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A Waterskiing Dog — Star Trek Discovery’s “Will You Take My Hand?”

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Star Trek: Discovery episode Will You Take My Hand

At one point during “Will You Take My Hand?”, the season finale of Star Trek Discovery, Tyler is explaining the ease with which he is able to chat with Klingons in the vicinity of the Orion embassy—which, the Orions being glorified pirates, means it’s pretty much space Vegas—to Burnham. “I’m a human who speaks Klingon. To them, that’s like a dog that can waterski.”

I really doubt that executive producers Gretchen J. Berg, Aaron Harberts, and Akiva Goldsman, who among them wrote and directed the episode, meant that line to be a metaphor for the episode, but it totally fits. Because a dog that can waterski is actually really really cool and would probably be fun to watch. But it’s also something that you kinda stare at and go, “Hang on, why exactly did that just happen?” And there’s a lot of both those reactions in “Will You Take My Hand?”

Let’s start with the good: the landing party sequence was tremendous fun. I enjoyed the Klingon gambling, I loved how that triggered Burnham’s PTSD hearing Klingons laugh the way the ones who killed her parents laughed, I enjoyed Tilly role-playing as a weapons dealer while making sure to help keep Tyler from getting too close to Burnham and messing with her mojo, and hey, look, it’s Clint Howard! Of course Georgiou used sex as a weapon, she’s from the Mirror Universe, home of Captain’s Woman Marlena Moreau and Intendant Kira Nerys. And it worked—her Orion prostitutes (both genders!) gave up the location of the abandoned temple to Molor.

(The Klingon historian in me—your humble reviewer has written a crapton of Klingon fiction, including The Klingon Art of War, a tome that has been used as set decoration on AfterTrek—adores the idea of a temple to Molor, by the way. Established back on TNG as the brother of Kahless, and someone against whom Kahless fought for days over a lie, it makes perfect sense that there’d be a religion to worship him.)

Tilly gets lots to do in this episode, and that’s all to the good, as Mary Wiseman is a delight. We get Tilly in several modes: the word vomit when she meets Georgiou and realizes that it’s not really the mainline captain but the MU’s emperor, the glee with which she gets back into “Captain Killy” mode by threatening the arms dealer, the devotion to Burnham, the willingness to eat alien food without knowing what it is (and then spitting it out when she realizes it’s an endangered species), the lack of judgment in going to the space opium den, and her keeping it together while high when she needs to report that the drone is really a bomb.

For pure fangooberish glee, I loved watching Georgiou beat up L’Rell in the brig, not because I enjoyed watching her pick on a prisoner, but because I will never get tired of watching Michelle Yeoh do choreographed fighting, at which she is one of the best humans in the world.

It was really nice to see Amanda again, and the scene with her and Burnham was lovely. Amanda has not been served well by the screen versions of Trek—it’s been left to tie-in fiction to flesh her out, since on screen she’s been barely more than a cipher, either portrayed simplistically, ignored completely (we’ve seen a lot more of Sarek than Amanda on screen), or fridged to give Spock and Sarek angst. Discovery is still guilty of focusing way more on Sarek’s role in raising Burnham than Amanda, but Amanda at least hasn’t been forgotten: from the mention of the copy of Alice in Wonderland that Amanda gave her back in “Context is for Kings” all the way to Burnham thanking her for reminding her how to be human in this episode.

The entire crew literally standing up to Cornwell when they find out the real plan is a crowning moment of awesome very much like when everyone came to Tyler’s table in the mess last week. And Burnham and Saru reaffirming what are supposed to be Starfleet core values is a joy to see.

What’s not a joy is that they had to reaffirm it in the first place. I was iffy on Georgiou being put in charge of Discovery at the end of last week, and it makes even less sense now. She’s just shoved in charge with no oversight, no guidance—if Cornwell had stayed on board to supervise, that would’ve been one thing. Then I could see using Georgiou as a symbol to galvanize the crew and the fleet. But to just leave her on her own? It’s a disaster, especially since Georgiou does more to prove Spock’s point in “Mirror, Mirror” right: it is much more difficult for a barbarian to pose as a civilized person than the other way ’round. She bites off the heads of both Detmer and Owokusen when they give reports, and she treats Saru with unconcealed disdain. (To Saru’s credit, he gives as good as he gets.)

The evil admiral trope is a tired one in Star Trek. We didn’t get much of it in the original series—admirals were also rarely seen, just occasionally giving an order or three—but it went into overdrive in the spinoffs, especially TNG. We’ve had admirals who collaborate with bad guys from Cardassians to Son’a, who start witch hunts on the Enterprise, who are in bed with Section 31, and so on. Now we can add Cornwell and the rest to the list. Sigh. Sarek, too, for that matter, whose half-assed apology for his role in implementing the plan to have Georgiou, not map the surface of Qo’noS with a drone, but rather blow up Qo’noS, is pathetic.

But why did anyone think this was a good idea? Or that it would even work? Why was the emperor of a despotic multisystem empire given free rein over the starship you’re counting on to win your war with a Hail Mary? And then, when Burnham talks sense into Cornwell (which was at once very convincing, because Cornwell’s actually been portrayed as sensible up until now, but also completely unconvincing because she’s a damned admiral, and a bunch of subordinates standing up on a ship shouldn’t convince her to do anything different), why do they just let Georgiou go? On what planet, in what star system, in what galaxy, in what friggin’ universe does that make anything like sense? (You realize, Georgiou will be running the Orion Syndicate inside a week, yeah?)

Tyler decides to leave, too, and I’m sorry, why does a prisoner get to make that decision and only tell the unranked specialist and the cadet about it? Tyler’s an asset that has already proven to be useful to Starfleet. His ass should be back on the ship and sent to Earth for the longest debrief ever. And how long is he going to last as L’Rell’s Wormtongue anyhow? The novelty of the waterskiing dog’ll wear off in a damn hurry.

Burnham coming full circle is decently done, but it feels contrived. It shouldn’t have been all Burnham, for one thing. Tilly’s the one who uncovered Georgiou’s plan, but at that point, Saru, as acting captain of the ship, should’ve been the one to confront Cornwell, not the disgraced specialist who’s forbidden from even having rank, and who’s also the idiot who brought Georgiou to this universe in the first place like a sentimental dumbass.

Having said that, I have no problem—given the actual events of the episode—that Burnham’s pardoned (I like that it’s a presidential pardon), her rank restored. And the solution itself was both very Federation and very Klingon. McCoy mentioned to Kirk in The Search for Spock after he blew up the Enterprise that he took defeat and turned it into an opportunity for victory, and Burnham does that here. Georgiou already dropped the bomb, so she gives it to L’Rell, and lets her use it.

That’s another thing I liked in the episode, by the way, that L’Rell—who has been content to remain behind the scenes aiding T’Kuvma, Kol, and Voq—finds herself in the position of power. She’s the one who reunites the Houses, and she does it with a Federation bomb. End the war and reunite or I’ll blow up the planet. This is not a permanent solution, of course, but it was never going to be, because we know that tensions between the Federation and the empire will escalate to another war in a decade’s time in “Errand of Mercy.”

(For those who wish to complain that a woman shouldn’t be able to control the sexist empire, keep in mind that, while Gowron said in the 24th century that women couldn’t serve on the High Council, we’ve already seen a female chancellor in the 23rd century in Azetbur. Nobody batted an eyelash at Azetbur in The Undiscovered Country, so obviously the law Gowron mentioned was implemented in the eight decades between the sixth movie and “Redemption.” Your humble reviewer’s theory has always been that Azetbur’s successor was hugely reactionary, and passed that law in an extreme response to Azetbur’s rule, probably with a slogan to make Qo’noS great again.)

And then, finally, because Discovery is never happier than when they’re giving us a gee-whiz ending, we get a distress call from Captain Pike and the U.S.S. Enterprise while they’re en route to Vulcan to pick up their new captain. (And why the hell isn’t Saru getting command??????) We don’t get to find out what this will actually mean until 2019, of course…

Star Trek Discovery Enterprise NCC-1701

Now, unlike many who are fulminating about this online, I have no problem with the Big E getting the same update as everything else on Discovery. We are not Thermians watching historical documents, we’re watching interpretations of what we think the future will look like. I’ve seen Macbeth on stage dozens of times, and the set decoration was different every time. Nobody went on Facebook and complained that the production they saw in London had totally different costumes and sets than the one they saw in New York.

In the 1960s, we thought the future was going to look like what we saw on the original series, and in 2018, we now know they were wrong. (Pike’s crew brought reports via printout! Heck, even TNG‘s padds and interfaces look dated thirty years on.)

Having said that, why even open the can of worms? It’s yet another distraction giving people something extraneous to the story to complain about, and keeping the focus away from the actual stories you’re telling.

As always, Sonequa Martin-Green is amazing, even though she inexplicably gets to deliver a speech during the medal ceremony. (And yay, Tilly’s an ensign now!) She sells Burnham’s earnestness, her regret, her passion. In the end, she gets to do exactly what Lorca asked her to do, even though he was full of shit when he challenged her: she started the war, now she gets to help end it.

Later this week, I’ll be doing an overview of the whole season, and look for another overview of Discovery tie-in fiction later this month.

Keith R.A. DeCandido will be a guest at Planet Comic-Con in Kansas City this weekend. He’ll be at the Bard’s Tower table all weekend. Other guests include Discovery‘s Sonequa Martin-Green, fellow Trek scribes Melinda M. Snodgrass, Dayton Ward (author of the new Discovery novel Drastic Measures), Kevin Dilmore, Kevin J. Anderson, and Thomas Zahler, as well as fellow Bard’s Tower occupiers Jonathan Maberry, Quincy J. Allen, and Michelle Corsillo, plus a crapton of actors, writers, comics creators, and more.

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Sunspear
7 years ago

Voq lives! Nah, Ash is just speciesfluid now. Perhaps an interesting discussion could be had comparing how this was handled with Altered Carbon’s use of physical bodies as “sleeves” and consciousness downloaded into a “stack,” essentially an alien tech derived storage disk.

So none of the poetry or rhymes I expected from what the writers set up happened. I should have known better and I apologize for being rude about it last week.

The episode was kind of a mess. It ends up reaffirming Starfleet values thru a threatened mutiny and a very awkwardly presented Burnham speech.

Klingons, we hardly knew ye! We only get to see the homeworld thru an Orion encampment, which is just an excuse to sex things up a bit. A show of our era should have moved beyond Orions as sex objects only.

L’rell’s threat to blow up Qo,nos as a way to unify the Houses didn’t make sense to me. There’s a bomb planted by humans and I have the detonator. If you don’t listen to me, I will do what the humans would have done. Huh? We don’t know any of the generic Klingons in that scene. And it doesn’t matter. It’s very tidy and quick .

Then the reset button is pushed and we have linkage with TOS. The End.

A series with Pike’s Enterprise may be interesting. Not sure some aspects of Discovery are really salvageable. The genocidal admirals of Command. A Vulcan diplomat who should know better. The spore drive is still around and apparently normalized.

A commenter elsewhere said perhaps they could have had Discovery going rogue, rejecting the admirals’ plan, which incidentally line sup with a genocidal Terran emperor, and affirming Starfleet values in their next journey. Instead we get a speech from Burnham and everybody goes, “Oh yeah, that’s who we are!” Burnham as a character had way too many story elements focused on her. Discovery would have worked better as an ensemble show.

Speaking of which, why in hell is Saru still not promoted to captain. Disappointing. Burnham is rewarded for her actions but not her superior? Seems the next captain was to be a Vulcan (yeah, he/she could just be on Vulcan), but that’s been interrupted.

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William Wehrs
7 years ago

Honest question: Why on earth does L’Rell want to end the war? She was an ardent follower of Tukivma and was treated horribly on Discovery what with her being beaten up by their captain, and never allowed out of her cell. Shouldn’t she want the war to continue?

Beyond that, anybody else think the first half of the episode was remarkably tensionless considering Earth was allegedly on the verge on invasion. The away team just sort of loiters around. We get gratuitous shots of Orion dancers, bad drug jokes, and even a bar fight. Compare this to Best of Both Worlds, or What We Leave Behind, and it is incredible just how inept it is.

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7 years ago

For once I welcome the classic Trek reset button. Maybe next season will be something i’d want to watch. Maybe we can pretend this season was just a bad dream.

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7 years ago

L’Rell’s solution to uniting the houses and pausing the Klingon’s invasion of the Federation I thought was pretty decent, Klingons don’t stop just because, and will only stop if there’s a good reason (Organians, Dominion invasion, Praxis exploding, drone bomb in the center of the planet).  I was alright with that.  

I always welcome Michelle Yeoh showing off her moves and I’m convinced that’s why she was brought back.

I can understand Cornwell’s desperation as the Klingons were closing in to use any means necessary, even if it’s anathema to Starfleet and the Federation’s principles. It doesn’t make her the bad Admiral, just wrong.  Now if she were using a cloaked holoship to move an entire race for no reason than another race said to, or relocating colonies because Cardassians are evil, then okay.  But here she was desperate and seeing the eradication of her Federation, so two atomic bombs on Japan seemed like a good option for her.

The ending reveal my initial reaction was ‘oh damnit! Really?”  But who didn’t smile when the Enterprise flew in and we got that final shot of both ships?  And the end credit music was a nice touch.  It should’ve ended with a head shot of Saru though, like the TOS end credits ended with Balok’s headshot…

 

NO one caught Sarek smiling when he walked away from burnham? Because he looked like he did there.

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7 years ago

“For those who wish to complain that a woman shouldn’t be able to control the sexist empire, keep in mind that, while Gowron said in the 24th century that women couldn’t serve on the High Council, we’ve already seen a female chancellor in the 23rd century in Azetbur.”

The female Klingon science officer in “Day of the Dove” also gives the impression that 23rd century Klingons were not particularly sexist.

@1/Sunspear: “A show of our era should have moved beyond Orions as sex objects only.”

“The Time Trap” did that in 1973.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

This didn’t quite work for me. So having L’Rell threaten to blow up Qo’noS if they don’t obey her is a moral and noble resolution to the war? And the Klingons just believe her about the bomb? Sure, it was a nice attempt to do a story about the heroes finding a peaceful way to end a war by being true to Federation values and rejecting genocide, but Deep Space Nine already did the same thing more effectively.

Still, there were some good character beats here, especially for Tilly and her friendship with Burnham, and with the resolution of Burnham’s arc. This show has that in common with the Kelvin films — the character arcs work, but the plots and logic are less well thought out.

And now the Enterprise has arrived, and we have confirmation that the show is retconning the look of TOS designs. Well, that’s sort of in the spirit of what Roddenberry probably had in mind when he made ST:TMP, that Starfleet tech, Klingons, and the like had always looked more or less like this but TOS hadn’t had the means to show it. This version of the Enterprise does look sort of like a hybrid of the TOS and TMP ships, which fits with that approach, although not with things like “Relics,” “Trials and Tribble-ations,” and “In a Mirror, Darkly.”

We have another variant on Orion makeup now, by the way, since these Orions were a duller, less saturated green than those in TOS and ENT — a bit like Devna’s coloring in “The Time Trap,” only darker — and the men weren’t hyper-muscular, bald, and covered in body piercings like they were in ENT.

On the other hand, we saw a Trill tattoo-parlor customer whose makeup design looked pretty much exactly like the standard Trill makeup.

A couple of other continuity details struck me: Georgiou mentions subjugating the Betazoids during her tenure. This is consistent with David Mack’s novel Mirror Universe: The Sorrows of Empire, which established that the Betazoids had been all but exterminated sometime prior to “Mirror, Mirror.”

The opening shot of Earth showed that Earth Spacedock was under construction in 2257. That’s also consistent with novel portrayals that have shown it existing in the 2260s.

 

@1/Sunspear: “Nah, Ash is just speciesfluid now.”

Heh. I like that.

“The spore drive is still around and apparently normalized.”

No, its use is suspended until and unless they can find a way a safe and legal alternative to the augmented-human interface. Which, presumably, they won’t.

 

@2/William Wehrs: “Why on earth does L’Rell want to end the war?”

Because T’Kuvma’s dream was to unite the Klingon Great Houses, so that’s what L’Rell wants too. T’Kuvma thought a war with the Federation would achieve that end, but L’Rell has seen that it had the opposite effect, with the Houses just fighting each other for the spoils. So if she wanted to unite the Empire, she first had to end the war. That, and it was the price for getting her freedom and saving her planet from being blown up.

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William Wehrs
7 years ago

@6 Does L’Rell really think holding the Klingons hostage is actually going to unify them though? I mean surely, she would constantly be in fear of assassination from the various houses. And I get that the federation wanted her to end the war in exchange for her freedom, but that doesn’t mean she has to actually go along with hose terms. 

Sunspear
7 years ago

@5. Jana: ““The Time Trap” did that in 1973.”

Sure, and later portrayals of the women not being slaves, but actually in charge, and using their sexuality for piracy. Or Orions basically running a culture-wide con.

I’m referring to how they are portrayed here, which is just to show how supposedly depraved Georgiou is. Think there’s a trope about that.

Incidentally, it’s interesting Tilly assumed the woman was for her. Are we to take that as her interested in women? Not sure what was established during that party scene where she let down her hair.

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Phillip Thorne
7 years ago

So, across the season, we see a whole lot of viewer complaints about the writing — characters handed the idiot ball, convenient coincidences, half-baked technological contrivances, rushing through plot points to the next shiny. Which raises the questions: how and why — individual staff? overall team dynamics? or are we viewers being too critical?

A tightly plotted story arc requires more coordination than an episodic series (writer’s room breaks the season, scriptwriter consults the series bible, story editor makes necessary adjustments for tone and loose arcs), so I wonder if the staff assembled for DSC lacks the necessary experience? I’ll have to make a spreadsheet of the writers, then check their filmographies on IMDb, and see if anything jumps out. (And while I’m at it, the directors and producers.)

Sunspear
7 years ago

@6. CLB: “Which, presumably, they won’t.”

Keeping a huge option in their back pockets, though.

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WTBA
7 years ago

@7 William/ It was my understanding that the bomb was biocoded (first to Georgiou, then to L’Rell). Ergo, assassination means Qonos blows up. So, assassination is sort of off the table. Here’s hoping she doesn’t die in any accident…

As for my thoughts on the episode, I wasn’t sure what to expect. They seemed to have built up a lot to wrap up in 45 minutes (I had hoped it would be an extended finale of ~60 minutes a la Doctor Who…).

I was really pleased with the slow burn of the expedition to the planet. I did not really miss that we didn’t get a huge battle between the Feds and the Klingons. Was the “solution” a little too pat? Sure. Was the Bomb plot a bit out of character (not for MU-G of course) for the UFP (and Sarek especially). Absolutely.

Overall, I laughed a lot. I enjoyed the character moments. Easily the most subdued TV finale that I have seen in a while.

It was sweet to see AshVoq talking about being good at the Klingon game and I relished how well he fit into it. His journey has been up and down as far as the writing, but it was nice to see him find him to a degree. The talk is he is still to be included in season 2, but who knows at what level (recurring maybe?) if at all.

Michael finally got to atone for her crime, although I am not sure she ever should have committed it in the first place after 7 years under Phillipa proper. The speeches were good but not great. I teared up during the scene where she stood up to Cornwell, but more for Saru and the other bridge crew literally standing up for Starfleet values.

It sounds like Discovery will get a NEW captain, so what of Saru and the newly re-commissioned Burnham? Saru = XO and Burnham = Science Officer and 2nd officer?

Of course, the end is the real story. The Enterprise is here. I think it looks gorgeous, and I teared up for the E too. Will we actually see Pike (or Spock?). I will tuning in in 2019 to find out. I will be chucking CBSAA in the mean time though. No offense to them. I never had any streaming issues. It has been a great experience to watch a Trek “live.” Bring on Season 2!!!

I am looking forward to Keith’s season wrapup and other upcoming Discovery posts. Thanks again as always for your great work and to the other posters for making these comment sections an enriching experience.

Corylea
7 years ago

While I did enjoy many things about this episode, from the return to core Star Trek values to Clint Howard’s cameo to sassy Saru to that glimpse of the ship that will always be first in my heart, I didn’t find this episode quite satisfying. 

The resolution of the Klingon war felt too easy and didn’t completely make sense to me.  If the detonator is all that’s keeping L’Rell in power, how come the other Klingons don’t jump on her and grab it or steal it from her the first time she falls asleep?  I just didn’t buy it.  I was glad to see a resolution to the war, and I was glad that resolution didn’t involve genocide, but my suspension of disbelief just couldn’t stretch quite that far.  I’m happy to put the war behind us, but I was hoping the wrap-up would work a bit better.

We’d been hoping the writers wouldn’t press the time-travel reset button, and they didn’t, but I actually think I might have found that more sensible and more satisfying that what they did do.  I think I’d have found it more believable.  Well, in as much as time travel is ever believable. :-)

Sarek continues to be out of character, considering that he SMILED at Burnham.  And he’s SO happy about her being in Starfleet that he asked to be the one to give her her commander’s pin back, when he disowned Spock for it?  Blue-eyed Sarek is clearly from an alternate universe than the brown-eyed one.

I was tired of the Klingon war and wanted it to go away, and I know many other fans felt the same way.  The writers did make it go away, and I think maybe they expected us to be so happy the war ended without genocide that we wouldn’t think about it too hard.

Say WHAT?  Have they MET Star Trek fans?  Thinking about it too hard is what we do! :-)

I liked the first season of DSC but didn’t love it; it seemed to me that the whole added up to LESS than the sum of its parts.  The first season of TOS hasn’t yet been knocked from its place as the best first season of any Star Trek series. :-)  But I’m wondering who they’re picking up on Vulcan, and I’m attached enough to Burnham, Saru, Tilly, and Stamets that I’ll be tuning in for Season 2.  I’m glad DSC is on, and if the writers didn’t quite do what I’d hoped for, they did give us plenty of thrills along the way.  Better than the first seasons of TNG and ENT, so I’ll take it. 

 

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William Wehrs
7 years ago

@11. Well, that’s what poison or a quick phaser blast to the head is for. I took it to mean the detonator was bio-encoded to her, so only her thumb print could set off the bomb. 

“Michael finally got to atone for her crime.” And that is one of the biggest problems with the show. Her crime was wanting to use Klingon psychology against them to sue for peace. Yet, everyone acts as if she led a mutiny to start a war with the Klingons when actually she led a mutiny to push for peace. 

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@7/William Wehrs: “Does L’Rell really think holding the Klingons hostage is actually going to unify them though?”

No, she thinks it will get them to listen to her long enough to let her begin the actual hard work of unifying them. First you have to get their attention.

“I mean surely, she would constantly be in fear of assassination from the various houses.”

The bomb control is biologically coded to her DNA. Presumably that means she’s the only one who can deactivate it — and she might set it up as a dead-man switch, so that it will go off if she’s killed.

“And I get that the federation wanted her to end the war in exchange for her freedom, but that doesn’t mean she has to actually go along with hose terms.”

As I already explained, her priority is to unify her people, and she’s recognized that war with the Federation is working against that goal. So she no longer wants the war. Besides, there’s this thing called “honor” that Klingons supposedly value. If L’Rell is really true to her Kahlessian beliefs, then she will be true to her word.

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7 years ago

The episode was fun, and that last sequence and shot were a hoot to behold. That Enterprise design is beautiful. I loved the work of all the actors, and the script’s insistence that WE ARE STARFLEET, to return to the values we hold dear.

However, I did not buy the resolution to the war… there was no need to show the (six or seven?) Klingon ships approaching Earth, and L’Rell holding the detonator for a bomb that will blow up the whole planet as a way to unify the houses makes absolutely no sense at all.

Letting Georgiou go was also pretty ridiculous, and Sarek agreeing to letting her blow up Qo’Nos was stupid. Not stupid, EVIL. He and Cornwell were letting her DESTROY AN ENTIRE FUCKING PLANET, FULL OF CIVILIANS, CHILDREN, ETC. The more I think about it, the less I like it.

I’m not MAD, and I’m not discounting the show at all. I liked it, a lot. But the first experiment in a season-wide narrative for a Trek show (beyond the scope of what happened in ENT and DS9) didn’t work out very smoothly.

Tyler staying behind makes complete sense, but how will he operate as a human looking person outside the Orion compound?

Saru was amazing when he replied to Georgiou.

I hope we get to see L’Rell in S2, because she’s one of my favorite characters. “GO TO HELL, VERY SMALL HUMAN!” was beautiful.

Tilly, as usual, was wonderful, even her half-hearted salute to the Emperor. Stamets bragging “Am I good or what?” was cool, and it was very sweet to see Culber get a medal too.

Michael was okay, but I could have done without the kiss between her and Tyler, though I like that they are not trying to make the relationship stick.

Her moments with Amanda and Sarek were great, and with Sarek, they were doing the Vulcan equivalent of hugging and crying in public.

Also cool: seeing future Paris, and what’s most likely the Palais de la Concorde. I liked that Klingon betting includes gambling and punching.

I absolutely abhorred Mirror Georgiou being so willing to use sex as a weapon AND being bisexual, it reeks of the stupid “sex and non-heterosexuality are evil” times of DS9’s MU episodes.

I’m sad that Saru is not the Captain, he deserves that command.

: I guess Michael gets to give the speech to help her be publicly redeemed.

@@@@@1 – Sunspear: We did move beyond Orions as sex things, we had Orion food vendors. I loved how the two guys manning the food cart were just two regular joes who happened to be green.

The sporedrive is not normalized, they won’t use it until they can find a non-sentient interface… which will probably be never.

@@@@@ – William: Except for being beaten up by Georgiou, L’Rell was actually treated very well on Discovery. She got to know Federation people and see that they weren’t actually evil.

@@@@@4 – Loungshep: No, not Saru’s headshot, one of Clint Howard’s character. And yes, Sarek was smiling in that shot. THE DEGENERATE!

@@@@@6 – Chris: Nice, I didn’t spot the Trill. (No pun intended. :>)

@@@@@8 – Sunspear: She could be interested in any gender, or both males and females… or she just assumed Georgiou didn’t give a damn what she was interested in.

@@@@@11 – WTBA: I was expecting a longer episode, too.

@@@@@14 – Chris: I would hope L’Rell doesn’t deadman switch the bomb, or it could spell doom for the planet if she dies choking on some gagh.

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7 years ago

The bit that took me out of the episode was “END SIMULTATION” – this is just a bit of sloppiness that should not have made it into the final product.

The bit that bothers me after the fact is wondering how Discovery found a void inside the planet without realizing that the planet was in fact still volcanically active.

On the other hand, I’m perfectly content with a contrived solution that turns the episode into a morality play. That is Star Trek in a nutshell.

Did anyone else catch the parasitic invaders from TNG’s “Conspiracy” in a fry pan?

 

Jason_UmmaMacabre
7 years ago

I really enjoyed this finale, even if the end of the war was a stretch. I’ll agree with the others that Tilly is still one of the best parts of the show. I love that not only was she promoted to Ensign, but put in command track as well.

Amanda Greyson has never been better. Her talk with Michael at the end was certainly a tearjerker. I like that while she understands and accepts the Vulcan way, she holds on to her humanity and passes it on to her children. Imagine if she had been around to help raise Sybok. Maybe he wouldn’t have been such a nutjob…

I got goosebumps when the Enterprise showed up at the end and I think the ship looks fantastic. Much better than the way it looks in the Kelvinverse movies. My guess is that they will probably do what season 2 of Supergirl did with Superman. Have Pike and company around for an episode or two and then go their separate ways. I’d be cool with that. 

Finally, while it may be a slight disappointment that Saru didn’t get the captaincy of the Discovery, I was also not surprised by it. Remember, he has only been first officer for what, 6 months? He may have done a good job, but he still needs to put in time as XO before he is given a command of his own.

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7 years ago

I shared Keith’s reaction to Saru being overlooked for command of the Discovery. He’s shown that he can grow into the job and face the fears that kept him back in the past. But instead, we get a bizarre cliffhanger for an ending and the prospect that the producers will cast a stranger as the new captain.

The way this episode brought the war to a close embodied all the problems the series had with the war throughout the season. There are few moments when we are shown the war and its consequences. Most of our understanding comes from less satisfying exposition.

The larger Klingon offensive seems to have few personal consequences for people on the Discovery. Others have already described why the way the series handled Mirror Georgiou made no sense. And just what happened at the end of the war, did the Klingons return the worlds taken from the Federation? The combination of these problems left the war as an unbelievable, cardboard plot device.

I like the idea of a season-long arc, but I don’t think it was pulled off very well. Hopefully, the show will improve.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@15/MaGnUs: “Tyler staying behind makes complete sense, but how will he operate as a human looking person outside the Orion compound?”

Though DSC didn’t show them, there have been human-looking Klingons in the Empire since “Divergence” a century earlier, and we know they’ll be dominant in the Klingon military (at least the portion of it that interacted with Kirk & crew) a decade later. Maybe one of L’Rell’s reforms will be to grant them greater exclusion in Klingon society.

 

@16/lerris: “The bit that bothers me after the fact is wondering how Discovery found a void inside the planet without realizing that the planet was in fact still volcanically active.”

Of course the planet was still volcanically active — a tectonically dead planet probably wouldn’t have a breathable atmosphere or a habitable surface — but that doesn’t mean every individual volcano on the entire planet is active or inactive at the same time.

 

“Did anyone else catch the parasitic invaders from TNG’s “Conspiracy” in a fry pan?”

I thought those were Ceti eels.

 

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Redd
7 years ago

-So I guess they were going for a “The Day the Earth Stood Still” idea with the threat of unite or be destroyed. Klaatu Barada L’Rell.

-Clint Howard!!! Sure he was Balok, but I’ll always think of him as Leon the peanut butter sandwich eating cowboy in The Andy Griffith Show. Always brings a smile.

-I like the Enterprise design. Pretty much the same proportions as in TOS but with the detailing and nacelle struts of the TMP design. I was never a fan of the hot rod proportions of the Kelvinverse ship, so it’s nice to see a more restrained take on the ship. Curious to see the interior.

-Maybe I missed it, but was there a reason given for Cornwell not being on this mission? “Sorry, I’ll be delivering the keynote address at the badmirals conference on Paperclip 9.”

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Steve Roby
7 years ago

“Free reign”? KHAAAAAAAAAAN!

That aside, I can’t really quibble too much with your observations about the episode. There definitely are times when Discovery leaves me wondering, why are we seeing this part of the story instead of that part? Would someone make that decision in the real world? But the characters and cast pull me through it.

When Enterprise went out with a whimper, I’m not sure I expected to wait so long for a new Star Trek TV series. Once Discovery finally showed up, I don’t think I expected it to take as many risks as it did. But I haven’t been this happy about Star Trek on TV since DS9. It’s not the Star Trek I expected or the one I would have made, but I’ve had a lot of fun watching it.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@20/Redd: “Maybe I missed it, but was there a reason given for Cornwell not being on this mission?”

Plausible deniability, maybe? Or maybe she couldn’t bring herself to go along because she knew deep down that it was wrong.

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7 years ago

@17 – Jason: Then again, Starfleet has been decimated, surely some officers have gotten battlefield promotions and positions and keep them. The same could happen with Saru and the Disco.

@18 – Halien: I don’t think it’ll be a stranger. I think prime Lorca is on Vulcan, recovering from being a klingon prisoner or something like that.

@19 – Chris: I took it as those Klingons ending up looking like the TOS Klingons, which are human-ish, but not entirely and Federation-looking humans as Tyler is. I guess he could wear yellow/greenish make-up and black and silver sparkly spandex. :)

DemetriosX
7 years ago

I was really expecting Harry Mudd to show up on Qo’nos. I’m not sure if I’m glad or not that he didn’t.

The captain cliffhanger is probably mostly about giving them time to figure out where they want to take the next season and who would best fill the big chair with that in mind.I agree that Saru has demonstrated that he’s more than capable of being captain, but wasn’t he only just promoted to full commander? There’s usually an expectation of an officer spending a little time in their role at that rank before promotion. OTOH, the officer corps has probably been heavily winnowed by the war, which would give them an excuse for fast-tracking him. Who knows, maybe by the time they get around to finalizing season 2, Doug Jones will be big enough they feel like giving it to him after all.

I didn’t care for the Enterprise stuff at the end. As soon as the decryption of the signal gave them “NCC-17” I knew where they were going and rolled my eyes. We’ll see what they do with it.

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7 years ago

 @23 MaGnUs That’s the best outcome. Lorca was one of the show’s strongest characters and it would be a pity to lose him, even if the Prime version of him is a fairly different person.

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7 years ago

I want to keep Isaacs too, not necessarily as the captain, but he’d be nice to keep on the cast.

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7 years ago

@24 I’m expecting they’ll drop it. It felt like fan service to me. Season 2 will start at Vulcan or at some point during their next mission and the Enterprise stuff won’t be mentioned.

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7 years ago

Saru was “Captain” in the sense that he was commanding a naval vessel (much as “Captain” Bligh’s military rank at the time he commanded the Bounty was Commanding Lieutenant) but he was never actually promoted.  And for most of that time he was in a parallel universe, and his time in command by his personal timestream was much less than even the 9 months since the Discovery disappeared.  He might have rated a brevet (field) promotion, but even field promotions must be confirmed by the chain of command once circumstances permit.  In real military terms there’s no reason to make him the permanent captain unless there was a real shortage of officers with more seniority.

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William Wehrs
7 years ago

@28 “In real military terms there’s no reason to make him the permanent captain unless there was a real shortage of officers with more seniority.” Well, considering the Federation had just been involved in a highly violent war with the Klingons for about a year, then I would say there is likely a real shortage. Not to mention losing Lorca to the mirror universe.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@24. DemetriosX: “There’s usually an expectation of an officer spending a little time in their role at that rank before promotion.”

Can look at that as proof this isn’t the Kelvinverse, with Cadet Kirk to Captain kirk in one mission.

Hanging chad: MGeorgiou’s line about “my Gabriel” leaving something behind. Is that the bomb? Or was that provided by SF and she’s looking for something else.

: sure, Tilly can have any preference she wants. I was asking if anything had been established.

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Gerry__Quinn
7 years ago

A rather poor finale to an enjoyable series, in my opinion.

Georgiou’s moustache-twirling evilness was utterly absurd.  Lorca was able to portray a Starfleet captain, albeit a ruthless one, with reasonable conviction.  But never mind that, what about the plot?

First, the bomb was presumably Georgiou’s idea, or something that worked for her before.  But why send an obvious loose cannon with no loyalty to the Federation to set it off?  Cornwell should have either found somebody guaranteed loyal to detonate it, or gone herself, on a suicide mission if need be.  (And if it was intended just as Earth’s side of mutual assured destruction, even less reason to give it to the Terran empress.)

And as for the M.A.D. aspect… well, at some point the Klingons are going to neutralise that drone.  But even still, it would buy time for the Federation.  What it does NOT do is give the Klingons a reason to follow a renegade Klinglon who threatened to blow up her own planet.  L’Rell should soon be dying very slowly.

Oh well, as I’ve said before, I don’t expect Star Trek to be very logical or coherent.  But I dislike when they do ridiculous things that could just as easily have been much better.

At least the Orions are kinky, decadent and green in all universes, so there’s something to depend upon :D

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Gerry__Quinn
7 years ago

AS regards Tilly’s preferences, I saw nothing in the series to suggest they are unconventional.  But I’m inclined to think that if Georgiou had selected the woman for herself and then invited the man to come along, Tilly’s response would have been much the same.

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7 years ago

@9.

or are we viewers being too critical?

If anything, we’ve not been allowed to be critical enough. The series has been crippled with nonsensical plotting, fanwank of the worst kind, dubious science, and characters who are not just poorly written but make me long for the days of Neelix or Profit and Lace. It has been stuffed full of things that nobody would accept in fanfic, because it is so hoary and cliched, yet somehow we are not to be critical of it on screen? It is going to take more than dangling a few bits of fan-favourites like Pike in front of me to get me to sign on for another subscription in 2019 -if there is a just deity in the world this year long hiatus will be extended and extended- because when STD has tried to dangle fanservice in front of us, they’ve inevitably ruined it. This series feels increasingly like Star Trek for people that hate Star Trek. I think the unbridled enthusiasm to have any sort of Trek back has blinded reviewers to its flaws. This is not drive by trolling, this is just being honest about a very disappointing series and not looking at it with rose tinted spectacles.

Corylea
7 years ago

@30/Sunspear — I think what Lorca left behind is the weapons they were supposedly selling, so as to have a reason to be there.

 

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@23/MaGnUs: I don’t think a ridged Klingon would see much difference between someone who looks like Voq/Tyler and someone who looks like Kor or Kang, never mind Kras or Koloth.

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Cybersnark
7 years ago

@19. We can’t know that, though, about human-looking Klingons, since this show has taken the stance that visual continuity is meaningless. We can’t be certain that Kang, Kor, and Koloth don’t look like T’Kuvma, or that the Enterprise doesn’t have a glassed-in bridge and holographic interfaces.

I’m going to start citing DSC in my arguments that Star Trek works better in prose than onscreen; I loved everything about this season except the visuals.

And the Klingon solution works for me; Klingons have always been portrayed as the Drama Queens of the galaxy. They love nothing more than grand gestures and operatic melodrama. The fact that a Starfleet ship was able to breach Qo’noS’ defenses and plant a planet-killing bomb –and then voluntarily turned that bomb over to the Klingon people– would speak to their sense of poetry. While certainly some would see it as an act of weakness or cowardice, the fact that L’Rell made it about Honour means they can’t spin it without losing face.

She may not know the Klingon tongue, but Burnham has demonstrated her ability to speak the Klingons’ language.

(Though yeah, I feel like we should’ve seen more ship-to-ship action as the Klingons approached Earth. I’m willing to put that down to time and budget constraints.)

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Phillip Thorne
7 years ago

@36 Cybersnark:

I’m willing to put that down to time and budget constraints.

On that point, I’m not happy with where this show seems to have put its budget (that’s a job of a line producer, right?). I seem to recall some kind of statement (*) regarding the “movie-quality visuals” — $8 million per ep in costumes, sets, space CGI — but did we really need all those extra palace corridors aboard the I.S.S. Charon, or quite so many classes of Klingon and Starfleet vessel, or holographic interfaces, or uniforms with so much bling, or the custodial hours to polish the decks? Put that money toward establishing and connective shots that clarify the story.

(*) Statements from the production were easier to find when you could consult a single large article in TV Guide or Entertainment Weekly, rather than least-publishable-units dribbled to fan blogs. Sigh.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@36/Cybersnark: The existence of humanlike Klingons post-“Divergence” is not a matter of visual continuity, though. It’s an explicit plot point, established in dialogue and significant to the story. The kind of visual changes you’re talking about are superficial; they don’t affect the plot, and they’d be unnoticeable if the story were told in prose or on radio, say. But the origin of the human-appearing Klingons was a central plot element in “Affliction”/’Divergence.” Indeed, it’s the only change of Klingon appearance that’s ever been addressed in onscreen dialogue, even though it’s just one of several redesigns over the decades. So pretending it didn’t happen is much more than just glossing over a visual detail.

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Edgar Governo
7 years ago

It’s frustrating to have this series choose “the stance that visual continuity is meaningless” because that choice was unnecessary–productions like Rogue One have shown that you can innovate and put your own spin on a franchise’s aesthetic while still adhering to visual continuity with specific locations/ships that have appeared before.

Recasting is one thing (because people already understand its necessity), but something like ship redesign is another (because it’s more difficult to justify).  The viewers who don’t care would’ve not cared either way, but those who do care now have to work out a cognitive dissonance with no particular advantage for the show’s creators.

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7 years ago

Just awful.  Discovery’s had its ups and downs, but it ended on a huge down, a schlocky plot that only worked because the writers say it did but not believable in the slightest.  The “We are Starfleet” moment was mildly cool but blunted by the fact that we barely knew any of the bridge crew except the 3 or 4 main cast members.

And I can’t wait for next season when I’m sure they’ll reveal that Michael Burnham recommended Spock as the science officer as the show desperately screams “look at us, we’re REALLY the ones behind every cool thing in the original series” and some segment of fans eat it up. :P

Oh, and I guess we know where the Discovery writer’s room stands on the “Klingons have two penises” theory that’s been popping up here and there since “Ethics.”  I’m not sure we needed to see two distinct streams from the Klingon urinating in the alley, but, hey, continuity I guess? 

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7 years ago

The series seems to me to have made a lot unnecessary choices that alienated some viewers, including me.

@40,  they decide to keep up that continuity. Lovely.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@39/Edgar: ST:TMP made that same choice 39 years ago. It redesigned the Klingons and asked viewers to assume they’d always looked that way. As late as DS9: “Blood Oath,” they were sticking with that, giving ridges to Kor, Kang, and Koloth without comment. Not to mention that TWOK used movie-era props to represent the Starfleet equipment left behind with Khan’s people after “Space Seed,” implying that Starfleet equipment had looked that way all along.

The only reason “Relics” and “Trials and Tribble-ations” faithfully recreated the original look of things, aside from nostalgia, was because they needed to match the reused footage from TOS. If “Relics” had had the budget to build a full bridge recreation rather than using stock footage and borrowed fan props, they might’ve updated its design in the process. So it was budget and logistical considerations that led to the revival of old designs, when earlier productions had been freer to update the look.

And Trek has always been free to update its alien designs — not just Klingons, but Romulans, Andorians, Tellarites, Gorn, Tiburons, etc. There’s never been much concern for visual continuity in that regard. It’s always been treated as a matter of artistic interpretation, with each individual makeup designer having free rein to reinvent the look of a given species. Michael Westmore even did wholesale redesigns of a couple of his own creations, the Trill and the Ktarians, for the sake of convenience when they became regular or recurring roles (Dax and Naomi Wildman, respectively). So why is it so hard to understand that technology designs are equally a matter of individual artists’ creativity and style?

 

@40/ghostly1: “And I can’t wait for next season when I’m sure they’ll reveal that Michael Burnham recommended Spock as the science officer”

Umm, this is 2257. Spock has already been the Enterprise science officer for at least three years.

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7 years ago

Unless of course they make the creative choice to alter the chronology, because there is no Canon after all.

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7 years ago

All I have to say is: IS IT 2019 YET???

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@43/roxana: Canon has never been synonymous with continuity. It’s just a nickname for the original body of work as distinct from tie-ins or fanfiction. Many canons have rewritten themselves, like when Dallas retconned an entire season as a dream, or when various movie series like Highlander or Halloween have done sequels that disregarded earlier sequels. A fictional canon, by definition, is a work that grows over time and is thus subject to change. The only canons that don’t change are the ones that are no longer being added to.

And of course, Star Trek has been rewriting its own continuity for half a century, which is why we aren’t following the adventures of the UESPA starship Enterprise commanded by James R. Kirk.

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7 years ago

@@@@@ CLB, I know, you have made the fluid nature of continuity and the fact there is no such thing as Canon very clear. That’s why I was surprised to see you appeal to the established chronology. 

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7 years ago

On a previous Discovery:

Lorca: You’re the most important being in either the P.U. or the M.U. so even though I could have been emperor, I’ll die because well, Georgiou is more important to you than me (sniffle!) and I must die.

**music plays**

On the finale:

Georgiou M.U. I guess I won’t shoot you because you’re Burnham and Burnham is awesome. But later, girl. Worlds to conquer, you know.

L’Rell: God, I hate humans, minus Vok/Ash, but since you’re Burnham and you’re fucking awesome for a small human, I’ll take your bomb and get my bros to call back their ships so Earth and other places aren’t destroyed and you get to be the heroine.

Ash: You’re too awesome for me so of course I’ll take L’Rell as second choice. Don’t tell her she’s second. She’ll kick my beta ass to Rura Penthe!

Cornwell/Starfleet: Even though you threatened to mutiny again, and fucked up by bringing Georgiou M.U. here, you magically ended the war so me and my Starfleet Admirals bros are gonna give you some ego-boo, medals, your rank back, and we’ll let you lecture us all on what genocidal fucktards we were.

Sarek: I’m closer to you than my wife (shh, don’t tell her about the magic katra across the miles connection bit) and I agree with Cornwell. We were genocidal maniacs and you were absolutely brilliant solving what 90 gazillion other Starfleeters couldn’t solve, so I’m a gonna give you a SMILE! Let’s go give Spock the bad news that you’re my new favorite child!

**Pike sends distress call**

Pike: That’ll get the awesome Burnham here. I’m dying to meet the superstar of two universes!

Spock: Oh God. I think I’ll take shore leave to Rura Penthe instead.

End.

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Edgar Governo
7 years ago

@47/krad: I’m no fanatical purist (and most of the changes/reinterpretations made by Discovery don’t bother me as a viewer), but–just as I thought it was appropriate for you to ask in your reviews why this series had bothered to be set in TOS–I think it’s appropriate to ask why TPTB bothered to make changes to an item meant to be the exact same thing we saw before (rather than another part of a vast universe).

When the oldest comparable examples in this franchise are over twenty years old, and when other franchises that have stayed in the same continuity (like Doctor Who and Star Wars) are trending in the opposite direction as to how the return of an exact item is visually depicted, it’s fair to ask what it means to be “in the same continuity” given that the things which should remain unchanged aren’t…you know, continuous.

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7 years ago

@33/random22 – I was going to break apart your post, but it’s best summed up by saying “I disagree with just about everything you’ve said.”  As much as I’m raving about Discovery, I’m not blind to its flaws – indeed, there have been many things I don’t like, mostly to do with how much I despise serialized television.  I’m also not a fan of how dark and moody everything is, how much time we spent in the Mirror Universe…but I haven’t been on here bitching constantly because, overall, I am glad to have Trek back, there are a lot of things I do like, and I can accept the possibility that other people enjoy things I don’t.

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M
7 years ago

Random Thoughts:

Using Star Wars to say Trek shouldn’t change any designs is ridiculous. Wars technology was great for it’s time and easily replicated. 60s Trek certainly wasn’t that.

The Klingon War always had the “prequel problem.” It’s one thing to know the Federation will win the Dominion War because that’s they way it SHOULD go, but to 1000% KNOW the Federation will survive the Klingon War has always been a narrative problem. They did the best they could with it without retreading huge battle scenes like DS9. Keep in mind, Klingons perfectly accept assassination of existing Chancellors (Worf killing Gowron) as a legal means of gaining power. 

I wish the bomb would have been different though. Instead of destroying the whole planet, why not just a few major cities? Perfect chance at a parallel to the US dropping nukes on Japan. If that had been Starfleets plan instead, it would have been more believeable and thought provoking.

As for next season, everyone is assuming we are recasting Spock again. Is it THAT hard to get our existing one as a guest star?

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Peg Robinson
7 years ago

The idea that “Star Fleet Values” need to be reaffirmed, to me, only makes sense–as Star Trek story-telling, and as “history.” We do not win the war against fear once. We do not win the battle to righteousness once. The best of Star Trek has always come back to that central struggle, over and over. Having it expressed so clearly, after such a careful build-up, in a time when Star Fleet is still proving itself to the galaxy and to its own people, is proper drama–and almost the definition of Star Trek narratives. In the end, Star Trek is not about being enlightened beyond the point of effort and struggle, but about getting knocked down, failing, and getting up and doing it again. And again. And again. I loved that they essentially set this entire season up to tell the story of Burnham’s path to righteous virtue, and how it ultimately involved her entire neck of the universe. I love that from day one, the path was pointedly about Burnham and her associates’ struggle to understand and express what Star Fleet standards meant to them. It only falls apart if you’ve reached a point where you assume Star Fleet members are so highly enlightened that they’re really just there as Organian-Style referees and instructors, showing the lesser races how it’s done–and that’s NOT a “Star Fleet” value at all. The show from the very beginning was about virtue as an unfinished work of discipline and hope, not about us having already reached perfection.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@@@@@46/roxana: “@@@@@ CLB, I know, you have made the fluid nature of continuity and the fact there is no such thing as Canon very clear.”

Again, I have never said “there is no such thing as Canon.” Please stop twisting my words. I have simply said that “canon” is not the magic, binding seal of immutability that fans unrealistically expect it to be. It’s just a blanket nickname for the core body of work in a fictional series, with all its imperfections.

 

“That’s why I was surprised to see you appeal to the established chronology.”

Chronology is actual story content. It’s more important than more superficial details like set, prop, and makeup designs.

 

@@@@@47/krad: You said it. Heck, I’m pretty sure I predicted back during Enterprise that we’d be having those exact same arguments when the next new series came along, and I was right.

 

@@@@@49/Edgar: “I think it’s appropriate to ask why TPTB bothered to make changes to an item meant to be the exact same thing we saw before (rather than another part of a vast universe).”

I think these things go in cycles. The first attempt to revive something tends to reject imitation and establish its own identity apart or in contrast to its predecessor; then the next phase of the cycle brings in nostalgia and renewed appreciation for the original version, so you get more imitation; and then the next phase, at a greater remove in time, swings back toward modernization and independence from the old. For instance, the first Godzilla reboot in the ’80s was dark, gritty, and serious and disregarded all prior continuity except the 1954 original; then the later Millennium-Era movies in the early 2000s folded back in some elements of the original continuity; and now we have Godzilla movies that are complete reboots in which even the ’54 movie never happened. In the case of Star Trek, the original movies and early TNG went for modernization and reinvention and avoided nostalgia, but then the next wave of creators came onboard and started folding in more nostalgic elements again; and now we’re moving into the stage after that, where the new creators are seeking innovation again rather than simply copying what their predecessors did. Different generations of creators bring different sensibilities, often in direct reaction against their predecessors, so the pendulum swings back and forth.

What’s odd is that the past two Trek incarnations (Kelvin and DSC) have been torn between both impulses — they rely heavily on nostalgia while simultaneously trying to innovate. It could be that those two drives work against each other. Personally, I think Star Trek should be about innovation and looking forward. It is supposed to be about boldly going where no one has gone before, after all.

 

As for Doctor Who, if you’re citing it as an example of something that keeps the designs the same, I’d have to say you’re only partially right. It tends to be case-by-case whether it goes for nostalgia or innovation. There have been a lot of redesigns — the TARDIS interior, the Daleks to an extent, the Cybermen, the Silurians quite a bit — but we’ve gotten more nostalgia in the past few years, what with the 50th anniversary and Steven Moffat getting sentimental toward the end of his tenure, so we get things like the return of the Mondasian Cybermen and the First Doctor. And we get the First Doctor’s console room lovingly recreated even while the First Doctor himself is reinterpreted by a new actor for the second time, this time one who doesn’t even look or sound much like the original. So if anything, I think Doctor Who proves that there is no absolute rule to something like this, that it’s a matter of whether nostalgia or reinvention suits the needs of a specific story.

 

“it’s fair to ask what it means to be “in the same continuity” given that the things which should remain unchanged aren’t…you know, continuous.”

Stories are not about sets and props. They’re about people and events. Keith covered this in his review — a new performance of a play with different scenic design and costumes is not a different play. A character played by a new actor is not a different character. What matters is that the essence of the characters and their history and relationships and attitudes and societal context remain continuous, not whether their surface appearance does so. Nobody would say Robin Curtis’s Saavik is a different character from Kirstie Alley’s Saavik just because she has brown eyes and slantier eyebrows. But they might say she’s different because she’s less intense and volatile, more conventionally Vulcan. What defines continuity is what’s beneath the visible surface.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@51/M: “Using Star Wars to say Trek shouldn’t change any designs is ridiculous. Wars technology was great for it’s time and easily replicated. 60s Trek certainly wasn’t that.”

Also, Star Wars is set in a fantasy past that can look like anything, while Trek is supposed to be a projection of what we imagine our own future to look like. And Star Wars has always been an exercise in nostalgia from the start — nostalgia for ’30s movie serials and comic strips, for ’40s war movies, for ’50s hot rods and samurai movies, etc. It’s always, always been based on the past and set in the past. Star Trek looks to the future, and our idea of the future is always changing.

 

@52/Peg Robinson: Very well put. (Are you the Peg Robinson who had stories in Star Trek: Strange New Worlds? I really liked “The First.”)

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7 years ago

@8/Sunspear: Sorry, I hadn’t meant to contradict you. I meant to say that Star Trek moved beyond Orions as sex objects very soon, and apparently progress has been backwards in this particular area. Although the real culprit is the 2009 film.

@51/M: Uh, are you saying that 1960s Star Trek technology and design wasn’t great for its time? I’d say that warp nacelles, force fields, sideways elevators and food replicators still hold up pretty well today, not to mention things that were futuristic back then and are normal now, like automatic doors and mobile phones. Concerning the design, I personally find that the TOS design looks better than anything that came afterwards. Just add computer monitors and touchscreens.

Sunspear
7 years ago

Here’s Alex Kurtzman on season 2 and why Spock never mentioned his adopted sister:

“I knew we were gonna get that answer in Season 2 which, by the way, doesn’t mean you’re gonna see Spock in Season 2… It just means you’re gonna get an answer. There will be a lot of surprises in terms of what you see on Enterprise. And yes, we are staying totally consistent with canon.”

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That, folks, is some extreme hedging. There’s also an article there about Tilly maybe falling on the autism spectrum. Mary Wiseman says that wasn’t intended, but she finds it “moving and inspiring.”

@55. Jana: “Concerning the design, I personally find that the TOS design looks better than anything that came afterwards.”

My brother mentioned some discussions he’d seen where the TOS aesthetic was regarded as more advanced than anything we’ve seen in subsequent series. The idea is that the technology is mostly hidden behind sleek design. No need to have flashy screens and buttons everywhere. He compared it to contemporary Apple design. I’ve never been an Applehead, so your mileage may vary. Also, perhaps akin to the disparity in design in Wall-E, where his (its?) love interest is inspired by a much sleeker aesthetic, her (its?) tech and abilities hidden below a seamless surface.

There’s also the fact that the original Enterprise was much faster that any ship after. At TOS speeds, Voyager should’ve returned in 10 years, not the projected 70. 1000 LY in a calendar year? OG Enterprise scoffs at that.

 

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Peg Robinson
7 years ago

@@@@@ 54 ChristopherLBennett

Thank you. And, yes–that’s me. Thank you for enjoying those stories, too!

DanteHopkins
7 years ago

…So, why did Culber have to die? For a couple flashback scenes?

Gosh, this show. There are parts of this that are really good, great in fact. Burnham’s speech on the bridge ( which probably should have been given by Saru) was great, and I was glad to hear her say she was wrong, and Saru’s “We are Starfleet” was great.  Tilly was a joy to watch here; she’s definitely grown on me. And I’m glad Michael is now Commander Burnham once again. And yay, Amanda! I love the actress who plays Amanda. She has the same grace that Jane Wyman brought to the role.

And I have to admit I’ve been dying to know what the Enterprise looks like. Of course it wasn’t gonna look like the 1960s model. For me it looks close enough and still very modern. Squee.

But…

Why the hell was Emperor Georgiou in charge of Discovery? Why is Tyler allowed to just leave? What is he planning on doing on Qo’nos anyway? How could Starfleet Command, and since Sarek knew, possibly the Federation Council have sanctioned a plan involving genocide? I could see if they had a different plan and Georgiou just decided to destroy the planet on her own, but this was sanctioned by Cornwell. Why does Michael give the speech at the medal ceremony?

And why in the blue hell is Saru not promoted to captain and given command of Discovery ?!!

It’s nice to see the show gets what Starfleet is all about, but man overall this is kind of a mess.

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7 years ago

I honestly don’t understand why they simply wouldn’t have the original Enterprise simply look like the original Enterprise. Choices like that baffle me. I’m not angry or anything :) –just baffled at the creative choice. For me, how cool it would have been simply to see the Enterprise (instead of a version of it). Oh well.

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Redd
7 years ago

The important question here is… when will the waterskiing dog make an appearance next season? I feel like that’s foreshadowing.

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7 years ago

@56/Sunspear: “Here’s Alex Kurtzman on season 2 and why Spock never mentioned his adopted sister: […]”

I don’t think that it needs an explanation. McCoy never mentioned his daughter either, and Kirk mentioned his brother only once. Presumably they talked about them between episodes.

“He compared it to contemporary Apple design. I’ve never been an Applehead, so your mileage may vary.”

Now that you mention it, I do like Apple design. Also Bauhaus and modernism and stuff like that.

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7 years ago

@61, I totally agree that Spock’s failure to mention he has an older sister is not a problem. Spock does not talk about his family at all. Well he acknowledges that his mother is human but nothing else. I consider tacking Michael onto the Sarek family a dubious story choice, imo it would have been better to give her a different Vulcan family, but as far as continuity goes it’s not a problem. I can only assume we are going to get more family drama. Goody.

Turning the VERY traditional Sarek into a rebel and reformer is much more questionable continuity wise.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@61. Jana: Kurtzman is saying we’ll get an explanation. Don’t think I care about that either. What stood out for me was the big dodge that came next: namely, we may not see Spock on the Enterprise at all.

I’ve also seen talk of the prime Lorca returning as captain. Presumably, he was shunted back to PU as MLorca crossed back to his universe. If that happens, I kinda wish PLorca is still played as a bit of an asshole.

Also, we still haven’t accounted for MLorca’s damned tribble. Probably replicating in the ducts…

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7 years ago

@30 – Sunspear: What I meant is that just because she was fawning over a guy or saying she had a type (I think it was athletic guys) doesn’t mean she’s just attracted to guys.

@35 – Chris: I always took it as those Klingons in TOS as not looking like humans with cheesy make-up, I believe the intention was that there was a real difference in universe. But I get your point.

@44 – MeredithP: No, sadly no.

@47 – krad: Did the people complaining back then at least watch the show?

@60 – Redd: He’ll be the new sporedrive navigator.

@62 – princessroxana: The first thing we ever knew about Sarek (even before his name) is that he boinked a human woman. I’d call that very non-traditional.

@63 – Sunspear: I don’t know if he’ll be an asshole, but at least he’ll be psychologically damaged. Our replacement for Tyler on the ship, as it were. I do say he shouldn’t be made captain, but rather advisor or something like that.

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7 years ago

@@@@@ 64, and the second thing we learn about Sarek is he hasn’t spoken to his own son for eighteen years because Spock disobeyed him. Amanda specifically states that Sarek expected Spock to follow his wishes as he, Sarek, had obeyed his own father. And then there’s the whole child marriage thing. Marrying Amanda seems to be Sarek’s one and only violation of tradition. If anything it makes him more rigid in other areas.

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7 years ago

No, Spock joining Starfleet doesn’t go against Vulcan tradition, because there are many other Vulcans in Starfleet, including an ENTIRE SHIP of them. Spock joining Starfleet is against Sarek’s personal wishes. Also, he marries a second human, later.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@59/Jedikalos: “I honestly don’t understand why they simply wouldn’t have the original Enterprise simply look like the original Enterprise.”

Like I said, maybe it’s because that’s already been done. That’s what the previous iteration of the franchise did in “Trials and Tribble-ations” and “In a Mirror, Darkly.” They did it well, but there’s not much point in starting the franchise up again if you’re not going to try new things.

After all, a franchise that has nothing to offer but nostalgia will eventually die out, because it won’t be drawing in new fans, just pandering to the aging fans of the original. Novelty is what makes a series worth continuing.

 

@64/MaGnUs: “I always took it as those Klingons in TOS as not looking like humans with cheesy make-up, I believe the intention was that there was a real difference in universe. But I get your point.”

No, Roddenberry’s intention was to replace the TOS version with something better. I’m pretty sure that he didn’t see TOS as a “live broadcast” from the future, but as a dramatization based on Kirk’s logs, much like the first show he worked on, Dragnet, was a dramatization of real police cases (including his own). In his TMP novelization, he presented himself in the introduction as a 23rd-century producer who’d made TOS as an “inaccurately larger-than-life” fictionalization of Kirk’s adventures, and promised that TMP was a more accurate dramatization because he had Admiral Kirk riding herd over him this time and making sure he got it right. Roddenberry was anything but a purist about Trek continuity, given how many official Trek works he insisted were apocryphal later in life. He was constantly revising his view of Trek continuity, cherrypicking the parts he wanted to keep and the parts he wanted to replace or gloss over. A lot of what we got in TOS wasn’t his ideal vision, it was the result of compromises due to lack of time and budget. The humanoid aliens were one of those compromises. TMP’s greater budget and resources let him do the more exotic kinds of alien he would’ve liked to do more often in TOS if he’d had the time and money for it.

And DS9: “Blood Oath” was pretty clearly implying that Kor, Kang, and Koloth had always had ridges. I think their makeup was a little more subtle than the usual Westmore Klingons, the hairlines a bit more forward, suggesting a compromise design, a la “This is what the TOS makeup was hinting at,” but that’s all. Sure, plenty of tie-ins and fan works had conjectured explanations for the different Klingon appearances (e.g. John M. Ford’s idea in The Final Reflection and the FASA games that they were genetic fusions with other races, created to interact with barbarians on their own terms), but there was never any canonical acknowledgment of the change until “Trials and Tribble-ations,” and that was only because they were forced to acknowledge it due to the reuse of TOS footage.

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7 years ago

@65/Roxana: Not quite. We learn that Sarek and Spock haven’t spoken “as father and son” for eighteen years. As Kirk said, “They are both stubborn.”

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7 years ago

67: So really what it is, is Discovery is 11 years before Kirk’s 5 year mission, but not literally before the 1960’s TV show complete with low budget aesthetics, and while it doesn’t look like TOS the show it takes place in the 11 years Pike is in command of the Enterprise.

Fun nostalgia is fun, but if all Star Trek did was hold up the past as immutable and filled with memories and feelings, then there’s nowhere for it to go. And while Discovery is in chronological order before Kirk but after Archer that doesn’t mean it (or ENT!) has to hold up to the low budget look of the TOS.  Basically Discovery is in the show’s universe time, even though it doesn’t fit our real world TV time.

NOw I”m just being repetitive, I”m not going to jump into an argument about canon and continuity, did that once and swore never again.

THat doesn’t mean the Klingons should be a scene drag though! 

Jason_UmmaMacabre
7 years ago

62. princessroxana “Turning the VERY traditional Sarek into a rebel and reformer is much more questionable continuity wise.” 

Don’t forget, its in his blood as well. He is related to T’Pau and she helped reform Vulcan society only 100 years previous. Also, he married Amanda because he loved her (according to Sarek in ’09 Trek), so giving in to emotions is not necessarily out of the question.  

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7 years ago

@66, yes, exactly. Sarek was offended that Spock disobeyed him. It wasn’t about Starfleet it was about obedience to one’s elders.

@72, T’Pau was more a reformer than a rebel. And as you will recall from Amock Time very Vulcan and slightly racist. 

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7 years ago

Man, that was a let-down even after this godawful season as a whole.  

Seriously, what possible reason could there be for just letting Space Hitler go do whatever she wants?  Mirror Georgiou is a sadistic, psychopathic, genocidal fascist cannibalistic possibly-sexually-abusive tyrant with a Jocasta complex a mile wide and a fondness for impractical superweapons, pointless evil, and killing her own minions for kicks while looking fabulous in an evil dress.  Aside from looking fabulous in an evil dress and Michelle Yeoh delivering performances every episode that are each several orders of magnitude better than the sum total of everyone else’s performances (granted Voq’s acting isn’t great but I don’t blame that on Latif since he’s working from some truly abysmal scripts and his character has no personality), what possible reason could there be for the protagonists to not lock Mirror Georgiou up forever and/or just space her to prevent her from inflicting even MORE atrocities upon innocents?  

Seriously, even by the standards of the Mirror Universe, where sexual exploitation is an accepted fact of life and one of the most popular MU characters is a tyrannical martinet in leather who wanted to rape her doppelganger over on DS9, Mirror Georgiou is unusually destructive, evil, and generally deserving of punishment for her long-ass career of being a psychopathic dictator.  

I’ll credit them for not going the time-travel route, but that just means that the continuity snarl is even BIGGER than it was before this episode.  That is just a fanboy concern, but given that nobody outside fanboys seems to actually care enough to watch the show (a cursory survey of Tumblr posts about this show, and there aren’t many, shows that those who actually kept watching on CBS All Access are almost entirely established Trekkies), it’s a pretty big concern.  

Overall, this entire season’s been one mess after another.  Characters only exist to further the plot, the plot sucks, the protagonist is an unlikable and inept jerk who we’re told over and over is brilliant, and literally every single ounce of potential in this entire show is wasted because literally every plot twist either makes no sense or is the tritest hackwork since Enterprise belly-flopped on an iced-over pool.  

Yeah, screw CBS and screw this noise.  I and a guy on alternatehistory.com were able to come up with a five-season story arc with a more diverse cast, more detailed and interesting characters, an actual war arc, and actual goddamn character development than STD has in about 3 days while he was working a day job and I’m in school.  This is two amateurs on the Internet, STD’s writers are professionals, there is no acceptable excuse for this crap.  

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7 years ago

@72/Jason_UmmaMacabre: Did ENT establish that Sarek was related to T’Pau? Because TOS only established that Spock’s family was important enough for her to officiate at Spock’s wedding. And she seemed to be quite a traditionalist herself in that episode.

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Arthur
7 years ago

Have to say I agree with Mr. DeCandido about the can of worms with the Enterprise. As cool as it was to see the old girl, or Discovery’s version of her, it does represent yet another diversion we don’t really need. I mean, a tribble or a Ceti eel here and there is fine, but when you change course to rendezvous with nostalgia it doesn’t help your series stand on its own. And it does make the universe feel smaller, something that’s plagued Star Trek for a while now.

TNG’s rocky first season ended with the reintroduction of the Romulans with the promise of “We’re back!” (Of course, they took their sweet time coming back after that, but that’s not the point.) They brought back a familiar named species—sigh, if you must—but in a much larger, more impressive ship with new actors in new uniforms. It wasn’t the Bird of Prey from TOS, or a slight variation of it, with Joanne Linville as the Unnamed Female Commander. (Yes, I know she was captured. And yes, I know they considered bringing her back in a later episode of TNG. Thankfully they didn’t.)

Our mission is to go forward, and it’s just begun. There’s still much to do. There’s still so much to learn.

Time to boldly go again.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@73/roxana: People are complicated, self-contradictory entities. It’s not bad writing for a single character to have seemingly incompatible attitudes or to treat different people in their lives in inconsistent ways; it’s actually quite realistic. (That’s actually what I’m enjoying about the book I’m currently reading, Claudia Gray’s Star Wars: Bloodline, about Princess Leia in the years prior to The Force Awakens. There are some nicely complicated characters who have attitudes that are seemingly mutually contradictory but who find ways to rationalize them in their own minds, or who wrestle with which of two conflicting values they prioritize more.)

 

@75/Jana: It’s always been ambiguous whether T’Pau was actually part of Spock’s extended family or just someone whose presence at the wedding indicated the status of said family. The Pocket Books novel continuity goes with the former interpretation, but it’s not canonically established.

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Matthew Carpenter
7 years ago

I for one loved the season. I thought it was amazing. I watch Star Trek to be entertained and this is what S1 of Discovery did for me. Do I know all the lore/canon/etc…yes! Was I worried about all that…no! Just a great to spend Sunday evenings enjoying what I considered fantastic sci-fi!

(ps – not meaning to discredit any of the above debates…you all have valid points. I just decided not to get caught up in that and just enjoy)

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7 years ago

@CLB, I agree with you. People are complicated and contradictory and Vulcans are famously hypocritical. Facts that can be used to argue either way with Sarek, he could as easily be a stubborn traditionalist who made one major deviation from custom in his choice of spouse, or he could be a reformer of sorts tripped up by unexamined cultural conditioning. Personally I favor the former.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@79/roxana: I would argue that Sarek is being a traditionalist by promoting Surak’s belief in Infinite Diversity in Infinite Combination. The Vulcans who are prejudiced against outsiders are the ones who are failing to live up to Surak’s teachings. Sarek believes in the Vulcan way, but he believes — correctly — that the true Vulcan way includes respect for all life forms, not bigotry and exclusion.

And let’s not forget, it was Sybok — Sarek’s full-Vulcan son with his traditionally arranged Vulcan wife — who turned out to be by far the least traditional member of the family. So equating tradition with race would not be at all logical from Sarek’s perspective. Or from any remotely decent individual’s perspective, quite frankly.

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7 years ago

Late to the party again, but if I was using the old KRAD scoring system, I’d say that this came out to be a 4 out of 10.  One of the hallmarks of Star Trek is that Starfleet finds the third way to solve it’s problems-  they obviously don’t surrender, they don’t slug it out, but time and again our intrepid crew figures out a solution to the problem-  Data brings about the end of the Klingon Civil War by getting the Romulans to withdraw (and yes, I know that episode had it’s problems), the Borg are defeated at Wolf 359 not through a feat of strength but by outsmarting them, and so forth.  This plan though was hard to digest.  Install a Mirror Universe dictator as the captain of the ship that just left the mirror universe and let her be generally malevolent and possibly genocidal?  Then we’ll replace that plan by just picking a new leader for the Klingon Empire and letting her hold everyone else hostage to her blow up the planet device, and somehow the 24 houses which have been fragmented are going to just go along with it???  I have no problems that L’Rell is a woman, I do have problems with that she is persona non grata.  

I also agree that Tyler getting to go is a little dubious, although he pretty much decided to that on the spur of the moment.  I have a feeling that we’re not done seeing the Emperor or Tyler Voq in this series either.  The new captain thing in lieu of Saru mildly bothers me, but I’m going to see where that goes.  I think Saru sliding into an executive officer role, Burnham as the #2, Stamets as the Chief Engineer looks good to me, especially if the new captain is an interesting foil to challenge their little happy family- although I caution against the Jellico method of “throw the ship into disarray” command style since that was a little obvious.  And Enterprise… I really hope that we either get a 1 episode thing with NCC-1701 or the next episode picks up as Captain Pike and company warp away.  We said at the start of the season that the opening credits was a love letter to Star Trek fans and the old end credits music was a very nice reprise of that letter, but that being said- its a really really big universe out there, and I’d like Disco to go find it’s corner of it.

Lastly, I’ve had issues ever since we got to the mirror universe of the producers and writing team playing fast and loose with continuity- I still do.  I maintain that none of those continuity inconsistencies are fatal, but one thing to consider is that the viewership is incredibly hardcore-  it has to be since people are shelling out their own money to watch it.  The fact that it’s behind a paywall is already problematic, since it reeks of a money grab by CBS to get Star Trek fans to pay their money to watch.  Being on the All Access ap means that it’s not likely to get any huge ratings pushes either, so it really has to maintain it’s audience.  Put on top of that a gritty dark show that 15 episodes in we’re still debating if it “feels Star Trek” and scripts that seem to hand wave at the existing understanding of the world that has been built for five decades now, and I honestly believe that the franchise has to protect itself more than it is doing.  Yes I know that KRAD and CLB would argue that continuity is not Holy Writ and things do change for creative reasons and that just because something is one way doesn’t mean a new set of writers have to be straight jacketed in, but that doesn’t mean the producers can just kick around the audience either.  Not when the market for sci-fi/fantasy remains very deep and Disney promising new Star Wars television shows (yes, I know Star Wars is Fantasy, not Sci-Fi btw, but they compete for the same audience).  I’d really love to see Discovery in season two keep what did work (the overall season arc, strong performances by much of the cast) but throw in some more pure Star Trek elements- a more upbeat theme to the season, the occasional landing party mission, keeping within the existing built universe a little more- to improve itself.

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7 years ago

@74 – ground_petrel: Be careful, you’r going to choke on your bile.

– Chris: Bloodline is a great book, I love Senator Casterfo. I’d like to see Claudia Gray write some Trek.

@79 – princessroxana: You can prefer whichever interpretation you decide, but you can’t say that the other interpretation is “questionable continuity wise”. because it’s not. You just don’t like it.

@80 – Chris: Good interpretation.

@81 – MikeKelm: I think your overestimating the hardcoreness of the audience. Not only I bet there are lots of people in the US who like Trek but are not hardcore fans of it; but the show is not on a new platform in the rest of the world. It’s on Space in Canada, and Netflix in the rest of the world, and lots of people outside the US are watching the show because it’s on platforms they were already paying for before.

On another topic, they’ve already said that S2 will be more exploratory, more classic Trek.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@81/MikeKelm: I’ve never understood the objections to a paywall. There have been Trek productions that people have had to pay to see ever since the first theatrical feature film came out in 1979. And pay television has been around for decades, just on cable instead of streaming. To this day, there are a ton of acclaimed shows I’ve never seen because I’ve never paid for HBO or Showtime or the like.

And yes, CBS is using Star Trek to attract an audience to their new service. There’s nothing remotely new about that. The Phase II revival that evolved into TMP was going to be the flagship show for a Paramount-owned fourth network, in the same way that Voyager was the flagship show for UPN decades later. TNG pioneered first-run syndicated drama. Even the animated series was an attempt to broaden the audience for Saturday morning cartoons by making one with more adult appeal. And part of the reason TOS got three seasons despite its weak ratings was because its visual spectacle helped NBC’s parent company RCA sell color televisions.

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Redd
7 years ago

I wonder if Number One could be the new captain of Discovery. Hope she finally gets a name at least.

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7 years ago

@84 – Redd: That’d be interesting.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

TrekMovie has a piece on the Easter eggs in the season finale:

https://trekmovie.com/2018/02/12/10-easter-eggs-from-the-season-one-finale-of-star-trek-discovery/

Clint Howard’s Orion had a punch bowl full of tranya!!!

And it looks like I was right about the Ceti eels.

John C. Bunnell
7 years ago

My current prediction is that the “new captain” next season will turn out to be…

…Saru. 

Think about it.  Starfleet Command may think they have a new captain picked out, but they’ve lost a lot of people in the recent war, and all the casualty reports may not yet have come in.  Also (and I need to rewatch the last minutes of the episode to check this), my impression was that the Enterprise was not actually the object of Discovery‘s scheduled rendezvous — rather, it’s the ship they ran into in the process of answering an unexpected distress call.  If that’s accurate, then no one on the early Pike-era Enterprise bridge crew is likely to have been Starfleet’s pick to replace Mirror!Lorca.  I’m inclined to think that one of the major arcs for season two will be the problem of actually finding/catching up with Starfleet’s intended candidate for the captaincy…and that the result of that search may not be what Starfleet had hoped for.

Plus which, I don’t think I’ve picked up any trade-buzz whatsoever about casting for new roles on Discovery for Season 2 (and surely we should be getting at least some hints, even with 2019 air dates, given DSC’s long post-production process).  If that role is on the table, there’ll have to be casting sides at some point, and information from those will leak.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@87/John: You’re half right. Discovery was headed to Vulcan, not to a starship rendezvous. It broke off to answer the Enterprise‘s distress call. But there’d probably be no need to search for the intended captain, because Vulcan isn’t going anywhere (not in this timeline, anyway).

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7 years ago

No casting calls yet because they just started writing the scripts a couple of weeks ago.

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Edgar Governo
7 years ago

@53: “What’s odd is that the past two Trek incarnations (Kelvin and DSC) have been torn between both impulses — they rely heavily on nostalgia while simultaneously trying to innovate. It could be that those two drives work against each other. Personally, I think Star Trek should be about innovation and looking forward. It is supposed to be about boldly going where no one has gone before, after all.”

This seems like a succinct summation of the tension going on in the franchise (among both its creators and fans), as well as the back-and-forth going on in popular culture right now (with many more revivals beyond the ones I mentioned being set in a pre-existing continuity).

Pretending this tension doesn’t exist, or shrugging off the concerns at either end of the spectrum, doesn’t strike me as useful.  The conversation, or even debate, can be interesting without resorting to “black on the right side/white on the right side” thinking about these issues.

As discussed, Star Trek has embodied this tension since at least 1979, trying to strike a balance where it gets to have things both ways. (The Wrath of Khan was arguably successful at this, whereas something like Into Darkness…er, wasn’t.) It’s ironic to go back and look at interviews about the development of Enterprise–where its creators thought there was a sort of pointlessness to “innovation” centred on technology, sets, and props–only to have Discovery come along featuring technology onscreen where any debates about contradiction might’ve been prevented by simply setting the series further into the future.

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7 years ago

No, setting it in the future would still fuel debates and complaints.

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7 years ago

But different ones. 

DanteHopkins
7 years ago

Indeed, MaGnUs. Complaining and debating seems to be a part of Trek fandom, for better or worse.

I personally don’t understand complaining about why the Klingons look like this or why the Enterprise looks like that. I would not want this show or any other Trek to look like what came before it; I want its stories to feel like what came before it, to follow the principles established by past Trek. I could care less about uniforms or ships or technology.

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7 years ago

Yeah, but the creative team knew they were going to have people whining, so they just did the show they wanted to do. It’s better to have them working on something that excites them and upsets some fans, than have them catering to those fans and do something they’re not enthusiastic about.

DanteHopkins
7 years ago

Agreed, MaGnUs. And it’s good they did just do the show they wanted. Even if it’s not the show I would have done story-wise, I do appreciate them choosing to innovate and move forward visually than try to cater. Yes there is a LOT of continuity porn, but after being off-air for 12 years I’m not surprised. 

Sunspear
7 years ago

Number One under Pike was Vulcan-like in presentation. Not sure that character would work as a dynamic with Burnham’s Vulcan baggage already present.

Does the character’s history even line up with where Enterprise is in the timeline at the moment? Some comments have said she may not even be human, perhaps even immortal. The Excalibur stories hinted she may be Robin Lefler’s mother, though that’s not official canon.

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7 years ago

BTW, we now know that Georgiou is from Malaysia, just like Yeoh.

@95 – Dante: It’s not the show I would have done either, but neither was VOY or ENT. Yet I enjoyed ENT, I enjoy DIscovery, and I enjoyed parts of VOY, and what I didn’t enjoy wasn’t because of the premise itself.

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William Wehrs
7 years ago

In terms of continuity, I really could not care less as long as the changes actually help the show. For me, the Klingon makeup was not a problem because it looked different, but more that it prevent actors from emoting which made the scenes with them, especially when they were speaking the silly Klingon language, interminable. The holograms were also needlessly distracting, and I think the creators should have just stuck with the viewscreen. Now, as for the bridge design I am completely fine with it. It looks cool, and I don’t think you could get away with designing it to look like the TOS bridge today.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@94/MaGnUs: “Yeah, but the creative team knew they were going to have people whining, so they just did the show they wanted to do.”

Exactly. Any decision you make will upset or disappoint some people. The only way to upset no one is to delight no one, to do nothing with any real impact. So you just have to make the choices that feel right to you rather than pandering to some imagined audience checklist. And that doesn’t mean blindly copying the choices of your predecessors.

 

@96/Sunspear: We’re three years past “The Cage,” and the only thing we know about the Enterprise at this point in the timeline is that Pike and Spock were part of its crew. We know absolutely nothing canonical about Number One beyond her role in “The Cage.” All the various tie-in conjectures about her are unofficial and mutually contradictory.

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7 years ago

It would be interesting if the new captain was nobody we’d ever heard of, a totally new character. What are the chances of that?

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@100/roxana: I’d say it’s overwhelmingly likely that the new captain will be a new character, just as Burnham, Lorca, Saru, Stamets, etc. are. The only returning characters we’ve seen on DSC have been guest roles. For a series regular, they’d want an original character that they had free rein with, rather than a known canon character whose fate is already decided.

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7 years ago

@97 Be interesting to see if they do bring in Number One and what name they give her.  The novels named Una, New Frontier her name is Morgan.   Would be interesting to see Discovery’s take on her.

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M
7 years ago

It seems like every new Trek series post TNG has gotten a segment of the fans upset. DS9 was “not Roddenbery’s vision” and worst of all, it didn’t MOVE!

I honestly don’t know what fans want- but another 100 episodes of typical “ship encounters a different problem every week” Trek isn’t my idea of fun. I want Trek to have different tones, aesthetics, plot structures, etc.

Star Wars can’t get itself to look beyond the Empire, and after 4 Death Star movies and shameless plot rip offs, fans are beginning to realize it. I’d much rather have Trek’s “problem.”

 

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Phillip Thorne
7 years ago

In the spirits of (a) summarizing the season and (b) investigating if there’s a systematic cause to the awkward writing, here’s my summary of the writers section of the IMDb entry for DSC. (I posted this earlier today to the comment thread on the review on Ars Technica.)

Summary: For the 15 eps of season 1 there are 18 writers, who can be clustered by function and experience. IMDb lists “creator” under “writer,” but I’ve filtered the count to the more pertinent credits of “story,” “teleplay,” “staff writer,” etc. Many of the writers have more experience as producers. Note the many alumni of Reign (a historical drama on CW) and GCB (a comedy-drama on ABC). There are only three writers with prior Trek experience — Joe Menosky (TNG, DS9 and VGR), Bryan Fuller (DS9 and VGR before he became a quirky show creator), and Kirsten Beyer (a novelist). Harberts and Berg have nearly identical credits.

Schema per writer: Name, number of eps of DSC, number of prior series wrote for, (titles), year of earliest TV work.

Gene Roddenberry — because “created by,” but since he’s dead, his TV stats are irrelevant to DSC (1).

The creators get a high count on that basis, but actually wrote only a few eps (2):
* Bryan Fuller, 3, 12, (ST:DS9, ST:VGR, Dead Like Me, Pushing Daisies, etc.), 1997
* Alex Kurtzman, 1, 10, (Hercules, Xena, Alias, Sleepy Hollow, etc.), 1997

The staff writers, whose fingers are on every ep, but who have no other TV experience (3):
* Kirsten Beyer, 15, 0, *, *
* Sean Cochran, 14, 0, *, *
* Kemp Powers, 8, 0, *, *

Experienced TV writers, although rarely with SF/F (9):
* Aaron Harberts, 4, 13, (Bevery Hills 90210, Roswell, Pushing Daisies, GCB, Reign, etc.), 2000
* Gretchen J. Berg, 2, 15, (Bevery Hills 90210, Roswell, Pushing Daisies, GCB, Reign, etc.), 2000
* Ted Sullivan, 2, 13, (As the World Turns, Law & Order, Revenge, Supergirl, etc.), 2010
* Jesse Alexander, 2, 8, (Alias, Heroes, Da Vinci’s Demons, etc.), 2003
* Aron Eli Coleite, 2, 8, (Crossing Jordan, Heroes, Hostages, etc.), 2004
* Lisa Randolph, 2, 7, (Gilmore Girls, Being Human, Reign, etc.), 2002
* Craig Sweeny, 1, 7, (The 4400, Medium, Elementary, Limitless, etc.), 2003
* Jordon Nardino, 1, 6, (Gilmore Girls, GCB, Quantico, etc.), 2006
* Joe Menosky, 1, 11, (Alien Nation, ST:TNG, ST:DS9, ST:VGR, The Dead Zone, etc.), 1989

People with little to no prior TV experience. Most of Akiva Goldsman’s writing credits are for movies, and the other two are … apprentices, maybe? (3)
* Akiva Goldsman, 2, 1, (Fringe), 2009
* Bo Yeon Kim, 1, 1, (Reign), 2015
* Erika Lippoldt, 1, 1, (Reign), 2015

Sunspear
7 years ago

@104. Philip: What’s your analysis, though? How did we get this hodge-podge?

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Phillip Thorne
7 years ago

@105 Sunspear — My analysis? First cut: The DSC season 1 writer’s room didn’t have a lot of experience with Trek; the space opera style of SF; tight arcs (not sure on this — I’m not familiar with all the credited shows); or writing for TV, period.

For a second cut I’d have to (a) compare to the writing experience on the other iterations of Trek (there’s overlap between TNG-DS9-VGR-ENT, but how much), other shows of the same ilk that are well-regarded, and other shows with tight arcs. And (b) similarly check the producers, who (although their exact duties are harder to pin down) have some kind of influence on the creative direction of the show (as opposed to just managing staff and bills).

For a third cut I’d have to correlate to reviews of eps written by each of the writers. Do they have experience, but are generally regarded as poor writers? (With all the caveats pertaining to crowdsourced reviews on the internet.)

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@102/Loungeshep: The Early Voyages comics gave Number One the surname Robbins. Her first name was almost given once, as “Eure–” (interrupted), probably Eureka — which is no doubt why she preferred “Number One.”

 

@103/M: “It seems like every new Trek series post TNG has gotten a segment of the fans upset.”

Ohh, TNG itself got fans hugely upset. There was enormous backlash against the idea of doing Star Trek with anyone but the original cast — and several members of the original cast were quite vocally opposed to TNG as well. It took years to win the traditionalists over, even with Roddenberry himself theoretically in charge.

And before that, there was a fair number of fans who were upset at the changes in the movies.

 

@104 & 106/Phillip Thorne: Credits don’t always give the complete picture. Every active member of the writing staff contributes to every episode, regardless of who gets the script credit. And the showrunners (Berg & Harberts in this case) write the final draft of every script, as a rule.

As for experience with tight story arcs, I’d say a lot of the writers have it, since it’s pretty common these days. For instance, Alexander & Coleite came from Heroes, which was very tightly serialized. Really, I’d say the one with the least experience at season-arc writing is Menosky, since most of his work was from shows that predated heavy serialization — although The Dead Zone had a good mix of episodic and season-arc storytelling. And serialization isn’t everything, given that Menosky turned in the strongest single episode of DSC’s first season.

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Arthur
7 years ago

#103

Star Trek and Star Wars share a lot of the same problems right now. The latter can’t look beyond the Empire, while the former is currently juggling a couple of empires, Klingon and Terran. Change the makeup and uniforms, sure, but they’re all the same old baddies.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@108/Arthur: I think the recent Star Wars movies, especially The Last Jedi, have grown enormously beyond the previous films, in ways that go well beyond basics of plot. They’ve really deepened and broadened the world, gotten more sophisticated in their storytelling and their themes, etc. TLJ in particular did a great job of confronting the rather simplistic Hero’s Journey themes of the original films and growing beyond them to a more nuanced view of heroism, and it did more than any previous film to address just what the heroes are fighting for.

I think Discovery is trying to move the franchise forward in some of the same ways — notably in broadening the center of attention to encompass more diverse protagonists — but I don’t think it’s succeeded in deepening its exploration of the franchise’s themes in the same way, since they’ve already been explored fairly deeply. It was trying to challenge the Federation’s values under severe stress and then reaffirm them, but DS9 already had that covered. I’m not sure it really broke any new ground beyond bringing Trek in sync with what much of the rest of modern TV already does — more serialized plotting, more adult content, LGBT inclusion finally, etc.

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M
7 years ago

Arthur, I think that’s a rather simplistic view of things. The Federation/Klingon relationship is infinity more nuanced than Rebels vs Empire. Trek had all of 3 episodes of the Terran Empire in its glory, and Discovery did new things with it.

Chris, TLJ tried, but still was constrained by the horrendous decision of Ep 7-9 to recreate the Empire vs Rebels theme. Think about it, since Star Wars came back we got an almost literal repeat of A New Hope, then a whole movie about the Death Star, and then a Rebels on the run/Jedi training movie in 8, which at least wasn’t a complete copy of Empire. I do like Jedi, but that out of gas plot is full of holes and insane military decisions.

As much as Into Darkness got grief, it didn’t copy Wrath of Khan nearly as much as 7 did of 4.

But I do agree that Discovery did cover a lot of the same ground as DS9 did about the war testing the Federation.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@109. CLB: ” I’m not sure it really broke any new ground beyond bringing Trek in sync with what much of the rest of modern TV already does.”

Yeah, I agree with this. As the season recedes, it seems lesser than I hoped it would be. Really wanted this to pay off in a big way. Not only was the bomb plot pedestrian, but it made little sense as leverage to end the war. Starfleet was about to do the very thing the Klingons were going to do to Earth. Morally, just ugh.

Given that we’ve just started a Consider Phlebas re-read, I really wish the writers had delivered a deeper, more developed view of the Klingon side. Horza has some valid criticism of The Culture in that novel. A genocidal Federation should have had much greater moral weight. Klingons would have been right to fear the psychotic humans and their allies. Ending it with L’Rell’s threats, when she has no House or allies to back her, isn’t believable. Not to mention she can’t let anyone close to her. She is instantly a target for assassination. Not a stable solution.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@111/M: I think you’re judging the new Star Wars trilogy on too simplistic a level. It’s not about what plot they’re using, it’s about how they’re telling it. The plot is just a backdrop to the character story, and it’s in the character work that the new movies really shine.

Besides, the fact that the First Order wants to copy the Empire is exactly what defines it as a threat. It’s a group that can’t move forward, that clings to the oppression of the past and is determined to crush all efforts to build a more progressive future. That’s a very timely allegory right now. The whole thematic arc of the new trilogy is about the good guys who are moving forward and evolving and learning vs. the bad guys who refuse to do any of that and are doomed to keep rehashing the mistakes of the past. And I think TLJ pretty clearly put an end to the First Order’s unimaginative repetition of the past, through Kylo Ren’s actions. Heck, that whole movie was about confronting the old patterns and demolishing or rejecting them, both the characters themselves doing so quite literally and the overarching story doing so structurally and thematically. That’s exactly what makes it so impressive, and so controversial.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@113. CLB: “that whole movie was about confronting the old patterns and demolishing or rejecting them…”

Yes, it interrogated the prior values; frankly simplistic good/evil, light/dark dichotomies. But in some ways reestablished a status quo. They had a chance to create a more complex moral stance. They tried hard by examining Jedi failures. I was hoping we’d finally see some Gray Jedi. Ultimately, it seemed like Kylo and Rei just went back to their respective corners to begin the battle anew. This will take a third or outside party to shake things up.

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M
7 years ago

Chris, TLJ is better than TFA bc of the reasons you mention, but I still think you are giving the writers (and rationale) behind Ep 7 way too much credit.

The reason why the First Order is the Empire is bc Disney didn’t trust its audience. That’s why we got the same pieces: Stormtroopers, TIEs, Star Destroyers, AT-ATs, Death Star with a trench run. It is why 7 is a copy of 4. All of the important narratives the audience deserved is missing. Why did Republic fall so fast? Why did Ben turn? All of that was ignored in order to copy Ep 4.

Star Trek has 13 movies and 600+ episodes. It’s hard to find new concepts. What the heck was the Star Wars excuse?

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@115/M: The difference between us is that you’re talking exclusively about the plot structure and not saying a word about what matters to me, which is the characters. To me, the fact that the plot “rhymes” with the original film is okay (mostly — I do agree the whole Starkiller Base thing was too repetitive), because the plot is just the backdrop for the new characters to establish themselves. When I think about TFA, I don’t think about Stormtroopers or Star Destroyers, I think about Rey and Finn and Poe and how I like them even more than Luke, Leia, and Han. (Well, more than Luke and Han, at least.) And about how Kylo Ren is a richer and more nuanced antagonist than Darth Vader. I’ve seen it said that he’s the character Anakin should’ve been, and I agree.

I mean, heck, it’s not like the original Star Wars was some paragon of originality. George Lucas’s entire career has pretty much been one big exercise in nostalgia and homage to the things he liked growing up, and SW was very much in the vein of classic adventure serials and pulp sci-fi. What made it fresh and worthwhile were the characters — pretty much basic archetypes in their ways, but well-drawn and interesting variations on them — and the precedent-setting production values and designs. What made it work wasn’t what story it told, but how it told it.

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7 years ago

So now, besides Harry Mudd being a mass murderer, Sarek goes him one better and is party to planning genocide on a planetary scale.  It’s no wonder that the Klingons thought that Genesis would be used to destroy them.  Apparently it would not be the first time that the Federation would be able to kill every Klingon on Kronos.  It makes this little exchange read a little differently now, doesn’t it?

KLINGON AMBASSADOR: We deny nothing! We have the right to preserve our race!
SAREK: Do you have the right to commit murder?

Oh Sarek, you hypocrite.  

How long before someone writes a story where Mirror Georgiou is seen to be working for Section 31? You’d think that she’d be a perfect fit.  No morals, loves killing and nobody to answer to.

I’d have loved to be a fly on the wall during the planning meeting for this mission “OK, we’ll send in a team led by a homicidal maniac from another universe to kill every living thing on Kronos. “

“What are we going to tell the rest of the crew?”

“We’ll lie to them.  What could possibly go wrong?”

 “Quite logical, Admiral.  I approve.”

Sheesh.

They’ve got a revolutionary transportation system that allows them to travel literally anywhere in an instant and they’re going to shelve it while the one person who knows the most about it goes off on a mission or ten?  Really?  How about setting Stamets up in a lab someplace and allowing him to work on it?  Besides, by the end of the series he doesn’t seem to be suffering any ill effects anymore.  It’s “THAT” close to being perfected and they’re just going to warehouse it?  Why?  Because it was never mentioned on TOS and they can’t violate that.  Here’s a thought, call it transwarp drive and be done with it.  Oh wait, transwarp was a failure.  Or was it?  Maybe they simply came up with a computer that could take the place of a human or tardigrade interface.  Scotty did say he removed components from the transwarp computer.

OK, everyone who was surprised to see Burnham get her rank back, get a pardon, get her record expunged, raise your hands.  The only thing she got for committing mutiny and assaulting her commanding officer was six months in jail and loss of her first officer position.

The fact that a Klingon fleet was just about to assault Earth sure makes Carol Marcus look like she wasn’t paying attention in history class when she said Starfleet has kept the peace for a hundred years.

Leaving Tilly, the least experienced member of the landing party alone on a hostile planets, surrounded by Orions, while she’s carrying the one component of the mission that they need to be successful doesn’t seem to make too much sense.  

The revised Enterprise is quite nice as an update of the TOS design (certanly MUCH better than the JJprise) even though it’s quite different from the Defiant wireframe seen just a few episodes before.  For example, it’s missing the cut outs on the saucer rim as well as what look like Reliant type megaphasers on the pylons.

Enterprise

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7 years ago

Well, “analyze the writing staff” was an experiment. I’d much prefer the direct approach — ask the writers “what were you trying to do, what imperatives were you given, and what’s your assessment of the result?” There might already be interviews to that effect, on StarTrek.com or After Trek; I haven’t checked. If not yet, it’ll all eventually come out; personally, I can apply Vulcan dispassion and patience, but a lot of fans evidently can’t.

@110 krad: 

Keep in mind that Kirsten Beyer has nine Star Trek novels to her credit,

Granted, but a novel is not a TV episode. First, I assume the skill at pacing is not entirely transferable, just as with novels vs. short stories; second, characterization is achieved differently in the two mediums. And many of the complaints are, in fact, about pacing and characterization: Too many ideas touched upon too briefly, characters shoehorned for nostalgia reasons, being handed the idiot ball, inadequate establishing shots (although that might equally be the director).

and she knows Trek as well or better than anyone.

If that’s so, then given the apparent contradictions (or at least, awkward fits) with established continuity (purely on the written end, not visual), then we (on the outside) can only conclude that either (a) she forgot something, (b) she doesn’t prioritize those particular details in the same way, or (c) she was overridden.

Consider the debate above re: Sarek — is he a traditionalist or an iconoclast? Is his personal journey (as plotted through all the series) the obvious straight line or a more intriguing sinusoid? The audience doesn’t know, and can’t tell, because we don’t have enough evidence either way about his place in Vulcan society. We’re not just blind men palpating different parts of an elephant; we’re not even sure there is an elephant. Complicated characters are good, but if there’s not enough room in the narrative to be definitively complicated, the product is ambiguity and confusion — Burnham has a complicated relationship with her foster father? Fine. But Sarek has a complicated relationship with Vulcan, which is essential background to Burnham? That’s a distraction.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@118/phillip_thorne: “and she knows Trek as well or better than anyone.

If that’s so, then given the apparent contradictions (or at least, awkward fits) with established continuity (purely on the written end, not visual), then we (on the outside) can only conclude that either (a) she forgot something, (b) she doesn’t prioritize those particular details in the same way, or (c) she was overridden.”

Obviously (c), because she’s a staff writer, the lowest rank in the writing staff hierarchy. The other producers rely on her for her Trek expertise, which surpasses any of theirs, but their authority surpasses hers. It’s the same as when the Berman-era shows had paid science consultants on staff but frequently ignored their scientific advice for the sake of the story, or when Roddenberry did the same with the advice of the scientists and researchers he consulted on TOS.

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7 years ago

@58/DanteHopkins Why is Tyler allowed to just leave? Yep, THAT’s where Michael should have broken out her neck pinch! I bet it’s simply because the writers wanted to give Tyler some agency; he hasn’t had any since he got his human makeover.  But he’ll be back. The writers are probably falling over themselves to write the episode where he visits his mother on Earth: “I have your son’s mind, even if this isn’t the body you gave birth to!” No writer or actor could resist!
I haven’t seen anyone give Tyler credit yet for speaking Klingon fluently, sounding like a person speaking a real language. Tyler even sounds more fluent than Voq, so either the prosthetics were the problem all along, or he’s just had more time to practice and get good.

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7 years ago

@117/kkozoriz: “SAREK: Do you have the right to commit murder?”

TOS mentioned repeatedly that Vulcans are pacifists. DSC did away with that in its first episode.

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7 years ago

@122/krad: It’s never too late to complain. 

I’m not entirely happy with ENT’s portrayal of Vulcans either, but it takes place a century earlier, and they rediscover their original values later in the show, so it isn’t as bad as what DSC did. As kkozoriz said, it puts Sarek’s later behaviour in quite a different light.

As always, I’m not complaining about continuity. I’m asking the question what the changes do to the Star Trek universe. The Vulcans of TOS were arrogant and repressed, but also had many positive traits. Their pacifism was one of them. You could see why people had so much respect for them, why Amanda considered the Vulcan way better, why Miranda Jones lived by it. Looking at DSC, it seems that humans are clearly the best there is. I find that disappointing. 

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7 years ago

Enterprise also showed that the Vulcan leadership was actually Romulans.  This time, it’s totally on Sarek with no convenient scapegoats.  And Burnham seems totally OK with that fact even is she didn’t agree with it.  There’s no sign of shock or outrage when they meet.  If I had discovered my father was planning genocide, I’d have something to say to him about it.  I’d say that Amanda is unaware of his actions too.  I can’t imagine her commenting about the Vulcan way being better, etc. if she were.

 

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7 years ago

@67 I take your point about doing new things, but it seems to me the new things should be in the realm of the ideas and story lines, etc. To change the physical appearance of the Enterprise when it is well established what the ship looks like does not seem to me to be a matter of nostalgia but of simple and sensible continuity so as not to jar the viewer out of the story. Thus the holograms used in the new series as well, which just seems to be needless, etc. (By the way, a shout-out: I love all your Star Trek books, and I love reading your comments here.)

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@121/Jana: I did a search for the word “pacifist” in the Trek transcripts, and TOS never described the Vulcans that way. TAS did so in “The Slaver Weapon,” but that was because Niven just plugged Spock into Nessus’s role in the original story (he also refers to Spock as an “herbivore,” which is incorrect — he’s an omnivore who chooses to be vegetarian). And it could be taken as Spock referring to the Kzinti’s perception of Vulcans rather than the objective truth. The only other time Vulcans are referred to as pacifists is in TNG: “Unification,” and again, it’s said by an outsider rather than an actual Vulcan. ENT referred to the Syrannite movement as pacifists, and the Syrannites did ultimately take over the government at the end of that arc, but that doesn’t mean their pacifism remained official state policy a century later. Governments rarely have the luxury to practice pure pacifism.

 

@125/Jedikalos: “To change the physical appearance of the Enterprise when it is well established what the ship looks like does not seem to me to be a matter of nostalgia but of simple and sensible continuity so as not to jar the viewer out of the story.”

Star Trek has never been all that concerned with visual continuity. Each new production has been free to do its own redesign of the Klingons, Romulans, Andorians, Tellarites, etc; to portray the cities of Earth or Vulcan or Qo’noS in a different way; to give the planets a different appearance from orbit; to redesign the uniforms and props and technology as they wish; to redesign the transporter effect or the warp drive effect; and so on. Every aspect of Trek’s visual design has been reinvented over and over again; that is the norm, NOT the exception. Fans have generally been able to chalk up the tech and uniform redesigns to changes over time, but really, such rapid and frequent change is kind of ridiculous. And we’ve pretended that the different alien looks represent different races of an alien species or whatever, but “Divergence” aside, no production has ever shown two or more variations of an alien design at once. We fool ourselves into believing the pretense that Trek’s designs are consistent and reconcilable, but they’ve always, always been freely changed by new creators. Heck, sometimes even by the same creators, like when Worf got an entirely new forehead in season 2 of TNG.

And let’s not forget how TOS often recycled stock effects footage from the pilots during the regular series, so the appearance of the Enterprise could change from the series version to the pilot version and back multiple times in a single episode, or even a single sequence. Some fans have been obsessive enough to try to rationalize that the ship had features that could extend or retract at different times, or whatever, but most viewers for the past half-century have just ignored the visual changes and pretended the ship had a consistent look even though it didn’t.

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7 years ago

@126 – Chris: Good research on the whole “pacifism” claim. People want to go by their impressions of what canon says, instead of actually checking the sources.

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7 years ago

@126/Christopher: If I recall correctly, it was you who called an army restricted to defence a “pacifist army” in one of the earlier rewatch threads. I found that an unusual, but delightful usage of the word “pacifist”. But I’m not really interested in discussing terminology. What I’m thinking of, and what I (perhaps sloppily) called “Vulcan pacifism”, is the following attitude:

“Vulcans believe that peace should not depend on force.” (Amanda, “Journey to Babel”)

“I’m surprised the Vulcans never conquered your race.” – “Vulcans worship peace above all.” (Henoch and McCoy, “Return to Tomorrow”)

“I too am a Vulcan, bread to peace.” (Spock, “The Savage Curtain”)

“In my time on Vulcan, […] we sent emissiaries to our opponents to propose peace. The first were killed, but others followed. Ultimately we achieved peace, which has lasted since then. […] Surely it is more logical to heal than kill.” (Surak, “The Savage Curtain”)

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

Spock was clearly not a pacifist; he advocated for peaceful solutions where possible, but accepted the logical necessity to use deadly force on occasion. Presumably, this reflects Vulcan philosophy — and Federation philosophy, for that matter. Pacifism means refusing to fight under any circumstances. Favoring peace but still being willing to use force as a last resort is not the same thing. (If I did use the phrase “pacifist army” at any point, I was speaking either figuratively or erroneously.)

And really, would a pacifist society still maintain a tradition of mortal combat to resolve marriage challenges?

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7 years ago

@129/Christopher: Okay, that’s the definition of pacifism I’m familiar with. The “pacifist army” had me somewhat confused.

It doesn’t change my initial claim, though. The attitude displayed by Sarek throughout DSC doesn’t fit with the Vulcan attitude we see in the quotes above. I think that’s a loss. You’re free to disagree.

Also, Surak (or at least the Surak in Spock’s mind) clearly was a pacifist.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@130/Jana: Of course Sarek’s attitudes are different from the norm, because he’s adapted to the different situation of the Federation being at war. People adapt their behavior to different situations, and war changes things more radically than just about any other situation. That’s the whole point of the war arcs in DS9, ENT, and DSC — that war impels us to compromise our values and we have to struggle to decide what compromises go too far. We’re not supposed to be seeing Sarek’s or the Federation’s normal characterization. We’re seeing them struggling with an extreme exception to the norm.

And yes, Surak was a pacifist. Jesus was a pacifist too, but how many “Christian” nations have gone to war over the centuries? Most cultures fall short of the perfect ideals they aspire to.

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Redd
7 years ago

-“No time for Bread and Circuses.”

 

Suggestions for eye-rolling references in future episodes…

-“Beam the intruder from the ship! Initiate turnabout protocol!”

-“Ultimately, computer, I expect you will be replaced by smart spores.”

-“How dare you say that, Zetar! I oughta knock your lights out!”

-“Let that be your last drink, Tilly. Please.”

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7 years ago

“Bread and circuses” is a common expression, even more so for someone from an empire that models itself (or at least its Emperor titles) on the Roman Empire.

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7 years ago

@131/Christopher: My point is that the characterisation of Vulcans in this show felt un-TOS-y right from the start. In TOS, Vulcans were less aggressive than humans. Spock repeatedly chided his collegues for their aggressiveness. The aggressive stance towards the Klingons should have been a human plan, not a Vulcan one. It doesn’t fit.

@132/Redd: Let’s seed space with smart spores!

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7 years ago

131. ChristopherLBennett –  But we don’t see Sarek or Cornwell struggling with it at all.  Cornwell keeps the real mission secret and when the truth is revealed, orders the crew to proceed.  It’s only when they stand up to her and she realizes that she can’t force them to do it does she back down.

And Sarek simply comments to Burnham at the end and she accepts it quite nonchalantly.  Like it was no big deal that her father had just been part of a plan to wipe out billions of people.  No remorse.  No feeling of guilt.  Just a “Yeah, I did that but it was never actually carried out so no biggie.  BTW, can I get a ride home?”

We saw the reaction of those who discovered the deception but not one bit of “suffering” by those who made the decision.

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Redd
7 years ago

#133

Sure.

#134

Hehe. Excellent!

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7 years ago

@134 – JanaJansen: Vulcans in TOS are inherently illogical, they claim to be logical, yet still have arranged marriages from childhood and ceremonies with combat to the death. The Vulcan Hello feels positively at home with those Vulcans.

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7 years ago

107: I’ve never read those, but that’s funny.  She seriously needs an onscreen comeback. Though I know, the show is focused on Discovery and its crew, not Enterprise and PIke’s crew. 

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7 years ago

She’s the perfect character for a comeback on Discovery. Plus, Saru and her are friends already (viz David Mack’s novel “Desperate Hours”).

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7 years ago

@135 Regarding Sarek, it feels like the writers were under orders to make sure the season wrapped up neatly. Introducing another round of interpersonal conflict between Burnham and Sarek would have been messy.

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7 years ago

@137/MaGnUs: That’s a bit simplistic. Vulcans have a culture that contains contradictory elements, just like anyone. That doesn’t mean that anything “illogical” automatically fits in there.

Actually, I’ve argued before that the contradictory elements do make sense. Logic is a means to order the world. So are ritual and tradition. Vulcans prefer logic and value peace, but when those devices break down in the time of Pon Farr, they turn to ritual instead.

And I’ve seen people on Earth argue that arranged marriages are logical, because love is often transitory.

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7 years ago

Rituals are logical, combat to the death is not, and it’s doubly stupid for a civilization that claims to be peaceful and constantly sneers upon other species’ impulsive tendencies.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@134/Jana: I’ve never understood that objection to “The Vulcan Hello.” Yes, Vulcans are peaceful, but they’re also intelligent enough to recognize that Klingons do not respect peacefulness, so if you want to establish good relations with the Klingons, you have to open with a show of strength. For some reason, a lot of people have mistaken Sarek’s “Fire first to establish your strength” with “Kill them all, mwa-ha-ha-ha-ha!” He was talking about baring your fangs as a dominance gesture, not blowing the enemy out of the sky. And that is a perfectly logical thing to do when dealing with a species that employs such dominance gestures. You don’t practice first contact by expecting other cultures to conform to your norms. You do it by showing respect for their norms. How is respect for diversity not a Vulcan value?

Klingons respect strength. That’s a statement that’s been consistently made throughout the season, and was cited here as the reason L’Rell’s control of the bomb worked at getting the Klingons to listen to her. That was a Vulcan hello. First you prove to them that you have power, then they respect you enough to listen to what you have to say. That was the principle Sarek spelled out in the first episode, and it paid off here. The “Vulcan Hello” is not about the Vulcans; it’s about the Klingons, and the Vulcans’ insight into what’s required to negotiate with them. 

Jason_UmmaMacabre
7 years ago

I figured that Sarek endorsing the destruction of Qo’nos to be pragmatic logic. If they do not destroy the Klingons, the Klingons will destroy them. He erred on the side of self preservation because he did not see another way. Cornwell was just desperate. 

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7 years ago

Since when has the Federation shown respect for other cultures customs?  Most of the first contact episodes end up with our crew showing them the errors of their ways and making them more like humans.  Even when they say “Go away, we don’t want you here”, the Federation reaction is “But that’s not a good thing.  We’re going to come in and show you how great it is to have us as your friends.  And BTW, we have this starship that can lay waste to your planet if you refuse”

Even as simple an episode as Justice shows that there’s no respect for local laws.  Sure, it doesn’t make sense from a Federation perspective but it was totally above board according to the las of the Edo.

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7 years ago

@142/MaGnUs: They can’t think straight during their mating time, the ritual combat predates Surak and is apparently rarely used, and the whole thing is a shameful secret. It makes sense to me.

@143/Christopher: I know that Sarek didn’t suggest to kill the Klingons. But firing first is a show of aggression. The distribution of roles between Georgiou and Burnham we see in “The Vulcan Hello” is the opposite of what we used to see between Kirk and Spock.

“Vulcans are […] intelligent enough to recognize that Klingons do not respect peacefulness.” – So Burnham was right and Georgiou was wrong?

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@146/Jana: Yes, firing first is a show of aggression, but as I just said, that is not about Vulcan values, it’s about Klingon values. Sarek didn’t say “Always fire first against every other species you ever encounter,” he said “If you want to get the Klingons to respect you, you have to show aggression.” Diplomacy is situational. What works for one species won’t work for another. Diplomacy with Klingons is a dominance game in a way diplomacy with another species would not be. Vulcans don’t want to be aggressive, but they learned through painful experience that if they want to avoid conflict with the Klingons, they have to interact with them on Klingon terms.

I mean, we’ve seen Picard follow the exact same principle. He’s always been portrayed as a man of peace, but when it came to dealing with the Klingons, he respected that theirs were the values of a warrior people and he had to go along with that if he wanted to deal with them diplomatically. He even tolerated Worf murdering Duras because it was acceptable under Klingon values. See also Dax in “Blood Oath,” choosing to set aside her normal peaceful ways out of respect for the culture of her Klingon friends.

And yes, the idea all along was that Burnham was right in principle, though she went about it the wrong way. As I just said, the theme of Klingons respecting strength has been a season-long arc, set up in the pilot and resolved in the finale. The “Vulcan hello” was the way to deal with the Klingons, and it was the cultural misunderstanding between Starfleet and the Klingons that prevented the initial situation from being resolved.

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7 years ago

@147/Christopher: Oh. I was under the impression that we were supposed to side with Georgiou.

Star Trek sure has changed since I became a fan in the 70s.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@148/Jana: I don’t see this as a change. Again, it is totally, totally wrong to see Sarek’s position as pro-war. The idea was that, in order to prevent war with the Klingons, in order to earn their respect so that they’re willing to negotiate with you, you have to understand their culture’s dominance psychology and open negotiations with a show of strength. Not to destroy the enemy ship, just to fire on it enough to show you mean business. It’s no different from two cats hissing and baring their teeth at each other before they end up settling down and grooming each other. A show of dominance does not equal deadly violence. In fact, the whole reason animals have those kinds of dominance and submission displays are as a way of avoiding more serious violence. If you demonstrate that you have the strength to fight, then you don’t actually need to fight, because the demonstration is enough.

The Vulcan Hello is about understanding an alien culture and finding the right way to interact with it in order to avoid unnecessary conflict. That is absolutely true to the values that Star Trek has had all along. Literally. Right at the start, in “The Corbomite Maneuver,” Kirk had to overpower Balok, have him at the Enterprise‘s mercy, and then show compassion in order to demonstrate Starfleet’s peaceful character. And how many times did Kirk have to get into a fistfight with an alien before they were willing to sit down and negotiate with him?

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Redd
7 years ago

Seems like firing first on a warrior culture that loves combat is giving them exactly what they want, especially when they’re so paranoid about Federation expansion. Given their nature, I think they were going to war no matter what. “They come in peace! Liars! Kill them!” or “They’ve fired on us! Return fire!” You don’t need Vulcan consultation to figure out Klingons are morons.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@150/Redd: I don’t think that’s really true. Like I said, aggressive life forms need dominance/submission rituals that they can use to establish strength without the need for costly violence. Klingons may make noises about being a warrior race, but in practical terms, they’d never survive as a culture if they always started a war at the least provocation. The cost to the economy, population, infrastructure, etc. would be crippling to their civilization if they went to war as often as they pretended to want to. So they’d need to have pragmatic limits on violence that would allow them to restrain themselves while still saving face — which is why they have things like personal honor duels, a way two leaders can fight it out without needing to sacrifice whole armies. So it follows that there would need to be situations where they’d just accept two ships giving each other bloody noses as sufficient combat to satisfy their nominal need for bluster and glory, and then just say “Ha-ha, well fought, worthy foe” and sit down to negotiate.

Klingons aren’t morons; they’re predators. And like all predators, they need behavioral and social mechanisms to regulate their aggression and resolve conflict without excessive cost. A civilization of predators would need such regulatory mechanisms even more so in order to function as an organized and productive society. That’s the reason “warrior cultures” tend to have such strong codes of honor and discipline.

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7 years ago

146 – Jana: They can’t think straight when in Pon Farr, but others around them can, and should know about it to help them control themselves, or restrain them. And hiding the whole thing out of shame is ilogical as it gets.

And Burnham was right to use the Vulcan Hello (not to disobey orders); she just couldn’t know that T’Kuvma was intent in starting a war no matter what happened. We must remember that in no way was the war Michael’s fault: it would have happened anyway. As Chris says, “The Vulcan Hello” (the episode, including the idea) is entirely true to Star Trek values. The style is what changed, and you prefer TOS’s.

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Redd
7 years ago

#151

Sorry, I have little patience for warrior cultures and chest-thumping codes of honor anymore. Maybe if the finale had been more joyous instead of simply holding a bomb to them and might makes right, something along the lines of “Day of the Dove,” I would have a higher opinion of Klingons and the episode right now. Hopefully they ‘discover’ a new species next season.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@153/Redd: Let’s not lose the thread. The question on the table is whether the “Vulcan Hello” strategy is a change in the portrayal of the Vulcans, or in Star Trek‘s basic values. I’m saying it isn’t, both because it’s logical to adapt your diplomatic tactics to what works best when dealing with a particularly prickly culture like the Klingons, and because there’s plenty of Trek precedent for normally peaceful characters accommodating the Klingons’ more aggressive customs for the sake of good relations or friendship with them.

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7 years ago

@154 – Chris: And it’s not just with Klingons, it’s happened with other hostile races with similar cultures.

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Thesseli
7 years ago

Ash trashtalking the Klingons, in Klingon…I loved that.

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7 years ago

That was nifty.

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7 years ago

We’ve never seen the Federation fire first when encountering Klingons.  An excellent time to do so would have been during The Emmisary (TNG) when encountering the Klingon sleeper ship.  Instead, Worf just yelled at them for firing at the Enterprise.

The whole idea of firing first is just a retcon to tell the story on Discovery.  It’s not based on any prior portrayal of contact with the Klingons.  Just like the change in apperance, it’s a change in behavior that we haven’t seen before or since in the timeline.  Should Kirk have fired a torpedo across the bow of Kronos One? 

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AWalt
7 years ago

I’ve only read one novel featuring Number One. D C Fontana understood and shaped the character of Spock (along with Leonard Nimoy) best. Her first and only novel “Vulcan’s Glory” offers clues to Spock’s early years and Number One (as well as Scotty).  It seems she is called/named Number One as a result of selective breeding (eugenics anyone?) Literally “Number One” of her kind due to the perfection of her genes.  She served 4 years aboard the Yorktown as Pike’s first officer and now with him on the newly commissioned Enterprise. Second Officer Lieutenant Spock reports to the Enterprise after spending time on Vulcan following a return home at the request of Sarek through Amanda from ordered down time on Earth (Hawaii). This novel is essentially Spock’s story but has some interesting character shaping from 1989. Perhaps Discovery writers will use some of this. Its not a bad read.

John C. Bunnell
7 years ago

Catching up with the extended discussion:

I have been outspoken in a number of prior threads in arguing that the writing on Discovery is generally pretty good — given the story the writers evidently wanted to tell.  [Restated for emphasis: writing is not ‘bad writing’ merely because it tells a story other than the one you wanted it to.  That, however, is a more general discussion than the one I want to have just now.]

However, I agree with those who are uncomfortable with prime!Sarek’s non-consensual mindmeld on his and Cornwell’s arrival on the ship’s bridge, because that bit of writing does strike me as awkward and rushed.  It’s sharply inconsistent with the character’s portrayal in most prior screen canon [and most prose sub-canon, but that’s different discussion #2], and as aired, it definitely resonates with the Spock/Valeris meld in Undiscovered Country.  I see why the scene went down that way — the DSC writers were evidently making a callback to mirror!Sarek’s use of the same mindmelding strategy a few episodes prior — but I also think a few seconds’ worth of additional dialogue would have avoided the problems and provided better setup for Sarek’s subsequent support of Georgiou’s and Cornwell’s intended near-genocide of the Klingons.  If I’d been staging it, this is how the scene would have unfolded:

Cornwell & her team beam in.  “Give us one good reason not to phaser you all to H*ll.”

Saru: “We’re really us.  [technobabble about quantum resonance]”

Michael: “Wait, there’s a quicker way!  Sarek, read my mind!”

Cornwell: [stunned look] “Is she serious?”

Sarek: [equally stunned look] “She’s right — the meld would leave no room for doubt.”

And we proceed from there…except that we spend just a few seconds flashing through Sarek’s experience of the meld, specifically including mirror!Sarek’s more aggressive use of mindmelding, such that it’s clear that at least for a moment, Sarek touches the mind of his mirror-self.

Staged this way, we totally sidestep the callbacks to Spock’s meld with Valeris.  We also preserve the idea that prime!Sarek — particularly as compared to Spock, and in general consistency with screen canon prior to DSC — is relatively uncomfortable with and reluctant to use his Vulcan mental gifts even within his family, even before the onset of Bendii syndrome makes that difficult.  And that latter bit is important, because it lays the groundwork for an explanation for Sarek’s subsequent willingness to go along with the Empress’ and Cornwell’s plans for Qo’nos.  We didn’t see this explanation onscreen, but we could have, with another thirty seconds’ dialogue much later between Michael and Sarek.  [And I am more than enough of a Watsonian, as opposed to a Doylist, to insert it as “head canon” into my own reading of the episode and go on watching DSC from there.  But that’s different discussion #3.]

It’s simply this: Sarek, after the meld with Michael in which he encounters his mirror-self, is undergoing a degree of psychic shock — he has touched enough of that mind to see just how different that other self is, and how much more aggressively that self uses its mind-gifts.  Also, he’s seen for himself just how truly desperate the non-human races in the mirrorverse really are, and that desperation has blasted right through the shielding he usually keeps in place to control his own inner emotional state.  Thus, for quite some time after that meld, he is suffering from a high level of PTSD, is not thinking or reacting as he normally would — and, because of the way the meld threw all those emotions at him, is far less capable than a Vulcan would normally be of recognizing and mastering that input.

This rationale — if made explicit onscreen, and that would’ve been easy to do — extends the force and reach of the mirrorverse storyline.  It would have laid the groundwork for a stronger dialogue between Sarek and Michael in this episode than the one we actually got, and set up an interesting and challenging character arc for Sarek going forward.  And it would have done so in a way that’s significantly more consistent with what we’ve seen of Sarek onscreen in this and prior Trek incarnations.  If we’re lucky, it may turn out that the writers’ own subsequent thinking, given time for reflection, may go in this direction as well.  But that remains to be seen.

In the grand scheme of things, I think most of the legitimate writing issues arising from DSC’s first season are of this general order — matters of detail and nuance that, while sometimes prickly, shouldn’t be sufficient to knock an open-minded viewer out of the audience.  Other troubles — the Klingon dialogue situation, for instance — have also arisen out of different combinations of production choices.  But overall, I like what I’ve seen and I hope the series will continue to improve going forward…as usually happens once a production team has the time to reflect a bit and find its footing.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@159/AWalt: I’ve always hated the interpretation that “Number One” was the character’s own designation, because — as we’ve seen clearly since in TNG and Discovery — it’s just a form of address for a ship’s first officer (originating in the British Royal Navy, IIRC). Will Riker, Michael Burnham, and Saru have all been called Number One by their captains. So saying that an officer would would’ve been addressed as Number One anyway is actually named “Number One” is way too cutesy and coincidental, or else displays ignorance of the actual intent behind the title.

Vulcan’s Glory was interesting, but rather odd, in that it portrayed the Enterprise as having quite a few Vulcans in its crew, when Spock was pretty clearly the only Vulcan onboard in Kirk’s time. Where did all the others go? It also showed the Vulcans as surprisingly emotional. Also, having Scotty be already onboard as a junior engineer felt contrived, and hard to reconcile with “The Menagerie,” in which Scotty showed no sign of having any history with Captain Pike. (If he had, he would’ve probably been more likely than Spock to go rogue on Pike’s behalf.)

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@162/krad: “(Though it does at least provide some rationale for why Spock grinned like a loon when he saw the vibrating flowers on Talos IV.)”

Yeah, but “Spock became more cold and closed off after a tragic loss” seems a really revisionist explanation for the emotional reserve that was always portrayed as the normal behavior for Vulcans. (Plus, Young Sherlock Holmes already did that one.) I honestly found a lot of Vulcan’s Glory‘s revisionist portrayal of Vulcans quite incongruous coming from Fontana, who did so much to define Vulcans in the first place. It didn’t really feel like it was from the same writer.

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Edgar Governo
7 years ago

@@@@@117/kkozoriz: “It’s no wonder that the Klingons thought that Genesis would be used to destroy them.  Apparently it would not be the first time that the Federation would be able to kill every Klingon on Kronos.”

I do appreciate how much of the Klingons’ attributes in the TOS era are reinforced by the events on Discovery thus far–Kirk’s description of their savagery towards other worlds in “Errand of Mercy” makes much more sense if he’d witnessed nine months of it firsthand, the Empire’s fear of Genesis is (as you mentioned) justified if “the annihilation of the Klingon people” was in Starfleet’s hands when the two powers were at war (though having Starfleet apparently cover up the events of TWOK didn’t help), and Kerla’s fears of Federation cultural hegemony in TUC are in line with L’Rell’s concerns here.

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7 years ago

@126 Well, you’ve managed to convince me by your superior command of the facts! Logic wins, as you have the superior argument! I had this picture in my head that made TOS ST visuals more consistent than they really were, apparently (sort of imagining it, I suppose, as you suggest–which is an interesting thing to consider about myself!). Was TOS Enterprise really that different in different episodes?? It’s all really a kind of image in my mind from when I first watched it back in 1966 as a ten year old, I guess (though I have seen it many times since). Thanks for taking the time to explain it to me.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@164/Edgar: The war’s duration was more like 16-17 months. Episode 3 was stated to be 6 months into the war. It and episode 4 took a few days; episode 5 was “less than three weeks” later; and episode 6 was “less than a week” after that, so that brings it to about 7 months. The next three episodes closing out “Chapter One” take an uncertain amount of time after that, but I estimate they cover about 2 weeks, give or take. And then there’s the roughly 9-month gap Discovery jumped over, and then the final 2 episodes.

 

@165/Jedikalos: The Enterprise miniatures were modified between the pilots and the series — given the swirly lights in the nacelle caps, a lower bridge module, etc. — and all new FX shots produced during the series were of the upgraded version. But they often recycled stock FX shots of the ship from the pilots, and intercut those shots with newer shots, sometimes in the same sequence. On ’60s television sets, the images wouldn’t necessarily have been clear enough for the differences to be obvious.

Also, there were two different Enterprise miniatures used in different shots, the 3-footer and the 11-footer, and they had some structural differences. The 3-footer had a bulgier saucer underside that’s kind of weird-looking compared to what we’re used to.

For that matter, TNG did the same thing. Late in season 3, they introduced a new 4-foot Enterprise-D miniature which was actually more detailed than the original ILM-built 6-foot version, and they used it for new shots while still recycling old shots of the 6-footer; but the 4-footer had subtly different proportions, like having a 2-deck thickness on the saucer rim instead of 1 deck, and having a more rounded deflector dish.

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Edgar Governo
7 years ago

@166: I’m making a distinction between the first stretch of the war and the period after the Discovery‘s “destruction” (from Starfleet’s perspective), when the Twenty-Four Houses were each engaging in their own increasingly-savage tactics.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@154. CLB: “a particularly prickly culture like the Klingons”

Klingons are doubly prickly. Lorca’s comment to Ash about how he may not have what it takes to satisfy L”Rell makes sense now.

The Vulcan Hello seems more akin to the Minbari approach to first contact when they encountered humans. They opened their gunports as a show of force, maybe respect, which the humans interpreted as an imminent threat and so fired first, starting the war.

My guess is firing at the personality cult of T”Kuvma would have resulted in war anyway, not negotiations. They well hell bent on preserving their racial purity and looking for an excuse.

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7 years ago

Like the Federation doesn’t have it’s own racial purity?  Sure, you get a token alien here or there but the Vulcans are off on their own ships and are vastly outnumbered by humans .AND the Vulcans are in command of a ship with an english name

Look at the ratio of aliens to humans in Starfleet and tell me that Azetbur wasn’t onto something with her Homo Sapiens only club comment.

And when Kirk decided to “fix” a culture, it’s to make it into something that more appropriate for humans, specifically, North American humans.  It doesn’t matter what it was before.  making it more human is seen as making it better.

The Borg aren’t the only ones who practice assimilation.

 

Sunspear
7 years ago

@169. kkozoriz: speaking of the Borg…

I’ve seen some comments bouncing around that the Discovery may run into an earlier version of V’ger with a connection to the Borg of this era (or time-traveling Borg for that matter). Hell, DISC already has a cyborg on the bridge. Maybe she’ll actually say something next season.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@160. JCB: the rationale for Sarek makes some sense. There’s wasn’t much difference for me between the portrayal of the rebel Sarek we saw in the MU and the one willing to go thru with genocide. But your PTSD hypothesis doesn’t quite account for his behavior as he arrived on Discovery. He leaps at Saru and forcibly melds with him, even though Saru is clearly in distress, probably more so than any other crew member present would’ve been, given his species’ prey status. It is highly invasive and is not justifiable when his daughter, with whom he already has a psychic bond is standing feet away. He should’ve recognized Burnham immediately. The Batman of Identity Crisis would’ve have been pissed. Violating minds non-consensually is extreme and could’ve been avoided with a bit of better writing, as you pointed out.

Incidentally, are any of the fast-forward images Sarek pulls not in line with what Saru witnessed first hand? Are there extras in there that are “hearsay?” And how do melds work? What do they access besides images?

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7 years ago

@153/Redd: “Sorry, I have little patience for warrior cultures and chest-thumping codes of honor anymore.” – Same here.

@152/MaGnUs: “The style is what changed, and you prefer TOS’s.”

Are you telling me that I don’t know the difference between style and substance? Just what makes you think that? I do know the difference.

“As Chris says, “The Vulcan Hello” […] is entirely true to Star Trek values.”

Not quite. For starters, not appearing weak and firing first are not the same thing, and it’s dangerous thinking to equate the two. But more importantly, it’s a question of writers’ choices. Many TOS episodes, especially the ones written by Gene Coon, involve situations where aggressive behaviour turns out to be wrong, even if it seems perfectly justified at the time. Of course a writer can construct a situation where aggressive behaviour is justified or even necessary. “Metamorphosis” could have been written in such a way that the aggressive approach worked. It wasn’t. If “firing first” is the right thing to do in “The Vulcan Hello”, it may be true to some “Star Trek values”. Just not the ones I’m interested in.

The best Star Trek stories are always about the real world. What’s the real world consequence of telling us that firing first in order to show strength is the right thing to do?

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@172/Jana: “For starters, not appearing weak and firing first are not the same thing, and it’s dangerous thinking to equate the two.”

From our perspective, sure. But the first rule of cultural anthropology in real life — and therefore of alien contact and diplomacy in fiction — is, never assume that other cultures share your definitions of things. That’s the whole point of this story beat — that Vulcans had come to recognize a difference in the Klingon way of perceiving things that the rest of Starfleet hadn’t yet caught onto. The Vulcans didn’t make up this policy on a whim; they learned it the hard way through decades of interaction with the Klingons in the pre-Enterprise era. They learned that approaching Klingon ships the usual way, by making peaceful gestures, would just make the Klingons see them as weak and attack them. They eventually figured out that by firing first, they could win the Klingons’ respect enough that they’d be willing to negotiate. This is not an assumption on the Vulcans’ part, it’s a hard-learned lesson about what actually, provably works with the Klingons.

 

“What’s the real world consequence of telling us that firing first in order to show strength is the right thing to do?”

Once more: This policy applies exclusively to the Klingons. It was never claimed to be a universal practice. The real-world lesson is, listen to other cultures and learn how they see things, instead of remaining confined within your own worldview and expecting everyone else to go along with it. They have their own reasons for their customs, reasons that make sense to them, even if they seem paradoxical or arbitrary from your cultural perspective.

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7 years ago

@168 – Sunspear: That’s not a guess, T’Kuvma was intent on going to war, and having the cloaking device was the advantage he needed to start it. I’m pretty sure he literally said he was going to war.

@170 – Sunspear: Actually, they have two cyborgs on the bridge, Airiam and Detmer. :)

@172 – Jana: Through your posts, you come off as very emotionally attached to TOS, and reject any changes or additions made to anything established by it. I meant no offense, but you do seem overly concerned with style, and unable to cope with the fact that while visual and storytelling styles have changed in 50 years, this is still Star Trek.

You are very polite, and have never used the same words as they do, but your intent seems to mirror those of people who say “Discovery isn’t REAL Star Trek”.

It’s okay to think that something is not the Star Trek you prefer, but continuously declaring it to be incompatible with the rest of Trek is something else. Particularly when insisting that only its first iteration, noticeable inconsistent and unpolished (as befits a first iteration), however much we appreciate it, is the standard to which everything else must be held accountable.

Again, I truly mean no offense, and I might be in the wrong, but that is how every single of your posts insisting that Discovery (and the other shows) doesn’t live up to TOS come off.

Additionally, no matter how well Star Trek works when making references to the real world, that’s on metaphoric plane. Not literally, and as Chris says, these are alien cultures… plus, even in the real world, you cannot make assumptions about other cultures based on your own.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

I admit, I do feel that the “Vulcan Hello” lesson is kind of an iffy and questionable way of depicting cultural relativism. But saying that that single instance of questionable storytelling is incompatible with “true Star Trek” is disingenuous, because every previous Trek series has plenty of instances of iffy and questionable storytelling. We idealize our favorite Trek shows in our memories, focusing on the parts we loved and glossing over the bad and stupid parts, but those parts were always there. There have always been Trek episodes whose attempts at moral lessons or cultural allegories were clumsy or flawed or unsuccessful — like “Let That Be Your Last Battlefield” with its clumsy and garish take on racism, or TNG’s failed attempts to address gay rights and gender fluidity in “The Outcast” and “The Host.” It’s really deeply unfair to pit a single story choice on one show versus the aggregate merits of another show, because every show has its individual shortcomings. Star Trek has always been an imperfect creation, and we must remember the difference between our idealized memory of past shows and the much more flawed reality.

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7 years ago

I found very little “fun” in the episode, or the season.  I grew up on TOS reruns and novelizations, TNG came along just after high school.  Maybe I’m just old and curmudgeonly but the new movies haven’t done much at all for me and this show’s been nothing but a train wreck and often plainly insulting to fans.  As is happening with some other franchises, it seems that the idea a lot of people have is that to bring in new fans you have to spit on, insult, and alienate the old.  What’s that phrase?  “Let the past die.  Kill it, if you have to.”  :-/

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AWalt
7 years ago

@62,@63 – Thank you Krad and Chris for your comments. I also found Vulcan’s Glory weird but more like a time capsule, did not like her treatment of Scotty and thought that it was basically written to explore the romantic side of Spock. Left wondering why she did not include Leila since he is on imposed shore leave in Hawaii in the beginning of the novel. The way she resolves Sarek not speaking to his son was also odd. Perhaps this explains the notorious “….the women!” exclamation line as well?  I just read this book having recently went back through my trek collection and pulled out all the novels by recognized science fiction authors such as Mattheson, Haldeman, et al. Perhaps both of you covered this else where but which author would you recommend as being the best or most authentic to trek? I’m looking forward to your review of Discovery books, comics. Not sure if I want to read any of them.

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7 years ago

@176 – slephoto: No, it’s not “insulting to fans”. Many of us are fans as well and we are not insulted by Discovery. You don’t like it, fine, but don’t make assumptions for all of Trek fandom.

Jason_UmmaMacabre
7 years ago

178. MaGnUs Agreed. I’ve been watching since I was a kid and have seen every episode of every series and own all the movies. I thought DSC was great. Not perfect, but great non-the less. Your mileage may vary…

Sunspear
7 years ago

@176. Magnus: yes, you just said what I said. It undermines CLB’s argument that a Vulcan hello as a show of strength could lead to negotiation. The war was going to happen regardless. Klingon rituals of de-escalating aggression, of establishing “honor,” aren’t relevant. Burnham was plain wrong (as her decisions often are throughout the series), not to mention that she too easily jumped to mutiny as an option, destroying a long-term relationship based on respect and affection. More and more, I wish she hadn’t been the focus of all the action and we had a more ensemble show.

I don’t think of Detmer as a cyborg. She has implants akin to Seven of Nine after getting de-Borgified. Unless you want to call Seven a cyborg, or the millions of people in our own time walking around with implants of one kind or another.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@169. kkozoriz: “The Borg aren’t the only ones who practice assimilation.”

Yes, most definitely a theme this season. One which didn’t pay off and was resolved most inelegantly. From T’Kuvma’s speech about the Federation coming for them: “Atom by atom they will silence us. Cell by cell our souls will become theirs”; to L’Rell’s words about assimilation, the Klingons see the Federation like a softer, gentler Borg. Until of course, they are willing to blow up your home planet. The Terrans don’t look so Mirror from that perspective. 

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@180/Sunspear: “It undermines CLB’s argument that a Vulcan hello as a show of strength could lead to negotiation. The war was going to happen regardless.”

That’s not my argument. I was not claiming that it was sure to work in this specific case. I was explaining that it was a policy the Vulcans adopted with regard to the Klingons because it had worked in the past. Jana seemed to think the show was reinterpreting the Vulcans as a violent race, and my point was that that wasn’t the case — that the “Vulcan Hello” wasn’t motivated by innate Vulcan aggression, but by past experience with the Klingons. Of course past experience does not guarantee future success, but that’s a separate discussion. My point went to the Vulcans’ motives and how a “shoot first” policy specific to the Klingons could still be a logical, in-character choice of a generally peaceful culture.

 

“I don’t think of Detmer as a cyborg. She has implants akin to Seven of Nine after getting de-Borgified. Unless you want to call Seven a cyborg, or the millions of people in our own time walking around with implants of one kind or another.”

Yes, basically, that’s a valid use of the word. Per the Random House Dictionary, a cyborg is “a person whose physiological functioning is aided by or dependent upon a mechanical or electronic device.” So Geordi La Forge is a cyborg. Picard, with his artificial heart, and Nog, with his bionic leg, are cyborgs. Heck, one of the first widely popularized fictional uses of the word “cyborg” was for Steve Austin, a man with two bionic legs, a bionic arm, and a bionic eye. If a person with just four prosthetics is a cyborg, then why not one or two?

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daanthing
7 years ago

Am i really the only one who doesn’t like Tilly?

She’s like some Trek fan who won a contest to play a redshirt in a Star Trek series. But they forgot to kill her off. And she keeps coming back!  For me she ruins almost every scene she’s in. She’s so off. Only in this last episode she has some decent scenes.

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7 years ago

@179 – Jason: I think it had great characters and moments, but less than stellar plotting. It was a good first season, but it fell a tad short of great for me. Of course, YMMV, but I will never say that others have to think like I do.

@180 – Sunspear: Yes, Seven and anyone with an implant are cyborgs, particularly if they’re implants with electronic components. As Chris said, that’s what cyborgs are.

@183 – daanthing: I think most people who like Discovery love Tilly. I think. I know she’s one of my favorite characters in the show.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@183/daanthing: I found Tilly annoying at first, but she’s grown into one of my favorite characters.

Sunspear
7 years ago

Yes, technically a cyborg if even one implant, but outside genre, I wouldn’t say it’s accepted general usage. Airiam is quite further along on the continuum to full Borg than Detmer’s Seven-like implant.

@CLB: I understood your argument, but how do you apply it to Burnham’s actions. She’s not Vulcan. I don’t see Spock in that situation, as a half-Vulcan, getting to the same conclusion. She seemed to be operating on emotion, fear specifically, not Vulcan logic. May have to watch the pilot again, but now, months later, her reasoning remains deeply flawed to me.

It doesn’t help that her “redemption” comes about because she’s ready to start another mutiny against genocidal superiors. Her speech at the SW: New Hope and JJA Star Trek style medal ceremony increasingly seems awkward to me. Why is she talking? Is it actually a monologue? The way it’s cut is confusing. No way she should be so prominent other than she’s the series star.

Guess we’ll get more into this once the season overview goes up. 

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@186/Sunspear: “I understood your argument, but how do you apply it to Burnham’s actions.”

I don’t. That wasn’t the point I was addressing, as I’ve already explained.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@CLB: Got it. I was asking how you assess Burnham’s application of the Vulcan tactic, which as far as I know wasn’t established before.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

^Like I said, Burnham may have had the right idea, as far as she was able to determine, but her methods left something to be desired, and as pointed out above, it probably wouldn’t have worked anyway in that particular instance.

Although the critical failure there was Burnham’s killing of T’Kuvma. As she had explained to Georgiou, taking T’Kuvma alive could’ve defused the conflict, but making him a martyr guaranteed war. So that, rather than the mutiny or the “Hello” business, was the ultimate thing that went wrong.

Sunspear
7 years ago

Idea for a children’s book: My Granma’s a Cyborg ’cause She Wears a Hearing Aid.

Sorry. I’ll see myself out…

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@190/Sunspear: A hearing aid would be stretching the point, but a cochlear implant? Sure, that counts.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@191.CLB: But you gave a dictionary definition: “Per the Random House Dictionary, a cyborg is “a person whose physiological functioning is aided by or dependent upon a mechanical or electronic device.”

Device. I’m sticking with Granma’s a Cyborg.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

Well, Wikipedia’s article goes into more depth: a cyborg is “an organism that has restored function or enhanced abilities due to the integration of some artificial component or technology that relies on some sort of feedback.” So it refers to an organism that has technological components directly integrated into the body and its systems.

Sunspear
7 years ago

Well, there sure is feedback on Granma’s hearing aids when she gets near some speakers or even talking on  a smartphone.

I’d propose a cyborg spectrum, akin to Kinsey’s human sexuality scale, with Granma on one end and full Borg on the other.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@194/Sunspear: Sure, but by that definition, I’m a cyborg because I wear glasses. Yes, it’s part of the same overall spectrum of human modification, but as a rule, in science fiction, characters are only called cyborgs if they have integrated bionic components, things that are part of them and can’t be removed. After all, it means “cybernetic organism” — implying an organism that is cybernetic in and of itself, as opposed to one that simply uses separate cybernetic devices.

Anyway, the far end of the cyborg spectrum would go well beyond the Borg. They’re still largely organic, maybe about half and half. There are cyborgs that are far more tech than flesh. RoboCop, for instance, is basically just a living brain and nervous system (and maybe a few other bits necessary to sustain them, depending on the version) in a robot body. At the extreme end, one could argue that a T-800 series Terminator is a cyborg, since it has a coating of living flesh and blood surrounding an entirely robotic body and brain.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@CLB: can’t tell if you’re taking my granma seriously or just extending the joke…

I wear glasses too, but don’t consider myself a cyborg. There’s no feedback, just thruput.

Anyway, I’ll agree to two cyborgs on the bridge, which confirms for me that they foreshadow the Borg in season 2. And no, that’s not a continuity issue. It will just be classified like the MU and the spore drive.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@196/Sunspear: I don’t see how having cyborgs foreshadows the Borg. It’s not like the Borg have any unique ownership of the idea, despite their absurdly on-the-nose name. It’s just a natural outgrowth of technology that many species would have developed independently. If anything, pre-Discovery Trek was always unrealistically backward in its portrayal of how commonplace cybernetic enhancements would be in humans centuries from now. I’ve long felt that the creators of TNG intended bionic upgrades like Geordi’s and Picard’s to be fairly common in 24th-century humanity, but their successors fell short in their futurism and never really followed through on the precedent.

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The Usual Suspect
7 years ago

@@@@@ 186 Sunspear: “Her speech at the SW: New Hope and JJA Star Trek style medal ceremony increasingly seems awkward to me. Why is she talking? Is it actually a monologue?”

I took it as a monologue (in fact, it felt like a continuation of the monologue we got at or near the beginning of the episode).  The shots of Burnham seemed so tightly focused on her that I didn’t get the impression that she was necessarily delivering the monologue at the ceremony.

Burnham’s monologues have actually been one of the things I’ve really enjoyed about Discovery.  Some have been more effective than others, but overall I like that they’re a distinct element of this series.  I know we’ve had monologues before (in a way, I suppose all the “captain’s log” entries would count), but they’ve mostly been in isolated episodes such as “Data’s Day” and “In the Pale Moonlight.”

Sunspear
7 years ago

@197. CLB: “I don’t see how having cyborgs foreshadows the Borg.”

I said that tongue-in-cheek. Been having a bit of fun ever since I brought up Granma. And it’s not funny if I have to explain the joke…

I would not seriously make a prediction about season 2. Esp. with these writers, who so far have delivered a messy season 1. They go for what they consider cool and awesome, like the spore drive, without stopping to consider how ridiculous it may be. I’d like to see them deliver a tighter, more organic, more character-driven (outside of Burnham), more grounded (literally on planets), storyline next season. One without the swerves and turns because “Woo Hoo! They’re gonna LOVE this!”

Sunspear
7 years ago

Side note: some of you may be amused by this article.

Fake research paper based on ST:Voyager’s worst episode

One example that we’ve had terrible ideas, concepts, and writing before.

 

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Redd
7 years ago

No, having cyborgs doesn’t foreshadow the Borg. Twitter mobs on the other hand…

Sunspear
7 years ago

While we wait for the season overview, here’s another related article I ran across. It compares moral decision making and compromise in The Good Place and DISC.

-Spoiler Warning- for those who don’t know the twist at Good Place’s season 1 finale:

“Starfleet doesn’t shoot first”

Another parallel discussion could be had in tandem with The Culture re-read just started on this site. The Federation aspires to be utopian in the sense achieved by the Culture. An argument could be made that Banks modeled C on F. Section 31 and Special Circumstances both play dirty, for example (although SC appeared first, I think).

But aspiring to utopia is one thing. Coming within a hair’s breath of genocide and turning the PU into the MU is another. Even just murdering all the Orions on the planet should’ve given the admirals pause. Increasingly, the time jump in the war just seems like a plot necessity. We’re asked to accept “desperate times, desperate measures,” without truly earning or developing it.

The more I think on it, the riskier this season becomes. Maybe it needed to be to reflect the times, but the writers have dug a deep black hole. They’ve begun the long way back to an honorable Starfleet, but dammit, did they have to go so dark.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@202/Sunspear: I was going to question the analogy between Section 31 and Special Circumstances, because Section 31 is an illegal cabal within Starfleet rather than a formal intelligence agency (that would be Starfleet Intelligence). But then I double-checked, and it looks like Special Circumstances is a similarly unofficial rogue operation. The main difference is that the Culture doesn’t strictly have a governmental hierarchy to begin with, so it doesn’t really have a more official intelligence agency like SI. So it’s sort of like a version of S31 that’s an open secret tolerated by the Culture — although some more cynical fans assume that’s true of S31 too, or ought to be. I’ve never agreed with that interpretation, though. (Indeed, the Culture novels’ heavy focus on the “dirty tricks” division within what’s supposed to be a utopian society is one of the things that undermines my enjoyment of them.)

Sunspear
7 years ago

@203. CLC: ” the Culture novels’ heavy focus on the “dirty tricks” division within what’s supposed to be a utopian society is one of the things that undermines my enjoyment of them.”

Yes, this is a good way of stating what troubles me about Discovery’s storyline. We will never get back a Starfleet that doesn’t shoot first or one where the Federation doesn’t consider genocide an option.

It’s still sinking in. Burnham and the bridge crew stood up to Cornwell and the medal ceremony was presented as a feel-good moment, but the horror of what they were about to do was papered over. The divide between the Feds and their supposedly evil counterparts was very thin, not to mention the supposedly savage Klingons.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@204/Sunspear: “We will never get back a Starfleet that doesn’t shoot first…”

“The Vulcan Hello” clearly stated that Starfleet doesn’t shoot first. That’s why Georgiou rejected Burnham’s advice. Sarek wasn’t talking about Starfleet, but about the Vulcan High Command before the Federation’s creation.

“240 years ago, near H’atoria, a Vulcan ship crossed into Klingon space. The Klingons attacked immediately. They destroyed the vessel. …From then on, until formal relations were established, whenever the Vulcans crossed paths with Klingons, the Vulcans fired first.”

“They said ‘hello’ in a language the Klingons understood.”

(emphasis added)

This is actually perfectly in keeping with what Enterprise established about the Vulcan High Command, which was generally more aggressive than Vulcans became later after the recovery of the Kir’Shara and the Syrannite reforms. But even so, Sarek wasn’t talking about a universal policy — he was referring exclusively to how the VHC dealt with the Klingons until they won enough respect to establish formal diplomatic relations. And it was a lesson from history, more than two centuries before the episode, which is probably why Georgiou wasn’t familiar with the principle. (240 years in the past would’ve been 2017, the year the episode aired, and well before the first official Vulcan-Human contact.)

 

“…or one where the Federation doesn’t consider genocide an option.”

“You heard me give General Order 24. That means in two hours, the Enterprise will destroy Eminiar VII.” — “A Taste of Armageddon,” 1967

Also, remember 19 years ago in DS9, when the Federation turned a blind eye to Section 31’s attempted genocide against the Founders? Or 25 years ago in “Descent,” when Admiral Nechayev told Picard he should’ve committed genocide against the Borg when he had the chance in “I, Borg”?

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7 years ago

It seems to me that the Klingons have good reason to fear the Federation.  Have we ever heard of the Klingons threatening to kill everyone on a planet?   By comparison, Kor’s actions on Organia seem downright reasonable.  He didn’t kill a bunch of hostages until his rules were challenged by Kirk & Spock.  No indication of torture of the hostages.  Nothing shown of mistreatment of the Oganians at all really.   We saw the Tal Shiar and the Obsidian Order attampt genocide against the founders but the Klingons were nowhere to be seen.  Could the Klingons actually be the least bloodthirsty of the major powers?

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Redd
7 years ago

Ah, but remember the Klingon genocide on that most dangerous of species—The Great Tribble Hunt!

Never forget.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@206. kkozoriz: Yeah, was thinking that too. The Klingons come off better than the Emp– I mean, Federation in terms of honorable combat.

@CLB: all that context makes the Feds, Starfleet, and their admirals look worse. They may claim utopian ideals, but fall far short. Makes the loss of Captain Georgiou as a moral compass even more tragic.

Someone should write The Secret History of Starfleet, about heroic, steadfast captains and ships who fight a constant battle against bloodthirsty, sometimes psychotic superiors. They have Captains-only meetings to share info about which insane admiral they need to take down next. It would explain why some of them resist being promoted above captain rank.

Also, did the Vulcans not have shields two centuries prior? Shoot first at what? Shoot across the bow? To disable? To damage lightly? Major damage? For vaunted Vulcan reason, it falls short as a tactic. Retaliation is fine on moral grounds. Pre-emptive strike less so, no matter how it’s rationalized. Another detail added to Vulcans by these writers that lessens them.

And I still think the idea was handled better on Babylon 5, with the humans shooting first and Minbari retaliating. 

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@208/Sunspear: “all that context makes the Feds, Starfleet, and their admirals look worse. They may claim utopian ideals, but fall far short.”

How is that surprising? Star Trek has never said that utopian ideals are something we can easily achieve. It’s always, always said that they’re something we have to struggle to live up to. Kirk was often tempted to go a more aggressive route with an enemy and had to stop himself, as in “The Devil in the Dark” or “Arena,” or had to rein in a crewmember who was more willing to be violent, as in “The Corbomite Maneuver” or “Balance of Terror.” Even in the more utopian TNG, we saw that struggle acknowledged in episodes like “The Drumhead,” where a Starfleet admiral was willing to institute a McCarthyist witch hunt. And of course Starfleet’s struggles to hold onto its ideals in times of crisis were a driving theme of Deep Space Nine more than two decades ago. I don’t understand why you think this is somehow new.

 

“Also, did the Vulcans not have shields two centuries prior?”

That’s got nothing to do with anything. The shoot-first tactic was about symbolism and diplomacy. As I’ve already explained, aggressive species have dominance and submission rituals in which displaying strength is an important part of gaining another’s respect.

“Shoot first at what? Shoot across the bow? To disable? To damage lightly? Major damage?”

Logically, enough to demonstrate that they’re powerful enough to take seriously, but not enough to cause major damage and make the other guy angry. It’s just about convincing the other guy that you could take them in a fight, so that they have a reason not to attack you and are willing to interact with you more peacefully. As Burnham said, it’s saying “hello” in a language they understand. It’s like how Robin Hood made friends with Little John by beating him in a staff fight, or how Gilgamesh befriended Enkidu by beating him at wrestling. It’s a pretty standard macho dominance ritual going back millennia. Given that the Klingons are the ultimate macho blowhards, it’s perfectly in character for them.

 

“Another detail added to Vulcans by these writers that lessens them.”

I really don’t know why you and Jana think that. It’s not about the Vulcans. It’s about the Klingons and how they behave. The Vulcans’ only part in it is understanding that this is how to interact with Klingons and survive. And read the quote — it was something they only did up until they succeeded in establishing formal diplomatic relations with the Klingons, and then they stopped. It was a conscious exception to the rule for the sake of a specific circumstance, and it was used only for as long as it was needed. The only thing that reveals about the Vulcans is that they were smart enough to be adaptable.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@CLB: “And read the quote…”

I did. That’s why Burnham’s freakout is troubling. If formal relations between Vulcans and Klingons have been established centuries past, would they not know Vulcans are part of the Federation? Are Klingons really unaware of the existence of humans at this point? Of course not. It’s just a bit of invented history to justify starting a war. 

As you say, utopia doesn’t just happen. But it seems you skate past how truly horrible these scenarios cooked up by Starfleet higher ups can be. That it’s always been so, and will continue to be so in internal chronology, doesn’t help. It confirms that this is real Trek, then, but also may explain why some don’t like the moral darkness front and center. This series in not subtle, not be a longshot. Starfleet embracing the leader of the Empire should loom larger in our assessment of it.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@210/Sunspear: What are you even talking about at this point? Of course the Klingons were aware of humans! The whole reason T’Kuvma was pushing for war was because he believed (or wanted to convince his followers to believe, so he could gain power) that the Federation was a culturally imperialist power that intended to assimilate and erase Klingon culture.

Again, you’re confusing two entirely separate issues: The Vulcans’ reasons for developing their tactic in 2017 and after, and the specifics of the situation that led to the war in 2257. Sarek couldn’t know what T’Kuvma had planned; all he knew was that the tactic had worked with the Klingons in the past. Of course, that was a very different Klingon Empire, one that was united under a single government, not torn apart among warring factions. At least back then, there was a leadership that it was possible to establish diplomatic relations with once the Vulcans had demonstrated their strength.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@211. CLB: Exactly. All parties are known to each other. The idea of shooting first to establish respect makes even less sense. Burnham was dead wrong. She’s referencing something that may have been applicable 100 to 200 years past. One of her consistently bad decisions that drove the plot.

But the crux of things for me is this. You argue almost exclusively from within the ST universe. Your references support consistency with other ST elements (or at times how consistently inconsistent Trek has been). But I don’t think you’ve said much from a critical standpoint, the choices made by characters as bad choices made by writers and producers. A self-referencing argument based on “meaningless” (read invented) things is ultimately incomplete.

I’m obviously not saying you need to go negative, but look outside the frame of reference and say something about how successful, or not, this works as a story. And who do we blame for the faults.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@212/Sunspear: “And who do we blame for the faults.”

That’s where you lose me. Using something you don’t like as an excuse to attack and denigrate a specific human being is petty, bullying behavior, and I will not play along with it. Blame doesn’t solve problems, it just indulges anger. Nobody here is a villain. Everyone tried to do the best version of Star Trek they could. You or I may not agree with their choices, but that’s just because we’re different people. I’m not going to “blame” someone for being different from me. I’m just going to hope they do better next season.

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7 years ago

209. ChristopherLBennett – But where is Sarek or Cornwell’s remorse?  Sarek was advocating planetary genocide and Burnham just shrugged because she was back on good terms with her father.  Excuse me, but you just stood up to an admiral for the exact same reason.  Can someone advocate killing billions of beings, mostly civilians and including children and it just gets shrugged off because the plan was called off at the last moment due to the lucky discovery of what it was?  They can’t even claim it was General Order 24 since of the three people aware of the actual nature of the plan, only Cornwell was Starfleet.  You can’t give someone an order without actually giving the order.  

And Kirk was awfully quick to call for GO 24 against Eminiar when the stakes were much, MUCH less.  Essentially, he ordered Scotty to execute it to save Kirk and Spock’s life.  Really?  The Enterprise wasn’t in danger because it had already moved out of range.  So he was willing to kill an entire planet to save two people.  If Kirk missed the deadline by the barest of margins, thousands still could have died.  And if the Eminians managed to execute Kirk & Spock then the entire population would have died.  Are these really the actions of an organization that’s dedicated to peaceful contact?

And let’s not forget Requiem for Methuselah.  He was ready to kill Flint to take something that he had no right to and did not belong to him.  Flint may not have been morally right but he was legally right.  

And those two cases are just Kirk.  How many other Starfleet captains have been in a situation that they believed called for GO 24?  And how many were successful?  There’s hundreds of other captains out there.

If I were running Starfleet, anyone that called for GO 24 and then didn’t follow through because the situation deescalated would be drummed out of the service.  If the situation can be deescalated then there’s most likely  way to do so that doesn’t call for genocide.  And if you did manage to execute GO 24, then you’d better have a damn good reason and all the evidence to back it up if you don’t want to be facing life in prison.

The problem is that they keep upping the odds. A  ship becomes a planet becomes the Federation becomes the galaxy.    Eventually, you begin to wonder how anyone managed to survive at all.  Just like the magic space fungus could wipe out not just the galaxy or the universe but the entire multiverse.  You’d think that in one of the alternate universes, someone wouldn’t be up to snuff and that would be the end of everything.

Sunspear
7 years ago

. CLB: I’m not blaming them as human beings. It’s not personal. I am critiquing them as professionals. That’s been going on as long as there have been opinionated critics. I’m reading a biography of Joseph Conrad, for example, and he chafed under what he regarded as unfair criticism. That’s part and parcel of being an artist.

That’s what makes it so hard to talk to you sometimes. You misread something badly and I wonder why, especially when it comes to humor. Admittedly, it’s hard to pick up tone from text alone. Maybe this text editor needs some emojis… or I’ll just add *Pfffft* or something.

I’m not writing them off either. I’ll watch next season and hope for the best. Just Fuller and his magic-mushroom-generated ideas gone is a plus. Then again, they may lose me, just as Enterprise did.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@215/Sunspear: Saying “who do we blame” is not critiquing, it’s scapegoating. Television is a collaborative medium. There is rarely a single person responsible for a success or failure. Look at any single creator’s filmography, even a showrunner’s, and you’ll probably find some shows you like and others you don’t like so much. J.J. Abrams? I liked Fringe a whole lot better than most of Alias. Greg Berlanti? I love the Arrowverse, mostly, but I don’t care for Blindspot. Alex Kurtzman? Never got into Scorpion or Hawaii Five-0, but the first season of Sleepy Hollow was crazy-awesome.

I’d be more sympathetic if you’d asked what factors were to blame for the show’s problems, rather than what people. This is not about people, it’s about their work. Except that’s hard to judge without inside information on the creative process. I mean, I’m tempted to say I’d like the people who took a more fanciful approach to the science and technology to be replaced by more science-savvy writers, but how do I know that the fanciful-science writers weren’t also responsible for some of the best character writing or dialogue or humor? What I do know from my e-mail exchanges with Kirsten Beyer — and just from my general knowledge of how the TV writing-staff process works — is that every writer on staff contributed bits to every script, regardless of who was credited. It was a team effort, so it’s next to impossible to separate out who’s responsible for what — aside from the showrunners bearing ultimate responsibility for the final decisions about which ideas to use, of course.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@216. CLB: All right, the word blame was ill-chosen or ill-advised.

Yes, I’d be interested in the factors that led to the problems on screen.

I was trying to convey how meaning may be created within closed systems thru self-reference, like Star Trek lore, but that ultimately we have to look outside of it to ask why it works or doesn’t. Had something in mind along the lines of Godel’s incompleteness theorems from Godel, Escher, Bach by Douglas Hofstadter. But it’s been too long since I read it for me to properly express it. 

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7 years ago

@202 – Sunspear: I soem problems with the Discovery part of the article: right of the gate, it declares that “the show raced — too fast — toward the mirror universe”. That has nothing to do with the point of the article, it’s just the author’s opinion on a different point.

And then it says “throwing us dark-side versions of characters almost before we were familiar with the original models“. That’s not true. We only see (in significant parts) dark side versions of Stamets and Georgiou. The Mirror Universe episodes of Discovery were not about facing the dark side versions of the main cast, but rather showing how the main cast (or rather, Michael) dealt with being in that hell. THAT’s more in line with the article’s point, yet the author chose to ignore it in favor of complaining about Discovery going to the MU “too fast”.

The article also clings to the incorrect idea that it was the “Vulcan Hello” used by Michael the thing that started the war. No, that’s what the characters believe in universe, but watching the show tells us that it was T’Kuvma’s and his follower’s fanaticism that started the war.

Then it says “That’s not the idealized Trek sentiment we’re familiar with; this isn’t even the by-any-means stakes of Voyager”. Which “by-any-means stakes” of Voyager? VOY never lived up to the potential the show offered in that regard, in fact it only referenced it sideways, hoisting the “what if?” on the USS Equinox’s crew.

@209 – Chris: “The Vulcans’ only part in it is understanding that this is how to interact with Klingons and survive.” Correct, if anything, it’s showing they abide by IDIC.

Sunspear
7 years ago

@218. Magnus: I agree with you about Voyager. It set up an interesting dynamic with a blended Maquis/Starfleet crew, then delivered the most by-the-book captain we’d ever seen. She did take shortcuts later on, though.

But I think you’re leaving out parts of that article that are spot on. Like that what made Lorca interesting was his moral compromises. Making him purely evil in a literal mirror sense dispelled all that.

Or: “It isn’t until Starfleet nearly implements Emperor Georgiou’s plan to blow up the Klingon homeworld that Burnham contends directly with the idea that the line separating Starfleet from the Terran Empire is perilously thin.”

That’s the moral crux and perhaps major damage of the story. It’s not just that they have to struggle toward utopia, it’s that it’s an illusion and will continue to be for hundreds of years. “This is a Trek pointed at the present, in which the proclaimed utopia doesn’t exist and never did, those in power can’t be trusted, and doing the right thing feels insurmountable.”

It’s what would have made a post-DS9 series interesting. We’ve seen the struggles. Instead of filling in the gaps, what comes next?

And did you not like the phrase “Star Trek’s Bad Place”?

 

 

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7 years ago

The article has merits, I’m not discounting it entirely, but those parts rubbed me the wrong way.

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7 years ago

I’m so glad Saru didn’t get command. He’s a terrible Captain. He shouldn’t be in a command position at all.

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7 years ago

Regarding the appearance of the Enterprise (no bloody A, B, C, D, E, or J)–apologies if anybody else already mentioned this, but my eyes glazed over scanning through 200+ comments–we’ve already seen inter-dimensional and time travel in Discovery. How can we be absolutely certain that that IS the 2250s Enterprise we just rendezvoused with? She seems to have exited a nebula, and she did transmit a distress signal. For all we know, that’s the post-refit Enterprise (or possibly having been scrambled DURING her refit to deal with some other problem pre-V’ger) that’s been somehow kicked back in time 20ish years, and when Discovery opens hailing frequencies, it’ll be none other than Admiral Kirk sitting in the command chair. Probably a stretch, but given that Shatner has said he’d play Kirk again for the right story, we can’t automatically dismiss the possibility!

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

@222/DonRudolphII: Don’t forget, the communications officer did say the message came from Captain Pike, not just from the Enterprise.

Besides, the ship obviously isn’t the post-refit Enterprise. Here’s TrekMovie’s analysis/comparison, with pictures: https://trekmovie.com/2018/02/17/a-closer-look-at-the-uss-enterprise-in-star-trek-discovery/

It’s pretty close in proportions and features to the pilot and series versions of the Enterprise miniature, just with a few alterations of detail for artistic license, a couple of which are evocative of the refit (mainly just the shape of the nacelle pylons and the forward base of the dorsal). But it also has features suggestive of NX-01, especially in the nacelle details, one or two DSC-type features like an apparent bridge window, and a couple of entirely new features like an extended shuttlebay lip and “potato peeler” cutouts in the nacelle pylons. The implication is that it’s an attempt to reconcile the TOS version of the ship with later shows’ design principles, to make it fit more smoothly as an intermediate evolutionary step between NX-01 and the movie refit.

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Krogralofa
7 years ago

Molor wasn’t Kahless’ brother, mr. Klingon expert ;-) Molor was the tyrant he overthrew. The brother he fought over a lie was called Morath. Love your Klingon novels BTW.

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7 years ago

Is there a map of future Paris anywhere? Paris is a very old city, and I wouldn’t expect it to change much in 240 years (apart from the required changes to adapt the city to spaceship and flying cars of course). Yet I didn’t recognise anything except for the Eiffel Tower, the Champ de Mars and the Seine (and even then, the angle of Bir-Hakeim bridge looked wrong). In The Undiscovered Country, we only had the classic shot of the Eiffel Tower seen through the window; but here, we have a panning shot of Paris: some amount of thought must have been put into it, and it seems to be that the easiest way of creating a future version of an existing city would be to start from the current one. So I would really like to see a side by side comparison.

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7 years ago

Do remember that they went through the Augment war, and WWIII. The city might have been bombed, and re built.

ChristopherLBennett
7 years ago

The version of 23rd-century Paris shown here seemed to be much more cluttered with huge skyscrapers than the 24th-century Paris seen in DS9. So either there was a lot of un-building in the interim, or we’re just seeing different artistic interpretations that shouldn’t be taken too literally (as with the many redesigns of alien makeups, warp and transporter effects, planet appearances from orbit, etc. over the decades).

Jason_UmmaMacabre
7 years ago

223. ChristopherLBennett Thank you for that link. I didn’t realize how closely they hewed to the TOS Enterprise. I love the updated design.

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ED
5 years ago

(And why the hell isn’t Saru getting command??????)

 At a guess he simply lacks seniority; from what I can make out, Commander Saru has been XO for only a year at this point and does not appear to have received Command Division training beforehand (being Science officer on the Shenzhou), so its perhaps unsurprising that the Federation was reluctant to make him anything more than Acting Captain on NCC-1031.

 While his achievements merit respect, it seems perfectly reasonable (from an In-universe perspective) that Starfleet would prefer to place a more veteran officer in command of the vessel which has been turning point for the Federation’s war effort; presumably a senior captain, possibly close to retirement, who can keep the Big Chair warm while Commander Saru acquires further experience and is ‘Worked Up’ towards readiness for a permanent captaincy (while proving that his success on ‘Kronos’ was not a one-off and that his unfortunate experience with the woodland people WAS).

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