For the first time in its three-year history, Discovery kept a show-runner and a stable writers room for an entire season, and the difference in consistency and quality is marked. Plus one of the biggest issues with the show—that the technology in a show that takes place ten years prior to the original series looks more sophisticated than that of the 24th century in the 1987-2001 spinoffs—is solved by bouncing the crew into the 32nd century.
As a result, we have Discovery’s finest season.
The question of course is whether or not the season is successful, and I have to say that it mostly is. One of my greatest frustrations with all the new onscreen Trek output from 2001-2019 is that it’s been entirely retreading old ground. Finally, what with the first season of Lower Decks taking place right after Nemesis (the previous end point of Trek storytelling), the first season of Picard taking place twenty years after that, and now Discovery jumping another eight centuries past that, Trek is finally doing what it had been doing up until Enterprise debuted in 2001 and what it should’ve been doing all along: moving forward.
The setup of this third season bears more than a passing resemblance to the 2000 TV series Andromeda starring Kevin Sorbo, itself based on several notions by Trek creator Gene Roddenberry, and telling the tale of a time-displaced vessel that tried to reform a great nation that had fallen asunder in the time the ship was away.
It works even better here than it did twenty years ago on that syndicated drama, because to people watching Discovery, the Federation actually means something, thanks to five decades of Star Trek stories. One of my biggest issues with Andromeda was that I had no investment in the Systems Commonwealth, so I didn’t care about restoring it. The show also did a crappy job of showing how bad life had gotten in the post-Commonwealth era. (Andromeda really could’ve used the battered-down sleaze that other science fiction oeuvres like Farscape and the Alien movies had.)

To their credit, Discovery does an excellent job over the course of the first four episodes showing how much more difficult life is in the post-Burn galaxy: Burnham gets kidnapped by thugs and drugged, Saru and the gang have to negotiate with thugs, Earth is isolationist and paranoid, and Trill is only marginally better than that. And then once they find the Federation in “Die Trying,” it’s a shadow of its former self.
Even the hopeful future of the Planet Formerly Known as Vulcan—which has been renamed Ni’Var and on which Spock’s dream of uniting the Vulcan and Romulan people has at last come true—is tinged with conflict, as the reunification of the sundered Vulcan species is not a smooth one, fraught with politics and difficulty.
Once the plot kicks in, the conflict of the season plays out, which finds a fascinating, and sometimes even successful balance between the usual Trekkian ideals and the action-adventure component that has bled over to the TV side from the movie side (where it’s, rather depressingly, been an important component of the franchise since 1982). Which means that we get to mix compassion (Saru working with the man-child Su’Kal to get him to leave the broken-down holodeck that has been his only home since he was a child) and diplomacy (Burnham pleading her case on Ni’Var, Vance and Osyraa’s negotiations) with pew-pew action-adventure (Burnham and Book escaping the exchange, Saru, Georgiou, and Tilly freeing themselves from Zareh, all the Mirror Universe stuff, the taking back of Discovery).
But the show didn’t lose track of Trek’s strongest suit: the characters. There’s lots of nifty stuff here, starting with Burnham adjusting to life in the future and her burgeoning relationship with Book, not to mention her confronting her demons with the help of her mother (a very welcome return by Sonja Sohn). Georgiou gets to learn how much she’s changed from being in the nicer universe, and gets a hard lesson in the notion that you can’t go home again. Tilly is given a baptism of fire as acting first officer, and is good at the carry-out-the-captain’s-instructions part, not so much at the command-the-ship-while-the-captain’s-away part. Detmer suffers some serious PTSD from going to the future, and in general the rest of the bridge crew starts to round into focus a little more, from their gathering at the big tree in San Francisco to their working together to escape custody.

The best, though, are Culber and Saru. Culber has evolved nicely into the prototypical Gene Roddenberry doctor: good at medicine and also good at being a guide to his patients. It’s the role both Boyce and McCoy played, and which both the EMH and Phlox would play on the spinoffs, and Wilson Cruz does amazing work with the role. Burnham is the heart of Discovery, and Tilly is the compassion, and Saru is the intellect, but Culber is the soul.
Best of all is our third captain in three years. After the mendacity of Lorca and the friendly compassion of Pike, we now have the embodiment of intelligence and diplomacy in Saru. Watching Saru grow into the role of captain is a joy to behold, from his asserting his authority with Georgiou to his attempts to bring the crew together in this strange future to his delightful conversations with Ni’Var’s President T’Rina to his continued awareness of the needs of his crew, balanced with the needs of his mission and orders.
We also get lots of new characters, notably Cleveland Booker, charmingly played by David Ajala; Adira Tal, played with complexity and verve by Blu del Barrio; Admiral Vance, the latest refutation of Trek’s not-entirely-earned reputation for all admirals being evil (like Kirk being a maverick, it’s one of the truisms that has taken root in Trek lore without actually being accurate), played with Oded Fehr’s usual relaxed intensity; Su’Kal, a magnificent melding of very old and very young by the great Bill Irwin; and Osyraa, a spectacular disappointment of a villain, despite the best efforts of Janet Kidder. The clever leader trying to make the best of a bad situation in “There is a Tide…” would’ve been great to have throughout the season, but it’s bookended by the incredibly boring mustache-twirling villain of “The Sanctuary” and “That Hope is You, Part 2.”
Osyraa isn’t the only disappointment. Stamets is mostly portrayed in relation to other characters. I like his paternal relationship with Adira, but he’s entirely defined by other people this season: Adira, Culber, and in the end his anger with Burnham. There’s very little of him. Nhan is clumsily written out in “Die Trying.” Reno plays no role of significance in the season (though, as ever, her banter with Anthony Rapp’s Stamets in “Far from Home” especially is brilliant), and while the bridge crew does indeed get more to do, they could hardly have gotten less, and there needs to be more there there.

In addition, we waste the better part of two episodes writing Georgiou out so she can go back in time for her Section 31 spinoff. It would’ve been a lot easier to just not have her go into the future with the rest of them at the end of season two, and also given the other stories in this season more storytelling space (which many of them desperately needed). Indeed, there’s a general feeling from this season that many of the plot threads could’ve used a bit more air to breathe, and not wasting time cosplaying in the Mirror Universe with the Guardian of Forever would’ve helped with that. (Having said that, Paul Guilfoyle’s Guardian is magnificent.)
And the plot point of the lullaby that everyone knows is completely dropped. Red herring or writing fail? You be the judge!
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That particular loose end notwithstanding, the writing is more coherent this season. Season one was a show written to be binged that was then released in two sets of weekly drips and drabs over five months, thus utterly spoiling the flow of the narrative. Season two started out as a show about one thing, and very obviously became a show about a different thing at the end, as the writing showed the seams of the behind-the-scenes turmoil.
Season three, though, provides a nice balance of standalone episodes with moving the plot along. It’s less serialized than the prior two, but still with a continuing narrative. For one thing, this gives Discovery individual standout episodes, which have been rare in the prior two seasons. “Su’Kal” and “Unification III” and “There is a Tide…” are all particularly strong.
Plus, we get some good development of several cultures, notably the Trill, the Vulcans and Romulans, and the Kelpiens, and some fabulous guest stars in del Barrio, Guilfoyle, Fehr, Sohn, Irwin, Phumzile Sitole, Adil Hussain, Ian Alexander, David Cronenberg, Tara Rosling, and the great Christopher Heyerdahl.
It’s far from a perfect season, but it’s a step in the right direction, to wit, forward. We don’t just get a new adventure, we leave the field wide open for more in subsequent seaons, and it was a lot of fun getting there. The acting remains incredibly strong, with some superlative visuals provided by a strong stable of directors (old standbys Olatunde Osunsanmi, Hanelle M. Culpepper, Maja Vrvilo, and the great Jonathan Frakes, as well as some newcomers).

There’s been no indication when we will see season four—or, indeed, the next season of any of the shows. The ongoing apocalypse has slowed everything down, and while production has commenced on season four, there’s no release date for it yet. Neither Picard season two nor Strange New Worlds season one have started production yet, no new Short Treks have been announced, and there’s been no start date for Prodigy announced yet, either.
It’s frustrating, after a calendar year that gave us thirty-three new episodes, to not know when there will be more, though in the meantime, there’s always licensed fiction! Since the last time I talked about Discovery tie-ins, there’ve been two new novels, Dead Endless by the late great Dave Galanter, about Stamets and Culber; and Die Standing by John Jackson Miller, about Emperor Georgiou of the Terran Empire; both of which are definitely worth checking out.
Keith R.A. DeCandido wrote the first-ever tie-in novel to Andromeda, which was entitled Destruction of Illusions and was released in 2003. His latest novel is Animal, a thriller he co-wrote with Dr. Munish K. Batra about a serial killer who targets people who harm animals.
I pretty much agree with this. I certainly agree that the season would’ve been better if Georgiou hadn’t been part of it. It was a waste of time to bring her to the future if the endgame was always to take her out of it again, and her arc was nothing more than a distraction and interruption of the more interesting stuff. I would’ve rather seen that time devoted to more development of the other characters and the new galactic landscape they find themselves in.
I would’ve liked it if we’d gotten to see more radical change in Federation cultures over the centuries since we last saw them. 800 years is a long time, and there should be some more profound changes than we’ve seen. The biggest change we got was Romulans and Vulcans uniting, but even that didn’t change them much culturally. Okay, the Andorians are bad guys now, but they kind of were at first in Enterprise, so it’s not a massive change. And the Trill, Orions, and particularly humans are pretty much the same. I’d love it if we found out next season that, as someone suggested a while back, the Klingons have become pacifistic spiritualists or something like that.
My biggest disappointment is still with the very sloppy, incoherent, fanciful visual effects. Gene Roddenberry always strove for at least the semblance of realism and plausibility. His successors have rarely tried that hard to live up to that standard, but I’ve never seen it violated as egregiously as in DSC’s visual effects, which not only make no physical sense but sometimes even contradict onscreen dialogue. The finale staging a whole action sequence in a “turboshaft” that was a gigantic, absurdly complicated high-tech rollercoaster bigger than the entire starship it was supposedly inside was the culmination of everything I dislike about DSC’s effects. Visual effects should support the story, avoid getting in its way, and facilitate the audience’s suspension of disbelief by depicting the unreal in a believable way (as far as the technology or budget allows). DSC’s visuals fail on every one of those levels, placing excess and indulgence over good visual or conceptual storytelling. In most respects, I think the show is on the right track now, but its FX are more on the wrong track than ever.
Culber has definitely come into his own this season.
My only real complaint about the Ni’Var storyline was the lack of even a mention of the Romulus star going nova, an event that Picard confirmed happened in the Prime timeline. Made me wonder if this was intended as another different timeline. And I don’t know how I feel about Burnham’s promotion at the end of the season.
@3/Cloric: The fact that Romulans are living on Vulcan now is pretty clearly an aftereffect of Romulus being destroyed by the supernova. The implicit connection is there without it having to be spelled out in dialogue. The presence of the Qowat Milat is a further connection to the Picard continuity.
And come on, it was 800 years earlier. How often in your everyday life do you hear people having conversations about things that happened in the 13th century?
A friend and I are looking forward to the next season. A thing that’s bugged us with Burnham since day 1 has been how everyone acts like she’s in command when she isn’t, so her being in command should fix that.
Also they have a stellar cast. Some of the best of the season come from them (or their evil counterparts). Hope to see them used more going forward now that it maybe more about rebuilding vs the latest mystery. Wilson Cruz and co killed it this season
I will say “Let’s fly” is worse than all Saru’s attempts at an “engage.” Captains don’t need a thing.
Overall a good season.
I second Christopher’s comments about the whole turbolift sequence. Since this show started, when we see the turbolifts from the outside in the tracks, it has never made any sense. Where has all this space come from? Did they master the Tardis technology they discovered in an episode of Enterprise?
Mike
I enjoyed and loved the season overall an awful lot (although I felt like the final 3 episodes were a bit of a comedown compared to the rest of the season). But I do think what happened with Stamets this season was really weird. He was practically written out of the last couple of episodes despite being a main-title cast member. I’ve seen pics on social media of Anthony Rapp apparently shadowing Olatunde Osunsanmi, apparently as training to direct an episode himself eventually, but I can’t imagine that would actually have been a factor in the episode’s writing, especially for the season finale.
I agree with KRAD that Saru is Discovery’s best character, and I will be heartbroken/miffed if this means he is written out of the show or now just a recurring guest star. That said, if either case is true, can we make the most of it and PLEASE get to know the bridge crew better outside of the main title cast? I mean, I think Lt. Bryce has been in every episode since the ship first appeared in S1E3 (I could be wrong), but I think I still don’t know anything about him other than that his name is Bryce. But the last 2 episodes were acting like we were super emotionally invested in the bridge crew when we still really don’t know them very well outside of Detmer and maybe Owosekun, and even those two are only in comparison to the others.
MORE LINUS.
Also, like many Trek fans I had pretty much chosen to interpret all the big empty space surrounding the turbolifts as not a literal representation but a storytelling shortcut. But yeah, the action scene in the finale is physically impossible unless all that big empty space is real.
But for that to be real, the ship would have to be like several miles long and a half-mile wide. Argh.
But…enough nitpicking. I love the show, I really enjoyed the season overall and loved the majority of it. Love this cast, love these characters (but want to know the bridge crew better), love the potential for the show. If I had one wish, besides that Saru stay a main cast member, it would be that the show takes just one season at least to skip the season-long story format and just do a season of planet-of-the-week episodes otherwise unconnected to each other.
Let’s fly.
I realize we’re in the age of Premium TV™ and the bigger budget per episode means they can put more wham-bang in them, but I really miss the longer 20+ episode seasons of the older series. It’s been three seasons and I feel like I barely know any of the secondary bridge regulars. Non-bridge main cast like Stamets and Culber are characters I know a little about, but nowhere near like we knew La Forge and Crusher after S3 of TNG.
Heck, even the main cast are still underdeveloped in comparison. Can anyone tell me off the top of their head what Burnham’s hobbies or secondary interests are, aside from saving the day and playing by her own rules? Because I can name 3-5 for Picard or Sisko that were well-established by the end of S3.
Sure, churning out 25 episodes in a season meant that there were 5-10 mediocre or worse episodes every season, but the flip-side was that the secondary characters got storylines and development, and we got to “hang out” with the crew a lot more. With the shorter seasons, everything has to be Driving The Plot and we don’t get nearly as much of a chance to breathe. Even the character scenes (the mess hall, etc.) is put into the service of high-stakes (for the characters) plot-driven character development like Detmer’s PTSD, instead of getting those little low- or no-stakes moments like Data watching water boil to test the “watched pot never boils” adage, or the officers’ poker game.
Maybe that’s not a knock on Discovery per se, but on the TV age we live in. But it’s something I really feel like we’re missing on Discovery in comparison to previous Treks.
While this is the first season of DISCOVERY I’ve watched in ‘Real Time’ (i.e. on an as-they-come basis), I’ve been playing catch-up for long enough to agree that this is definitely the Best to date (and hopefully only the first stage of Even Better Things to come; hopefully we’ll get an explanation for that cosmic lullaby in the next Season, if nothing else).
Everyone else seems to have hit all the other High Points like a champion boxer, so I can only close here by invoking our favourite new Queen Grudge the First and the truly shameful failure to mention her in that otherwise excellent list of valuable new additions to this series! (krad, I say this in sorrow* and not in anger). (-;
*Also, it need hardly be said, in mischief …
I freely admit, there should’ve been more Grudge — both onscreen and in my reviews. I’ll try to rectify that for season four…..
—Keith R.A. DeCandido
ALSO, @krad, may I please ask if you’ve ever posted your thoughts on ANDROMEDA in more detail elsewhere on the Internet? – I was recently introduced to the show and have developed a soft spot for it, even thought its not hard to see it as a production that never quite lived up to its potential.
Should you decide to give ENTERPRISE a miss after completing the VOYAGER re-watch, you could do worse than to give ANDROMEDA the same sort of season-by-season (as opposed to episode-by-episode) treatment you did STARGATE SG1.
Er, it’s weird enough when this series overdoes it with the group smiles and pats on the back like something from a feel-good corporate retreat. Now they’re decked out in gray North Korean uniforms? I’d like to gently remind the showrunners that while Star Trek has cult following, it’s not an actual cult.
ED: No, I haven’t posted much about Andromeda anywhere. I will say that, having written a novel in that universe and getting to look at the bible Robert Hewitt Wolfe put together for it, the show in its early seasons was a fascinating contrast between the hard-science SF show with many aliens and realistic technology that Robert wanted to do versus the low-budget, shoot-em-up space opera with mostly humans and aliens with bad makeup that Tribune Entertainment was actually capable of (and really only interested in) doing.
—Keith R.A. DeCandido
I’m surprised to see people keep talking about the lullaby as unresolved – “The Sanctuary” spelled out clearly that it’s the Federation distress call tone of Su’Kal’s ship, distorted by the nebula into a tune. It was a pretty underwhelming resolution, but it was resolved!
Season Four: Bajor, Cardassia and the Dominion? After 800 years we could be talking about the Bajoran Occupation of Cardassia after Bajor hired a Jem’Hadar mercenary army. What would the Prophets think? <grins>
@13/krad: I was disappointed that I never got the chance to do an Andromeda novel, something that built on that marvelous worldbuilding they did that was much better than the show we got. So much wasted potential there.
@14/Releeh: I’m not sure I’d call that resolution so much as abandonment. Why would the distress signal manifest as music? Why would it be embedded in people’s minds? It feels like the intent was that it was something from Su’Kal’s memory that was transmitted in his subspace scream, but it fell by the wayside.
Although I still think it was weak as hell to try to pass off “Why do so many unrelated people know the same tune?” as if there were anything mysterious about it. There are lots of old tunes that everyone knows, like “Happy Birthday” or Beethoven’s 5th. It’s an utterly mundane thing that Burnham shouldn’t have found strange or inexplicable.
There’s a challenge to what they’re trying to do here with a serialized story and an ensemble/not-really-an-ensemble cast.
The not-really-an-ensemble cast idea should finally be killed off after this season. We have Burnham as captain, which makes the character more believable and justifies the story focus on her. We’ve done a few episodes without some main title characters without throwing the story away. These two things should help focus the story and allow space for us to explore the crew a bit more.
Now we just need them to avoid some of the poor effects decisions. This season we had programmable matter (great idea, great effect, well done!) and the turbolift fiasco.
I’d like to approach this by talking about what I want to see next season and beyond. An arc about rebuilding the Federation would be welcome. This season ended with Earth still isolationist and not even getting a mention in the final episode.
1. Worldbuilding has to be beefed up considerably. There was some very well done bits of it here, especially the reunification payoff of Ni’Var, but not nearly enough. When a show like The Expanse has richer politics and diplomacy than anything we saw on Discovery, something has fallen by the wayside. Earth didn’t even know the Belters… excuse me, the raiders attacking Earth were from the outer planets in the system.
Maybe Pike’s Enterprise show will fill that gap, showing us more exploration and diplomacy. But that is a ways off. Maybe Saru’s return as an ambassador, which is already being hinted at in some interviews, enables some expanded worldbuilding.
2. Lower the stakes. The tendency to always go “ALL or Nothing” is detrimental to the storytelling. I’d even call it juvenile, in the sense that it would fly as a story meant for children. Hire some reputable astrophysicists as advisors. Send the writers’ room to take some astronomy and physics remedial courses (sorry, saying that out of annoyance). Completely give up on one little crew and the-ship-that-could affecting the multiverse, or all life, or an entire galaxy.
Establish some believable stakes. Good drama can result from establishing better boundaries to any threats they face.
A corollary to this is to establish a better sense of scale. If something happens in the Beta Quadrant, don’t say Alpha Quadrant as a “comfortable and familiar” shorthand. Some tie-in novelists are far better at this. John Jackson Miller for sure. Hoping James Swallow’s new book tying in to Picard and Riker’s time as captain of the Titan doesn’t disappoint me in that regard. If the story involves the Romulan neutral zone, it’s not happening in the Alpha Q.
3. Develop some of the bridge crew more. Culber has been very well served by this season. He’s my favorite Doctor in all of Trek at the moment. Make him CMO already. Also, give us a Chief Engineer already. It’s one thing wanting to move away from previous paradigms to establish your own identity, but what if there’s nothing wrong with those paradigms? It’s led to some odd and awkward scenes where senior staff is entirely absent from places it would have been natural to see them.
Saru’s captain’s table had lower rank officers and even included a person with questionable status (Georgiou). Burnham’s entry on the bridge had a lineup of people present because they are in the main credits. Lt. Nilsson would have been naturally involved in some of the events in the last three episodes, but was entirely absent without explanation, replaced by some random crew member we haven’t seen before.
4. Do better with the graphics and VFX. The choices being made are terrible way too often. Some of it relates to the lack of scaling mentioned earlier. Some of it suggests the artists think they are working on a fantasy show, where wizards who live in floating castles in the sky are real. Get more rigorous about what actually shows up on screen. Space is vast and mostly empty. There’s nothing wrong with showing that.
Replace the vendors or developers who have those tendencies. Or constrain whoever is approving these effects.
I truly want to love this show. This season kept up my enthusiasm the longest, which I guess is to its credit. But each of the three seasons so far has deflated my interest by the end. I’m actually not sure how much I’ll stick with next season if it persists in following its flaws.
The show is in a perfect position to transition to being more a “planet of the week” like TOS, but with each planet tying in (perhaps somewhat loosely) to the main season long plotline.
@18/Sunspear: “This season ended with Earth still isolationist and not even getting a mention in the final episode.”
I don’t consider Earth essential. TOS got by just fine without ever visiting Earth (except through time travel); indeed, it was the show’s specific policy to avoid showing future Earth and getting too specific in its predictions about it. And there are plenty of other science fiction universes that don’t center on Earth, such as Asimov’s Empire/Foundation series in a far future where Earth has been forgotten; Banks’s Culture series where the “humans” are actually humanoid aliens and Earth is a relatively recent contact of the Culture that infrequently comes up; and TV series like Firefly, where Earth has been abandoned, or Killjoys, another remote future where humanity’s birth world is no longer remembered.
The idea of a Federation that’s moved away from Earth and become a truly galactic civilization is one I think would be worth pursuing. Unfortunately, the Federation we’ve been shown is still far too dominated by humans, most of whom have Western names. That still needs work.
“Lower the stakes. The tendency to always go “ALL or Nothing” is detrimental to the storytelling.”
I’d say the stakes were already lowered this season. It was less about preventing the total destruction of the Federation or the universe and more about rebuilding civilization. Okay, there was a token threat in the finale of Osyraa seeking to destroy HQ and the Federation with it, but that only came up in the finale rather than driving the whole season. The driving thread of the season’s arc was not “We’re all doomed if we don’t fix this,” but “We need to understand what happened and how to move beyond it.”
And we were all expecting the cause of the Burn to be some huge, powerful enemy out to destroy everything, and it turned out to be a tragic accident caused by a young boy’s grief at the loss of his mother. As someone who did lose my mother when I was a boy, I don’t want to call that lower stakes, but it was certainly far more intimate than we expected.
“Hire some reputable astrophysicists as advisors.”
I think they already do have science advisors. The problem is that advisors can only advise; the producers are perfectly free to ignore their advice. Look at VGR: “Demon,” which we covered so recently. That episode was actually written by VGR’s scientific advisor, but the showrunners rejected his plan to make it about a dilithium shortage and imposed the ludicrous notion of a deuterium shortage because they thought it was funnier to “run out of gas.”
@CLB: by lower stakes I’m talking about the scope of the Burn, not the cause. I lost my mom to cancer right after college, so I certainly wouldn’t belittle the emotional event that they used as a trigger. That’s perfectly fine. Saying the effect was galaxy wide is the problem.
@21/Sunspear: But that’s not about the height of the stakes, just their breadth. It’s galaxywide, sure, but it’s not about saving the galaxy from imminent total destruction, simply about helping it recover from a disaster that already happened 120 years before. I find that refreshingly low-key by comparison.
And in the fourth millennium, when civilization has probably become galaxywide anyway (at least pre-Burn), something being galaxywide isn’t as big a deal as it would’ve been in the 23rd century.
Hey, two-dimensional stakes!
In the olden days, the fate of one planet or even one person was big enough to tell a story about. But that was before the advent of season-long stories. Apparently, as stories grow in length, they have to grow in breadth and height too. For whatever reason.
@22. ChristopherLBennett: I’d make a joke about a Galaxywide disaster being even bigger by the 31st century, given the Galaxy is expanding over time, but I’m too terrified to run the risk of your vast fund of scientific knowledge falling on my head like a hawk on a hare because my slender scientific knowledge simply isn’t up to the challenge of making it a good joke!
@24/ED: Wise move. The galaxy isn’t expanding over time; the universe is, moving galaxies further apart from one another. And it’s way too slow to make a difference in a paltry 8-9 centuries.
@@.-@. krad: “Good show, jolly good show, as you were Dahar Master” (Salutes, then wanders off).
@13. krad: I have to say that if nothing else the characters, if not necessarily the production design, did an excellent job of selling the ANDROMEDA … Galaxies? Triangulum? as an inherently shifty and not especially trustworthy place (is there anyone, except perhaps dear old Rev Bem, who wasn’t secretly scheming, plotting and/or indulging in criminal hijinks?); in an odd sort of way one feels that the rather severe budget sometimes helped convey the idea of a setting running on fumes (just what sort of fumes it’s probably better not to ask), pretension to better things and a wealth of raw desperation.
Also, credit where it’s due, ANDROMEDA had Tony Todd as the local Jonathan Archer, so it gets brownie points for that if nothing else (and I can think of at least a few other things about the show I enjoyed, if given the question and a minute or two to sort the serious from the purely mischievous).
@16. ChristopherLBennett: Oooh, what-might-have-beens! (-:
Mr Bennett, I know that you’re always loathe to suggest your ideas where some reprobate could saunter in and walk away with them, so might I please ask what specifically attracted you to Andromeda‘s world-building instead?
@26/ED: Andromeda as originally conceived was a rich hard science fiction universe of a sort that had probably never been depicted on TV before, the kind of science-savvy, plausible space opera that I usually write. Hard SF on television is vanishingly rare; the one other significant hard-SF space series I can think of on TV is The Expanse.
The thing that really won me over was the All Systems University Library website that’s archived here:
http://www.saveandromeda.com/allsystems/
You can see for yourself how rich the worldbuilding and backstory were. That site was online months before the show premiered, and the producers had an active online presence on the message boards, so I was part of a whole fan community that was built up online before the show even started. The series itself was kind of disappointing compared to the preliminary hype, but knowing what lay behind the limited stuff we saw onscreen helped keep me invested.
I think with the 2 part mirror universe episode in this season that I’m completely burnt out on the Mirror Universe, so much so that I can’t even watch TOS’ Mirror Mirror, and I know that its a classic. But the mirror universe has just been done to death and at this point I hope they stop going to the MU in Discovery (and every other future Trek as well.)
Other than that, it was a pretty decent season I thought.
To be honest, I felt a little burnt by this whole season. It started really well, and the episode on Vulcan/Ni’var was fantastic. But the premise for the whole season felt drawn out and watching both older series and now the expanse I feel the whole season should have been done in 2 or 3 episodes so there was some time to actually deal with the consequences. Like, there is a whole population of empaths who can act as navigators in the mycelial networks, what do the crew do when they aren’t praising each other incessantly for being brave over stirring music, what does the federation actually do nowadays (and why is it still mostly human?), what are the moral challenges for the federation moving from post-scarcity back to scarcity? Interesting and promising characters were introduced and then given nothing to do, but two episodes given over to a pointless trip to the mirror universe that has zero consequence to the crew or the story. The crew as a whole remain barely more than ciphers and underwritten – Detmer’s PTSD disappears because of one trip to the doctor. The ridiculous turbo lift sequence. The show has always had a lot of promise, I like the crew, but it always seems to fall short of its best ideas.
@21
Yes, I’ve been struck by how enormous the story elements have been in Discovery and Picard. Not even the Star Trek movies, which could be fairly operatic, had something to affect the entire galaxy, at least as boldly as we see here. It’s all a bit silly.
@30/Arlo: I think it depends on the context. As with all things, it’s not whether you use an idea that matters, but how you use it, whether it’s necessary and valuable to do it that way. If you want to tell a story about preventing a disaster or massive loss of life, it’s enough to do it on the level of one world or several; putting the fate of the entire Federation or galaxy or universe at stake is a gratuitous exaggeration.
But in the case of the Burn, the galactic scope was necessary. After all, it’s the far future where civilization has presumably spread galaxywide. If the Burn had only been local, it would’ve been easy enough to recover from it by trading with neighboring powers for their dilithium. So the only way the premise would work is if it were galaxywide.
Also, it’s not about preventing the disaster, but about coping with its long-term aftereffects. That’s not operatic at all. It’s far more nuanced. All the big, massive changes already happened generations ago; this season was about our characters learning about them and being affected by them. Burnham’s need to solve the mystery of the Burn wasn’t really essential for saving the Federation; it did happen to lead them to a whole new dilithium source, but that was by accident. Burnham said she didn’t think the Federation could really heal until the cause was understood, but that reasoning was vague; really, it was more just her personal need to understand it. If she hadn’t pursued that quest, it wouldn’t have led to the end of the galaxy; it would’ve just left the status quo pretty much intact. What she and the rest of the crew achieved over the season was not about averting Armageddon, but just about finding a way to make people’s lives better.
One wonders what the galaxy spanning threat will be in Season Four.
I ask myself, is a loose cannon like Burnham really what you want in a Captain? Is the thinking; if she can’t follow order let her give them?
There’s a theory going round that there won’t be a fourth season. Seems ratings haven’t been great.
@32/roxana: “One wonders what the galaxy spanning threat will be in Season Four.”
There wasn’t a galaxy-spanning threat in season 3. Just the aftermath of a century-old galaxy-spanning disaster. That’s not a threat, that’s a setting. The only continuing threat this season was the Emerald Chain, and that was only an intermittent factor in the stories.
“There’s a theory going round that there won’t be a fourth season. Seems ratings haven’t been great.”
Did you get that from the YouTube conspiracy nuts who are always claiming everything’s been cancelled? Season 4 has been in production since November 2.
Quoth princessroxana: “There’s a theory going round that there won’t be a fourth season. Seems ratings haven’t been great.”
No there isn’t. There’s nonsense perpetuated by the contingent of hardcore haters who have been insisting for three years now that Alex Kurtzman is about to get fired. Anyhow, season four started production two months ago, so the notion doesn’t even come close to the rigor necessary to be a theory. Hell, it isn’t even a hypothesis. It’s, as I said, utter total nonsense.
—Keith R.A. DeCandido
And I say that setting is too large, too far flung for its own good.
I never would’ve imagined the first live-action Star Wars television series would be more disciplined and down-scaled than the current Star Trek series, but here we are. Strange times.
@36/Arlo: “And I say that setting is too large, too far flung for its own good.”
In the abstract, perhaps, but in execution, hardly. We didn’t see that many worlds this season, and several were familiar Federation worlds. There were typically just one or two locations per episode, not that different from a typical season; how far apart they were in space was as irrelevant to the storytelling as it’s always been, except insofar as giving Discovery an excuse to be involved due to its spore drive. Which is actually a pretty decent use of the spore drive concept.
If anything, the Burn made the galaxy effectively much smaller for most people, because they lost the means to travel very far, and most matters were reduced to being local.
But in the case of the Burn, the galactic scope was necessary. After all, it’s the far future where civilization has presumably spread galaxywide. If the Burn had only been local, it would’ve been easy enough to recover from it by trading with neighboring powers for their dilithium. So the only way the premise would work is if it were galaxywide.
Lemme toss this out here….if it had been local, they could recover, maybe….but maybe only at the cost of bankrupting the Federation and reducing it to a minor power in the area, and certainly not remain as a major player.
I wonder how that’d work our as an environment, and whether you could tell Trek stories in there. It’s much harder to be optimistic and to have hope when your side is doomed to be a minor player and there’s no way to lead onward and upward by a ship armed only by its ideals.
@38/gwangung: Yes, they could’ve done it that way, but that would be a very different story. They didn’t want to tell a story about the Federation being marginalized or subjugated by another power; they wanted to tell a story about the Federation itself, what it was like in this new era and whether it could be put back together. That was the theme of the season — the value of connection, and the cost of losing it. It wasn’t about being “bankrupted” (whatever that means in a post-scarcity era where you have programmable matter) or weakened in political power. It was about being fragmented, about formerly united worlds becoming split apart and isolated. It wasn’t about resisting a rival or enemy; there was the Emerald Chain, but it was more a nuisance, a predator capitalizing on the void left by the Federation’s loss of unity. The real problem, of which the Chain was just a symptom, was the fragmentation and insularity of the various worlds.
@CLB: “But that’s not about the height of the stakes, just their breadth.”
Methinks you’re either being facetious or overly literal again. Saying galaxy wide wasn’t meant literally, as in how Khan (Doesn’t Think in 3 Dimensions) Montalban would say it. As I’ve said previously, I don’t accept the technobabble explanation for the Burn at all.
What we have here is an OCP:
“An Outside Context Problem was the sort of thing most civilisations encountered just once, and which they tended to encounter rather in the same way a sentence encountered a full stop.”
— Iain M. Banks, Excession
Season 2 had the threat of Control exterminating ALL LIFE coming from the future, yet they were dealing with it in the story’s present. Same here, only it happened in the past. The huge all encompassing threat is still part of the season.
Maybe next season they can scale it back even more and have the stakes confined to a planet or singular solar system. Or contain the action within a nebula as Jackson Miller did in his Pike novel.
@20:
“Unfortunately, the Federation we’ve been shown is still far too dominated by humans, most of whom have Western names. “
Care must be taken, though, Europeans should not be given BIPOC names. That would be a hideous act of cultural appropriation.
Instead, in future seasons, we should see a future Earth without Europeans. Give us a future Earth filled with Nigerians, Bangladeshis, and Chinese.
@40/Sunspear: “Same here, only it happened in the past. The huge all encompassing threat is still part of the season.”
As I already said, what matters isn’t simply whether a device is used, but how it’s used. The same ingredient can work totally differently in two different contexts. In season 2, the disaster was the immediate threat they were addressing directly; in season 3, the disaster was deep background that happened long ago, and they were dealing with its consequences on a local, cultural, and ultimately a deeply personal scale.
It’s like the difference between, say, Fail Safe, which is about trying to prevent an imminent nuclear war, and Roddenberry’s Genesis II, about trying to rebuild society a century and a half after a nuclear war. Or the difference between, say, an action story about a mother trying to save her son from being murdered in two hours and a drama about a mother who’s fallen into alcoholic despair since her son was murdered three years ago. They’re two totally different ways of dealing with the premise, because they’re approaching it from opposite ends and very different distances. They’re not equivalent at all.
“Maybe next season they can scale it back even more and have the stakes confined to a planet or singular solar system.”
The physical scale of a story is singularly irrelevant. That’s superficial. What matters is the character impact and the thematic substance. This season was mostly focused on individual characters; the larger galactic issues were just the backdrops for the character stories. The mystery of the Burn was a McGuffin that drove Burnham’s character arc and led to Saru bonding with Su’Kal and learning of his personal tragedy. The isolation of Earth and Trill was the background that drove Adira’s arc of coming to terms with having a Trill symbiont, and Gray’s arc of struggling to cope with being basically dead, and that in turn led to Stamets and Culber’s arc of adopting them as a surrogate child. (We need a non-gendered word for an adult offspring.)
re 39:
I was mostly thinking out loud, but I think I was pointing out that a galaxy wide problem puts everyone on the same level and allows them to tell more Trek-like stories.(And a post scarcity economy can revert when the basis for that post-scarcity disappears). A local problem either, as you say, gets sidestepped via trade with neighbors….which is dull, boring and has no story potential. Or, if you have permanent effects, will splinter the Federation and leave it permanently marginalized, which most certainly leads to a different set of stories.
But a galaxy wide problem leaves possibilities open where the emphasis of Federation values become important ways to solve problems and drive stories in very obvious ways, which I consider more more Trek-like than the other possibility.
Again, thinking out loud and suggesting the scale is a necessary part of being able to tell Trek stories this season.
@CLB: “They’re two totally different ways of dealing with the premise, because they’re approaching it from opposite ends and very different distances. They’re not equivalent at all.”
“The mystery of the Burn was a McGuffin”
The Burn is not a McGuffin. (What’s that quote from Princess Bride about using certain words…?) It’s completely relevant to the state of the Federation as we find it after Discovery’s jump. It’s an OCP that must be solved. That the solution to the mystery box is more prosaic than cosmic is disappointing. Kurtzman’s tendency to not adequately solve mystery boxes has been there throughout his career (see Lost). At least we got something this time.
There’s nothing inherently bad about using OCPs. Q is an OCP. Q’s introduction of the Borg is a nested OCP. Species 8472 is an OCP to the Borg. If the writers of Discovery used such galactic level threats in a more judicious manner, contextualizing them better, rather than always going to extremes, we’d have better storytelling.
I get that you’re processing the season on your own storytelling terms. There’s nothing wrong with that. But eventually we reach a point where critique falls by the wayside, because you seem to want to apologize for their shortcomings.
I would say that there was no urgency at the end of season 2 either. Control had been destroyed/contained. Many have said there was no need for Discovery to make the time jump. It was manufactured urgency and high drama for the sake of drama (and of course to trigger the soft reboot). Burnham was the driver, just as here, once again, it’s her personal need that drives her to solve the Burn. No one else, in over a century, thought to gather “black boxes”?
You’re right that these backdrops serve to drive character stories. But when the bigger picture is considered, it falls way short. I don’t consider such larger questions irrelevant by any means. They are inherently part of the appeal of any story set outside the bounds of planetary Earth. In other words, don’t make galactic claims if you’re going to zoom in for close-ups and not provide satisfying answers. Tell those more intimate stories instead and stop playing in the bigger sandbox.
@42/Christopher: “The physical scale of a story is singularly irrelevant.”
Well, quite a few people wished for lower (slimmer?) stakes in these comment sections. So the singularly irrelevant matters to some.
“This season was mostly focused on individual characters; the larger galactic issues were just the backdrops for the character stories.”
And that’s a pity. In its heyday Star Trek used to be very good at combining the personal and the political/philosophical, creating SF parables around believable characters. Those were the stories I came to Star Trek for. But perhaps they can only be done in an episodic format.
@18: “If a story occurs in the Romulan neutral zone, it’s not happening in the Alpha Q.”
I’m fully expecting to be jumped on for saying this, but there are still a few of us who think the TV shows get this right and the novels and guide books get it wrong. I find myself clenching every time a novel tries to claim that the Federation or the Klingons or the Romulans are in the Beta Quadrant despite the many many times that Deep Space Nine and Voyager referred to them as being in the Alpha Quadrant. I would love it if Star Trek fandom learned to let go of something that was mentioned in a series bible 30 or so years ago and promptly ignored by every writers’ room since in favour of a more easy to understand use of the terminology. (If it concerns the Federation and its neighbours, it’s in the Alpha Quadrant. Simple. No need to get a made-up map of a fictional area of space out and work out which side of a line you’re on.)
@cap: ” I would love it if Star Trek fandom learned to let go of something that was mentioned in a series bible 30 or so years ago and promptly ignored by every writers’ room since in favour of a more easy to understand use of the terminology”
It’s not that hard to understand. It’s just two quadrants on a map.
What would you suggest STO do with its galaxy map? It’s still a live and ongoing game. Some pessimists give it two years, but there’s always naysayers and doomsayers.
The areas controlled by the Klingon or Romulan Empires have never encroached into the Alpha quadrant. They’ve always been entirely contained in the Beta Q. If you measure the distances involved, it was absolutely ridiculous that both Romulans and Klingons got involved in the Dominion war. The distances they crossed so casually to get to DS9 rivaled Voyager’s journey. It should have taken them many years to go back and forth.
So sure, shortcuts for dramatic purposes were employed. But as I’ve been consistently saying, why not just reduce the volumes of space involved in these series. Confine them to the Orion Arm and there would be far less bad science employed. Otherwise, you get silly concepts like a drive that surfs the mushroom highway.
@42/CLB:
Those are two of the things that matter, yes, but for anything branded as Star Trek, not the only things. This show is (a) science fiction/space opera/future and (b) part of an ongoing franchise, which means it has to (or at least, many of its viewers would prefer that it) achieve additional goals like “worldbuilding” and “fits into/believably extends history” and “allegory on contemporary issues” and “mood” — and I’d hardly call those “superficial.”
I agree with @Sunspear that those topics could be addressed more effectively on a smaller stage, because the season’s large redefinition (“the Federation has fragmented”) doesn’t resonate — we’ve never had a good baseline for an intact UFP. It’s always been shorthand for “us versus them” in political allegories.
Personally, I’d’ve preferred that the season premise be “Discovery arrives in the future, society is working fine, and the challenge is to learn about its changes and find a new place within it” — without a season-long mystery arc, and without armed conflict. That would provide space for more intimate stories that focus on individual characters and places, in the classic TNG-DS9-VOY mold. If Kaminar has joined the Federation, does Saru finally get a chance to visit home? How have familiar cities on Mars changed? Do you bother looking up your distant family? How does this future society deal with cultural-throwback immigrants? How has the nature of “humanity” changed, vis-a-vis biotech modification?
(The season did some of this — Detmer’s PTSD, the clumsy Earth-Titan conflict, Trill’s secession — but IMHO, the balance was away from such stories.)
If the show wanted to do a political allegory inspired by Brexit or political tensions that have always simmered in the U.S. (and could think of an angle distinct from PIC), Discovery could’ve arrived during a secession debate. The crew finds themselves sympathizing with different factions, and the factions find Discovery to be several kinds of useful evidence.
@44/Sunspear: “The Burn is not a McGuffin.”
You took my statement out of context. I said it was a MacGuffin for Burnham’s personal journey. She didn’t really have any personal need to know why the Burn happened. It had no connection to her own life, and the writers could’ve focused her on a different goal like rebuilding the Federation, finding her mother, wrestling with whether she still fit into Starfleet, whatever. But they chose to have her formulate the rather arbitrary belief that the Federation couldn’t rebuild until the origin of the Burn was solved. So within the specific, narrow context of Michael Burnham’s character arc, it was a MacGuffin in the sense that it was an arbitrary motivation for her character, something that could easily have been replaced with a different motivating goal.
“But eventually we reach a point where critique falls by the wayside, because you seem to want to apologize for their shortcomings.”
You know, I seem to recall a debate earlier this season where you wondered if I might hurt my career prospects by critiquing the show too harshly. Now you’re accusing me of being too soft on it. I think you just like to pick arbitrary fights with me, and I wish you’d stop.
I’m happy to call them out on their shortcomings — the ludicrous and overindulgent visual effects, the waste of time of Georgiou’s inclusion in the season, the weakness of Osyraa and the Emerald Chain as a recurring threat. I just don’t think the idea of the Burn is a shortcoming. As I’ve explained, I think it’s simplistic to equate it with other galactic-scale crises, because it serves a totally different narrative purpose and exists in a totally different context.
“In other words, don’t make galactic claims if you’re going to zoom in for close-ups and not provide satisfying answers. Tell those more intimate stories instead and stop playing in the bigger sandbox.”
But that’s the whole point. It’s a feature in this case, not a bug. This is a story about a civilization that used to be operating on a galactic level but has lost that. As I said, as the producers have said in interviews, the theme of the season was the loss of connection and the effort to rebuild it.
@45/Jana: “Well, quite a few people wished for lower (slimmer?) stakes in these comment sections. So the singularly irrelevant matters to some.”
My point is that they’re conflating two separate questions. The stakes of a narrative are not just about its absolute physical scale. That’s superficial. It’s proportional to the scope of the world the characters occupy. If it’s a historical tale set in Ancient Egypt, say, then it only has to affect the northeast corner of Africa or thereabouts in order to encompass the characters’ entire universe. But to a character from a galaxy-spanning interstellar civilization, a threat to a corner of one continent on Earth would be trivial in scope. That’s what I mean when I say the absolute physical scale is irrelevant to the stakes of a story.
And since it’s logical that the 31st-century Federation would have spread its communications, travel, and commerce to most or all of the galaxy, it’s therefore necessary for the physical scale of the Burn narrative to be in proportion to that. It’s not arbitrary; it’s in proportion to the setting.
And that’s why the breadth of the stakes is different from their height. The breadth of the problem is proportional to the breadth of the characters’ world, so it cancels out. What matters is how severe the effect on their world would be. Yes, the story here affected the entire galaxy, but it wasn’t about a life-or-death threat to the characters’ entire known universe. It was just about improving the quality of life in that universe. I call those much lower stakes.
“And that’s a pity.”
I wasn’t saying it as a criticism. A story about grand astropolitical events only has meaning as a narrative if there is a personal stake, if it affects a character that we care about. That’s what makes it a story rather than just a history textbook.
As I said, this was not a story about saving the galaxy. The galaxy already suffered the disaster. This is a story about helping people recover from it and improve their lives again. That’s totally different, and much better.
@51/Christopher: “I wasn’t saying it as a criticism.”
No. But I was.
I don’t agree that a story only has meaning if it affects a character we care about. One of my favourite Star Trek traits is that the characters themselves care about strangers, and thus make us care about strangers, too. We don’t care about the Horta until Kirk does, and the events in “The Devil in the Dark” don’t affect Kirk (except for some generic danger). “A Taste of Armageddon” originally included a love story between Kirk and Mea; cutting the love story and focusing on the general antiwar message made it a better story. Personal stakes can be fine, but they shouldn’t be required, and they shouldn’t be ubiquitous. Turning a grand astropolitical event into the backdrop for a personal story may even trivialise the grand astropolitical event.
@CLB: “And since it’s logical that the 31st-century Federation would have spread its communications, travel, and commerce to most or all of the galaxy, it’s therefore necessary for the physical scale of the Burn narrative to be in proportion to that. It’s not arbitrary; it’s in proportion to the setting.”
“Yes, the story here affected the entire galaxy”
No, that’s still an assumption. The Federation at 350 members at its height, however many total worlds (homeworlds plus ten adjacent systems? 100 other planets for each member?) are included in the actual numbers, is a very, very far cry from the billions of worlds out there. It simply does not scale as a galactic power. It’s orders of magnitude lesser.
As far as objecting to what you’ve said in the past, it’s about the consistency. Your sharpest complaints were for Georgiou’s inclusion, which is specifically what I was referring to. Even there you were inconsistent when complimenting a space dictator on her appearance in the medical catsuit.
Part of your process as you’ve described in the past is to absorb what’s presented on screen and tailor it to your particular needs, either for private understanding or for future story purposes. That does not mean that it’s the only way to look at it. It’s a subjective process. Others can disagree and see something a different way or see something you don’t.
So yeah, I tend to read what you write with qualifiers in mind.
@52/Jana: “I don’t agree that a story only has meaning if it affects a character we care about. One of my favourite Star Trek traits is that the characters themselves care about strangers, and thus make us care about strangers, too.”
But… that is a story about characters we care about. I never said it was limited to characters we previously cared about. My point all along has been that the stories focused on the individual 32nd-century people affected by the larger galactic story — Book, the miners in “Far from Home,” Adira and Gray, the Trill guardian, Vance, Ryn, etc. — culminating in the climactic arc that resolved the Burn narrative, not in some big impersonal story about an evil enemy trying to destroy everything, but in the most profoundly personal way imaginable, with the whole Burn being the manifestation of one boy’s unbearable grief.
That’s why this is better than the previous seasons’ galactic-scale threats. Because it wasn’t an imminent danger driving an action story, it was a backdrop for telling these character stories about the people and communities of the post-Burn era and how Discovery helped them.
“Turning a grand astropolitical event into the backdrop for a personal story may even trivialise the grand astropolitical event.”
I disagree. What trivializes it is failing to explore its consequences. Look at “The Changeling.” Nomad eradicated an entire star system with billions of people living in it, but that horrific tragedy was ignored — trivialized — because we never saw any of the Malurians affected by it. But Star Trek: The Manga gave us the story “Communications Breakdown,” which took us to the surface of the dead planet and let us see how the disaster affected one of the few surviving Malurians who’d been offworld at the time. That made the destruction of Maluria feel less trivial, because we actually saw its impact.
FWIW, Sunspear, I’m on cap-mjb’s side of this argument. Prior to this past year, the Beta Quadrant was mentioned onscreen precisely once, as a far-off place that the Excelsior was in for the three years prior to The Undiscovered Country, and all the onscreen evidence prior to Picard (mainly dialogue in DS9 and Voyager, particularly in “By Inferno’s Light” and “Eye of the Needle,” though also in many many many many other places),indicated that the Klingon Empire and the Romulan Star Empire are also both in the Alpha Quadrant.
—Keith R.A. DeCandido
@55/krad: “all the onscreen evidence prior to Picard…”
Not all of it. This map from DSC season 1 put Klingon space in Beta:
As for the rest, you can’t reasonably expect dialogue to be geographically accurate and reliable. People use all sorts of shorthands and imprecise references. We call Europe “the West” even though nearly all of it is in the Eastern Hemisphere. We use “America” to refer solely to the United States instead of the entire North and South American continents. The Mideast is geographically part of Asia, but people who talk about “Asians” rarely intend to include Israelis or Syrians or Iranians in the category.
I think it takes away from the verisimilitude of a fictional universe if you demand that every single spoken word be interpreted as literally correct. Real people get things wrong all the time. They speak inaccurately, they make mistakes, they believe things that are wrong, they lie, etc. So I prefer to believe that fictional characters sometime misspeak and say incorrect or imprecise things, because that makes their world more believable.
Worse series so far, possibly lagging under Enterprise. The constant focused high emotion small plays between some of the characters swamped main story stagnating it. Burnham seems to really struggle to be expressive and just lowers the volume of her voice. The only character in the whole thing who I enjoyed watching was Georgiou and they shoved her out! Absolutely everyone else looked lost as to what they were supposed to be doing, what was supposed to be going on and what the aim was. Forced poor acting. It was a chore to make it through each episode.
I would like to say that Star Trek Discovery and Star Trek Picard are not Star Trek at all. Both of them are new shows for this time with no connection to the Star Trek canon. I watched the first season and was disappointed. They are flat, pretty canvasses with lackluster characters and scripts. The fan-made Star Treks I see on Youtube are a lot better and more interesting. The studio, the directors, producers, and everyone behind these shows don’t know what to do about Star Trek and it shows. The “Orville” got it right.
@49: Which seems to me a perfectly good reason for ignoring STO’s map and sticking with the onscreen depiction of the Klingons and Romulans coming from Alpha Quadrant.
@56/clb: Shorthand yes, but what people don’t do is say “Western Hemisphere” when they mean Eastern Hemisphere. “Beta Quadrant” has a precise meaning which is not at all equivalent to “the West”, which has always been used relative to other things, and not to mean “the Western Hemisphere”. People don’t misuse the precise terms except in error, usually down to ignorance – dismissing all the onscreen references as errors by the intelligent, educated characters involved is unreasonable and unjustified, in my opinion. Personally, not that my opinion matters, Star Trek would gain verisimilitude (too late) by saying it takes place in part of one galactic arm, as someone (Sunspear?) suggested. But ST has always had a tough time handling distances consistently.
While I’m disagreeing, I’ll also add that the Burn was not exclusively used as a past event for setting up our stories this season, though I wish that were true. There were hints that it could happen again, and that possibility would forever prevent the Federation’s reformation. Unfortunately, at the end of the season we were asked to get nervous because it might happen again, and might indeed be precipitated by Our Heroes’ efforts to rescue Su’Kal. So again, the perfectly-sufficient and poignant personal stakes were unnecessarily elevated to a galaxy-wide threat again.
As to hopes for the future – it was great to see some clear efforts to flesh out the bridge crew (even though I was screaming at the screen for them to stop talking about their back-stories while running out of air… I know, necessary compromises for storytelling). My hope is that we’ll get to see them carry stories individually– mostly this season (Detmer’s PTSD arc happily excepted) they were given attention only as “the bridge crew” together, as in the last episode, with Owosekun only breaking free for a few minutes.
But I’m hopeful in general, which is better than my state after season 2, and especially after season 1. I mainly got through those two on the strength of Saru.
@krad and cap: basing the analogy on DS9’s Dominion War, it would be like a battlefield in Europe where your allies are coming from two different continents to the west. But surprise, it turns out they were in Europe all along. No need to cross a wide ocean.
That would make DS9 much easier to understand from a… what’s the galactic analogue for “geopolitical”?… perspective. The show works anyway within it’s own context. It’s the fit with the larger Trek universe that’s way off. That those two powers could cross from another quadrant, including crossing the entire Federation, even conflicts with distance as portrayed in its sister show, Voyager, whose foundational notion was that it takes decades at the current parity technology of the three powers to cross such vast gulfs. DS9 needed another wormhole going to the Beta Quad for any “realistic” strategy to bring the other two powers into the war.
Not all tie-in novelists are onboard with following a consistent map either. Jackson Miller is excellent in that regard. His sense of scale and distance is exactly what I’m looking for. I’m loving James Swallow’s new Titan novel, but he’s also making the mistake of locating the Romulan neutral zone in the Alpha Quad. The book features a new race embarking on a species-wide migration on a generation ship “deep into the Beta quadrant,” when they are already in the middle of it and any direction deeper in would involve crossing into Romulan and Klingon territory. The proposed direction of travel would actually take them into the Delta Quad, or if they veer a bit to left of galactic center, the Gamma Quad.
I would not want Mr. Swallow to be my navigator even on a car road trip is what I’m saying. Holding the map upside down saying, “Go north!”, and we end up in South America.
There’s probably no tenable or long-lasting way to streamline all this. The weight of too many errors in past shows, novels, or other tie-in materials is likely too great to overcome.
@Gary: “There were hints that it could happen again, and that possibility would forever prevent the Federation’s reformation.”
Yes, exactly. Su’Kal was a clear and present danger. His minor scream caused Discovery to withdraw and the possibility and risk of another giant dilithium scream was why they treated him so gently and gingerly. The entire drama after he’s discovered hinged on that.
@Sunspear: In your opinion. I would not criticise James Swallow for following the on-screen depiction of how the Alpha Quadrant is positioned. I’m more likely to criticise people who try and fit a square peg into a round hole and insist that areas of space that are routinely portrayed as being just down the road galactically speaking are actually in a different quadrant. The tech people might come up with maps and graphics insisting that the Federation and its neighbours are spread out, but that directly conflicts with the writing, where they seem to be right on top of each other and all share borders. The reality is that no matter how much you pay people to write tie-in books explaining precisely where everything is and how long it takes to travel between them, characters move at the speed of plot, so if characters need to get from the further reaches of the Federation to the Klingon/Romulan border in a matter of hours, they do.
It doesn’t help that The Star Trek Encyclopedia’s sole justification for placing the local powers in two different quadrants (which, judging by your comments, seems to have been revised by STO) was a throwaway line in The Wrath of Khan which could be interpreted several different ways.
@60/Gary: “Shorthand yes, but what people don’t do is say “Western Hemisphere” when they mean Eastern Hemisphere.”
I was not suggesting an exact analogy, because very few analogies are ever meant to be exact. My point was that people use inaccurate geographical references and shorthands in all sorts of ways.
““Beta Quadrant” has a precise meaning…”
Precision is relative. A quadrant of the galaxy is a quarter of a circle about 50,000 light years in radius. Per Star Trek Star Charts, the territory occupied by the Federation and its neighbors extends less than 500 light years to either side of the Alpha/Beta border. So calling the Klingons and Romulans Alpha Quadrant powers is off by less than 1 percent, which is more than enough precision for most purposes. It’s within rounding error, basically.
“People don’t misuse the precise terms except in error, usually down to ignorance”
It’s not ignorance, it’s synecdoche — using a part of a thing to refer to the greater whole (more precisely pars pro toto). This actually happens a lot in geography — “Bosnia” for Bosnia and Herzegovina, “Antigua” for Antigua and Barbados, “Trinidad” for Trinidad and Tobago, etc. Also things like referring to the Soviet Union as “Russia,” the United Kingdom as “Britain,” etc. It’s just a convenient shorthand. It’s easier to say fewer words, so you say “Alpha Quadrant” instead of “the local region straddling portions of the Alpha and Beta Quadrants.”
“While I’m disagreeing, I’ll also add that the Burn was not exclusively used as a past event for setting up our stories this season, though I wish that were true. There were hints that it could happen again, and that possibility would forever prevent the Federation’s reformation.”
I never said “exclusively.” The fact that there were only hints of a renewed danger is my whole point — that it wasn’t the main purpose the concept served, in contrast to the threats that drove seasons 1 & 2.
You’re talking as though this has to be reduced to an all-or-nothing choice, that it should be entirely one thing and that any taint of another thing ruins it altogether. There’s nothing wrong with a concept serving more than one purpose at a time. It’s good for a story device to balance both personal and larger stakes, for one to resonate with the other. Especially if the larger stakes are there to help motivate and intensify the character drama. Sunspear explains that quite well in comment #62.
@63/cap-mjb: “It doesn’t help that The Star Trek Encyclopedia’s sole justification for placing the local powers in two different quadrants (which, judging by your comments, seems to have been revised by STO) was a throwaway line in The Wrath of Khan which could be interpreted several different ways.”
As I’ve been saying, the maps used by those reference books are based on the behind-the-scenes maps used by the TNG art department years before those books came out. I don’t think TWOK had anything to do with it, because they didn’t add the quadrants to the galaxy map until after TNG: “The Price” established the Greek-letter quadrant system we know today.
@54/Christopher: “I never said it was limited to characters we previously cared about.”
Okay.
“Nomad eradicated an entire star system with billions of people living in it, but that horrific tragedy was ignored — trivialized — because we never saw any of the Malurians affected by it.”
I’d say it was trivialised because of the lighthearted tone of much of the episode. It would have worked if the characters had been more horrified throughout. And the surface of a dead planet is impressive even if there are no survivors. But you reminded me that I should reread “Communications Breakdown” one of these days.
@cap: ” characters move at the speed of plot”
Well yes, but that doesn’t equate with good storytelling. See the last couple of season of Game of Thrones for examples, where characters were flitting back and forth over hundreds, even over a thousand, miles in mere hours. There’s a significant amount of analysis about why those were bad choices and how it ruined the storytelling.
I was initially going to say that this sort of thing is more allowable in fantasy as a genre and that Trek is science fantasy. So my desire for more rigorous storytelling in what purports to be a SF franchise is a futile endeavor. But even the best fantasy has ground rules. The best magic systems have well defined rules that enrich the story if followed.
By the way, STO’s map is not invented from whole cloth. It’s officially licensed. Whatever they do is in conjunction with what the license holders allow. It was designed and approved according to what CBS wanted. Almost everything in the game is cross-marketed. It doesn’t exist in a vacuum.
Isn’t the STO map just a revised version of the Star Charts map, adjusted to suit the needs and convenience of a computer game? And of course, Star Charts was done by people who were on the shows’ art staff, so it’s based on the staff’s original behind-the-scenes map. So it’s not like there are completely separate, competing maps. As far as I know, every map variant for the past few decades has been based on those original maps created by the TNG/DS9/etc. art staff.
The earliest version of the map that I’m aware of is in the TNG Writers’ Technical Manual, Third Season Edition, of which I still own a copy. (It’s very different from the published TNG Technical Manual, a loose-bound, photocopied booklet geared toward prospective writers for the show.) The map places the Federation, Klingon Empire, Romulan Empire, and Borg space in the same relative positions that the modern Star Charts and other maps do, though it portrays the first three of those as far, far huger than we now accept (because DS9 hadn’t started treating the Federation border as an easy commute from Earth), and also makes Romulan space far bigger than Klingon space. A larger, color version of this map can be found in Starlog‘s 1992 TNG Technical Journal magazine special. You can see a fan-modified version of it here:
https://www.trekbbs.com/threads/parsecs-in-star-trek-are-they-what-we-think.272386/#post-11106739
Here’s the version of the map by the time of the DS9 Technical Manual, from the German-language edition:
By this point, the quadrant system has been established (of course), and the Romulans and Klingons are clearly shown in Beta. The Romulans are still bigger than the Klingons, but the Federation seems to have shrunk a great deal. And they’re still much larger in proportion to the galaxy than the Star Charts version, though the map might not be to scale.
@64/CLB: Thanks for the considered reply, and (on the imprecise geography) I didn’t intend to imply you were insisting on an exact analogy, only that I disagree with you that this particular use of the term fits comfortably with your analogy as an excuse for characters saying one thing and meaning something very different. I’m familiar with synecdoche, and you make a case for it, but I’m not convinced – I feel you’re giving far too much benefit of the doubt. Notice all of your examples of geographic synecdoche include something entirely contained within the whole used as part of the whole… the Alpha Quadrant is not remotely contained even in your (bit of a reach in my opinion) “local region straddling portions of the Alpha and Beta Quadrants”. Now if we’re talking about using it syntactically, using a part of the phrase to mean the whole, there’s no organic way that phrase would ever be shortened to “Alpha Quadrant” – it would become “local region” more likely, with “local powers” like the Feds and Klingons. It’s a neat attempt at justification, but it’s far to “just so” for me, trying to force a fit that really isn’t there.
“You’re talking as though this has to be reduced to an all-or-nothing choice, that it should be entirely one thing and that any taint of another thing ruins it altogether. There’s nothing wrong with a concept serving more than one purpose at a time.”
I’m in entire agreement with you, ironically, since it was your own insistence that only character effects matter, that geopolitical (galactopolitical?) matters were irrelevant or not worthy of consideration in a story unless they impacted a character, that prompted my comment. Frankly, that’s like saying the science of science fiction doesn’t matter – which is another claim sometimes made. People are allowed to get different things out of their literature (and put different things in!), and character arcs are standard but not obligatory. If you must, you can go ahead and consider “The Federation” a character to reconcile these positions, because some do care what happens to the Federation regardless of its effect on people-characters. That’s where much of Calypso’s impact lay (for some) – its deteriorated Federation wouldn’t matter to any characters we knew, as this took place long after their deaths. But we care about the political entity. To take another example, characters were frankly shallow and generally unimportant in the Foundation series… they weren’t the point. They were a means to a larger storytelling end, not the other way around.
Oh… oh well, unrelated to the above, one more wish for the future of Discovery – please stop with the love of full-face prosthetics at the expense of expression. It’s surely more realistic that aliens are more “alien” and unreadable to humans like myself unfamiliar with, say, Orion body language, but (and here I like CLB’s idea of viewing ST as a dramatization) it’s realism that gets in the way of our experience. Presumably in-universe characters are familiar with alien nonverbal cues, the peculiar scent Klingons emit when they find something ironic-but-not-funny (to make up an example), but we the audience don’t get it. Settle for green makeup and expressive faces we can read – weren’t the downgraded Klingons lesson enough? Please don’t let whatever race we encounter (or re-encounter) next be another cardboard cutout stifling the actor inside.
Yes, sometimes they hit it out of the park for special cases (Saru!). But that’s clearly not feasible for temporary secondary characters.
I think this would go a long way to letting us feel the joy people in the ST universe should experience sometimes. We manage it sometimes with the off-duty Discovery crew (not enough, but improving)… but does anybody else ever laugh? Is anyone ever happy in this future galaxy? Does Osyraa take pleasure in her mustache-twirling villainy? Not that I could tell. For all their faults, all the previous series managed to show that sometimes life is good, even when it’s hard. But actors need to be able to sell that. So give them scripts that include it, and give them faces to show it, please.
And now I just realized I can be accused of saying Osyraa “should smile more”, dang it. Not my point, I’d also be happy with her frowning more (umm, too late). And arguing against myself, I admit that negotiation scene was aces – too bad that complexity was discarded in the end. But on balance, I do think the “aliens” are a pretty (emotionally) flat or dour bunch, and it brings down the tone of the show. I’m not asking for camp or farce, but a bit of light to leaven things.
@CLB: “So it’s not like there are completely separate, competing maps.”
Yes, thank you. Some people are dismissive of references to STO, perhaps because it’s “just a silly game,” forgetting that it’s an approved and licensed product. A lot gets done in tandem with the IP owners, especially this past year. The pandemic lockdown kept many people indoors and significant numbers turned to online games. STO is thriving and is a good marketing tool for the franchise. I’ll pop in to social zones in between missions and often hear discussions of the shows. One time I was in Q’s Winter Wonderland and there was a discussion of Trek novelists. Very informed, too.
@Gary: complete agreement with your points about hiding Osyrra’s face under a full mask. That’s almost a complete fail as a creative decision.
One small detail to add: they finally closed the shuttle bay doors in the final episode. At least, that’s where it seems the screenshot I saw was taken. I didn’t notice while viewing.
Even after the refit, with access to PM, the door never came down. Osyrra after Book’s ship crashes into the bay: “How did a ship end up in my shuttle bay?” “Uh, cause they never close the damn garage door.” “Were they born in a barn?”
The graphics also fight against the rendering of the turbolift void. The visual shows the bay takes up most of the secondary hull, or stardrive. Where’s the vast cavern located? This is why I hope to see either new vendors or someone in production committing to closer supervision of the graphics.
@70/Sunspear: Of course STO is official and licensed, and of course it’s as valid a tie-in as any other, but that doesn’t mean that the concepts it comes up with are canonical, any more than the elaborate continuity we built in the novels over the past couple of decades that got ignored and largely invalidated by Picard. A game has its own needs that require it to be unrealistic in certain ways (e.g. gigantic sets, characters respawning after death, the ability to carry impossible amounts of weapons and supplies), so one shouldn’t take its conceits too literally.
My point is not that STO’s map is “correct,” merely that it’s a variation on the maps that Rick Sternbach, Mike Okuda, Geoffrey Mandel, etc. developed over the years on TNG, DS9, and VGR and that Mandel and Doug Drexler elaborated upon in Star Trek Star Charts. It’s not something that STO’s creators pulled out of a hat. But it’s their own distinct version of that standard map, stylized and adjusted to function as a game board, so to speak.
@64/CLB: “As I’ve been saying, the maps used by those reference books are based on the behind-the-scenes maps used by the TNG art department years before those books came out. I don’t think TWOK had anything to do with it, because they didn’t add the quadrants to the galaxy map until after TNG: “The Price” established the Greek-letter quadrant system we know today.”
The editors’ note clearly states “The reason for splitting the Federation between Alpha and Beta Quadrants was to rationalise Kirk’s line in Star Trek II that the Enterprise was the only starship in the quadrant.” This despite the fact that a different editors’ note admits “Quadrants and sectors have been used inconsistently in the various Star Trek episodes and films…At times, quadrant seems to refer to a fourth of the entire galaxy, while at others it appears to be a portion of a smaller region.” So it seems that line in TWOK was the reason for putting the quadrant boundary through the middle of explored space, even if they hadn’t come up with names for them when they first did it. It’s a rather silly justification, which for years everyone ignored and just placed everything in the Alpha Quadrant.
@66/Sunspear: “By the way, STO’s map is not invented from whole cloth. It’s officially licensed. Whatever they do is in conjunction with what the license holders allow. It was designed and approved according to what CBS wanted. Almost everything in the game is cross-marketed. It doesn’t exist in a vacuum.”
I’m not saying it isn’t, just that you seem to be holding it up as the final word on the subject. And of course, the idea of regions that the on-screen evidence says are in the Alpha Quadrant actually being in the Beta Quadrant, and that Sisko, Janeway or whoever keep getting it wrong for some reason, isn’t confined to STO by any means sadly. But it’s a bit hypocritical for you to then sneer at James Swallow for following the Alpha Quadrant version in a fully licensed novel, ignoring the fact that if CBS were really sold on the idea that “Balance of Terror” is set in the Beta Quadrant then they would have insisted on it being changed, and suggest that, because he ignores one of the many, sometimes contradictory, apocryphal maps of a made-up place in favour of the on-screen dialogue and artistic license, then that somehow means he can’t read a map in real life.
@73/cap-mjb: “So it seems that line in TWOK was the reason for putting the quadrant boundary through the middle of explored space, even if they hadn’t come up with names for them when they first did it.”
Not quite. Before “The Price,” they didn’t use quadrants at all. Look at the early-TNG version of the galaxy map again — it simply doesn’t have quadrants, with or without names. The quadrant idea was introduced at the same time as the Greek-letter designations, in “The Price.” Yes, the word “quadrant” was used occasionally and inconsistently in dialogue before then, but the production staff’s map didn’t incorporate quadrants until then.
Despite what the Encyclopedia says, I doubt the TWOK thing was the exclusive reason they put the quadrant border where they did. If you look at the above early map, it marks the top of the map as 0 degrees and puts Earth on the 180-degree line pointing straight down. Given that map convention, if you wanted to divide that circle into quadrants, you’d naturally draw the dividing lines at 0-180 and 90-270, which would put one of the dividing lines right through the Sol system. So that’s just the simplest, most obvious way to modify the existing map to add quadrants. It also parallels the way the Prime Meridian passes through the Greenwich Observatory. Since Earth is the heart of the UFP in the same way that London was the heart of the British Empire, it stands to reason to use it as a coordinate origin in the same way.
“It’s a rather silly justification, which for years everyone ignored and just placed everything in the Alpha Quadrant.”
That’s because the original use of the concept, in both “The Price” and DS9, was with regard to wormholes that spanned opposite sides of the galaxy, so that one end of the wormhole was in the Alpha Quadrant and the other was in the Gamma Quadrant (or shifting between Gamma and Delta in the case of the Barzan wormhole). It’s really only a useful label on that scale, because a quadrant of the galactic disk is impractically large as a cartographic reference for most purposes (you wouldn’t give someone directions to your house by telling them it’s in the Western Hemisphere). But DS9 got into the habit of talking about Alpha vs. Gamma where wormhole-based stories were concerned, so when their storytelling expanded to encompass powers like the Klingons and Romulans, it was simpler to keep referring to everything on this side of the wormhole as “Alpha Quadrant” rather than confusing the audience by bringing Beta into it.
“ignoring the fact that if CBS were really sold on the idea that “Balance of Terror” is set in the Beta Quadrant then they would have insisted on it being changed”
Not really. A detail like that is too minor for CBS to make much of a fuss about. Since the characters in DS9 did use “Alpha Quadrant” for things technically meant to be in Beta, that imprecision itself has canonical precedent. Or it might just be something they missed in the review process. I haven’t read the book yet, but it seems unlikely that the name of the quadrant an event happened in would have any real story significance.
And as I keep saying, on a galactic scale, the entire Federation and its neighbors are so close to the Alpha/Beta border that the distinction between the two quadrants boils down to rounding error, so it’s an academic distinction that isn’t worth worrying about, any more than it’s worth worrying whether a given part of London is in the Eastern or Western Hemisphere. It’s such a trivial nitpick, so utterly irrelevant on the scale being discussed, that it hardly matters if someone gets it technically wrong.
@CLB: “It’s not something that STO’s creators pulled out of a hat”
That’s exactly what I’ve been saying. It’s also a given that it’s not a perfect overlay with all pre-existing galactic maps.
It’s also why I think, and have also been suggesting, that they drop the idea of quadrants entirely and just focus on the Orion Arm. Instead of the Alpha, just say “the Arm.” At roughly 3000 LY wide and 10000 LY long (plus height for the wisecrackers), it’s enough of a volume to use as a playground.
@cap: hoo boy, did you get my tone wrong. There was zero sneering. It was meant as teasing more that a put down. I did say I’m enjoying the novel and I would recommend it. The point of that paragraph was that tie-in novels are not consistent in their approach even between authors. That’s why I compared Miller to Swallow. Is there a reason why you seem to have taken that personally?
And no, STO’s map is not the final word on the subject, but it is a live, current representation of the fictional world. It’s certainly my current interface with the Trek universe, as it is for thousands of others. You were suggesting that something obscure from 30 years ago be set aside. I’m actually all for setting it aside (see above), but it’s not likely to happen.
Lastly, you’d be hard pressed to find a good fantasy novel without a map of the world in the endpapers. It’s expected, if not required. If the original novels didn’t have it, it gets created as ancillary materials later, like with the Witcher series when it was filmed. Why is it so anathema to want a reliable map for a science fictional universe?
It’s also funny that you bring up “Balance of Terror” because Swallow’s book may actually undermine what you just said. I haven’t finished it yet, but I’m fairly certain of what the reveal will be at the end of the story. Without spoiling things, it involves the Tribune assigned to Riker during his trial.
We pretty much agree, krad.
I think this was the most solid season of all three, thanks to the showrunner situation finally getting stabilized, strong character work, Trek values, and a good mix of stand-alone episodes and serialization.
Unfortunately, it could have been excellent, but it was just very good, because they blew two episodes on the Mirror Universe thing. All for a despicable character like the Emperor (as much as we love Michelle Yeoh), and a season finale that was mostly explosions and fights, after an episode with excellent exploration and negotiation scenes.
The technology looking more advanced was never a problem. This is fiction.
@74:CLB: “Before “The Price,” they didn’t use quadrants at all. Look at the early-TNG version of the galaxy map again — it simply doesn’t have quadrants, with or without names.”
Okay, sorry, I misunderstood you there. Otherwise, you’re basically making the same point I am: Quadrants only really have a use when you’re talking about something a long way away, and it’s easier just to call everything local the Alpha Quadrant rather than try and divide it up into Alpha and Beta.
Sunspear: Apologies if I got your tone wrong. However, Star Trek has never had any sort of consistent world-building or geography, so no version is really more right than another. The Klingons and Romulans are said to be in Alpha Quadrant on screen, Romulan space is said to be between Federation and Cardassian space, characters can get from Earth to Qo’nos in no more than a few days… It did seem to me as though you were saying one tie-in novel got it “right” and another got it “wrong” because that’s the interpretation you’re used to. I’m used to the exact opposite interpretation, so have a different view on which is “right” and which is “wrong”. And it’ll probably all get contradicted next season.
@cap: “And it’ll probably all get contradicted next season.”
That would not surprise me in the least. Reminds me of Vance’s galactic holo-map when we first see Fed HQ, which had tracking markers for Kazon locations or activity, which was highly dissonant with all the talk about the reduced scope of the Federation.
The distances and travel speeds to Kronos/Qonos vary between series and movies. In STV, they get to the center of the galaxy in hours at warp 7, which is pretty hilarious.
Most of all, I like the relative sizes of the small blobs of Fed, Romulan, and Klingon space showing that they are nowhere near galactic level powers. They cover a small slice of the pie. There’s even a designated “approximate limit of explored space,” I’m guessing just past Cardassia.
The same thread, linked by CLB, has a good examination of Trek’s use of the usage of the term “parsec,” with the repeated conclusion that a Starfleet “parsec” in not the same as ours. It varies considerably. It’s not as egregious as Han Solo’s Kessel run comment (confusing distance and speed), but still very sloppy.
@79/Sunspear: “Most of all, I like the relative sizes of the small blobs of Fed, Romulan, and Klingon space showing that they are nowhere near galactic level powers. They cover a small slice of the pie.”
As I said, though, that early TNG-era map shows them occupying a much, much larger swath of the galaxy than the final Star Charts map does. It has most of the UFP’s territory and the entire Klingon Empire in the Perseus Arm, while the current map has them and the Romulans just in a small part of the central Orion Arm, basically within that yellow dot in the image you posted.
It’s hard for the human mind to grasp just how immense the galaxy is. It contains something like 400 billion stars, after all. Even if only one percent of them had habitable worlds and the Federation visited a new world every day, it would take more than 10 million years to visit them all. So it’s unrealistic to expect any “galactic” power to occupy any sizeable percentage of the galaxy, no matter how advanced it is. It might be spread out fairly far, but would probably occupy only a fraction of the worlds in a given volume. Instead of drawing blobs and borders like on Earthbound maps, it’d be more realistic to show interstellar nations as interlaced branching networks of settled worlds and travel routes.
However, it would certainly be possible for a collective galaxy-wide civilization to exist — not a single power spreading that far, but a galaxy-wide network of communication, trade, and cultural exchange between different civilizations, like the nations of Earth today. There would simply be too many distinct civilizations for any one of them to be in direct or regular contact with every other one, but each one would be in contact with a range of civilizations that would be in contact with a range of other civilizations and so on and so on, encompassing the entire galaxy. That’s what I’d assume the state of the galaxy to have been before the Burn.
“In STV, they get to the center of the galaxy in hours at warp 7, which is pretty hilarious.”
According to Sulu’s dialogue, it takes 6.7 hours — but the action in the film runs continuously from that moment until their arrival, with no room for any sizeable breaks, so it’s actually more like 20 minutes.
But there are only three near-consecutive lines that refer to the center of the galaxy at all, so I just choose to ignore that bit and assume the “Great Barrier” was somewhere closer.
(As for Solo’s Kessel run comment, the script makes it clear that it was supposed to be nonsense, an indication that Solo didn’t know what he was talking about; a stage direction has Kenobi rolling his eyes at the ludicrous bluster, though that reaction was hard to see in the final edit of the scene.)
@CLB: “That’s what I’d assume the state of the galaxy to have been before the Burn.”
Agree with everything you said about the immensity of the galaxy, which is why I don’t assume that the Federation was linked in the way you describe. The worldbuilding simply doesn’t support that. It’s wafer thin. We actually don’t even know where Fed HQ is located, unless it was revealed outside of the show somewhere. The information being so sparse is why I see the Burn as a much more localized event than you do. It may not even have reached the Klingons.
Also, glad the Romulans and Klingons finally took my advice about locating in the Orion Arm…
Different Gary, some of the same opinions.
In season one, I was leery of some of the names on the credits and worried this would not be a good time. A handful of episodes in. my fears were largely legitimized. Then, the rabbit out of the hat revisit to the Mirror Universe salvaged the season. And THAT should have been the last we saw of the MU for, this is arbitrary, five years.
Like a predictable story-telling device that ruins the suspense when you got crazy and binge-read a series by whatever author, SSTD’s resorting to MU stories, historically many of which are only minor variations on the classic theme, Star Trek no longer gets a kick out of repeated use of MU. The first season worked, I was bored by this appearance. Burnham’s ‘classic’ hair-do, the black lipstick and the grimacing reminded me of another place where overuse has destroyed a once-enjoyable pastime. Do NOT go down the Batman comic (any of the bajillion) route and have The Joker be such a constant that you could change the comic’s name (he’s in ALLLL of them constantly) to The Joker and most readers wouldn’t even notice. I hope the NEXT time we see MU is in 2025 or thereabouts. Keep Georgiou’s MU story under wraps in Section 31 should it ever hit the screens.
I’m currently wrestling with how much science advances from the late 22nd century to just before the third millennium in something I am writing. Somewhere between lots and Asimov’s SFnal analogy to magic if it gets far enough advanced. Watching STD this series, I felt a lot closer to the Asimov end of the spectrum then the logical advances from where in time the Discovery was in series two. I could NOT get my head around Book’s ship. It looked badly put together. It apparently had a single room that is whatever it needs to be and the ship itself acts like liquid mercury, breaking apart and reforming with no rhyme or reason when driving through space. It was the most glaring of the magical replacing well thought out extensions of current technology. It was jarring and unexplained, but it wasn’t alone.
Still missing seatbelts though.
Put me into the group stumping for a planet (adding to the Federation) of the week in series four. I want to see new aliens. I don’t mind a pretty young thing (or not so young) in a layer of body paint and not much more. But I like the idea more of getting some aliens who aren’t different primary coloured humans with nose appliances. Expensive as all get out, in all likelihood, but looking back on the history of the franchise, aren’t the aliens the difference makers most of the time in the GOOD episodes/movies???
Many of the comments above show what a rich development platform STD is, or rather, can be. Through three seasons, there is plenty of space for more personal stories. Shows without Burnham other than to start and finish the show. Shows with Saru and the complex story we know has been spun out for him. Tantalizing opportunities to reverse time and jump back, only to rebound back to where they can’t screw around with the common current era in that universe. Time ashore for select sub-groups to let them shine for an episode or three. Transformation in the characters that reflect the events of series three and what has gone on before. Ditch the over-arching story arc to get short stories told well. Already, the Short Treks are the things I remember most from the past three years. Pack the macroscope away and give us a microscope and a spotlight.
There are complaints to be lodged with the creators of Star Trek Discovery. But there are also thanks and applause. I binge-watched the season and I’m glad I did. I mightn’t have enjoyed every second, but there was lots to be praised. Bring on series four, at least the scheduling of such, as soon as possible.
Please.
@82/Gary Mugford: “Asimov’s SFnal analogy to magic if it gets far enough advanced. “
That’s Arthur C. Clarke’s Third Law, not Asimov’s. Not sure whether the two of them would be amused or annoyed at being mistaken for one another, as they were friendly rivals.
@80/CLB “There would simply be too many distinct civilizations for any one of them to be in direct or regular contact with every other one, but each one would be in contact with a range of civilizations that would be in contact with a range of other civilizations and so on and so on, encompassing the entire galaxy.”
I think you just described A Fire Upon the Deep and what’s so awesome about it! Come to think of it, that story also involves a sudden unexpected loss of long-range travel capability.
@83/Christopher, I stand corrected. That said, I found the techno advancements so ‘magical’ as to take the Hard SF label off the show. If you want a ship that travels fast, you just make Ossyra’s ship ALMOST as fast as the spore-drive driven Discovery, a conceit of the first season that I was willing to grant because all shows get one conceit. But having the Chain sweep in moments (it seemed) after Discovery got to Su-Kal’s planet vicinity? Ahhhhh, Hunh??? Need a ship that isn’t exactly all together as it dodges debris and stuff, let Book do his magic stuff. Need huge internal spaces in Discovery to provide dodging, dancing and prancing derring-do for the Die Hard sendup?? Sure. Although that’s old 23rd tech obviated by the badges with internal beaming capability (with the one broken exception). It wasn’t all wishful thinking for solutions drawn from the rear-facing nether regions, but it was close.
Still, with all of that ‘wave your hands and don’t look over here’ writing, I’m still glad I spent the 10-11 hours bingeing on the show. The good moments between the groaners tipped the scales. And as I wrote, there are soooo many possibilities for series four.
Back to Asimov who I credit for most everything good in my teen years in terms of learning from what I was reading for enjoyment, Sorry Mr. Clarke’s estate. Wish both were still around yakking with Ben Bova about their next projects. Greatness.
Without a doubt, the most consistent of the three seasons. Still suffers from some slight problems I’ve mentioned before, but it’s still the poster child of this current era of Trek. I’m grateful for its presence.
Back in 2005, when Enterprise was cancelled, I recall a lot ongoing debates about how long Trek would be off the airwaves. There were people (I think even Barrett-Roddenberry at the time) who talked of the franchise staying dormant for 10-15 years. Who would have thought it would only last four short years? (and that’s on account of a writers strike postponing Trek ’09’s original ’08 elease).
While it took longer for Discovery to become a reality, it came true, while we’ve had the Kelvin films to keep busy. And this time was good for the franchise, as it embraced the new social and cultural norms, and cast these new characters accordingly. The presence of someone like Owusekun is what I’ve always wanted out of someone like Uhura back in the original show. To be a supporting player, but to still function as a vital piece of the ensemble.
As for the current season, I understand Krad’s criticism of devoting two full episodes two write off Georgiou, in the middle of a crammed season. But I still adored both episodes and Georgiou’s ultimate sendoff, which went a long way in healing Burnham’s past issues and moving her own arc forward. Sending Georgiou away during the last season would have been rushed and unsatisfying.
Maybe now they can do a fourth season without resorting to a long term villain for once. Osyraa and the Chain were very disposable one-note bad guys. Making the Burn the product of an emotionally broken child was a step in the right direction. If only they could go full episodic, at least for only a single season.
@1/Christopher: It would be thrilling to see the current state of Klingon society. The spiritual aspect of it would be welcome, seeing if the Borath monks somehow shaped the government later on, and especially if that somehow moved them in a pacifistic direction. For that matter, I never got a sense of Martok’s religiousness on DS9. How would have he dealt with the religious side of Klingon society during his term as chancellor?
@krad – what about the lullaby that the elder sings to Saru? I can’t decide, but isn’t it the melody that was the distress call and the lullaby as well earlier?
Before revisiting this season, I would have agreed with the sentiment that it was the best season so far, but rewatching it for the first time reminded me of the elements I didn’t care for, and two of them somewhat drag the season down. First there’s the Mirror Universe two partner, which never manages to feel like more than an excuse to write Yeoh out of the show in spite of some genuinely good character work, and second there’s the finale, which isn’t all bad but overall just didn’t work for me. Discovery’s previous two finales were not great, but this is the first one I actively disliked. Still, I did really enjoy the season overall. In a lot of ways it felt like a reboot, and mostly for the better.