The larger ones—like windspren or riverspren—could mimic voices and expressions, but they didn’t actually think. They didn’t . . .

“Did any of you hear that?” Kaladin asked, turning to the cage’s other occupants. The roof was just high enough to let Kaladin stand. The others were lying back, waiting to get their ladle of water. He got no response beyond a few mutters to be quiet and some coughs from the sick man in the corner. Even Kaladin’s “friend” from earlier ignored him. The man had fallen into a stupor, staring at his feet, wiggling his toes periodically.

Maybe they hadn’t seen the spren. Many of the larger ones were invisible except to the person they were tormenting. Kaladin sat back down to floor of the wagon, hanging his legs outside. The windspren had said his name, but undoubtedly she’d just repeated what she’d heard before. But . . . none of the men in the cage knew his name.

Maybe I’m going mad, Kaladin thought. Seeing things that aren’t there. Hearing voices.

He took a deep breath, then opened his hand. His grip had cracked and broken the leaves. He’d need to tuck them away to prevent further—

“Those leaves look interesting,” said that same feminine voice. “You like them a lot, don’t you?”

Kaladin jumped, twisting to the side. The windspren stood in the air just beside his head, white dress rippling in a wind Kaladin couldn’t feel.

“How do you know my name?” he demanded.

The windspren didn’t answer. She walked on air over to the bars, then poked her head out, watching Tvlakv the slaver administer drinks to the last few slaves in the first wagon. She looked back at Kaladin. “Why don’t you fight? You did before. Now you’ve stopped.”

“Why do you care, spirit?”

She cocked her head. “I don’t know,” she said, as if surprised at herself. “But I do. Isn’t that odd?”

It was more than odd. What did he make of a spren that not only used his name, but seemed to remember things he had done weeks ago?

“People don’t eat leaves, you know, Kaladin,” she said, folding translucent arms. Then she cocked her head. “Or do you? I can’t remember. You’re so strange, stuffing some things into your mouths, leaking out other things when you don’t think anyone is looking.”

“How do you know my name?” he whispered.

“How do you know it?”

“I know it because . . . because it’s mine. My parents told it to me. I don’t know.”

“Well I don’t either,” she said, nodding as if she’d just won some grand argument.

“Fine,” he said. “But why are you using my name?”

“Because it’s polite. And you are impolite.”

“Spren don’t know what that means!”

“See, there,” she said, pointing at him. “Impolite.”

Kaladin blinked. Well, he was far from where he’d grown up, walking foreign stone and eating foreign food. Perhaps the spren who lived here were different from those back home.

“So why don’t you fight?” she asked, flitting down to rest on his legs, looking up at his face. She had no weight that he could feel.

“I can’t fight,” he said softly.

“You did before.”

He closed his eyes and rested his head forward against the bars. “I’m so tired.” He didn’t mean the physical fatigue, though eight months eating leftovers had stolen much of the lean strength he’d cultivated while at war. He felt tired. Even when he got enough sleep. Even on those rare days when he wasn’t hungry, cold, or stiff from a beating. So tired . . .

 


“You have been tired before.”

 

“I’ve failed, spirit,” he replied, squeezing his eyes shut. “Must you torment me so?”

They were all dead. Cenn and Dallet, and before that Tukks and the Takers. Before that, Tien. Before that, blood on his hands and the corpse of a young girl with pale skin.

Some of the slaves nearby muttered, likely thinking he was mad. Anyone could end up drawing a spren, but you learned early that talking to one was pointless. Was he mad? Perhaps he should wish for that—madness was an escape from the pain. Instead, it terrified him.

He opened his eyes. Tvlakv was finally waddling up to Kaladin’s wagon with his bucket of water. The portly, brown-eyed man walked with a very faint limp; the result of a broken leg, perhaps. He was Thaylen, and all Thaylen men had the same stark white beards—regardless of their age or the color of the hair on their heads—and white eyebrows. Those eyebrows grew very long, and the Thaylen wore them pushed back over the ears. That made him appear to have two white streaks in his otherwise black hair.

His clothing—striped trousers of black and red with a dark blue sweater that matched the color of his knit cap—had once been fine, but it was now growing ragged. Had he once been something other than a slaver? This life—the casual buying and selling of human flesh—seemed to have an effect on men. It wearied the soul, even if it did fill one’s money pouch.

Tvlakv kept his distance from Kaladin, carrying his oil lantern over to inspect the coughing slave at the front of the cage. Tvlakv called to his mercenaries. Bluth—Kaladin didn’t know why he’d bothered to learn their names—wandered over. Tvlakv spoke quietly, pointing at the slave. Bluth nodded, slablike face shadowed in the lanternlight, and pulled the cudgel free from his belt.

The windspren took the form of a white ribbon, then zipped over toward the sick man. She spun and twisted a few times before landing on the floor, becoming a girl again. She leaned in to inspect the man. Like a curious child.

Kaladin turned away and closed his eyes, but he could still hear the coughing. Inside his mind, his father’s voice responded. To cure the grinding coughs, said the careful, precise tone, administer two handfuls of bloodivy, crushed to a powder, each day. If you don’t have that, be certain to give the patient plenty of liquids, preferably with sugar stirred in. As long as the patient stays hydrated, he will most likely survive. The disease sounds far worse than it is.

Most likely survive . . .

Those coughs continued. Someone unlatched the cage door. Would they know how to help the man? Such an easy solution. Give him water, and he would live.

It didn’t matter. Best not to get involved.

Men dying on the battlefield. A youthful face, so familiar and dear, looking to Kaladin for salvation. A sword wound slicing open the side of a neck. A Shardbearer charging through Amaram’s ranks.

Blood. Death. Failure. Pain.

And his father’s voice. Can you really leave him, son? Let him die when you could have helped?

Storm it!

“Stop!” Kaladin yelled, standing.

The other slaves scrambled back. Bluth jumped up, slamming the cage door closed and holding up his cudgel. Tvlakv shied behind the mercenary, using him as cover.

Kaladin took a deep breath, closing his hand around the leaves and then raising the other to his head, wiping away a smear of blood. He crossed the small cage, bare feet thumping on the wood. Bluth glared as Kaladin knelt beside the sick man. The flickering light illuminated a long, drawn face and nearly bloodless lips. The man had coughed up phlegm; it was greenish and solid. Kaladin felt the man’s neck for swelling, then checked his dark brown eyes.

“It’s called the grinding coughs,” Kaladin said. “He will live, if you give him an extra ladle of water every two hours for five days or so. You’ll have to force it down his throat. Mix in sugar, if you have any.”

Bluth scratched at his ample chin, then glanced at the shorter slaver.

“Pull him out,” Tvlakv said.

The wounded slave awoke as Bluth unlocked the cage. The mercenary waved Kaladin back with his cudgel, and Kaladin reluctantly withdrew.

After putting away his cudgel, Bluth grabbed the slave under the arms and dragged him out, all the while trying to keep a nervous eye on Kaladin. Kaladin’s last failed escape attempt had involved twenty armed slaves. His master should have executed him for that, but he had claimed Kaladin was “intriguing” and branded him with shash, then sold him for a pittance.

There always seemed to be a reason Kaladin survived when those he’d tried to help died. Some men might have seen that as a blessing, but he saw it as an ironic kind of torment. He’d spent some time under his previous master speaking with a slave from the West, a Selay man who had spoken of the Old Magic from their legends and its ability to curse people. Could that be what was happening to Kaladin?

Don’t be foolish, he told himself.

The cage door snapped back in place, locking. The cages were necessary—Tvlakv had to protect his fragile investment from the highstorms. The cages had wooden sides that could be pulled up and locked into place during the furious gales.

Bluth dragged the slave over to the fire, beside the unpacked water barrel. Kaladin felt himself relax. There, he told himself. Perhaps you can still help. Perhaps there’s a reason to care.

Kaladin opened his hand and looked down at the crumbled black leaves in his palm. He didn’t need these. Sneaking them into Tvlakv’s drink would not only be difficult, but pointless. Did he really want the slaver dead? What would that accomplish?

A low crack rang in the air, followed by a second one, duller, like someone dropping a bag of grain. Kaladin snapped his head up, looking to where Bluth had deposited the sick slave. The mercenary raised his cudgel one more time, then snapped it down, the weapon making a cracking sound as it hit the slave’s skull.

The slave hadn’t uttered a cry of pain or protest. His corpse slumped over in the darkness; Bluth casually picked it up and slung it over his shoulder.

“No!” Kaladin yelled, leaping across the cage and slamming his hands against the bars.

Tvlakv stood warming himself by the fire.

“Storm you!” Kaladin screamed. “He could have lived, you bastard!”

Tvlakv glanced at him. Then, leisurely, the slaver walked over, straightening his deep blue knit cap. “He would have gotten you all sick, you see.” His voice was lightly accented, smashing words together, not giving the proper syllables emphasis. Thaylens always sounded to Kaladin like they were mumbling. “I would not lose an entire wagon for one man.”

“He’s past the spreading stage!” Kaladin said, slamming his hands against the bars again. “If any of us were going to catch it, we’d have done so by now.”

“Hope that you don’t. I think he was past saving.”

“I told you otherwise!”

“And I should believe you, deserter?” Tvlakv said, amused. “A man with eyes that smolder and hate? You would kill me.” He shrugged. “I care not. So long as you are strong when it is time for sales. You should bless me for saving you from that man’s sickness.”

“I’ll bless your cairn when I pile it up myself,” Kaladin replied.

Tvlakv smiled, walking back toward the fire. “Keep that fury, deserter, and that strength. It will pay me well on our arrival.”

Not if you don’t live that long, Kaladin thought. Tvlakv always warmed the last of the water from the bucket he used for the slaves. He’d make himself tea from it, hanging it over the fire. If Kaladin made sure he was watered last, then powdered the leaves and dropped them into the—

Kaladin froze, then looked down at his hands. In his haste, he’d forgotten that he’d been holding the blackbane. He’d dropped the flakes as he slammed his hands against the bars. Only a few bits stuck to his palms, not enough to be potent.

He spun to look backward; the floor of the cage was dirty and covered with grime. If the flakes had fallen there, there was no way to collect them. The wind gathered suddenly, blowing dust, crumbs, and dirt out of the wagon and into the night.

Even in this, Kaladin failed.

He sank down, his back to the bars, and bowed his head. Defeated. That cursed windspren kept darting around him, looking confused.

 


 

“A man stood on a cliffside and watched his homeland fall into dust. The waters surged beneath, so far beneath. And he heard a child crying. They were his own tears.”

—Collected on the 4th of Tanates, year 1171, thirty seconds before death. Subject was a cobbler of some renown.

 

Kharbranth, City of Bells, was not a place that Shallan had ever imagined she would visit. Though she’d often dreamed of traveling, she’d expected to spend her early life sequestered in her family’s manor, only escaping through the books of her father’s library. She’d expected to marry one of her father’s allies, then spend the rest of her life sequestered in his manor.

But expectations were like fine pottery. The harder you held them, the more likely they were to crack.

She found herself breathless, clutching her leather-bound drawing pad to her chest as longshoremen pulled the ship into the dock. Kharbranth was enormous. Built up the side of a steep incline, the city was wedge-shaped, as if it were built into a wide crack, with the open side toward the ocean. The buildings were blocky, with square windows, and appeared to have been constructed of some kind of mud or daub. Crem, perhaps? They were painted bright colors, reds and oranges most often, but occasional blues and yellows too.

She could hear the bells already, tinkling in the wind, ringing with pure voices. She had to strain her neck to look up toward the city’s loftiest rim; Kharbranth was like a mountain towering over her. How many people lived in a place like this? Thousands? Tens of thousands? She shivered again—daunted yet excited—then blinked pointedly, fixing the image of the city in her memory.

Sailors rushed about. The Wind’s Pleasure was a narrow, single-masted vessel, barely large enough for her, the captain, his wife, and the half-dozen crew. It had seemed so small at first, but Captain Tozbek was a calm and cautious man, an excellent sailor, even if he was a pagan. He’d guided the ship with care along the coast, always finding a sheltered cove to ride out highstorms.

The captain oversaw the work as the men secured the mooring. Tozbek was a short man, even-shouldered with Shallan, and he wore his long white Thaylen eyebrows up in a curious spiked pattern. It was like he had two waving fans above his eyes, a foot long each. He wore a simple knit cap and a silver-buttoned black coat. She’d imagined him getting that scar on his jaw in a furious sea battle with pirates. The day before, she’d been disappointed to hear it had been caused by loose tackle during rough weather.

His wife, Ashlv, was already walking down the gangplank to register their vessel. The captain saw Shallan inspecting him, and so walked over. He was a business connection of her family’s, long trusted by her father. That was good, since the plan she and her brothers had concocted had contained no place for her bringing along a lady-in-waiting or nurse.

That plan made Shallan nervous. Very, very nervous. She hated being duplicitous. But the financial state of her house . . . They either needed a spectacular infusion of wealth or some other edge in local Veden house politics. Otherwise, they wouldn’t last the year.

First things first, Shallan thought, forcing herself to be calm. Find Jasnah Kholin. Assuming she hasn’t moved off without you again.

“I’ve sent a lad on your behalf, Brightness,” Tozbek said. “If the princess is still here, we shall soon know.”

Shallan nodded gratefully, still clutching her drawing pad. Out in the city, there were people everywhere. Some wore familiar clothing—trousers and shirts that laced up the front for the men, skirts and colorful blouses for the women. Those could have been from her homeland, Jah Keved. But Kharbranth was a free city. A small, politically fragile city-state, it held little territory but had docks open to all ships that passed, and it asked no questions about nationality or status. People flowed to it.

That meant many of the people she saw were exotic. Those single-sheet wraps would mark a man or woman from Tashikk, far to the west. The long coats, enveloping down to the ankles, but open in the front like cloaks . . . where were those from? She’d rarely seen so many parshmen as she noted working the docks, carrying cargo on their backs. Like the parshmen her father had owned, these were stout and thick of limb, with their odd marbled skin—some parts pale or black, others a deep crimson. The mottled pattern was unique to each individual.

After chasing Jasnah Kholin from town to town for the better part of six months, Shallan was beginning to think she’d never catch the woman. Was the princess avoiding her? No, that didn’t seem likely—Shallan just wasn’t important enough to wait for. Brightness Jasnah Kholin was one of the most powerful women in the world. And one of the most infamous. She was the only member of a faithful royal house who was a professed heretic.

Shallan tried not to grow anxious. Most likely, they’d discover that Jasnah had moved on again. The Wind’s Pleasure would dock for the night, and Shallan would negotiate a price with the captain—steeply discounted, because of her family’s investments in Tozbek’s shipping business—to take her to the next port.

Already, they were months past the time when Tozbek had expected to be rid of her. She’d never sensed resentment from him; his honor and loyalty kept him agreeing to her requests. However, his patience wouldn’t last forever, and neither would her money. She’d already used over half the spheres she’d brought with her. He wouldn’t abandon her in an unfamiliar city, of course, but he might regretfully insist on taking her back to Vedenar.

“Captain!” a sailor said, rushing up the gangplank. He wore only a vest and loose, baggy trousers, and had the darkly tanned skin of one who worked in the sun. “No message, sir. Dock registrar says that Jasnah hasn’t left yet.”

“Ha!” the captain said, turning to Shallan. “The hunt is over!”

“Bless the Heralds,” Shallan said softly.

The captain smiled, flamboyant eyebrows looking like streaks of light coming from his eyes. “It must be your beautiful face that brought us this favorable wind! The windspren themselves were entranced by you, Brightness Shallan, and led us here!”

Shallan blushed, considering a response that wasn’t particularly proper.

“Ah!” the captain said, pointing at her. “I can see you have a reply—I see it in your eyes, young miss! Spit it out. Words aren’t meant to be kept inside, you see. They are free creatures, and if locked away will unsettle the stomach.”

“It’s not polite,” Shallan protested.

Tozbek bellowed a laugh. “Months of travel, and still you claim that! I keep telling you that we’re sailors! We forgot how to be polite the moment we set first foot on a ship; we’re far beyond redemption now.”

She smiled. She’d been trained by stern nurses and tutors to hold her tongue—unfortunately, her brothers had been even more determined in encouraging her to do the opposite. She’d made a habit of entertaining them with witty comments when nobody else was near. She thought fondly of hours spent by the crackling greatroom hearth, the younger three of her four brothers huddled around her, listening as she made sport of their father’s newest sycophant or a traveling ardent. She’d often fabricated silly versions of conversations to fill the mouths of people they could see, but not hear.

That had established in her what her nurses had referred to as an “insolent streak.” And the sailors were even more appreciative of a witty comment than her brothers had been.

“Well,” Shallan said to the captain, blushing but still eager to speak, “I was just thinking this: You say that my beauty coaxed the winds to deliver us to Kharbranth with haste. But wouldn’t that imply that on other trips, my lack of beauty was to blame for us arriving late?”

“Well . . . er . . .”

“So in reality,” Shallan said, “you’re telling me I’m beautiful precisely one-sixth of the time.”

“Nonsense! Young miss, you’re like a morning sunrise, you are!”

“Like a sunrise? By that you mean entirely too crimson”—she pulled at her long red hair—“and prone to making men grouchy when they see me?”

He laughed, and several of the sailors nearby joined in. “All right then,” Captain Tozbek said, “you’re like a flower.”

She grimaced. “I’m allergic to flowers.”

He raised an eyebrow.

“No, really,” she admitted. “I think they’re quite captivating. But if you were to give me a bouquet, you’d soon find me in a fit so energetic that it would have you searching the walls for stray freckles I might have blown free with the force of my sneezes.”

“Well, be that true, I still say you’re as pretty as a flower.”

“If I am, then young men my age must be afflicted with the same allergy—for they keep their distance from me noticeably.” She winced. “Now, see, I told you this wasn’t polite. Young women should not act in such an irritable way.”

“Ah, young miss,” the captain said, tipping his knit cap toward her. “The lads and I will miss your clever tongue. I’m not sure what we’ll do without you.”

“Sail, likely,” she said. “And eat, and sing, and watch the waves. All the things you do now, only you shall have rather more time to accomplish all of it, as you won’t be stumbling across a youthful girl as she sits on your deck sketching and mumbling to herself. But you have my thanks, Captain, for a trip that was wonderful—if somewhat exaggerated in length.”

He tipped his cap to her in acknowledgement.

Shallan grinned—she hadn’t expected being out on her own to be so liberating. Her brothers had worried that she’d be frightened. They saw her as timid because she didn’t like to argue and remained quiet when large groups were talking. And perhaps she was timid—being away from Vedenar was daunting. But it was also wonderful. She’d filled three sketchbooks with pictures of the creatures and people she’d seen, and while her worry over her house’s finances was a perpetual cloud, it was balanced by the sheer delight of experience.

 


Tozbek began making dock arrangements for his ship. He was a good man. As for his praise of her supposed beauty, she took that for what it was. A kind, if overstated, mark of affection. She was pale-skinned in an era when Alethi tan was seen as the mark of true beauty, and though she had light blue eyes, her impure family line was manifest in her auburn-red hair. Not a single lock of proper black. Her freckles had faded as she reached young womanhood—Heralds be blessed—but there were still some visible, dusting her cheeks and nose.

 

“Young miss,” the captain said to her after conferring with his men, “Your Brightness Jasnah, she’ll undoubtedly be at the Conclave, you see.”

“Oh, where the Palanaeum is?”

“Yes, yes. And the king lives there too. It’s the center of the city, so to speak. Except it’s on the top.” He scratched his chin. “Well, anyway, Brightness Jasnah Kholin is sister to a king; she will stay nowhere else, not in Kharbranth. Yalb here will show you the way. We can deliver your trunk later.”

“Many thanks, Captain,” she said. “Shaylor mkabat nour.” The winds have brought us safely. A phrase of thanks in the Thaylen language.

The captain smiled broadly. “Mkai bade fortenthis!”

She had no idea what that meant. Her Thaylen was quite good when she was reading, but hearing it spoken was something else entirely. She smiled at him, which seemed the proper response, for he laughed, gesturing to one of his sailors.

“We’ll wait here in this dock for two days,” he told her. “There is a highstorm coming tomorrow, you see, so we cannot leave. If the situation with the Brightness Jasnah does not proceed as hoped, we’ll take you back to Jah Keved.”

“Thank you again.”

“ ’Tis nothing, young miss,” he said. “Nothing but what we’d be doing anyway. We can take on goods here and all. Besides, that’s a right nice likeness of my wife you gave me for my cabin. Right nice.”

He strode over to Yalb, giving him instructions. Shallan waited, putting her drawing pad back into her leather portfolio. Yalb. The name was difficult for her Veden tongue to pronounce. Why were the Thaylens so fond of mashing letters together, without proper vowels?

Yalb waved for her. She moved to follow.

“Be careful with yourself, lass,” the captain warned as she passed. “Even a safe city like Kharbranth hides dangers. Keep your wits about you.”

“I should think I’d prefer my wits inside my skull, Captain,” she replied, carefully stepping onto the gangplank. “If I keep them ‘about me’ instead, then someone has gotten entirely too close to my head with a cudgel.”

The captain laughed, waving her farewell as she made her way down the gangplank, holding the railing with her freehand. Like all Vorin women, she kept her left hand—her safehand—covered, exposing only her freehand. Common darkeyed women would wear a glove, but a woman of her rank was expected to show more modesty than that. In her case, she kept her safehand covered by the oversized cuff of her left sleeve, which was buttoned closed.

The dress was of a traditional Vorin cut, formfitting through the bust, shoulders, and waist, with a flowing skirt below. It was blue silk with chullshell buttons up the sides, and she carried her satchel by pressing it to her chest with her safehand while holding the railing with her freehand.

She stepped off the gangplank into the furious activity of the docks, messengers running this way and that, women in red coats tracking cargos on ledgers. Kharbranth was a Vorin city, like Alethkar and like Shallan’s own Jah Keved. They weren’t pagans here, and writing was a feminine art; men learned only glyphs, leaving letters and reading to their wives and sisters.

She hadn’t asked, but she was certain Captain Tozbek could read. She’d seen him holding books; it had made her uncomfortable. Reading was an unseemly trait in a man. At least, men who weren’t ardents.

“You wanna ride?” Yalb asked her, his rural Thaylen dialect so thick she could barely make out the words.

“Yes, please.”

He nodded and rushed off, leaving her on the docks, surrounded by a group of parshmen who were laboriously moving wooden crates from one pier to another. Parshmen were thick-witted, but they made excellent workers. Never complaining, always doing as they were told. Her father had preferred them to regular slaves.

Were the Alethi really fighting parshmen out on the Shattered Plains? That seemed so odd to Shallan. Parshmen didn’t fight. They were docile and practically mute. Of course, from what she’d heard, the ones out on the Shattered Plains—the Parshendi, they were called—were physically different from regular parshmen. Stronger, taller, keener of mind. Perhaps they weren’t really parshmen at all, but distant relatives of some kind.

To her surprise, she could see signs of animal life all around the docks. A few skyeels undulated through the air, searching for rats or fish. Tiny crabs hid between cracks in the dock’s boards, and a cluster of haspers clung to the dock’s thick logs. In a street inland of the docks, a prowling mink skulked in the shadows, watching for morsels that might be dropped.

She couldn’t resist pulling open her portfolio and beginning a sketch of a pouncing skyeel. Wasn’t it afraid of all the people? She held her sketchpad with her safehand, hidden fingers wrapping around the top as she used a charcoal pencil to draw. Before she was finished, her guide returned with a man pulling a curious contraption with two large wheels and a canopy-covered seat. She hesitantly lowered her sketchpad. She’d expected a palanquin.

The man pulling the machine was short and dark-skinned, with a wide smile and full lips. He gestured for Shallan to sit, and she did so with the modest grace her nurses had drilled into her. The driver asked her a question in a clipped, terse-sounding language she didn’t recognize.

“What was that?” she asked Yalb.

“He wants to know if you’d like to be pulled the long way or the short way.” Yalb scratched his head. “I’m not right sure what the difference is.”

“I suspect one takes longer,” Shallan said.

“Oh, you are a clever one.” Yalb said something to the porter in that same clipped language, and the man responded.

“The long way gives a good view of the city,” Yalb said. “The short way goes straight up to the Conclave. Not many good views, he says. I guess he noticed you were new to the city.”

“Do I stand out that much?” Shallan asked, flushing.

“Eh, no, of course not, Brightness.”

“And by that you mean that I’m as obvious as a wart on a queen’s nose.”

Yalb laughed. “Afraid so. But you can’t go someplace a second time until you been there a first time, I reckon. Everyone has to stand out sometime, so you might as well do it in a pretty way like yourself!”

She’d had to get used to gentle flirtation from the sailors. They were never too forward, and she suspected the captain’s wife had spoken to them sternly when she’d noticed how it made Shallan blush. Back at her father’s manor, servants—even those who had been full citizens—had been afraid to step out of their places.

The porter was still waiting for an answer. “The short way, please,” she told Yalb, though she longed to take the scenic path. She was finally in a real city and she took the direct route? But Brightness Jasnah had proven to be as elusive as a wild songling. Best to be quick.

 


The main roadway cut up the hillside in switchbacks, and so even the short way gave her time to see much of the city. It proved intoxicatingly rich with strange people, sights, and ringing bells. Shallan sat back and took it all in. Buildings were grouped by color, and that color seemed to indicate purpose. Shops selling the same items would be painted the same shades—violet for clothing, green for foods. Homes had their own pattern, though Shallan couldn’t interpret it. The colors were soft, with a washed-out, subdued tonality.

 

Yalb walked alongside her cart, and the porter began to talk back toward her. Yalb translated, hands in the pockets of his vest. “He says that the city is special because of the lait here.”

Shallan nodded. Many cities were built in laits—areas protected from the highstorms by nearby rock formations.

“Kharbranth is one of the most sheltered major cities in the world,” Yalb continued, translating, “and the bells are a symbol of that. It’s said they were first erected to warn that a highstorm was blowing, since the winds were so soft that people didn’t always notice.” Yalb hesitated. “He’s just saying things because he wants a big tip, Brightness. I’ve heard that story, but I think it’s blustering ridiculous. If the winds blew strong enough to move bells, then people’d notice. Besides, people didn’t notice it was raining on their blustering heads?”

Shallan smiled. “It’s all right. He can continue.”

The porter chatted on in his clipped voice—what language was that, anyway? Shallan listened to Yalb’s translation, drinking in the sights, sounds, and—unfortunately—scents. She’d grown up accustomed to the crisp smell of freshly dusted furniture and flatbread baking in the kitchens. Her ocean journey had taught her new scents, of brine and clean sea air.

There was nothing clean in what she smelled here. Each passing alleyway had its own unique array of revolting stenches. These alternated with the spicy scents of street vendors and their foods, and the juxtaposition was even more nauseating. Fortunately, her porter moved into the central part of the roadway, and the stenches abated, though it did slow them as they had to contend with thicker traffic. She gawked at those they passed. Those men with gloved hands and faintly bluish skin were from Natanatan. But who were those tall, stately people dressed in robes of black? And the men with their beards bound in cords, making them rodlike?

The sounds put Shallan in mind of the competing choruses of wild songlings near her home, only multiplied in variety and volume. A hundred voices called to one another, mingling with doors slamming, wheels rolling on stone, occasional skyeels crying. The ever-present bells tinkled in the background, louder when the wind blew. They were displayed in the windows of shops, hung from rafters. Each lantern pole along the street had a bell hung under the lamp, and her cart had a small silvery one at the very tip of its canopy. When she was about halfway up the hillside, a rolling wave of loud clock bells rang the hour. The varied, unsynchronized chimes made a clangorous din.

The crowds thinned as they reached the upper quarter of the city, and eventually her porter pulled her to a massive building at the very apex of the city. Painted white, it was carved from the rock face itself, rather than built of bricks or clay. The pillars out front grew seamlessly from the stone, and the back side of the building melded smoothly into the cliff. The outcroppings of roof had squat domes atop them, and were painted in metallic colors. Lighteyed women passed in and out, carrying scribing utensils and wearing dresses like Shallan’s, their left hands properly cuffed. The men entering or leaving the building wore military-style Vorin coats and stiff trousers, buttons up the sides and ending in a stiff collar that wrapped the entire neck. Many carried swords at their waists, the belts wrapping around the knee-length coats.

The porter stopped and made a comment to Yalb. The sailor began arguing with him, hands on hips. Shallan smiled at his stern expression, and she blinked pointedly, affixing the scene in her memory for later sketching.

“He’s offering to split the difference with me if I let him inflate the price of the trip,” Yalb said, shaking his head and offering a hand to help Shallan from the cart. She stepped down, looking at the porter, who shrugged, smiling like a child who had been caught sneaking sweets.

She clutched her satchel with her cuffed arm, searching through it with her freehand for her money pouch. “How much should I actually give him?”

“Two clearchips should be more than enough. I’d have offered one. The thief wanted to ask for five.”

Before this trip, she’d never used money; she’d just admired the spheres for their beauty. Each one was composed of a glass bead a little larger than a person’s thumbnail with a much smaller gemstone set at the center. The gemstones could absorb Stormlight, and that made the spheres glow. When she opened the money pouch, shards of ruby, emerald, diamond, and sapphire shone out on her face. She fished out three diamond chips, the smallest denomination. Emeralds were the most valuable, for they could be used by Soulcasters to create food.

The glass part of most spheres was the same size; the size of the gemstone at the center determined the denomination. The three chips, for instance, each had only a tiny splinter of diamond inside. Even that was enough to glow with Stormlight, far fainter than a lamp, but still visible. A mark—the medium denomination of sphere—was a little less bright than a candle, and it took five chips to make a mark.

She’d brought only infused spheres, as she’d heard that dun ones were considered suspect, and sometimes a moneylender would have to be brought in to judge the authenticity of the gemstone. She kept the most valuable spheres she had in her safepouch, of course, which was buttoned to the inside of her left sleeve.

She handed the three chips to Yalb, who cocked his head. She nodded at the porter, blushing, realizing that she’d reflexively used Yalb like a master-servant intermediary. Would he be offended?

He laughed and stood up stiffly, as if imitating a master-servant, paying the porter with a mock stern expression. The porter laughed, bowed to Shallan, then pulled his cart away.

“This is for you,” Shallan said, taking out a ruby mark and handing it to Yalb.

“Brightness, this is too much!”

“It’s partially out of thanks,” she said, “but is also to pay you to stay here and wait for a few hours, in case I return.”

“Wait a few hours for a firemark? That’s wages for a week’s sailing!”

“Then it should be enough to make certain you don’t wander off.”

“I’ll be right here!” Yalb said, giving her an elaborate bow that was surprisingly well-executed.

Shallan took a deep breath and strode up the steps toward the Conclave’s imposing entrance. The carved rock really was remarkable—the artist in her wanted to linger and study it, but she didn’t dare. Entering the large building was like being swallowed. The hallway inside was lined with Stormlight lamps that shone with white light. Diamond broams were probably set inside them; most buildings of fine construction used Stormlight to provide illumination. A broam—the highest denomination of sphere—glowed with about the same light as several candles.

Their light shone evenly and softly on the many attendants, scribes, and lighteyes moving through the hallway. The building appeared to be constructed as one broad, high, and long tunnel, burrowed into the rock. Grand chambers lined the sides, and subsidiary corridors branched off the central grand promenade. She felt far more comfortable than she had outdoors. This place—with its bustling servants, its lesser brightlords and brightladies—was familiar.

She raised her freehand in a sign of need, and sure enough, a masterservant in a crisp white shirt and black trousers hurried over to her. “Brightness?” he asked, speaking her native Veden, likely because of the color of her hair.

“I seek Jasnah Kholin,” Shallan said. “I have word that she is within these walls.”

The master-servant bowed crisply. Most master-servants prided themselves on their refined service—the very same air that Yalb had been mocking moments ago. “I shall return, Brightness.” He would be of the second nahn, a darkeyed citizen of very high rank. In Vorin belief, one’s Calling—the task to which one dedicated one’s life—was of vital importance. Choosing a good profession and working hard at it was the best way to ensure good placement in the afterlife. The specific devotary that one visited for worship often had to do with the nature of one’s chosen Calling.

Shallan folded her arms, waiting. She had thought long about her own Calling. The obvious choice was her art, and she did so love sketching. But it was more than just the drawing that attracted her—it was the study, the questions raised by observation. Why weren’t the skyeels afraid of people? What did haspers feed on? Why did a rat population thrive in one area, but fail in another? So she’d chosen natural history instead.

She longed to be a true scholar, to receive real instruction, to spend time on deep research and study. Was that part of why she’d suggested this daring plan of seeking out Jasnah and becoming her ward? Perhaps. However, she needed to remain focused. Becoming Jasnah’s ward—and therefore student—was only one step.

She considered this as she idly walked up to a pillar, using her freehand to feel the polished stone. Like much of Roshar—save for certain coastal regions—Kharbranth was built on raw, unbroken stone. The buildings outside had been set directly on the rock, and this one sliced into it. The pillar was granite, she guessed, though her geological knowledge was sketchy.

The floor was covered with long, burnt-orange rugs. The material was dense, designed to look rich but bear heavy traffic. The broad, rectangular hallway had an old feel to it. One book she’d read claimed that Kharbranth had been founded way back into the shadowdays, years before the Last Desolation. That would make it old indeed. Thousands of years old, created before the terrors of the Hierocracy, long before—even—the Recreance. Back when Voidbringers with bodies of stone were said to have stalked the land.

“Brightness?” a voice asked.

Shallan turned to find that the servant had returned. “This way, Brightness.”

She nodded to the servant, and he led her quickly down the busy hallway. She went over how to present herself to Jasnah. The woman was a legend. Even Shallan—living in the remote estates of Jah Keved—had heard of the Alethi king’s brilliant, heretic sister. Jasnah was only thirty-four years old, yet many felt she would already have obtained the cap of a master scholar if it weren’t for her vocal denunciations of religion. Most specifically, she denounced the devotaries, the various religious congregations that proper Vorin people joined.

Improper quips would not serve Shallan well here. She would have to be proper. Wardship to a woman of great renown was the best way to be schooled in the feminine arts: music, painting, writing, logic, and science. It was much like how a young man would train in the honor guard of a brightlord he respected.

Shallan had originally written to Jasnah requesting a wardship in desperation; she hadn’t actually expected the woman to reply in the affirmative. When she had—via a letter commanding Shallan to attend her in Dumadari in two weeks—Shallan had been shocked. She’d been chasing the woman ever since.

Jasnah was a heretic. Would she demand that Shallan renounce her faith? She doubted she could do such a thing. Vorin teachings regarding one’s Glory and Calling had been one of her few refuges during the difficult days, when her father had been at his worst.

They turned into a narrower hallway, entering corridors increasingly far from the main cavern. Finally, the master-servant stopped at a corner and gestured for Shallan to continue. There were voices coming from the corridor to the right.

Shallan hesitated. Sometimes, she wondered how it had come to this. She was the quiet one, the timid one, the youngest of five siblings and the only girl. Sheltered, protected all her life. And now the hopes of her entire house rested on her shoulders.

Their father was dead. And it was vital that remain a secret.

She didn’t like to think of that day—she all but blocked it from her mind, and trained herself to think of other things. But the effects of his loss could not be ignored. He had made many promises—some business deals, some bribes, some of the latter disguised as the former. House Davar owed great amounts of money to a great number of people, and without her father to keep them all appeased, the creditors would soon begin making demands.

There was nobody to turn to. Her family, mostly because of her father, was loathed even by its allies. Highprince Valam—the brightlord to whom her family gave fealty—was ailing, and no longer offered them the protection he once had. When it became known that her father was dead and her family bankrupt, that would be the end of House Davar. They’d be consumed and subjugated to another house.

They’d be worked to the bone as punishment—in fact, they might even face assassination by disgruntled creditors. Preventing that depended on Shallan, and the first step came with Jasnah Kholin.

Shallan took a deep breath, then strode around the corner.

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Brandon Sanderson

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Author Brandon Sanderson is the author of the best-selling Stormlight Archive fantasy series. His published works include Elantris (2005), Warbreaker (2009), the ongoing Mistborn series, the Alcatraz and Reckoners YA series, and many more.

Following the death of Robert Jordan in 2007, Jordan's wife and editor Harriet McDougal recruited Sanderson to finish Jordan's epic multi-volume fantasy series The Wheel of Time from Jordan's extensive drafts and notes. The series was concluded in 2013 with the publication of A Memory of Light, by Jordan and Sanderson.

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14 years ago

Thank you very much for sharing this preview. I preordered the book a while back on Amazon, and am happy to see that I can now do the same for the Kindle edition. Woohoo!

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14 years ago

Page 2 paragraph 8 first sentence- shouldn’t “off ended” be offended?

Page 6 paragraph 15 sentence 4, shouldn’t round be wound?

I’m hooked already! Can’t wait to read the whole thing!

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14 years ago

Could this be offered in a few different formats, like many of the short stories/samples on this site? Oh well, I will just have to copy/paste all the text and convert it to a PRC to read on my Kindle manually. :D

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14 years ago

Great start!

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14 years ago

I am now entirely convinced that Brandon Sanderson is a genius.

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14 years ago

Zeke, I did the same thing. I copied the text to MS Word and printed it out. Trying to read it on this webpage is AWFUL!

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14 years ago

Greatness.

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brochill86
14 years ago

Nice.

But as others said… Reading it page by page on this site is no fun.

Thats why the internet gods invented the ability to download pdfs and doc files.

Good story. I will most certainly buy the book. However, this is a tor.com fail.

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14 years ago

I have it as a doc now. 39 pages in Times New Roman size 12 font. Dang, how many books was this series supposed to be? I guess it will fill the hole that Wheel of Time will be leaving in a little over a year…

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14 years ago

lasantine, you’re right about the typos. The first one isn’t in the book (for the curious, when you copy text from a PDF, sometimes ligatures like “ff” come out with trailing spaces), but we’ll get the second one fixed if we can.

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14 years ago

I really enjoyed this, though like others I’d suggest offering a pdf. One typo I noticed: at the very beginning of page 8, right after the “EIGHT MONTHS LATER”, “Kaladin” is called “Kladin”.

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14 years ago

spikye, there’s a drop cap there in the book, and it looks like the a got lost here while reconstituting the word.

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14 years ago

Really enjoyed this. Can’t wait for the book to release!

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AMS09
14 years ago

Great beginning.

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14 years ago

When does this release in India?

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14 years ago

I didn’t have any problems reading it on my laptop, and that’s coming from someone who’s not going to buy any e-reading device – I want books, not pixels. :)

I didn’t want to start another big series before it’s finished, but dammit, I want that book.

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14 years ago

Loved it! Can’t wait for the book!

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14 years ago

Just printed out the sheets so i can enjoy it as reading is suppose to be enjoyed.

I’m sure it will once again leave me amazed at Brandons skill. I still reread the Mistborn saga and am in awe how condensed and intreaging his writing is.

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14 years ago

@AMS09: it is not THE beginning, ’cause there are no beginn… wait, sorry, I was confused there for just a little while :)

Thumbs up for Brandon, and I am still at page 1 :)

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14 years ago

Thanks for the heads-up on the typos, everyone. The ones pointed out should be fixed now.

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14 years ago

I absolutely loved the Mistborn trilogy and turned a bunch of my friends onto it (who, in turn, loved it as well.)
We all were stunned at the awesomeness of The Gathering Storm.
I was captured by Elantris and wait with anticipation for the next book in that particular series.
So when I read Warbreaker, I was pretty disappointed. I was hoping for the next big saga I could immerse myself into, and that wasn’t it.

However, it appears he makes up for Warbreaker with The Way of Kings.
Much like my journey through the world of Mistborn, I find myself once again being sucked into one of Brandon’s worlds, and loving every minute of it.

Can’t wait for the book. Guess I have to go reserve a copy this weekend.

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14 years ago

Oathpact?—this is just silly.
Surgebinders? Dustbringers? Divinities? Radiants? Really—like someone else said, I just don’t by that Sanderson is such a great writer.

These guys, whoever they are, with their magical swords, sound like Power Rangers.

Later, it just turns into a video game.
I mean, you get the name for moves your player can do—when he’s fighting the King, all I could think of was: “Dude, did this guy play alot of D&D.”

Sorry, not worth my time.

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14 years ago

stopped reading after chapter 2, cause I’m already drawn in deep and I don’t want to spoil my book experience.
Definitely buying it, I can only bow my head to the excellence which seems to cling to every word Mr. Sanderson writes, be it Wheel of Time, Mistborn, Warbreaker or now The Way of Kings!

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14 years ago

hmmm… a talented young battle leader who is extremely lucky, hates to see people he leads die, and has a conscience that makes him do the right thing… sounds a lot like a certain Ashandarei wielding rogue from Wheel of Time. It seems like the first two parts were to establish plot, and the next ones to establish the main characters. Probably worth reading.

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14 years ago

I’ve been eagerly awaiting this book for awhile… now I want it even more! I almost wish I hadn’t read the sample chapters, seeing such a promising beginning just makes the wait harder.

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14 years ago

I wondered what a “sneak peak” was in the blurb, but the story does look interesting.

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14 years ago

There’s something about BS’ writing that is just so unappealing to me. I think a lot of it is the dialogue – it’s so flat, especially compared to some of the great contemporaries in the genre like Steven Erikson. Every character just seems to speak the same, even when there’s vernacular attached.

There’s also so much exposition, and it’s not well-hidden at all. I feel like I’m reading a rulebook or outline sometimes.

I thought Gathering Storm was awesome, and I thought it would help turn BS into a better prose stylist, but it just hasn’t. Mistborn, Elantris, and Warbreaker all feel so similar because it just seems like the guy’s got one mode. Great ideas, just not a mature writer, I think.

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14 years ago

27 drewoftherushes

There’s something about BS’ writing that is just so unappealing to me. I think a lot of it is the dialogue – it’s so flat, especially compared to some of the great contemporaries in the genre like Steven Erikson.

For me, it’s the attempts at humor. Everyone is so polite. Some authors write brilliant humor; BwS isn’t one of them. Every one of the girl’s attempts at humor sounded like the time Mat Cauthon asked one of his commanders if he was an Aes Sedai. It could have come out of a 60’s family movie. It didn’t even warrant a smile.

His strength appears in the brilliant twists at the end of his books. Every one of them, though, sounds very similar. You’re right about that. Some are better, some are worse. Unfortunately, this one is more like Warbreaker and Elantris, and less like Mistborn. The problem with a grand epic like this for BwS, is that we have a lot of time to wait before the brilliant twist at the end. On the bright side, maybe he’ll pull more from Mistborn and add a surprise at the end of each book.

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14 years ago

Thank you Brandon, thank you Tor for posting this little tidbit!

I will decidedly be buying this book. *Very* interesting thus far; more questions show up with every page. Love it.

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14 years ago

You’re right, the humor never works for BS. Maybe it’s because he’s mormon, grew up in a polite culture.

I think Mistborn was the most successful because of the protagonist, but even she wasn’t as dark as she should have been. That’s another element that’s missing in the dialogue – darkness.

I still don’t mind reading his stuff, and will continue.

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14 years ago

Loved it, especially the chapter from Kaladin’s viewpoint. I can’t wait until the book comes out!

jkusters
14 years ago

I’ve reached page 4 (web site counting) by the end of my lunch break, and now can’t read any more till I’m done with my work day. I can already tell this afternoon is going to drag by.

Well done, sir. I’m quite enjoying what I’m reading so far.

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14 years ago

31 drewoftherushes

Nah. I’ve known some hilarious LDS individuals. It might be his humility.

But I do want to read it. While his books don’t necessarily pull you in (Alcatraz did; maybe that says something about me), you do get used to the style after about 100 pages. It’s like Shakespeare, where you get to that point, about 15 minutes in, where everything starts to sound ok. lol

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14 years ago

I like it; and for the record, though I didn’t laugh or even smile, I completely bought the fact that the CHARACTERS found the jokes funny. I look at these types of books as a window into a different world, and just as Rand Al’Thor cannot understand Aiel humor, I do not understand the humor of these new characters. That does not make it un-funny… just un-funny to me.

So far, this is good stuff.

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14 years ago

It was awesome, I think Brandon Sanderson may be one of the greatest authors of all time. Brilliant story, realistic characters, and vibrant dialogue.

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14 years ago

Excellent start, and wonderful glimpses of what makes Brandon’s books most enjoyable to me, the Magic.

Thank you for the teaser.
Though IMO it does as much to boost pre-orders for the book as to appease us fans, I’m okay with that.

Mis-looking for a Lashing

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14 years ago

Ugh, Sanderson’s magic systems are not nearly as clever as he seems to think they are.

The man’s writing reads like an especially terrible videogame novelization, never understood why people enjoy it.

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14 years ago

I like his style but his books have a structure that he repeats. There is an intriguing magic system that he reveals through parts of throughout the book. Sometimes, like in Warbreaker and Mistborn, some of the magic system remains hidden. Creating new and interesting magic systems is really one of his strengths. His other strength and element in his books is the twist ending which he does very well. He follows that pattern in his writing pretty consistently.

As for him being LDS and having a 60s sense of humor…I’d say that is relative to the reader. Different strokes for different folks. I really think that Brandon Sanderson is one of the best writers to come into the Fantasy genre in the past decade. Some of the books that are popular just don’t measure up to the high standard that Sanderson has set ( i.e. Jim Butcher, Brent Weeks and too many others to name). BS is a breath of fresh air.

I’m pumped for this book. Looks awesome.

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14 years ago

Page 3, paragraph 24, last sentence it says “supernal” when I’m assuming it’s supposed to say “supernatural”? Could be wrong, supernal is a word that could almost fit the sentence I guess…

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14 years ago

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh why do people like him so much?

I mean, the whole fight with the King, didn’t anyone think of an old-school Nintendo Controler…ya know:

“OH, if I mash this button, I’ll jump and then super slash!”

His is a mixture of the bad Star Wars prose meets Jon Woo—not sure if that’s how you spell his name, but you know who I’m talking about.

Also, can anyone get me something so I can know how to say many of the races, places and characters, which have sofar been mentioned.

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14 years ago

Thanks for the preview. I’m definitely hooked. Can’t wait for the release.

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14 years ago

I am really psyched for this book, and will buy it on day one!

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14 years ago

So I read this, and I liked it, and I thought ‘Hey, it’s a preview, that means it’s coming soon, right? Let’s check Amazon for the release date.’

August 31st.

Damn you.

Please, sir, may I have some more?

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14 years ago

Wow. I’m looking forward to this. I first found out about BS through the beloved Wheel of Time, and am looking forwards to reading his other books. I’m definitely going to get this when it comes out.

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14 years ago

This preview was a mixed bag for me. On the one hand, Kaladin’s point of view caught my interest and I got a feeling for him already. I’d love to keep reading on his future and learn more about his past. On the other hand, I felt nothing at all for the witty but air-headed and oblivious upper-class girl brat in the end. I realize one is supposed to start to care about her house being in danger – but seriously, I’m already annoyed wishing she fails and her house gets run over. I’m more interested in the intriguing princess she is to meet than of her learning how to use money. In the end, the prologue and the Kaladin story will probably be enough for me to read the book though.

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14 years ago

Thanks for the preview Mr. Sanderson and Tor! Looking forward to reading the rest and then the next and the next….:)

Misfortuona – you are very naughty;)

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14 years ago

johnweiss @22 & 41 – Dude, if you don’t like it, don’t read it. Pretty simple, really. Unless you’re really a glutton for punishment, and you like to spend your time reading books you don’t like, why do you bother?

Don’t get me wrong – you’re entitled to your own opinion. I just don’t understand getting involved in an online discussion of a book you dislike after only three chapters. If I felt the way you do, I’d have closed the browser after a page or two and walked away. JMO.

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14 years ago

He spun between the last two, his spear a blur, wielding it like a quarterstaff.

Pg 7, paragraph 3

“Mat used his spear like a quarterstaff, a spinning blur, but bringing the sword blade into it as if he had always used the weapon.”

The Shadow Rising, pg 440

Someone’s writing a little too much Wheel of Time hahaha.

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TimBurtonfan
14 years ago

I personally think that Brandon has a very unique writing prose and unparalleled ability to create something so completely…. Inimitable, in a world where stories about magic and swords have been so decisively beaten to shit.

I for one congratulate Brandon on a job well done, I was hooked from page one. In my book, you are right up there with all of my favorite authors: Jordan, Tolkien, Salvatore, Anne Rice, and Dan Brown. Every author has pieces of any given book that may not be appealing to everyone, including those listed above. I fervently hope to own a future collection of Mr. Sanderson’s work that is much larger than the one currently filling my bookshelf.

Bravo sir, bravo.

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14 years ago

I’ve read an ARC and it’s great. You guys are in for a treat.

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14 years ago

If Brandon’s writing shares any form with the Wheel of Time, well, if you’ve read anything Brandon has written about himself you know that his decision to become a fantasy author was based on the impact Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time had on him.

If I felt myself truly equipped to critigue his writing, I might consider saying that a sentence here or there is marginally fragmented, or that his prose is a bit closer related to contemporary forms of speech than I normally expect in a medieval-styled epic fantasy tome. However, neither of those rises to a level worthy of complaint when compared with the overall weight of brilliant story-telling he offers. What I know I could never think myself arrogant enough to say is that his characters are not “as dark as they should have been”, or any similar blanket judgement based on my own wishful thinking. I read vast amounts of SF/F, and there are only a handful of authors I truly admire. Brandon very quickly joined them.

I love Elantris. I am enthralled by Mistborn. Warbreaker doesn’t evoke as much emotion from me, but I suspect that is because I first read it in the online .doc version, and my proofreader’s eyes were jarred by every typo, repeated word, and shifted sentence (all but a bare handful of which were corrected in the print version), reducing my enjoyment somewhat. I still recognize it as a truly unique type of fantasy story with a wonderful magic system, and an excellent variety of heroes, something that is exceptionally difficult to carry off in a single volume.

Brandon’s books will be drawing my money for some time to come.

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14 years ago

I like it. His depiction of characters is great. Not spending too long on descriptions but really giving a feeling of who the characters are. If I read this series, I know that I will get to know the characters such that I will expect them to say things and do things in certain ways. Can’t wait to find out how the story plays out; and the use of magic is unique and pretty awesome.

All in all, this has truly piqued my interest. It helps that Sanderson is the replacement WoT writer, hehe.

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HArai
14 years ago

Wetlandernw@49: I think of it as the “The Duty Calls” syndrome: http://xkcd.com/386

I was planning to check out this first book already. This snippet just confirmed it. For what it’s worth, unlike some of the other posters, I wish Warbreaker was the series and Mistborn was the single, but I liked both.

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14 years ago

At one point in the prelude, Talan switches to Taln and stays that way…

Amazing…

Can’t wait to read the whole thing.

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14 years ago

LinkDead: Supernal is the word that’s intended there, but either would work.

jweaver13: I know it can be confusing, but Taln is Talenel’s nickname.

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creepyBob
14 years ago

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…you know there’s nothing new under the sun right?

“Taking his sabre in both hands, he used it like a quarter-staff, a weapon he could use right well. The circling flashing of the blade, dazzled his antagonist. It was as a wheel of fire between the combatants, each point of which was a guard for the Norman, and a blow to the Parisian.” Edinburgh literary Journal, March 1743. Page 154 (http://tinyurl.com/2wqns4h)

So who ripped off the Edinburgh Literary Journal? Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson, or neither?

Valan
14 years ago

Awesome. Thanks for the preview, the there was no way in hell I wasn’t going to buy the book anyway. For the record, Warbreaker was by far my favorite, though I loved Mistborn as well.

@@@@@ Drewlovs

Totally agree that the girl wasn’t funny, but personally I don’t think she was supposed to be that funny. He’s proven his humor through Lightsong IMO. This is a girl who is introduced to us thinking slavery is an alright thing – right after our hero gets thrown into slavery. She’s got some growing to do.

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14 years ago

Oh, no… Cenn dies? Poor kid! I was already invested in him!

Yes, I will be waiting for the book to be released!

Thanks, Brandon and Tor!

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R1D1
14 years ago

Comparing Sanderson’s work to others… there are only so many ways you can describe a quarterstaff fight scene or a magic whatever, etc. Some of us appreciate authors for their differences… not trash them for similarities…which is a tired, old, simplistic putdown.

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wish_i_was_tuon
14 years ago

Yay new fun magic system!! I loved Lashing. The whole reorientation of gravity thing reminded me a lot of the good old days when the Dragon Army kicked butt with Ender’s “the gate is down” strategy. Ah, nostalgia.

Oh yeah, really excited for rest of the book too.

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14 years ago

And don’t forget that a Lurcher can anchor himself to sources of metal regardless of gravity, so there’s a mild similarity there as well, though normal gravity can still be sensed. That said, Lashing definitely shares more with the Ender’s Game null-g reorientation.

As for the name shift, it seemed natural that people who have known each other for multiple ages would have nicknames for one another. I paused at “Taln” for a second, and decided that’s what it was. Thanks Peter, for the confirmation.

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14 years ago

umm, I thought there was a bit of awkward wording when talking about the stonewalkers. It goes:

As far as he knew, Szeth had killed every stonewalker who had ever seen what he could do.

How would the guard know Szeth? It just felt a little awkward to me. I’m loving the chapter though

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14 years ago

Stardrag, he was referring to other stonewalkers he’d killed in the past. He’s suggesting that any stonewalker who has seen him use stormlight is dead, so it’s not surprising that the guard didn’t know what was going on.

What I found odd was that the head of a guard who I assumed was lying on the floor slumped forward when he died. That doesn’t seem physically possible. Unless I missed something in there and filled things in myself. I’m prone to that from time to time.

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14 years ago

Personally, I feel it would have been stronger if the book began at Chapter 2. I did not see anything in Chapter 1 that could not have been done adequately in flashback or retelling. Chapter 2 is the real emotional beginning.

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RHallion
14 years ago

Seems to be a lot in common with what was used in Mistborn and Warbreaker. Actually, it seems like a combination of the two types of magics. Not sure how I feel about that since I’m such a huge fan of the Mistborn series.

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14 years ago

Brandon’s books get me every time! Good stuff.

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14 years ago

59 Valan

Thank you for reminding me about Lightsong. He was great! On the other hand, Mat sounded a lot like Lightsong in tGS and it didn’t work for him. But you’re absolutely right about BwS ability to manage certain types of comedy.

hiddenpeanuts
14 years ago

Please provide this in some sort of downloadable format – I really don’t want to read this much text on my monitor.

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14 years ago

Finally joined the community but have been lurking & loving the content for a while now. Gonna be a long-winded first post- sorry! I think one of the most interesting things about Brandon Sanderson’s books are his “voice”. I like the fact that the writing has a modern feel in terms of character dialogue and exposition, and this is why his work stands out- it feels different and edgy. To me, he thrusts the reader immediately into action sequences that are not only entertaining to imagine, but they have a freshness b/c of the originality of his magic systems. Through them we learn about how it works, but it goes down like a nice cold beer and not like a boring technical manual. A new spin on high fantasy, if you will? Very cool IMHO.

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14 years ago

Walker@67

I understand what you mean. But since we’ve only seen these view chapters, I prefer to reserve judgement until I know more of the story. If I took a microscope to a tiny portion of a painting I might think that a certain small arrangement of colors seemed oddly grouped. I might, based on that miniature sample, judge that the artist had erred. What if I was then shown that the work in question was the Mona Lisa?

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14 years ago

I liked the Lashings. It’s easier to visualize than the way Mistborn fling themselves around. I also find the writing style pleasant. It’s something short of masterful, but it’s still smooth and I was never tempted to skim “bad parts”, something I can’t say even of much more famous authors.

I hope this is a sign of good things for fantasy as a whole. The last 10 years have had some real garbage that succeeded solely due to lack of competition. We need more good authors.

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14 years ago

After reading this, The Way of Kings has been moved to my “must buy” list. This is a great start, both in terms of characters and world-building.

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14 years ago

I don’t like the magical system, reeks too much of Allomancy, if you know what I mean. Rest is sufficient to elicit interest but enough to buy? I’m not very sure.

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14 years ago

So far, after reading the prelude and a paragraph or two of the prologue, WoK is interesting. Brandon is a very promising writer. I think it best to remember that he is still new to the writing scene, and that he’ll likely improve greatly over the years. He deserves a lot of the praise he is getting, though. The worlds he has created so far are very original and well-thought out. And he was able to take on the WoT and make it exciting and enjoyable to read. (Not many writers at his career point could do that.) I agree with some of the posts saying that his diologue is lacking. I would like his language to have a harder edge to it… or maybe more of an adult ring to it. Too often his characters sound like they are 16. I will continue to buy Brandon’s books despite their weaknesses because I believe that one day he truly will be great. For now, I can deal with promising.

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14 years ago

The sheer depth of the world of this Stormlight Archive is incredible. I fall in love with books for many different reasons, usually because of characters or story or writing, but TWoK is a book that I’ll adore for the world. This bit we’ve been given isn’t much, but there’s still such a richness to the world that makes me want to know more about it. Spren caught my attention at their first mention. Shardblades and shardplate and all that goes with them. Stormlight. Highstorms. The little detail about grass retreating from the wagons. Those crab-things I’m forgetting the name of.

All those things just fascinate me, and even if there are some characters I like more than others, some things that will go explained too long, this is a book – and a series – I know I’m going to love.

The number of characters helps, too; it’s been a while since I found a story that I liked that had this much variety in characters. (Sorry to all of you WoT folk; I never could get through those books.)

I also liked the bit of artwork inserted into the story; that’s a really nice touch.

I can’t wait for August and TWoK’s release. (Or for sooner and more pretty tidbits.)

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brochill86
14 years ago

To all the lame brains who compare BS’s work as a “rip off” or “heavily borrowing” from RJ’s WOT… You should expand your reading scope.

As others said, there are only so many ways to describe a battle scene.

Do you think RJ was the first to ever describe a character like Mat? Do you think he’ll be the last? Have you ever met someone in real life that reminded you of someone else? Of course you have.

Just enjoy the story. If you are constantly comparing it to WOT then you should try reading things other than just RJ’s works. There are sooooo many great stories and authors out there. It takes years of reading to appreciate that.

Guess what? Saul Tigh isnt a rip of off Picard just because he’s an old bald guy. Think about that before you post some stupid comment about comparing someone (after reading just 2 chapters about them) to Mat. ::rolls eyes::

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14 years ago

I don’t know about anyone else, but when I read a good book and then put it down to go partake in… well… life, I have a tendency to kind of think back on it in eager anticipation of all that life crap being done for the moment so I can go back to reading.

Problem is, I continuously have to remind myself that there are only 3 chapters of this available atm. Seriously, about 5 or 6 times I’ve had the vague anxiety of “I should be reading about those characters” only to remember, when I stop and think, that I don’t get to do that for a while.

I think it’s proof that Mr. Sanderson’s already got me hooked.

Also, re: allomancy/lashings… I think there’s a lot of potential for a lot of different play with lashings since they work with materials that aren’t metal. Also, what happens when you use a lashing outside? Do people fall into the sky? There’s potential for a lot more fun than I can think of, which I’m sure Mr. Sanderson’s going to explore.

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14 years ago

Ah, Brandon. . . you had me at Lashing. So what if it is a little reminiscent of Allomancy, I love the magic system, and can you imagine how Stormlight would look on the big screen!? Much easier to conceptualize than Allomancy or Channeling. Haven’t even read the book yet and I’m voting this story to get picked up by New Line for an option. Excellent work again. Pre Order coming up!

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14 years ago

Ah, Brandon. . .

You’ve been busy! :-)

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14 years ago

Rikka – I am doing the same thing! I keep thinking about what little we did get a peek at, and I really want to sit down and read the rest!
Oh well, I have a couple books I am waiting for in the latter part of this year:)

tempest™

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14 years ago

Looks great!

Really want to read it. UK release anyone? Amazon uk’s not letting me preorder.

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14 years ago

(Best Arthur Dent voice) I actually quite liked it!

(Dropping back to normal) I’m always intrigued by different cosmologies, and he started out with a whopper of a difference. Shardblades? Surgebringers? Dustbringers? I was intrigued mostly by the thunderclasts, and the way that Kalak, Jezrien, Talanel, and company were intending to break free from their hell, where they would be freed only to die again, in defense against the incursions of Kaos.

Well, you’ve kept me from my flute practise, Mr Sanderson, and I enjoyed reading it. I’ll probably buy the book when it comes out, in hopes of finding out more of this cosmology – the Magic doesn’t faze me, and too much of it bores me to death – but in a genre Fantasy novel, its cosmology can make reading it worth buying it.

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14 years ago

Yeah I like it as well. I am curious what happened with these 10 people from the Prelude. And Talanel was left behind. I hope he is not going to seek revenge against the other 9 for leaving him. I mean it’s kinda banal, isn’t it? We’ll see, I guess.

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14 years ago

I’m not sure how well I’m going to appreciate 10 huge books of characters who never lose their tempers, think about sex, are cruel or petty, or give into despair. They just think, and think, and think.

I really like the world building though.

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14 years ago

If the magic system sounds a lot like Allomancy, though it’s probably closer to BioChroma, Brandon has said that his books share a common cosmology. Each book or series told from different perspectives. So, I wouldn’t be suprised.

Though, I’m a little wary that the first two pages of this preview contain way too many two-word combinations: Stormlight, Shardblade, Voidbringer, dustbringer, stonewalker, shardbearer. Kind of cliched for fantasy. I’m curious if that was addressed in the editing process, or will be. Peter?

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14 years ago

@88.orokusaki
There is no more editing, the book is coming out. It might be a cliche but cliche doesn’t mean necessarily bad. And things are cliche for a reason.

@87.OHearn
After 3 chapters, you already know how all ten books will map out ? That’s very impressive!

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14 years ago

OHearn@87

In a work presented through the POVs of the characters themselves, you can’t begin a story which will properly immerse the reader without building that cosmology, and you can’t do that without employing the thoughts of the characters. In a single-volume story, even in a trilogy, you can introduce one character, and begin action, while adding things along the way. I think that a great deal of this first volume of the Stormlight Archives will be used to present a massive, remarkablly different world than the usual. That will require a great deal of information transfer, which will mean lots of POV thoughts.

If you’ve not read Elantris, or any of Brandon’s short stories which have been presented through this website or his own, then you have no idea how adept he is at crafting the scenery of his worlds. If you have, and you still think he doesn’t know what he’s doing, I’ve got nothing for you. Tonka@89 does, though.

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14 years ago

I have a couple of points to make, first of all, Brandon Sanderson is not here to amaze you with his sense of humor (although I thought Shallan was vaguely reminiscent of Hamlet humor wise), BS is good at giving you intricate plot lines. Previously his plots seemed “too easy” because he had relatively few characters, with an epic fantasy you are bound to get more view points with which to reveal the plot. In every book everything just fell into place at the right time because he had time constraints! Everything had to work or it wouldn’t be a book! if he had more time he would be able to bring the plot on more slowly. There is nothing to say that earlier plots were bad, just condensed, more in the style of a mystery.

Second, as far as the action sequences go BS is more oriented towards the individual, for all of you who have read his books this should already be clear. So rather than getting a overall feel of a battle, you get exactly how one person was feeling at that time. He may not understand exactly what it feels like to be in battle, not many of us do, but he does a pretty good job of sucking you in.
His characters are three dimensional, they do the things that they do for reasons that are explained throughout the book. You cannot say they don’t seem human, they have all the internal conflict that is integral to what makes us people. Take Kaladin, as a slave he feels despair, even gives in to it; yes he will probably find his way out, but he still felt it.

Thirdly, if you don’t like his writing style don’t read it, absolutely no one is forcing you. There is no need for you to vent all over the page, we have professional reviewers for that.

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14 years ago

There is no need for you to vent all over the page, we have professional reviewers for that.

While I agree with everything else, this thing I don’t agree with. It’s public forum (well you have to register here specifically, but HEY who pays attention to the details). And everyone is entitled to their opinion and everyone has the right to share it with us (as long as they are not trolling which I don’t think anyone’s doing now) even if you or I don’t agree with it. If it’s ridiculous people have right to ridicule it (in polite and non-aggressive way), if it is impressive, to congratulate it and so on and on.

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14 years ago

.tonka

I was talking about the people that I have seen trolling; admittedly that may have been too aggressive, but people who troll annoy me.
You do make a good point, but I think there have been some people who have crossed the line between constructive criticism and trolling:

“Oathpact?—this is just silly.
Surgebinders? Dustbringers? Divinities? Radiants? Really—like someone else said, I just don’t by that Sanderson is such a great writer.”

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14 years ago

Except Oathpact *is* a bit silly. Why not just Oath, or Pact? Combining them in a chapter that already features a dime-a-dozen such combinations comes off as a bit contrived, the sort of thing… wait… an author in their early twenties might do, to exaggerate the importance of such a plot-device.

Some of these criticisms are quite legitimate. The writing is fairly pedestrian, particularly for a novel hyped to enter the pantheon aside Dune and LotR. (I know that is marketing and not Sanderson, but still, for the beginning of a ten book series, I’d expect prose and plot to sparkle rather than just sort of dully shine). The action resembles a video game. etc. Of course, for some, not declaring Sanderson a creative genius right away constitutes “trolling.” Uh-hunh.

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14 years ago

Now, with that said, I can see why Tor optioned this series. I haven’t read any of Sanderson’s books, but common consensus is that he did a pretty good job getting WoT back on track and he obviously has a large following, if this thread is any indication. WoT alone is going to hugely augment interest in his other books. Moreover, the very simplicity of his prose and ideas makes this book ideal for a young fantasy audience.

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14 years ago

Well I for one really enjoyed this sneak peak at WotK. I can’t wait to read the rest of the book and watch the plot unfold and the characters reveal themselves. But that’s the point of a novel isn’t it? You need to read the whole book before you can make a judgement on it? After reading some of the posts above I feel like screaming IT”S JUST THE FIRST THREE CHAPTERS!!

Well done Brandon!!

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14 years ago

Well, that’s certainly interesting. Pretty clever how BWS said in the introduction that “a boy who made a mistake” was the main character and I thought that it was Cenn, but it looks like he meant Kaladin ;).
I like the magic so far. Don’t get the video game criticism – after all, Vancian magic was the base for D@D spell-casting and WoT channeling is also reminiscent of it.
The writing is still a little rough, I am afraid, but it didn’t stop me from enjoying Mistborn and Warbreaker (Elantris left me indifferent), so color me intrigued.

The 2 things I found jarring so far were the mention of allergy (really? allergy? IIRC it was unknown even in 19th – early 20th century iRL and this world doesn’t seem to have comparable scientific foundation) and the abuse of the word “juxtapose” in all it’s permutations. Such an awkward word…

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14 years ago

Harai@55 – Warbreaker is teed up as a potential series, given the way it ends with two main characters ready and able to move on and other challenges hinted at in other lands in the Warbreaker-verse. And I seem to recall Brandon saying somewhere he even has sketched out how a series would proceed but won’t be getting to it for some time. Rob

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14 years ago

Loving it so far, I really just want to turn to the next page and read more. Can’t wait! My pre-order of the Orion Paperback on TheBookDepository is sitting there happily and August can’t come soon enough.

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14 years ago

I like it.

I really got sucked into it, so I’m definitely buying it when it comes out.

Part 1 reminded me of the prologue of the first part of A song of ice and fire: bring in a young character, let him see what the world is about, make him as scared as you yourself would be in that position and then kill him off.

I like it.

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14 years ago

I became intrigued by the characters pretty quickly. I like his complex characters and his world building. I felt immersed. I trust Brandon and feel relaxed in his worlds. (Unlike GRRM and a few others.) His style is OK by me.

It’s certainly hard to get a read on the “whole” in just the first three chapters. By necessity there’s going to be a big info dump to set the stage, create the world, give some backstory, and introduce the protagonists. I found Kaladin and Shallon both very intriguing. I like more right now, please.

As for his dualwords….I simply assumed that was how things were referenced in this world. It seems very practical, almost Native American in it’s literal description of objects and their functions.

I’ll buy, and probably be ticked I have to wait for the next volume, as I know it won’t be coming anytime soon, since he has WOT to finish up. He needs a clone.

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HArai
14 years ago

Kusu@94: You’re right, you know: I was driving my pickup down the parkway this afternoon, stopping to obey the policeman who wanted to let people waiting on the sidewalk go by at the crosswalk, and I thought to myself, “People never use composite words.”

Ok, sarcasm aside, you really think using composite words indicates an inexperienced author? Because using “those guys that can bind surges” instead of Surgebinders would indicate the same thing to me.
He could call them some arbitrary name like “Szbim” or something, but then you get either a conversation like “What’s a Szbim?” “Well in your language it would be ‘Surge binder'”, or a glossary in the back that says “Szbim – people that can bind Surges.”

RobMRobM@98: It’s nice to hear Brandon might planning to continue the series at some date. That’s really how I felt after finishing Warbreaker: “Ok, those two have really come into their own, now what happens?”.

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14 years ago

Interesting read. I love all the people who offer their constructive criticism and professional editing advice.

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14 years ago

I really enjoy Sanderson’s work, and I really liked this.

But.

Did it REALLY feel like a ”intro mission videogame tutorial” to anybody else? “Try this power. Now this one. And, whoa, look at that one. Okay, now here’s your first boss kinda guy–strong knight with a big sword”.

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14 years ago

I really like how the chapters are significant in length in TWOK. I got really tired of the short chapters in the Mistborn series and Warbreaker. (Never ready Elantris). And for the record, (not that anyone cares) I really enjoyed the first two Mistborn books. I thought Hero of Ages was a horrible ending to an otherwise good series. And Warbreaker was great once I made it past the first hundred pages. I had to put Elantris down after a hundred pages or so, it just didn’t do it for me. All of the books of Brandon’s that I’ve read have been difficult to get through. I spent an average of six months on each of them, when I could blow through a book the same length in a week. However, it was worth reading the ones I mentioned liking once all was said and done. I’ve noticed that Brandon does openings (prologue or first chapter) really well, and then everything slows way down until the ending. I hope that he has good pacing in TWOK, or else it will be hard to get through like the rest of his books. The only one of his books that I did read in a week was The Gathering Storm. It wasn’t his world though, so I can’t really count it as his book. He wrote it, and wrote it well, but the characters were already established and he just had to have them do what they always do and it was great. Again, as I said in an earlier post, I think Brandon will be great one day. Maybe TWOK is the beginning of his greatness? I hope so.

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14 years ago

I enjoyed it quite a bit and will be buying it on the Kindle if it goes down to 9.99 otherwise I will check it out at the library.

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14 years ago

Edit: Removed. See below.

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14 years ago

101 Tektonica

He needs a clone.

Now, don’t say that. We all like Peter, even if we disagree with him a lot. What would he do if we could have a half-dozen BwS’s? We’re talking serious psychosis, here. Poor guy’s busy enough.

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14 years ago

I’d probably be out of a job. But I’d also get to read more Brandon books.

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14 years ago

I would like to say that this is a setting. It only makes sense that it is lacking in dialog, BS has to give you some idea of what’s going to happen. So if it seems like it is thoughtless, or is lacking in any substantial character building, remember that this is a SETTING to an epic fantasy. And in all the epic fantasies I’ve ever read there is plenty of talking, sometimes ad nauseam.
The part that I think most people are calling “video game like” is the part with the assassin, Szeth, and his purpose as far as we know is to explain how the war with the Parshendi started, so BS doesn’t need to give him much personality (at least for now); or put much description in that part. It’s more like history than a real part of the book.

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14 years ago

Since we’re now all commenting on the commenting…

If you couldn’t get through Elantris, you probably won’t want to set out on a journey of ten exceptionally large volumes. As for Mistborn, it didn’t end at all as I’d thought likely, but that doesn’t cause me to judge the ending to be bad. Upon reflection after completing the story, it fit perfectly with the little epigrams attached to each chapter.

HArai@102

Well played. Or should I say wellplayed?

jej@108

Why have you relegated the author’s middle initial to lowercase status? ;-{)>

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14 years ago

111 Freelancer

Why have you relegated the author’s middle initial to lowercase status?

Because I usually forget it the first time around. lol

109 PeterAhlstrom

You are impressively optimistic. I’m pretty sure any free time from writing that the Brandons would find through cloning would easily be filled with Magic: The Gathering.

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14 years ago

So now that I finally found time and access to read the whole thing, I enjoyed it a lot. Sanderson definitely has his own writing style, and it’s not what I’m used to. He writes the way we talk – at least out west – and I’m used to reading a more formal prose. That said, while it takes a little getting used to, there’s nothing wrong with it at all.

For me, the quality of a fantasy book is based on a combination of wordcrafting, worldbuilding, characterization and plot. (Probably a few other things, too, but those are the major ones.) It’s too early to tell much about this one, but in Mistborn I found all four to be quite enjoyable. As noted, the contemporary writing style threw me for a bit, but it wasn’t a problem for more than a few minutes. The fact that I didn’t know what was going to happen beforehand was very much a positive in my book, particularly since I liked the things that happened much more than the “expected” version.

As for these few chapters, I liked it all. The prelude, with all its compound words (very German, BTW), had a very “alien” and ancient feel, enhanced by the way the 10 of the Oathpact show up in the prologue as the Ten Heralds with names slightly changed by time. I look forward to seeing if this comes into play again as the series develops. (I hope so.) Chapters 1 and 2 certainly didn’t follow as I had expected, so that made a good start to the story. BTW, I totally disagree with whoever thought Chapter 1 would have been as well told in flashbacks. Not at all! The impact of Kaladin as slave was much more powerful after having seen him from Cenn’s POV as the incredibly brave, lucky, heroic battle leader. And then it went sideways. In Chapter 3, I do like the girl, and didn’t see her as “spoiled society brat” at all. JMO.

So, yeah, I’m looking forward to the book and the series. Bring it on! And tordotcom – thanks for the preview!

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14 years ago

The only problem I found with Szeth’s Lashings was the Enid Blyton Factor. Other may not have had this experience.

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14 years ago

Upon further reflection I realize the comment I posted earlier (now removed) was unnecessary. I am just so used to the WOT re-read style debate, I think I lost touch with the whole point of THIS page witch is to give feed back on the release. Sorry.

And now, on with my thought’s. (I don’t have many so I have to write them down) I really enjoyed it, I can see what people mean about it being video game-esk (not sure that’s a word) but as has already been pointed out, the chapter was to set up the war and the mystery of why it was started so the character, Szeth, really didn’t need much depth for that purpose. And, as I very bluntly pointed out in the aforementioned comment, I don’t think you can dismiss this as more of the same. Some of the comments people have made related to how BWS other book’s played out. Not to say they are not correct or entitled to their opinions, but how about a fair go for this as a new work, Lets get a good look at the story ark before passing judgment on it is all I’m saying.

And besides, i quite like video games:)

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14 years ago

First, the video game thing. Who here hasn’t read the Prologue for The Eye of the World? Short, sweet, and to the point, that’s how it has to be in the first book of a fantasy series. And EPIC, can’t forget that.

Just like the opening cut scene to any Final Fantasy game.

As to the rest of the picking little posts, you guys have fun with that. I’ll keep being psyched for my favorite author’s next series. I finally read Warbreaker, wanted it in paper first. The formatting on this wasn’t bad at all, but I’m on a netbook, so the screen isn’t as glaring. I don’t feel Kaladin is Mat-like, you are reaching a bit on that. I get the similar weapon thing, but he’s not trying to be all that funny and Mat would’ve been lucky enough to escape already. Mat didn’t handpick his soldiers either, they picked him.

I agree with those that compliment the humor of Lightsong, and kindly submit that Breeze, Kelsier, and Sazed should not be forgotten. Sazed was a great straight man. I didn’t get Lightsong from Mat in TGS, but I’ll be rereading it soon enough, so guess we’ll see. I thought all four of the characters I mentioned had a different sort of funny to them, however.

Can’t wait for TWoKs to come out, right at my birthday weekend too :). Also glad to hear there will be more Warbreaker eventually, though I hope one of our final two has a bit less whine to her. Shallan is so much better.

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14 years ago

I’m impressed. Sanderson creates vivid and unique worlds that just leave me breathless.

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14 years ago

Of course not everyone will like every author but some of the comments above are just plain rubbish.

Sanderson is also definitely in my top bunch of fantasy authors, his ability to create new magic systems is unparalelled and his books keep you hooked ’til the end with amazing twists. His magic systems are definitely as clever as he thinks they are mellara (which he probably doesn’t he’s just trying to be original – no harm in that!).

It’s refreshing to see a fantasy writer deviate from the usual formulae – why criticise someone so harshly for being innovative and doing it so well?
Everyone will have their weaknesses and their trademarks – Brandon defintely has his, you can’t expect him to change his writing style for every book surely!

The quarterstaff thing… lol… how many times have I seen almost identical paragraphs / phrases / descriptions relating to dragons, assassins, apprentices, theives, etc from one author to another, it happens all the time, at least with Brandon Sanderson you get some unique stuff too.

Absolutely loved Warbreaker, it’s rare to find a single volume that’s so complete, robust, fullfilling and well finished. Amazing! Elantris was ok, again enjoyed it’s unique-ness but it didn’t have me as hooked.

Mistborn was just remarkable… v much looking forward to this next epic :)

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14 years ago

Please don’t let me be the only one who is unable to push himself to the end of this chapter. I hoped Brandon Sanderson’s writing had matured and gotten better, because I want to enjoy his books, but I’m not impressed at all with this small taste of his new series. Like in Mistborn, he is too focused on TELLING us the way things are instead of SHOWING us, through imagery and metaphor etc. And his attempts at these are extremely poor, making the text awkward and painful. Fearspren are like purple globs of goo??? Are you serious? This is just the most glaring example of laughable immature writing I found. He tries to introduce us to too much jargon and lingo, too soon, in a very unsubtle manner, like a person who doesn’t understand personal space. I’m now officially adding “Authors Named Brandon” to “Authors Named Terry” on my list of writers to avoid.

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14 years ago

Loved it. Thanks to Tor for posting (and maybe we’ll get a bit extra before August 31)!

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14 years ago

Like many other readers, I became of Mr. Sanderson’s writing because of his involvement with the Wheel of Time series. Unfortunately, the excerpt here compared to The Gathering Storm seems like a step backward. If this is what he has been working on, while simultaneously writing the last books for the WoT, I very much fear for the quality of the final two books.

What bothers me the most about Mr. Sanderson’s writing is that he feels the need, almost like he is checking boxes, to tell you how a scene is unfolding step by step. His writing is mechanical.

Exaggerated example: John walked into the room. He set his book down. John was tired. He wanted to sleep. His wife walked in. John was not too happy to see her.

Why not: John walked into the room and set his book down. He was more zombie than man as his labored footsteps screamed for a good nights rest. Of course, that is when she chose to walk in. Eyeing her angrily from across the room, his gaze was enough to make her fidget with the ring on her finger….

I won’t belabor the point. The excerpt we have here has interesting ideas but is very rough.

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14 years ago

Also, a quick note in defense of constructive criticism. I read this excerpt because I was genuinely interested in reading something of Mr. Sanderson’s own creation. Indeed, while reading The Gathering Storm, I felt like I was unfairly comparing Mr. Sanderson to Mr. Jordan. I’m sorry to say that what I read today does not make me want to purchase TWOK.

“If you don’t like it, don’t read it.” How am I supposed to know if I won’t like it if I don’t read it? The excerpt here is more than enough for me to realize that, while slightly intrigued, I find the writing style in this particular excerpt to be almost unbearable. Will it get better as the book progresses? Should I pay hard-earned money to find out?

“His magic system is unique. That makes me want to read his books.” Good for you. For me, that is simply one element of a good fantasy book. That said, the magic system in this excerpt was a bit interesting. I found it hard to follow, at times, however.

“Compound words exist in English and are cliche in fantasy books for a reason.” I walk on a sidewalk and drive on a highway but am I signalling something of vital importance to the reader in this sentence? That kind of writing strikes me as lazy.

Nothing I just said above means that I am not open to purchasing a book written by Brandon. I’ll wait until I read a preview that makes me want to buy that book.

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14 years ago

I found it hard to follow, at times, however.

Are you kidding me? After your complaints about what you perceive as weaknesses in sentence structure you write that? Here, let me help you, and with the same exact words:

At times, however, I found it hard to follow.

I won’t even speculate on what it says, that this straightfoward magic system eluded your understanding.

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14 years ago

Freelancer – such restraint! :>

And, yeah. Sometimes a convoluted sentence is just a convoluted sentence.

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Matrim Cauthon
14 years ago

This is the very first of Brandon Sanderson’s work I have read besides his work in fifnishing the Wheel of Time series. I was very impressed with his work on that series. Likewise, I am impressed by his writing here. I will have to start reading more of your work Brandon. Many thanks.

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14 years ago

Having read all of Brandon’s adult-oriented published work, it has been a delight to see him grow–tangibly so and with large, breath-taking leaps in skill–as an author. His creation of lifelike worlds has always been among his strongest literary attributes, but the brief glimpse presented here was… quite simply masterful. I had the sensation of listening to a master compose his magnum opus. If what has been presented here is any indication, The Stormlight Archive series will rightfully cement Sanderson’s place among the true greats of Fantasy.

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14 years ago

This looks like a really interesting book.while not as good as grrm or rj his language use is passable,but his worldbuilding and magic systems are what really attracts me to his work.I only hope that the charachter flaws become evident.The emotional attatchment that comes with vibrant flawed charachters is what makes any novel amazing rather then the style of prose present.For example a Jaime Lannister or a Tuon is a far better charachter then an Arya or an Elayne!I hope Sanderson comes in to his own in this series-if so he could eventually be up there with tolkein,grrm or rj.Untill he earns that place i will approach with guarded enthusiasm…

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14 years ago

Freelancer: two can play at that game.

“I won’t even speculate on what it says, that this straightfoward magic system eluded your understanding.”

I believe you meant “straightforward”, not “straightfoward.” Also, are you that you don’t want to rework your own sentence? I hope your clients get more attention to their work than you paid to your last post. Tsk tsk.

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14 years ago

Dang, I really enjoyed this preview. Now I want more and don’t want to have to wait til August. Thanks, Brandon, for another engaging read!

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14 years ago

One Question: Is Michael Kramer going to do the audio version of the book?

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14 years ago

Michael Kramer appears in the Amazon listing for the audiobook. Expect more official word within a few weeks.

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14 years ago

I wish I wanted to sound important. If I did I would definitely drone on about prose in an online forum.

To each their own. I enjoyed the preview and have enjoyed Brandon’s other works so I don’t see any reason not to be excited for TWOK.

Once someone gains success it is inevitable that a portion of their potential fan base will dislike their work simply to differentiate themselves from what they perceive to be the “Stupid Loving Masses” who will adore anything Brandon touches. It happens in every medium.

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14 years ago

Was introduced to Brandon through Jordan’s WOT. Was pleased with his touch to the Nearmaster’s work (Master Tolkien; Nextmaster GRRM- who nears a slippery slope if he doesn’t FINISH THE TALE, and Nearmaster Jordan). Am assuming this is a peek at the development of, and introduction to, an epic in progress. Wishing you only the best muses. Carry on Sir!

Anthony Pero
14 years ago

Wow, this thread is awesome. *That was sarcasm in case it wasn’t apparent*

BWS has room to grow as a writer. Wow, big shock. He’s 34ish. Actual writing can and will improve over time. I remember reading Robert Jordan’s Conan book, and his series set in Revolutionary War times. His prose most definitely took a step up in the WoT. WAY up. Terry Brooks’ latest series is crafted significantly better than 20 years ago.

What I love about Brandon’s books is that they are fresh an innovative, but well within the confines of his genre. Do you have any idea how rare that is? Terry Brooks is one of the top selling fantasy authors of all time, and EVERY SINGLE BOOK IS EXACTLY THE SAME. Same characters, same plot, etc. David Eddings? Please.

JRR Tolkien managed to complete two real novels. GRRM’s fantastic fantasy series is completely stalled. The reason I’m gonna read this series is that I’m 100% positive that BWS will be innovative and original, he’ll work his butt off to get his manuscripts in on time, and the writing itself will only get better. I have confidence in this because Brandon is so accessible through his blog, twitter and his podcast. He uses his fans to hold himself accountable because he recognizes the reality that he is a “commercial writer,” not an “artist”. He approaches writing as any other business owner would. It’s work. This isn’t a slam, this is a compliment. I’m buying an entertainment product when I purchase a book. It’s nice to know that it was created by a true craftsman with skill and creativity, rather than some “artist” who might decide to take the next 5 years off after his first big check.

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14 years ago

Really good. I like the world building Sanderson is so adept at. I’m also now totally convinced that Brandon Sanderson is a genius. Thanks.

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14 years ago

It’s odd, reading the comments here, how vast the range of opinion is… especially odd considering that it was Brandon Sanderson (and Patrick Rothfuss) who revived my interest in fantasy as a genre.

I hated Jordan’s wooden prose, but I loved his stories. With Sanderson, I love both.

I’m not saying that Sanderson is the complete prose stylist; for that, read Gene Wolfe. But he is accessible, and never verbose or turgid like many of his peers.

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14 years ago

If you’ve liked the chapters Tor has posted so far, the rest will not disappoint you!

And if you want to talk more about the preview content, and discuss as you read more, check out Stormblessed.com – you may even win an advance copy (we will be giving some away to people who post on our forum this month)!

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14 years ago

I guess I’m late to this party. I enjoyed reading this. I also started paying attention to Sanderson when I found out he was doing the Gathering Storm.

What I have found comical on these forums is the need for all the negative criticisms. You know what they say about opinions.

For me the thing is this. I compare novels to another form of art. Music. If you don’t like classical you won’t got out and buy a classical overture and if you don’t like rap you wont listen to a hip hop album.

Each has their own merits and accolades for the work put in and are respected in one form or another by those who enjoy either genre or style.

By the same token if you know of whatever shortcomings you feel an author has then simply ignore his work. Why beat yourself up or attempt to belittle that person’s contribution to the wonderful world of literature.

Better yet for those droning on about how to better said writing. Grab your typewriter, your PCs, your notebooks, craft your story in your form of prose, get an agent, shop it, get published and then allow us to dissect it.

I know I’m looking forward to reading more of TWoK.

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14 years ago

All Hail Terry S !!
Yes I agree. Love the reference to music.

What I’ve read of this excerpt is inventive, inspiring, fascinating and I definitely want to read more.

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argwaith
14 years ago

Brandon is amazingly unique in his world-building. He is also mind-blowing with the sheer amount of great material he can put out quickly while multi-tasking on other projects, especially when compared to other rarely producing authors we’ve all known. He does all these creative projects while still helping raise his own family with small children. No small feat there.

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14 years ago

This was very dissapointing to me. He is jumping around too quickly without adequate character development. It is not pulling me in. It is boring. That being said, it could possibly eventually get much better, but it has a very weak introduction. I think he is spreading himself too thin, too many irons in the fire.

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14 years ago

The book is excellent.

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14 years ago

I’m in medical school, and have almost no time to myself- but I used what little I had reading this book. No regrets. Mr. Sanderson- you are one of the most brilliant writers I’ve ever had the pleasure to read. I absolutely love your work, and The Way of Kings has brought you to a whole new level. Even more impressively, you managed to write it at the same time as you worked to finish The Wheel of Time. That, sir, is incredible. Thank you for a wonderful new world to explore- I look forward to following your work for the rest of my life.

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srlchamp@hotmail.com
14 years ago

Wow, there seems to be lots of people who enjoy complaining about BS. You really need to find some other authors, those of us who enjoy reading something that is NoT the same old blah will be just fine without you. I’m just curious to know if anybody can match BS’s creativity with regard to new magic systems, obviously the immortal Robert Jordan saw something and I dare anybody to knock that man’s taste! Yeah…though not!

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14 years ago

Thanks for the preview. I’ll buy it after my exams are over.

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14 years ago

Very creative, enjoyable and I can see great characters being developed. I love Kalak already! Thanks for the preview Tor and Sanderson. I have heard many great things about this book and I am definitely going to read it!

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deedee
13 years ago

i have read and reread this book when is the next one coming out? i can’t wait!

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unkown
6 months ago

this book is INSANE

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